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1 If you are in need of help, you need but ask....
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2 ************************** INSTALLED: 25 JAN 85 ********************
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3 Welcome to BWMS (BackWater Message System) Mike Day system operator
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4 ************************************************************
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5 GENERAL DISCLAIMER: BWMS IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR ANY INFORMATION
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6 PLACED ON THIS SYSTEM.
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7 BWMS was created as an electronic bill board. BWMS is a privately owned
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8 and operated system which is currently open for use by the general public.
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9 No restrictions are placed on the use of the system. As the system is
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10 privately owned, I retain the right to remove any and all messages which
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11 I may find offensive. Because of the limited size of the system, it will be
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12 periodically purged of messages. (only 629 lines of data can be saved)
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13 To leave a message, type 'ENTER' and use ctrl/C or break to get out of the
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14 ENTER mode. The message is automatically stored. If after entering the
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15 message you find you made a mistake, use the replace command to replace
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16 the line. To exit from the system, type 'OFF' then hang up.
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17 Type 'HELP' to see other commands that are available on the system.
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18 ************************************************************
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19
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20
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21 @#%(&@#)%(&#)%&*_%_)*%@_#)&*%)_@#*@_#)*%_)*%!@#)_*%@)_*%_+@*%_)*%_)*%_@_#$)&%_)%@#_&^_#$)^&_)#$^&#_$)*#$)_*%_#$)^*#$_
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22 It has been nearly a year since I have taken the L'homme personna as my own, and in all that time I have never
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23 had the pleasure of doing what I am about to do...
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24 AT THE TOP!
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25 Going back through the archives, now over 10 million bytes worth, I see very few times when such an honor has been
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26 bestowed upon me. Maybe this is the shape of things to come.
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27 _%*#_)*%_@#)*%_@#)%
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28 Mikey:What;s this about ^O's? So sorry if they have caused your terminal problems. In the future, I will ^A all my pauses.
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29 Q.M. Glad to see your return. The material is the same witty 'stuff' we have grown to love.
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30 E. Ryan: No response? I thought as much. Why compound your embarrasement by showing up again. Writing is such sweet sorrow.
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31 Piper: I have been trying to get in touch with you re: the graphics we spoke of one fine day at PC&S. When is the best
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32 time.
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33 WESTERCONNERS: At last, the photograph you have been waiting for. The Barbarian Women, those four cuties from the Days of
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34 Conan, are now available in print. Order today... 3X5 or 8X10. Matte board optional and extra. Picture now available for
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35 viewing at PSU photolab, Science Building I. Also,
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36 various other costumed entrants, including the famous, "The Humans Must Never See Us Eat" and "Wilma Deering of Buck Rodgers
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37 Fame." This offer doesn't end at midnight, so you have plenty of time to order. Proofs available this Saturday, PC&S.
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38 *&_*#$)_*#$_^#$*^_)#
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39 "Uh...Where are you taking me?", queried Farley, now feeling better about the situation after being reunited
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40 with his watch and his gun. "You'll see." Typical NET answer. Vague, uncertain, but always superior in tone and inclination.
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41 Fellows chipped in a happy thought. "Ian should have directed Puff to resmear the new occupants of the safehouse. I guess
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42 losing the place isn't so bad after all, if it took nearly 50 of the enemy out of action. But I still feel bad about the
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43 good agents we lost." L'homme was quick to answer. "In this business you can't afford to feel much of anything, lest it
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44 interfer with the mission at hand. There's time for crying your eyes out after finishing." "That's what they tell us, isn't
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45 it?", Fellows countered. "Is that REALLY how you feel Parity?" Farlet sensed a long drawn out reply coming, so he decided
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46 this was the best time to cut in. "Why are you letting me come along with you. What possible good could I do amoungst the
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47 likes of NET agents?" Parity abrubtly stopped walking, and turned to face Farley, looking him squarely in the eye. "You
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48 have a raw talent, and energy if you will, that I think we can use. You have shown fortitude and expertise in your pursuit
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49 of Joshua that can't be ignored. You have rough edges that need refinement, to be sure, but don't sell yourself short. NET
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50 rarely makes judgement mistakes about possible agents, and this little trip we are about to take will help us finalize
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51 our desision. #Possible agent! Little trip!#, Farley's mind raced. #They want me in their organization?!?# "Now don't let
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52 this go to your head. Like I said, this little trip will tell us quite a bit of what's left to be found out about you."
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53 L'homme didn't tell Farley what would happen if the trip showed Farley wasn't up to NET standards, but a developing
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54 grin on Fellow's face told him the score was clear to the two NET agents present. "Onward to our destination!", Fellows
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55 roared, jokingly striking a Napoleon-like pose, complete with hand stuffed between buttons on shirt. "Too much starch? Got
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56 an iche?", laughed Parity. Fellows blushed a bit, and the trio continued onward to the South Park Blocks, looking like three
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57 informal businessmen on their way to lunch. Looks can be so deceiving.
