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Computer underground Digest Sun Sep 11, 1994 Volume 6 : Issue 80
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ISSN 1004-042X
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Editors: Jim Thomas and Gordon Meyer (TK0JUT2@NIU.BITNET)
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Archivist: Brendan Kehoe
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Retiring Shadow Archivist: Stanton McCandlish
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Shadow-Archivists: Dan Carosone / Paul Southworth
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Ralph Sims / Jyrki Kuoppala
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Ian Dickinson
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Urban Legend Editor: E. Greg Shrdlugold
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CONTENTS, #6.80 (Sun, Sep 11, 1994)
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File 1--Exon Amendment text
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File 2--Turing Test
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File 3-- Musicians of the World, Unite! (eye Reprint)
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File 4--The Process of Writing a Cybercolumn (Robert Rossney Reprint)
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File 5--Cu Digest Header Information (unchanged since 09-11-94)
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CuD ADMINISTRATIVE, EDITORIAL, AND SUBSCRIPTION INFORMATION APPEARS IN
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THE CONCLUDING FILE AT THE END OF EACH ISSUE.
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Date: 9 Sep 1994 12:29:26 -0500
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From: sbarber@panix.com (Steve Barber)
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Subject: File 1--Exon Amendment text
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((Here is the text of the Exon "Communications Decency" amendment to
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the Communications Act of 1994 (S. 1822) currently winding its way
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through Congress. Whether you think its effects would be good or bad,
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it's worth getting familiar with what the text actually says.
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Included here is the amendment text, Sen. Exon's introductory speech,
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and an article placed in the Cong. Record to bolster his position.
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-Steve Barber))
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CONGRESSIONAL RECORD -- Senate
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Tuesday, July 26, 1994
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(Legislative day of Wednesday, July 20, 1994)
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103rd Congress 2nd Session
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140 Cong Rec S 9745
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REFERENCE: Vol. 140 No. 99
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TITLE: COMMUNICATIONS ACT OF 1994
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EXON AMENDMENT NO. 2404
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SPEAKER: MR. EXON
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(Ordered referred to the Committee on Commerce. )
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Mr. EXON submitted an amendment intended to be proposed by
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him to the bill (S. 1822) to foster the further development of the
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Nation's telecommunications infrastructure and protection of the
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public interest, and for other purposes; as follows:
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On page 104, below line 12, add the following:
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TITLE VIII-OBSCENE, HARASSING, AND WRONGFUL UTILIZATION OF
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TELECOMMUNICATIONS FACILITIES
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SEC. 801. OBSCENE OR HARASSING USE OF TELECOMMUNICATIONS
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FACILITIES UNDER THE COMMUNICATIONS ACT OF 1934.
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(a) Expansion of Offenses. -Section 223 of the Communications
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Act of 1934 (47 U.S.C. 223) is amended-
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(1) in subsection (a)(1)-
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(A) by striking out "telephone" in the matter above
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subparagraph (A) and inserting in lieu thereof
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"telecommunications device";
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(B) by striking out "makes any comment, request, suggestion
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or proposal" in subparagraph (A) and inserting in lieu thereof
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"makes, transmits, or otherwise makes available any comment,
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request, suggestion, proposal, image, or other communication;
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(C) by striking out subparagraph (B) and inserting in lieu
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thereof the following new subparagraph (B):
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"(B) makes a telephone call or utilizes a telecommunications
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device, whether or not conversation or communication ensues,
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without disclosing his identity and with intent to annoy, abuse,
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threaten, or harass any person at the called number or who receives
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the communication;" and
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(D) by striking out subparagraph (D) and inserting in lieu
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thereof the following new subparagraph (D):
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"(D) makes repeated telephone calls or repeatedly initiates
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communication with a telecommunications device, during which
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conversation or communication ensues, solely to harass any person
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at the called number or who receives the communication,";
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(2) in subsection (a)(2), by striking out "telephone facility"
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and inserting in lieu thereof "telecommunications facility";
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(3) in subsection (b)(1)-
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(A) in subparagraph (A)-
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(i) by striking out "telephone," and inserting in lieu thereof
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"telecommunications device,"; and
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(ii) by inserting "or initiated the communication" after
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"placed the call"; and
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(B) in subparagraph (B), by striking out "telephone facility"
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and inserting in lieu thereof "telecommunications facility"; and
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(4) in subsection (b)(2)-
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(A) in subparagraph (A)-
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(i) by striking out "by means of telephone, makes" and inserting
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in lieu thereof "by means of telephone or telecommunications
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device, makes, transmits, or makes available"; and
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(ii) by inserting "or initiated the communication" after
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"placed the call"; and
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(B) in subparagraph (B), by striking out "telephone facility"
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and inserting in lieu thereof "telecommunications facility".
