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Path: tivoli.tivoli.com!geraldo.cc.utexas.edu!cs.utexas.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!gatech!newsfeed.pitt.edu!uunet!newstf01.news.aol.com!not-for-mail
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From: nikowhite@aol.com (NikoWhite)
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Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative
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Subject: Startreck Story:First Contact
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Date: 19 Dec 1994 18:15:20 -0500
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Organization: America Online, Inc. (1-800-827-6364)
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Lines: 179
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Sender: root@newsbf02.news-fddi.aol.com
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Message-ID: <3d5468$5km@newsbf02.news-fddi.aol.com>
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Reply-To: nikowhite@aol.com (NikoWhite)
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Xref: tivoli.tivoli.com alt.startrek.creative:3732
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Author's Notes: This story is probably pretty bad. PLEASE do
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not flame me because I am extremely good at ignoring such things. All
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constructive and helpful mail is thankfuly accepted, as long as it is
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not mindless. Last note: The "B" key seems to have developed a nasty
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tendency to not register. Try words you do not understand by putting
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in a "B".
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EXT Shot: Enterprise Zooming through space at usual angle.
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Picard(V.O.): Captain's log, Stardate 47923.8; The enterprise is
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currently on route to the Gamma psi 60 system, to investigate a report
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of a race with space-warp capibilities.
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Cut to
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INT bridge
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Nameless ensign1 (ens1): We are approaching the gamma psi 60 system.
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Riker: Captain Picard to the bridge.
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<PICARD ENTERS FROM READY ROOM>
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Picard: Report, number 1.
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Riker: We are approching the gamma psi 60 system.
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Worf: Sir, A distress signal from the gamma psi 59 sytstem, about 1
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light year from the Gamma psi 60 system!
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Picard: On screen.
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<Tiny ship appears>
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Picard: Magnify.
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<Ship appears much bigger now, It looks a lot like the saucer section
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of the enterprise, except much smaller. It is being attacked by a
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Romulan Warbird, and there is debris from another Warbird
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scattered around, emiting nasty radiation.
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Picard: The Romulans?
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Worf: The distress signal is from the smaller ship.
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Picard: Capabilities of smaller ship?
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Worf: They have no primary weapons capable of destroying the Romulans,
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since their weapons consist primarily of a lot of lazers, however, a
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small trail-blazing weapon seems to consist of zinc-sulfur powder,
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extreamly degrading to Romulan metals. It seems that they have
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already destroyed an agressive Warbird, and expended all their torps
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there.
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Data: Intriuging. They seem to be the very aliens we were looking for.
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The primary metals and plastics in their hull have em-traces native
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only to gamma psi 60 III.
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Worf: They seem to have built another torpedo.
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Data: This one seems to be diffrent.
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Picard: Diffrent? How?
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Data: It is made of a shield-disruptive metal. The metal seems to have
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properties that absorb the shields like a sponge absorbs water. I am
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detecting
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a large quantity in gas form in the air of the first planet in this
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system.
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Picard: So that's why the Romulans are here.
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Worf: They are firing the torpedo.
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<Cool SFX makes the shields glow green when hit and disrupt, looking
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like the disruptor when it hits a person.>
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Worf: I am reading a huge energy biuldup in a large opening in the
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foreward portion of their ship.
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Data: It appears that they have used precise
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angles of silvered and half-silvered glass to tune all the lazers in
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that portion of the ship to a single stream. In effect, they have
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created a "Super-lazer".
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Picard: You mean the're going to blast the Romulans with that
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thing?(What! Before he hails them! That's unheard of! : -> )
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Data: It would appear so, sir.
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<Ship fires, Rommies explode in a huge display of special effects.>
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Worf: They have much honor.
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Data: Intriuging.
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Picard: Hail them.
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Strange writing appears on screen (Darn, Never happened before...
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Picard: Data...
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Data: Now swiching on universal translator.
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(Yes, the UFN is a real orginization, No, such ships do, NOT really
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exist, though. : -< )
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______ ______ ____ ____ ______
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C O N T A C T
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---PART 2/?---
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INT Bridge of other vessel
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<Looks Like a platform for Captain, First officer, and CMO
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suspended above a pit with helm and conn in the pit and sicence, tactical
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and
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engineering on the middle level. Ramps lead up and down (From the
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platform and pit). Several namless ensigns are scurrying around, And
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the CMO (Cmdr. Kristen Schmiel {from now on called K. to avoid confusion
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with Capt. Tristan of security, now called T.} ) is in command, after
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having
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seemingly won the battle, she hits the intercom.
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K: Fleet Admiral Graham to the bridge. Niko to bridge.
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Cut to
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INT Niko's quarters
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Niko(muttering to himself): I wish she'd call me by my rank.
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<Begins searching for his uniform>
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Cut to bridge, UFN ship.
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<K yeilds the command chair to Niko, Graham takes enginering, T comes
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in to take tactical.
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K (to T who she has an ancient bout with, for reasons best left
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unexplained.): About time. We had to have one of these raw ensigns at
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tatical because you were slow geting down.
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Niko: Report, please.
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K: We had another run-in with those pesky Romulans, trying to steal the
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TRI'KIANNA from the III planet.
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Niko: So why was I summoned? That's as close to routine as anything can
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be these days...
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K: There is an unidentified ship that hailed us. I put them on hold.
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Niko: Sicence?
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Ens1: It apears to be a federation Galaxy-Class starship. The
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federation flagship if i'm not mistaken.
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Niko: Magnify the lettering on the ship and put it on the screen.
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<The whole front wall lights up to show the saucer section, and
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lettering: NCC-1701-D----USS ENTERPRISE>
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Niko: Thank you, Ensign.
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Ens1: No problem sir.
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Cut to
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INT enterprise bridge.
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<Viewscreen shows lettering 'UFN' with the words 'HOLD' flashing.
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Suddenly screen Blinks to life. Shows UFN ship bridge, Niko standing.>
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Niko: USS Enterprise, this is UFN Stellar, UNSS-5752, Fleet Admiral
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Niko White Commanding and speaking.
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<Niko salutes, Bringing his hand, thumb folded in, index and middle
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finger out, first to his forehead and then out and back down on his
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chest, K, T, and Graham then do the same thing.>
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Picard: I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard, USS Enterprise, NCC-1701-D.
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<Picard akwardly copies the salute, banging his chest rather painfuly
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in the process.>
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Picard: We were on-route to your system. If you are going back, we
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will acompany you.
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Niko: Thank You. If you would care to dine over here, we will be
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having dinner at twenty-hundred thirty hours.
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Picard: Me and my senior staff will gladly accept.
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<View screen clicks off>
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Riker: They're all children!
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C O N T A C T
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***PART 3***
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--------------------------------------------------------------------------
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-------------------------------------------------------
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Niko White |The only thing we have to
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fear is fear itself. That,
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UFN Fleet Admiral | and Aliens 3.
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KC Palace
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KC, UFN
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