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58 *%_#*@%_)@#*%_#)@*%_)*%_!)*%_!)%*!#_)%*!#_)%*! L'homme sans Parity *%_)#*@_*@#%_@#*%_@)*%_@#)*%)_#*%_*%@_)*%@_#)%*@#_%
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59 JUHURYAIT BEFIBOT ETZO XAPAJIG. MANO AYAI ZADI. ZOYTU RAHN.
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60 HABIA KUFIV EJAPESA.
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61 TARFOX UFATA
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62 *******************************************************************
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63
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64 ALEOSIE VA HEAX. EBACO DOQUA. A HANIB IASE.
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65 KARJOR WON CAJAPADIB. FAVA A BUMMA.
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66
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67 RAYM DONONE
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68
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69 #####################################################################
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70 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PaPa
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71 Drat, I did miss that disk. Oh well, such is life.
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72 MARK: I'm not sure what fight zippy was refering to but I think it
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73 has something to do with the disk that I missed. But then again,
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74 picking a fight with Tilean >>>> OOPS <<<< I sure would not want to.
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75 ZIPPY: Go for it kid.
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76 MISTER ^O: The control O locks my terminal, I have to hang up
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77 turn the terminal off and reset the works. Not fun at all.
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78 Thanks for making them a's. Normally I cc n anyway.
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79 ALL: What is this, a mixed NET/ROMANCE CYCLE we are in?
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80 Very Odd.
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81 Watch the wasted lines folks.
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82 CHIEF PENNY: Congrats on your promotion!! May the force be with you.
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83 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PaPa Smurf 1-25-85 18:05
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84 (Swish)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(Poof!)
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85 Apprentice: So sorry, this brain of mine has a poor time of it when it comes
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86 to remembering names. To answer your question, no, I don't recall ever
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87 persuing those tomes. How is your fantasy knowledge? Have you read the whole
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88 of The Unbeliever series (Lord Foul's Bane, The Illearth War, etc.)?
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89 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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90 Miller: Eys, I Acn erda oyru algnaueg.
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91 (Poof!)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Master Changer >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(Swish)
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92 ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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93 Miller - I also read your 'language'. But then, I saw your mention of if
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94 (it) on CBBS/NW.
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95 All - maybe none of you are eligible to take the Mensa test--no one caught
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96 the fact that I left out WHAT DAY the test was. Well, they can always use
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97 the test fee anyway, so the next test is Saturday, February 23.
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98 L'homme - how about those nice, innocuous ^Dave Obie
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99 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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100 ALL: Hmmm. Everyone seems to be rather annoyed with this romance state.
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101 Personally, I don't mind. I wonder why everyone else does? And, with NET.
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102 I have nothing against NET at all, please don't think I do. But, to me it
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103 gets a little boring at times. This is probabley caused by the fact that I
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104 don't do any writing in it, don't understand it, and have difficulty
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105 following the story line. (But I still enjoy reading it, don't get me wrong).
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106 So, I enjoy the other stuff... ang I am puzzled by the particularly critical
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107 voice it has been recieving lately. Not only the romances, but the many of
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108 the other stuff, as well. I just wanted to say to many of you other writers:
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109 it is enjoyed and appreciated. Keep up the good work! (oh, by the way NET
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110 writers: I'm not trying to sound harsh or anything. I hope it didn't come
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111 off that way). Well, don't disappear y'all. Keep writing. Please...
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112 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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113 One more thing I forgot... What's wrong with having all this different
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114 writing enter mixed? What's wrong with having net/romance state together?
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115 Just wondering... (I really hope this doesn't sound like a violent assault.
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116 ) Enter only! Oh well, better than those twits.
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117 MELISSA: Where ya been???????
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118 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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119 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$#
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120 Hmmm, hope ENTER ONLY doesn't last too much longer, my '#' key is getting a little fried...
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121 \_\_\_\_\_ above: If anything, your opinion seems apologetic. No one here is going to tear out your throat if you
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122 say, plainly, that at times the NET writing gets to you. On the contrary, some of the writers might try harder to make
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123 the story REALLY interesting. No comment, large or small, is thrown out.
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124 Quizmaster: I was thinking about investigating Mensa, but never did get around to it. Are you a member? If so, could
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125 you tell me what exactly the members do?
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126 Ian: I wave the white flag- if I can't crack the level 4 code in a few weeks then it's highly improbable that I'm
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127 going to at all. I'm beginning to see CPPAL PFXL[ in my sleep, not to mention on the inside of my eyelids when I
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128 blink.
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129 #$##$##$##$#
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130 A comment on the current phase on Backwater: It seems that new literary eddies are forming. I had wondered what
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131 happens when patrons got tired of fantasy (no matter how cleverly contrived), tired of debate (no matter how 'hot' the
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132 subject), and tired of NET (no matter how pretzel-shaped the plot). The answer, in my eyes, seems simple: new types of
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133 stories develop. Perhaps this is how the NET got started, after a long series of fantasy entries. I haven't been
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134 around long enough to know. What I do know is that even though the story types and names may change, I keep calling
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135 back to see what has transpired:
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136 Here, at the Backwater Inn.
