diff --git a/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.nix b/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.nix
index ba921a9c152..22acddc8ca9 100644
--- a/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.nix
+++ b/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.nix
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ in
default = null;
type = types.nullOr types.str;
description = ''
- Machine identifier key. All processes on a machine should share a
+ Machine identifier key. All processes on a machine should share a
unique id. By default, processes on a machine determine a unique id to share.
This does not generally need to be set.
'';
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ in
default = null;
type = types.nullOr types.str;
description = ''
- Zone identifier key. Processes that share a zone id are
+ Zone identifier key. Processes that share a zone id are
considered non-unique for the purposes of data replication.
If unset, defaults to machine id.
'';
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ in
default = null;
type = types.nullOr types.str;
description = ''
- Data center identifier key. All processes physically located in a
+ Data center identifier key. All processes physically located in a
data center should share the id. If you are depending on data
center based replication this must be set on all processes.
'';
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ in
default = null;
type = types.nullOr types.str;
description = ''
- Data hall identifier key. All processes physically located in a
+ Data hall identifier key. All processes physically located in a
data hall should share the id. If you are depending on data
hall based replication this must be set on all processes.
'';
diff --git a/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.xml b/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.xml
index d10a5cfe836..2a0e3c76c9d 100644
--- a/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.xml
+++ b/nixos/modules/services/databases/foundationdb.xml
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
FoundationDB (or "FDB") is a distributed, open source, high performance,
transactional key-value store. It can store petabytes of data and deliver
-exceptional performance while maintaining consistency and ACID semantics over a
-large cluster.
+exceptional performance while maintaining consistency and ACID semantics
+(serializable transactions) over a large cluster.
Configuring and basic setup
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ FoundationDB worker processes that should be started on the machine.
FoundationDB worker processes typically require 4GB of RAM per-process at
minimum for good performance, so this option is set to 1 by default since the
-maximum aount of RAM is unknown. You're advised to abide by this restriction,
+maximum amount of RAM is unknown. You're advised to abide by this restriction,
so pick a number of processes so that each has 4GB or more.
A similar option exists in order to scale backup agent processes,
@@ -129,7 +129,8 @@ client applications will use to find and join coordinators. Note that this file
can not be managed by NixOS so easily: FoundationDB is
designed so that it will rewrite the file at runtime for all clients and nodes
when cluster coordinators change, with clients transparently handling this
-without intervention.
+without intervention. It is fundamentally a mutable file, and you should not
+try to manage it in any way in NixOS.
When dealing with a cluster, there are two main things you want to
do: