From 2b8566f556649da57e180dabb04aa69af0618473 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Vladim=C3=ADr=20=C4=8Cun=C3=A1t?= <vcunat@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 18 Dec 2016 13:31:12 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] release notes: grammar nitpicks in an entry

/cc #21257.
---
 nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml
index ef55ea05bcd..d8b0ae01e33 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1703.xml
@@ -81,11 +81,11 @@ following incompatible changes:</para>
   <listitem>
     <para>
      <literal>Ntpd</literal> was replaced by
-     <literal>systemd-timesyncd</literal> as default service to synchronize
-     system time with a remote NTP server. The old behavior can be restored
+     <literal>systemd-timesyncd</literal> as the default service to synchronize
+     system time with a remote NTP server. The old behavior can be restored by
      setting <literal>services.ntp.enable</literal> to <literal>true</literal>.
      Upstream time servers for all NTP implementations are now configured using
-     <literal>networking.timeServers</literal>
+     <literal>networking.timeServers</literal>.
    </para>
   </listitem>
 </itemizedlist>