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137 #$##$##$##$#
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138 I do hope I'm right in assuming that PorSFis is on the 26th. I might, if I am lucky, actually attend two meetings in
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139 a row.
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140 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$# Farley #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$# 21:25 - 01/25/85 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$#
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141 ]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
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142 To: NET Senior agent L'homme
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143 From: John K. O'Hara, District Supervisor, NAC, UNDERGROUND
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144 Subject: Miss E. A. Ryan
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145 Miss Ryan is indisposed at the moment, sir, which is why she hasn't replied. I
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146 believe it has something to do with the fact that she is preparing for duty
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147 tomorrow, but I cannot be certain. At any rate, expect her to reply by
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148 tomorrow.
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149 -John K. O'Hara
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150 [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[
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151 If you are an NEC
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152 owner please contact
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153 Randy Van Moody at
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154 663-xxxx
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155 thanks.
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156
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157 WHY CALL? AND WATCH THE BLANK LINES PLEASE
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158
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159 RXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXRXR
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160 Rising young porno Poloriod picture star 'Petrov' had
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161 his career cut short today, when he suffered a severe
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162 accident during the taping of the 29 minute VCR epic
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163 "Goat Lusters". Reports indicate that a jealous ram
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164 butted him in a highly vulnerable area while he was
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165 enacting a love scene with the female lead. Petrov
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166 was reportedly carried out on a stretcher screaming
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167 in a high pitched voice "Do it again! Do it again!"
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168 The ram refused to comment on the matter, and tryed
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169 to eat the microphone. The female lead would only
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170 respond with a mournful "Baaaaa.....". The producer
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171 Mr. Black Shepherd appeared to be quite frustrated
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172 with the whole affair when he remarked, "Now what am
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173 I going to do? It's going to take me at least another
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174 whole day to find a replacment!" The films backer a
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175 Mr. Mackane was unavailable for comment, though his
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176 secratary did respond with a non-commital "Huh?"
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177 RXRXRXRX REX XRXRXRXRXRX REX XRXRXRXRXR REX RXRXRXRXR
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178
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181 Some people call me knifeweider and this is odd, because some people call me a harlequin romance writer.
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182 Forgive me, but do romance writers write from memories of what their loss of idealism was like? Do romance writers
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183 tell people what they wished had happened when their basis for existance was destroyed?
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184 Don't any of you realize what those stories were? Or do you care that it was the distant memories of a psychotic time
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185 that sent the feeling of death across the words?
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186 I was trying to do something more important than a simple harlequin piece, even finding someone else like that in the
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187 end of the story was A DREAM I have had for a long time.
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188
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189 I think they are better than you give credit for, even if I do say so myself, sincerely, the Promethean Knifeweiler.
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190
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191 $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
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192
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193 mark forsyth... never did i entone a fight... i merely thought your message was not appropriate and in bad taste... i
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194 know that "Them's fight'N words"... sorrily though... that is how i felt and still feel...
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195 many people beleive the only response to rudeness is rudeness and i know that is not so... i wish to thank you for
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196 anyway... still fellows if not friends...?
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197
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198 ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttTTtttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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199
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200 Omega jerked hard at calf muscles, avoiding the oncoming fire with the weird luck of a died in the wool Net agent.
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201 Leaping out of the strafing fire of a poor marksman, Omega found tempPorary shelter behind the communications panel.
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202 Sme fool let loose with a squirt of flame thrower juice, as it sprayed, un-ignited, the enemy marksmen under the stiff
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203 sprays realized what was going to happen to them.
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204
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205 Agent Sorrell held the can over his wide shoulders and was gripping the spout with two fingers leaving the others to hold
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206 the igniter away from the spray. It was far more efficient to keep these agents frightened out of their witts than it was to
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207 set the whole block on fire.
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208 And Sorrell knew it only too well, except if he got hit,? his trigger would strike the spout and ignite. Then they might
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209 all die, and end up on some pathetic local news program.
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210
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211 000000000000000000000000NULL SET0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
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212
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213 OFF
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214 EXIT
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215
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216 BREAK
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217 LEAVE
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218
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219 LOST
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220
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221 REAL FUNNY LOST MESSAGE
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222 ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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223 L'homme -- try me at home during the evenings. (I did give you my home
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224 phone no didn't I?) I am up till about 9:00 P.M. If you must try during
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225 working hours, try between 7:30 and 9:30 in the A.M. This seems to be the
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226 least crazy of my working hours. Feel free to call during the rest of the
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227 day at work, but the probability of catching me at my desk has been quite
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228 low during the last few weeks -- I hope it settles down soon...
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229 ppppppppppppppppppp
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230 To the "romance" authors ... one of the most difficult problems in reading
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231 criticism of one's work is the flack you take from those who do not enjoy
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232 a particular genre of writing. Some folks confuse the subject with the
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233 technique and lable a subject that is not interesting TO THEM as "bad writing."