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(b) Expansion of Penalties. -Such section, as amended by
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subsection (a) of this section, is further amended-
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(1) by striking out "$ 50,000'' each place it appears and
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inserting in lieu thereof "$ 100,000'' and
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(2) by striking out "six months" each place it appears and
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inserting in lieu thereof "2 years".
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(c) Prohibition on Provision of Access. -Subsection (c)(1)
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of such action is amended by striking out "telephone" and inserting
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in lieu thereof "telecommunications device".
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(d) Conforming Amendment. -The section head of such section is
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amended to read as follows:
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"OBSCENE OR HARASSING UTILIZATION OF TELECOMMUNICATIONS
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DEVICES AND FACILITIES IN THE DISTRICT OF COLUMBIA OR IN
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INTERSTATE OR FOREIGN COMMUNICATIONS".
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SEC. 802. OBSCENE PROGRAMMING ON CABLE TELEVISION.
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Section 639 of the Communications Act of 1943 (47 U.S.C. 559)
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is amended by striking out "$ 10,000'' and inserting in lieu
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thereof "$ 100,000''.
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SEC. 803. BROADCASTING OBSCENE OF LANGUAGE ON RADIO.
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Section 1464 of title 18, United States Code, is amended by
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striking out "$ 10,000'' and inserting in lieu thereof "$ 100,000''.
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SEC. 804. INTERCEPTION AND DISCLOSURE OF ELECTRONIC
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COMMUNICATIONS.
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Section 2511 of title 18, United States Code, is amended-
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(1) in paragraph (1)-
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(A) by striking out "wire, oral, or electronic communication"
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each place it appears and inserting in lieu thereof "wire, oral,
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electronic, or digital communication"; and
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(B) in the matter designated as item (b), by striking out
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"oral communication" in the matter above clause (i) and inserting
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in lieu thereof "communication"; and
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(2) in paragraph (2)(a), by striking out "wire or electronic
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communication service" each place it appears (other than in the
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second sentence) and inserting in lieu thereof "wire, electronic,
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or digital communication service".
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SEC. 805. ADDITIONAL PROHIBITION ON BILLING FOR TOLL-FREE
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TELEPHONE CALLS.
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Section 228(c)(6) of the Communications Act of 1934
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(47 U.S.C. 228(c)(6)) is amended-
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(1) by striking out "or" at the end of subparagraph (C);
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(2) by striking out the period at the end of subparagraph (D)
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and inserting in lieu thereof "; or"; and
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(3) by adding at the end thereof the following:
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"(E) the calling party being assessed, by virtue of being asked
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to connect or otherwise transfer to a pay-per-call service, a charge
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for the call.".
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SEC. 806. SCRAMBLING OF CABLE CHANNELS FOR NONSUBSCRIBERS.
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Part IV of title VI of the Communications Act of 1934 (47 U.S.C.
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551 et seq.,) is amended by adding at the end the following:
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"SEC. 640. SCRAMBLING OF CABLE CHANNELS FOR NONSUBSCRIBERS.
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"(a) Requirement. -In providing video programming unsuitable
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for children to any subscriber through a cable system, a cable
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operator shall fully scramble the video and audio portion of each
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channel such programming that the subscriber does not subscribe it.
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"(b) Definition. -In this section the term 'to scramble', in
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the case of any video programming, means to rearrange the content of
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the signal of the programming so that the programming cannot be
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apprehended by persons unauthorized to apprehend the programming.".
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Mr. EXON. Mr. President, I rise to file an amendment to S. 1822,
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the Communications Act of 1994. I expect the Senate Commerce
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Committee to take this legislation up next week. I intend to
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offer this amendment at that time.
