
First of all let's start with a clean up the multiline string indentation for descriptions, because having two indentation levels after description is a waste of screen estate. A quick survey in the form of the following also reveals that the majority of multiline strings in nixpkgs is starting the two beginning quotes in the same line: $ find -name '*.nix' -exec sed -n -e '/=$/ { n; /'\'\''/p }' {} + | wc -l 817 $ find -name '*.nix' -exec grep "= *'' *\$" {} + | wc -l 14818 The next point is to get the type, default and example attributes on top of the description because that's the way it's rendered in the manual. Most services have their enable option close to the beginning of the file, so let's move it to the top. Also, I found the script attribute for dhparams-init.service a bit hard to read as it was using string concatenation to split a "for" loop. Now for the more substantial clean ups rather than just code style: * Remove the "with lib;" at the beginning of the module, because it makes it easier to do a quick check with "nix-instantiate --parse". * Use ConditionPathExists instead of test -e for checking whether we need to generate the dhparams file. This avoids spawning a shell if the file exists already and it's probably more common that it will exist, except for the initial creation of course. * When cleaning up old dhparams file, use RemainAfterExit so that the unit won't be triggered again whenever we stop and start a service depending on it. * Capitalize systemd unit descriptions to be more in par with most other unit descriptions (also see 0c5e837b66f58265ce2b66a33d0f47a3). * Use "=" instead of "==" for conditionals using []. It's just a very small nitpick though and it will only fail for POSIX shells. Bash on the other side accepts it anyway. Signed-off-by: aszlig <aszlig@nix.build> Cc: @Ekleog
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