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234 Some, with more subtlety, throw the story into a pigeonhole that they assume
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235 contains an excess of "bad writing." Thus "romance" (sorry about the label,
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236 but it's the nickname of your subject around here) gets labled as a
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237 "harlequin romance." (By the way, don't make the common mistake of dismissing
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238 an entire catagory of fiction. There are some excellent writers in that
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239 general catagory. If anyone needs a reccomendation, please ask.)
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240 We all, of course, feel that our own writing is "good writing." However,
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241 we all can improve -- none of us is perfect. Please take good, constructive
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242 criticism in the spirit in which it is intended, an attempt to help each of
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243 us become better at an activity which we seem to enjoy. As an example, a
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244 recent criticism of one of my entries took me to task for using the phrase
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245 "hot tropical sun" -- a presumed redundancy. Although I might quibble with
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246 that phrase, I tried to describe a tropical sun that was not hot... I could
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247 only manage a sunset... looks to me like a unmodified tropical sun really is
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248 hot. Perhaps it is redundant. Oh, well, another trite phrase bites the
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249 dust. Therefore I make this solemn vow: I will carefully, anxiously,
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250 earnestly, and obnoxiously avoid any an all excess redundancy and repeating
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251 the same information too many times in too many different places in this here
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252 writing stuff. Note that I cleverly kept the definition of "too much"
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253 obscure and will fight a precise definition with great vigor.
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254 ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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255 *=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*
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256 To `agent' L'Homme:
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257 First of all, my whereabouts are my own business...second, I have been unable to access BW
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258 since my last entry. I would have tried on the 25th, but was, again, unable to. If work permits,
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259 I shall observe today's PorSFiS meeting...Since I am on assignment, all qeuestions should be
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260 directed to John. He will get them to me...one way or the other...
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261 Be there in `spirit'...
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262 *=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=* Elizabeth Ryan *=*=*=*=*=*=*=* 8:24am on 1/26/1985 *=*=*=*=*=*
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264 "A prospective NET agent?," I whispered. Could my luck be turning better? Was this the end of countless
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265 failures, lost opprotunities, and bad dealings that had so dominated my life for the past few months?
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266 #Better not get my hopes up yet,# I thought. #If I blow this one, I'm in DEEP trouble.#
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267 I decided to take my mind off of it. No sense brooding on what you can't change, at least for the moment. I looked
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268 at my chrono and saw several miniature lights on that I never noticed before. The largest was labled in almost
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269 microscopic print, "System Failure". The only thing my chronocom seemed to be able to do was tell time- some sort
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270 of electromagnetic pulse had destroyed the remainder of the functions. #Drat, I wonder if Fred was knocked out too?#
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271 I thanked whatever gods exist for this little reminder of my usual bad luck. I swore that I would never forget it
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272 again- for if I did, next time more than my chrono would be inoperable...
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273 "Farley!", someone yelled. I broke out of my concentration with a start. L'homme had obviously been trying to
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274 say something to me for several moments. "Yes?", I said.
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275 "Pay closer attention. While you were standing there daydreaming you could have been shot nine times over. What
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276 I asked was, 'What do those lights on your watch signify?'." He seemed a bit irritated with me, not at all like his
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277 previous joking mood.
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278 "Oh, er... Well, they mean that I can't communicate with Fred. The communications functions have been knocked out."
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279 The irritated look on L'homme's face faded. Fellows appeared interested too. "Who's Fred?", they asked.
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280 "My car.", I said.
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281 "You talk with your car?", L'homme asked, amused.
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282 "He's semi-sentinent. He helped me while I was tracking Joshua. I don't know where Fred is, now."
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283 "Well, you'll just have to cope without him. We've almost arrived at our destination."
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284 "Where's that?", I asked.
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285 "You'll see...", Fellows replied, in the typical vague and obscure NET manner.
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286 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$# Farley #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$# 08:49 - 01/26/85 #$##$##$##$#
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287 The last couple of times that I've called the Backwater, to write another
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288 episode of the Magen story, I was shocked by some of the crudeness. Maybe I
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289 have led a sheltered life, growing up in the South. I don't wish to tell
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290 anyone what they should or shouldn't do, but I don't wish to have my name
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291 and writing along side that sort of thing. This is the reason I've been quiet
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292 for the last few days. I'll wait and see if this is only a passing phase.
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293 |_|_|_|_|_|_|---Thank you for remembering me. ---Melissa
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294 ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
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295 Do NET agents love anyone? Can someone out there tell me with any degree of certainty that NET agents care for any-
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296 thing besides the gun they carry and their current purpose in life. Aren't secret agents supposed to be notorious
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297 lovers? Look at the most famous spy, James Bond. Is signiture is the trail of broken hearts he leaves in cities
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298 accross the globe. Detectives, spies, double agents, undercover cops: all male oriented with male writers and male
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299 players. Women are simple playthings to be used for enjoyment, and an occasional bit of information or two. If we
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300 must be subjected to the internal workings of an organization such as NET, let us get a little different perspective
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301 on the various internal workings of the agents that make up the NET. Let us get some character development. Let us
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302 read about characters who do more than live to play the game in the fast lane. Everyone needs to come down once in
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303 awhile. Let us read about one of these moments. Let us see what makes a NET agent tick. Take the blinds off the
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304 story, and let us view the whole situation.