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Simply put, this Communications Decency amendment modernizes
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the anti-harassment, decency, and anti-obscenity provisions of the
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Communications Act of 1934. When these provisions were originally
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drafted, they were couched in the context of telephone technology.
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These critical public protections must be updated for the digital
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world of the future.
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Before too long a host of new telecommunications devices will be
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used by citizens to communicate with each other. Telephones may one
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day be relegated to museums next to telegraphs. Conversation is being
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replaced with communication and electrical transmissions are being
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replaced with digital transmissions. As the Congress rewrites the
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Communications Act, it is necessary and appropriate to update these
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important public protections.
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Anticipating this exciting future of communications, the
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Communications Decency amendment I introduce today will keep
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pace with the coming change.
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References to telephones in the current law are replaced with
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references to telecommunications device. The amendment also increases
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the maximum penalties connected with the decency provisions of the
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Communications Act to $ 100,000 and 2 years imprisonment. The
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provision requires cable providers of adult pay-per-view programming
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to fully scramble the audio and video portions of the programming to
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homes which do not subscribe to the particular program.
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Unsuspecting families should not be assaulted with audio of
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indecent programming or partially scrambled video. The amendment
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also prevents individuals and companies engaged in the pay-per-call
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services from by-passing number blocking by connecting individuals
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to pay-per-call services via a toll-free number.
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These measures will help assure that the information
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superhighway does not turn into a red light district. It will help
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protect children from being exposed to obscene, lewd, or indecent
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messages.
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This legislation also protects against harassment. Recent
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reports of electronic stalking by individuals who use computer
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communications to leave threatening and harassing messages sent
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chills through the users of new technologies. Recent stories about
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the misuse of the internet and 800 numbers also demand action.
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I ask that two stories related to the misuse of the information
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technologies be included at the end of my remarks as illustrations
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of the type of activities this amendment attempts to address.
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Mr. President, I ask unanimous consent that an article be
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printed in the Record.
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There being no objection, the material was ordered to be printed
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in the Record, as follows:
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((Los Angeles Times and other articles deleted))
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Date: Thu, 8 Sep 1994 00:10:27 -0700 (PDT)
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From: Robert Epstein <repstein@NUNIC.NU.EDU>
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Subject: File 2--Turing Test
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For Immediate Release September 1, 1994
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INTERNATIONAL QUEST FOR THINKING COMPUTER
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TO BE HELD IN SAN DIEGO
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(Human vs. Computers on December 16th)
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In the very near future, many believe that human beings will be
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joined by an equally intelligent species -- computers so smart that they
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can truly think, converse, and perhaps even feel.
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To expedite the search for this new species, the fourth annual
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Loebner Prize Competition in Artificial Intelligence will be held at
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the new San Marcos campus of California State University on Friday,
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December 16th, 1994. The Loebner Prize pits humans against
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computers in what the Wall Street Journal described as "a groundbreaking
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battle." The first three competitions drew national and international
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media coverage.
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In the event, human judges converse at computer terminals and
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attempt to determine which terminals are controlled by fellow humans and
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which by computers. For the 1994 competition, conversation will be
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restricted to certain topics. This year, as in 1993, all judges will be
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members of the national press. The 1993 judges represented TIME
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Magazine, Popular Science, PBS, the Voice of America, and elsewhere. The
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contest has drawn media attention around the world, including coverage on
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CNN television, PBS television, the New York Times (front page), the
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Washington Post, the London Guardian, The Economist, the San Diego Union
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Tribune (front page), Science News, and many periodicals in the computer
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field, including Computerworld and AI Magazine (cover story).
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"Surprisingly, in early competitions, some of the computers fooled
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some of the judges into thinking they were people," said Dr. Robert
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Epstein, Research Professor at National University, Director Emeritus of
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the Cambridge Center for Behavioral Studies, and the organizer and
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director of the three previous contests.
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The author of the winning software of this year's event will receive
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$2,000 and a bronze medal. In 1995, Epstein said, the first open-ended
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contest -- one with no topic restrictions -- will be conducted. When a
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computer can pass an unrestricted test, the grand prize of $100,000 will
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be awarded, and the contest will be discontinued.