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305 Let's hear it!
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306 ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
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307 JoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshua
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308 ()()(): in my admittedly too-infrequent entries, I HAVE attempted to portray
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309 Joshua as a human rather than an infallible superman. Mistakes, doubts, and
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310 other such normal traits. Not too much, since NET *IS* supposed to be elite,
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311 and I certainly don't want to play an Inspector Clousseu (damnded French spellings...)
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312 One problem with character development is that it takes a lot of space, space
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313 which is a precious commodity on this board, and space which would preferrably
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314 (by us) be used to advance the story. Last summer L'homme and I were travelling
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315 from the 13th floor of a building to the street. It took us at least 150 lines,
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316 none of them action, because we WERE trying to work on our characters.
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317 As I recall, it met with less than enthusiastic response.
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318 As for the male perspective, we do have a part time female agent, yclept
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319 Gaudy Minsky, who offers us a decidedly different viewpoint. Given the
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320 male/female ratio of BackWater users, I doubt we're descriminatory.
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321 See y'all at PorSFiS.
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322 JoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshuaJoshua
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323 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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324 PROMETHEAN KNIFEWIELDER: I give credit for quite a bit. I enjoyed your story,
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325 and I knew there was more to it than I could figure. Why it got labeled a
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326 "romance" is beyond me. I didn't think it that way... anyways, I thought it
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327 was excellent. Please continue to write such things, it's nice to know there
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328 really was something behind it.
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329 MELISSA: The stuff you've seen here which is not to your liking, is probabley
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330 not to many of ours (if you are speaking of that classified ad stuff, and
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331 things along similiar lines). I will venture to say that the majority of the
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332 people who visit the Inn are above that... but there are always a few vandals,
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333 here and there, and people to our disliking. If you wish to take a few days
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334 from your story, it's understandable... but, please, return eventually.
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335 ADRIAN: So, where are you? Oh, I noticed a message for you on Aloha. I didn't
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336 know you visited other systems, I haven't seen your name anywhere. I suppose
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337 then "Adrian" is an alias.
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338 ALL: I'm not a fan of harlequin romances. They disgust me, as do most others.
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339 But, I think a common error is to assume all romances are like harlequin ones.
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340 A great example of a love story which is very good is "The Siver Metal Lover"
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341 by Tanith Lee. It's excellent! It's changed my percpective on most romances,
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342 I don't judge them so quickly (I haven't been able to read those ones in Fred
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343 Meyers, I don't think I ever will). Anyways, if you read this you might realize
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344 that romances don't have to follow a mindless storyline... they can even be as
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345 good as sci fi, fantasy, and novels! Wow! Bet you'd never believe that... well,
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346 I think this book is an exception to the awful-romance rule. It's one of the
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347 best books I've read (of ANY catigory). If any of you read it, tell me what you
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348 think.
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349 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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350 <+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+>
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351 Lady S.:I think that an apology for my incompetance is in order.If not or
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352 if you have no idea what i am talking about, then excuse me.Just attribute it to the rantings of someone who
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353 has had their backpack over his sholder too long.
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354 Vffn:Was if REALLY only 5 minuts?
|
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355 ALL M.A.C.E members:(Don't worry.M.A.C.E. is not another 'spy' organization)We get the new batch monday,as im
|
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356 that you are aware.Get ready to start up brainwashing procedures first theing.(We have to keep them out of the
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357 cluches of the 'higher up's'.)
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358
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359 ASP
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360 <+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+><+>
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361 P.S. Now I know why 'ENTER ONLY' is such a pain.
|
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362 <+><+><+><+>etc.
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363 MELISSA: I CAN SEE THE HEADLINES NOW: AUTHOR
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364 HAS BOOK REMOVED FROM DISTRIBUTION. "I WON'T
|
||
365 HAVE MY MASTERPIECE ALONGSIDE THE NATIONAL
|
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366 ENQUIRER", SHOUTED WRITER MELISSA X....
|
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367 GROW UP! SO I DON'T LIKE WHAT HAS BEEN
|
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368 ENTERED RECENTLY EITHER...ONE REASON THERE
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369 ARE BORDERS IS TO MAKE IT CLEAR THAT DIFFER-
|
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370 ENT PEOPLE ARE WRITING DIFFERENT STORIES.
|
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371 MAYBE YOU'D ALSO LIKE EVERYONE NOT TO
|
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372 READ OR THINK ANYTHING SEXUALLY SUGGESTIVE
|
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373 BEFORE LOGGING ON, JUST IN CASE YOU HAVE A
|
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374 STORY ON BWMS? BRUTUS
|
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375 '''''''''''
|
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376 BRUTUS: I can see why you have the name.
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377 '''''''''''
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378 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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379 BRUTUS: Your point was worth mentioning, but @#^&(*@!!!!! Have you no respect
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380 for peoples feelings? I can think of dozens of ways that you could of stated
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381 that withour being so unnecessarily harsh, and still made the same point. Did
|
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382 you deliberitly choose such a cruel way of wording your attack? It angers me to
|
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383 think that some people can be so inconsiderate of the feelings of others. Many
|
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384 of these new writers (which I think are very good) are abit timid and scared
|
||
385 about writing their entries, being so outrightly rude is enough to cause them
|
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386 never return. Or was that the idea? I agree with you, I must say. But, why
|
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387 do you have to be so God------ mean about it! I hope you haven't caused Melissa
|
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388 to discontinue writing here, if you have, I hold the must extreme grudge
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389 against you. I don't suppose "Jay Anderson" is one of your aliases? You
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390 certainly fit the character type, and I haven't seen his name lately.
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391 |_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|_|
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392 L'homme: Sorry, but the board doesn't seem to work. In fact when I have it
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393 installed, the free memory is reported as only 15572! I might also note tha
|
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394 the red wire I asked you about is NOT present on MY board. Both boards say
|
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395 REV. A. I'm going to check the positioning VERY carefully & give it one
|
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396 last try.
|
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397 _________________________________Leonard___________________________________
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398 010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101
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399 Gee, I'm glad that CPPAL PFXN[ got your "attention".
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400 010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101010101
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401 `,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`
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402 Tilean, in no way did I ever want to start a fight. I
|
||
403 think an observer misunderstood my mention of a different
|
||
404 board to talk about things. But I have no intention of
|
||
405 having a fight or argument over anything. If you saw the
|
||
406 two entries you know what I am talking about. And you are
|
||
407 right in your first entry however long ago it was.
|
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408 Melissa, I agree with you but people are supposed to have
|
||
409 a say, an opinion about everything. I'm sorry about the
|
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410 message above, it was mean. Please continue with your story,
|
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411 I'm sure a lot of people would like the read it, and it could
|
||
412 be around those other stories and be just as good. Please
|
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413 write some more.
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414 `,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`Mark`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`,`
|
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415 1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2
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||
416 A tale of Piprov...
|
||
417
|
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418 I wandered about through the scorching heat for what seemed like forever. I constantly had to tell mysel-ter was
|
||
419 (oop) myself water was over tAs the sun began to sink on the horizon the first day, I fell to the sand and began
|
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420 to think of all the things I had done in my life. I figured that I had lived a rather happy life, and was
|
||
421 dissapointed that I had to die young and unknown.
|
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422 By the time the moon had risen full in the sky, my eyes were so caked with sand I could not close
|
||
423 them. Instead, I rolled over into the sand and waited for deaths' grim hand to clutch my soul...
|
||
424 I assumed my mind would simply cloud over and that would be all, never did I expect to hear or see what I did...
|
||
425 a small lamb gently baa-ing. I lifted my head and was somewhat surprised to find myself in a grassy meadow,
|
||
426 up
|
||
427
|
||
428 surrounded by a flock of sheep. I looked down at what I remembered as being tattered and dusty garments, only to
|
||
429 find that I was wearing shepards clothing. I had in my hand a shepards staff, and in my other hand, a horn.
|
||
430 Why this was I could not and still cannot explain, but I have grown to enjoy the company of the sheep. I have
|
||
431 especially grown fond of the lamb that I first heard long ago. She has grown into a graceful ewe and I have never
|
||
432 been apart from 'She' ever since.
|
||
433
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434 1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2
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||
435 TUNE IN NEXT WEEK FOR ANOTHER ASSUMING ENSTALLMENT OF 'TALES OF PIPROV'
|
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436 1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2
|
||
437 1=2 typo: ln 437 I kept telling myself water was over the next dune.
|
||
438 1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2=1=2
|
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439 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (one of several)
|
||
440 ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?/MiG/? ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?/
|
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441 S:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KAS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:KS:K
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442 tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
|
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443 ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
|
||
444 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PaPa of this mess ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
|
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445 (picture fill in... A room, dark and with many lights blinking uncomprehensible
|
||
446 information. Maps, pepsi reader boards with data that makes little sense.
|
||
447 Gathered are patrons of the BW Inn. People who are renown for the amazing
|
||
448 amouts of BS that can be created at a moments notice. Some are discussing
|
||
449 battle decorations from Germany. Present are; Myself, the others and somebody.
|
||
450 An air of perversity and carbon dioxide fills the room. And some food.
|
||
451 Some pizza dough, uncooked, with toppings that mortal man has problems
|
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452 understanding. but we know, we are aware that we are NOT normal mankind.
|
||
453 thus ends the discriptive phase of this message, maybe.)
|
||
454 ? ? ? /MiG/ ? ? ?