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The competition is named after benefactor Dr. Hugh G. Loebner of New
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York City and was inspired by computer pioneer Alan Turing, who in 1950
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proposed a test like the Loebner contest as a way to answer the question:
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Can computers think?
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Transcripts of conversations during the first three competitions are
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available from the Cambridge Center for Behavioral Studies (telephone
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617-491-9020). Diskettes that will play back the conversations in real
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time may also be purchased.
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A partial list of sponsors of previous competitions includes: Apple
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Computers, Computerland, Crown Industries, GDE Systems, IBM Personal
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Computer Company's Center for Natural Computing, Greenwich Capital
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Markets, Motorola, the National Science Foundation, The Alfred P. Sloan
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Foundation, and The Weingart Foundation.
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Application guidelines: Official rules and an application may be
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obtained by contacting Dr. Robert Epstein, Contest Director, 933
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Woodlake Drive, Cardiff by the Sea, CA 92007-1009 Tel: 619-436-4400
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Fax: 619-436-4490 Internet: repstein@nunic.nu.edu * The deadline for
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receipt of applications is November 1, 1994. * Applications must be
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accompanied by printed protocols recording actual interaction between the
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system to be entered and one or more humans. The protocols may not
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exceed ten double-spaced pages. * Applications must specify a single
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domain of discourse in which the computer system is proficient. The
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domain must be expressed by an English phrase containing no more than
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five words. * Each entry must communicate using approximations of
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natural English, and it must be prepared to communicate for an indefinite
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period of time. * Computer entries may contain standard or customized
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hardware and software. The hardware may be of any type as long as it is
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inorganic and as long as its replies are not controlled by humans
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responding in real time to the judges' inputs. * Entrants must be
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prepared to interface their systems to standard computer terminals over
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telephone lines at 2400 baud. * The prize will be awarded if there is
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at least one entry.
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Advance notice of new guidelines for 1995: The 1995 event will be
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an unrestricted Turing Test, requiring computer entries to be able to
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converse for an indefinite period of time with no topic restrictions. In
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1995, entries may be required to run on hardware located at the
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competition site.
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For further information: Complete transcripts and IBM-compatible
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diskettes that play the 1991, 1992, and 1993 conversations in real-time
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are available for purchase from the Cambridge Center for Behavioral
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Studies (tel: 617-491-9020). Sponsorship opportunities are available.
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CONTACTS:
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Dr. Robert Epstein
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Contest Director
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619-436-4400 (fax 4490)
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repstein@nunic.nu.edu
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Dr. Hugh G. Loebner
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Prize Donor
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201-672-2277 (fax 7536)
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loebner@acm.org
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Date: Fri, 2 Sep 1994 11:07:39 -0400 (EDT)
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From: eye WEEKLY <eye@IO.ORG>
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Subject: File 3-- Musicians of the World, Unite! (eye Reprint)
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eye WEEKLY August 11 1994
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Toronto's arts newspaper .....free every Thursday
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EYE NET EYE NET
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MUSICIANS OF THE WORLD, UNITE!
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You have nothing to lose but your labels
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by
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K.K. CAMPBELL
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Back in May, eye Net reported how Burlington band The Banned
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uploaded their single, "Karla And Paul," to cyberspace. The song,
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about Homolka's deal-making with the Crown, was refused airplay by
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radio stations. Screw them. Get it from the net. Judge for yourself.
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In July, Aerosmith's label Geffen decided to emulate groups like The
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Banned. Aerosmith's tune "Head First" was made available on
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CompuServe for one week. A hefty bugger of a file, almost 5 megs
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zipped.
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"Head First" is no longer available through CompuServe, but it can
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be found in eye's music directory -- gopher.io.org or www.io.org/eye.
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(You'll also find The Banned and a couple of local bands there. More
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to come. To store your songs/samples/bios, write eye@io.org or call
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971-6776 x.311.)
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"Head First" was recorded at an unnecessarily high quality -- 22
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KHz (44KHz being "CD-quality"). Most songs on the net are recorded
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at 8/11 KHz -- tinny AM radio quality, good enough to judge a band,
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shit for regular listening. The idea: if a person likes your sound, they
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fork over the bucks for a good copy.
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"I guess this scares record labels -- music getting to people
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immediately, without the clutter of marketing machinery, hype and
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demographic reports," Arizona's Keith Kehrer (kamakaze@ramp.com)
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told eye -- email him for info on the MusicLink Musicians Network.