|
||
455 Anticipation grips me as I am told that it is my turn to relate all sorts of
|
||
456 diversified lies and tales of intrigue. Just kidding. Plans for todays events
|
||
457 have been in the works for quite some time, and it was about time for these plans
|
||
458 to become a reality. Once it we all came to the conclusion that PorSFiS would
|
||
459 be as good a place to start as any, all semblance of this reality could only
|
||
460 have been a for-drawn conclusion. The plan included, as mentioned, a great deal
|
||
461 of Pizza, some people that had to be threatened to attend- Harshly- and that
|
||
462 mysterious of all creations, an ungodly Videotape of...
|
||
463 ^^^^^ --->the Guardian 26:23
|
||
464 Hi, bye . Gota go.
|
||
465 Lady S.
|
||
466 S:KS:KS:KS:K
|
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467 Aha, everyone left, said something about Wintermute, and something about a vidiotape that looks like hukashbkj ? ? ?
|
||
468 no time... and probably no screen for most of you... sorry about the form feed... but it is enter only after all... and
|
||
469 man in gray has this murphy' law something or other... and it is probably the catalyst for the whole video tape thingy...
|
||
470 this is going to make for some pretty odd little mentions at one of the up coming porsfis meetings... and i am going to
|
||
471 Love them all...
|
||
472 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
|
||
473 Time is rather short, yes the party (if you can call that) went well. Or
|
||
474 at least that I think it did. I hope that everyone did. Anyway, I did
|
||
475 enjoy it, and if the Inn is greatly reduced in numbers for the next week,
|
||
476 you will all know that the pizza WAS spiced and that we are all in your
|
||
477 local hospital..... SICKY we are all.
|
||
478 Goodnight..............................
|
||
479 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PaPa Smurf ~~~~~~
|
||
480 The Crew:
|
||
481 ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?/ MiG /? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
|
||
482 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Sondargaard ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
|
||
483 S;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;KS;K
|
||
484 ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
|
||
485 ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZippy
|
||
486 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And PaPa Smurf ~~~~~~~~~~~
|
||
487 We are now signing off for now: 1-26-85 23:46
|
||
488 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$#
|
||
489 A multiple entry? How confusing.
|
||
490 Kathy: Pleased to meet you. It's amazing how different real life is from the images conjured up by the imagination.
|
||
491 I was pleasantly surprised.
|
||
492 Sondargaard: See comment to Kathy above. I only wish I had had more time to talk to all of you.
|
||
493 ()()()()()()(): Please go back to your archives and look at my entries. Now, can you honestly say that I resemble
|
||
494 a superhero? I think not- "an extremely unlucky fourth-rate detective" is a much more accurate discription. Beyond
|
||
495 that, there is noenough space to convey it all. The action is, in this case, more important to me than the background
|
||
496 of the character.
|
||
497 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$# Farley #$##$##$##$##$##$##$# 00:36 - 01/27/85 #$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$##$#
|
||
498 SUPPOSE YOU HAD WORKED ON WRITING A
|
||
499 STORY. MAYBE IT WASN'T A VERY GOOD
|
||
500 STORY. MAYBE YOU COULDN'T FIND THE
|
||
501 RIGHT WORDS TO EXPRESS YOUR FEEL-
|
||
502 INGS. MAYBE IT WASN'T SOMETHING
|
||
503 THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN RELEASED TO
|
||
504 THE PUBLIC. MAYBE YOU LOOKED OVER
|
||
505 YOUR STORY AND REALIZED YOU COULD
|
||
506 NOT ERASE IT, BECAUSE OF "ENTER
|
||
507 ONLY". MAYBE YOU HAVE DIFFERENT
|
||
508 IDEAS OF WHAT A GOOD STORY IS THAN
|
||
509 OTHER PEOPLE. MAYBE IT WAS THE
|
||
510 FIRST TIME YOU HAD EVER SHOWN ANY
|
||
511 OF YOUR WRITING TO SOMEONE ELSE
|
||
512 (EVEN ANONYMOUSLY). NOW........
|
||
513 SUPPOSE SOMEONE SAID THAT IT WAS
|
||
514 SO HORRIBLE THAT THEY COULDN'T
|
||
515 BEAR TO HAVE ANYTHING OF THEIRS
|
||
516 ON AN ANONYMOUS BULLETIN BOARD
|
||
517 BECAUSE YOUR WRITING WAS SO BAD,
|
||
518 WAS SO OFFENSIVE. NOW.........
|
||
519 TELL ME---HOW WOULD YOU FEEL?
|
||
520 I THINK I WAS NOT HARSH, NOT
|
||
521 CRUEL, AND NOT OFFENSIVE TO
|
||
522 MELISSA....IF YOU THINK DIFFER-
|
||
523 ENTLY, WELL, WELL, MAYBE YOU
|
||
524 SHOULD HAVE HAD SOMETHING FIRST.
|
||
525 WE NEW WRITERS(I HAVE NOTICED
|
||
526 SEVERAL OTHER STORIES START, NOT
|
||
527 GET ANY COMMENT WHATSOEVER, AND
|
||
528 THEN THEY STOP.) NEED SUPPORT,
|
||
529 OR AT LEAST COMMENTS, TOO....
|
||
530 BRUTUS
|
||
531
|
||
532 [][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]
|
||
533
|
||
534 When I was only five, and very sick with the measles, I remember
|
||
535 waking from the midst of such a dream as only a fever can bring, to find
|
||
536 her there: her hand on mine, the other wiping my brow with a cool cloth.
|
||
537 Such is the first memory I have of my grandmother, but it is so typical of
|
||
538 the many memories that were to be created throughout the years that
|
||
539 followed.
|
||
540
|
||
541 I remember the days at the zoo, the parks, the museums, the many trips
|
||
542 to interesting places and the ideas they helped to stir in my young mind.
|
||
543 I remember how she used to read to me, and, Oh! what she read: Swift,
|
||
544 Twain, even Dickens were introduced to me by her, and worlds were opened.
|
||
545 And how she introduced me to science fiction with C.S. Lewis' "Out of the
|
||
546 Silent Planet", then the works of Wells and Verne when she saw how eagerly
|
||
547 I grasped at the wonders of that marvelous field of literature. The public
|
||
548 schools taught me the mechanics of reading, but she taught me the joy that
|
||
549 can be found between the covers of a book long before I could comprehend
|
||
550 the words on a page.
|
||
551
|
||
552 I guess it was easy to love her, she never needed to discipline me.
|
||
553 My parents were quite competent in that field, and thus she was left free
|
||
554 to give me an education in so many other ways. And love her I did, though
|
||
555 in typical childish fashion I never expressed that love in a manner that
|
||
556 the adult I have become now wishes I had. But a child never thinks of such
|
||
557 things. Why should she, the world is static and never changes, Grandma
|
||
558 will always be there, Grandma knows everything and so knows how I feel.
|
||
559
|
||
560 But the child grows older, and eventually enters a stage of self-
|
||
561 imposed independance. For a period of years, this independance interferes
|
||
562 with the ability to remember the simple but honest emotions of childhood,
|
||
563 having defined them as childish and therefore not suitable for the
|
||
564 new-found maturity. Sometimes this foolishness can place a block between
|
||
565 the adult and the child, the adult feeling justifiably hurt at the child's
|
||
566 behavior. In my case, my grandmother understood. She could remember how
|
||
567 she was at that age, and so could carry within her a greater understanding
|
||
568 than the child would have thought possible.
|
||
569
|
||
570 When the return to sanity comes, if it comes at all, it is all too
|
||
571 often too late. I was lucky. When I truly became an adult, long after I
|
||
572 had physically matured, she was still there, patiently waiting for me to
|
||
573 talk to and share with. And so we found the closeness once again that we
|
||
574 had possessed in those earlier years. But now I found that the scene was
|
||
575 reversed. Though she was still capable of teaching me so much, and I found
|
||
576 that I was just as enthusiastic a student, she was older. It was harder
|
||
577 for her to go to the museums, the parks, the zoo. And with her eyesight
|
||
578 failing, she could read only with extreme effort. So I began to read to
|
||
579 her as she once read to me, and I introduced her to authors that she
|
||
580 devoured as hungrily as I once had: Asimov, Clarke, Sturgeon, Ellison,
|
||
581 others. Much to my surprise, Ellison soon became her favorite author
|
||
582 (writer! as he would say), and we quickly worked through all of his short
|
||
583 stories and essays. I found anew that our tastes were nearly always the
|
||
584 same, which is as it should be since my tastes were developed at her knee.
|
||
585
|
||
586 I know that, if I had been only five years younger, or had not
|
||
587 eventually arrived at adulthood, I might have missed these last years with
|
||
588 her. But I was lucky, I did arrive there, and so was blessed with her
|
||
589 warmth and knowledge and deep understanding. The thought that I might have
|
||
590 missed all of that....... is something I would rather not think of. So
|
||
591 here's to you, dear grandma, with love and thanks. For everything.
|
||
592
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||
593 In Fond Memory 1893-1985
|
||
594
|
||
595 [][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]PAM.[][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]
|
||
596
|
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597
|
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598 Voyeur: Yes indeed, that was the same motel (with light-bulb and plastic
|
||
599 log) that you overheard (overread?) me speaking of to Salazar. And yes, I
|
||
600 did catch a bug while there, my unfortunate dip in the warm winter waters of
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601 the Pacific ocean did wonders for my health as well as my well-being.
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602 It was one of those trips that will be remembered fondly for many years to
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603 come, though at the first it seemed to be the beginnings of the greatest
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604 disaster epic never filmed. Sorry I took so long to respond to you, I'm
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605 afraid that I'm being typically late in getting back to people. One of many
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606 character defects.
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608 My goodness! This hasn't happened in a long time! I'm actually going
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609 to finish up a disk. Clean, clean, clean, that's all I'm good for.
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