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Kehrer even envisions "online recording studios."
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Tyson Macaulay (ah044@freenet.carleton.ca) is setting up an indie
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net.distribution service in Ottawa, with Shake Records. Macaulay
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helped bring the federal industry ministry online. "This could
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completely revolutionize the music industry," he agrees. "No more
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signing your life away to a major label to get distribution. If the net
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keeps growing the way it is, a local band can get worldwide
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distribution. Small bands with small budgets can do big things."
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Denis McGrath, segment producer with CITY-TV's MediaTelevision
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(mediatv@mail.north.net), says most record company people are
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"blissfully unaware what's happening; and those that know are so
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scared they don't want to delve into it any further." They placate
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themselves with irrational assurances the net is a fad, or digital
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computer files that decrease in quality when re-transmitted.
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James Macfarlane (digitar@io.org), columnist for The Computer
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Paper, agrees the music industry is due for a shake-up, but so are all
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consumer products, not just music. "Direct from manufacturer to
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consumer. Down the road, there'll be no retail level as we understand
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it."
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Debbie Rix, publicity/promo honcho with MCA Concerts Canada,
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agrees the industry is nervous about what Geffen did. "Music
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companies have one salable item: music. Everything else is given
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away pretty much free: videos, in-store appearances, bios, photos,
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etc. If songs are given away free, what's left?"
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But Rix predicts people will not send money to small online
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distributors once a few charlatans spoil the party. Right now, it's
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1967 and the Summer of Love. How long before scammers move in
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and paranoia kills the scene?
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BREAK THE MARCONI LOCK
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The net may also help snap the stultifying Marconi Lock, what
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McGrath calls the "Eric Clapton-Mariah Carey-Phil Collins-Michael
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Bolton-Unholy Alliance" that lords over radio.
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Rix agrees, to a point. "Look at Canadian radio: lots of talk, lots of
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classic rock. Try getting the Dayglo Abortions played."
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Which is why many people instinctively recoil from major-label
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hype. I liked Nirvana when first hearing Bleach on CKLN's Aggressive
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Rock. When they were picked up and subjected to ram-it-down-
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their-throat promotional blasts, I simply stopped listening. Some
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argue this is silly -- you like the music or don't. Bullshit. Rejecting
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hype is a healthy defence mechanism. Without it, you're a hopeless
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dupe.
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And that's the appeal of the net -- lateral cross-pollination,
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circumvention of verticalized/monopolized sound. I'm not alone. TV
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ratings fall while Internet connectivity soars.
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HOLY TRINITY
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Last week, eye Net mentioned news media's Holy Trinity of instant
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net coverage: pedophilia, piracy and pornography. As the net offers
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opportunity for unauthorized transmission of music files, Jim
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Carroll (jcarroll@jacc.com), co-author of the bestselling Canadian
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Internet Handbook, agrees net.cops could result from an industry-fed
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anti-piracy media barrage. But so what?
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"Face it, the technology is outstripping the ability for anyone to deal
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with it. It defeats centralized control structures. What's to prevent
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me from being a smart hacker and taking a CD-ROM that plays music,
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copying the digital bits to hard drive, then uploading them
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somewhere?" Business Week recently did an article predicting
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Canadians should have the equivalent of 64-gig chips by 2010 --
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compared to the 4-meg average now. "You should be able to load the
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entire Aerosmith discography into computer memory with that,"
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Carroll grins. Speedier lines will decrease transmission time
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exponentially.
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McGrath thinks the music industry might engage in backroom
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jockeying to kill the medium, like it did digital audio tape (DAT).
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Right now, there are a lot of steps in using the net.
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Mass popularity requires a handy, inexpensive device that does it all
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automatically for the consumer, McGrath says then writes the
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digital file to a playback medium, like CD. "The music industry might
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very well be in a position to stall or even stop the production of just
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this device -- like DAT."
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McGrath says music companies have another motive to kill pure
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digital distribution, =85 la the net. "Without physical distribution of
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CDs, consumers will ask: how come producing a CD costs $2 yet sells
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for $16? It's common knowledge a CD is now cheaper to make than
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vinyl was. Right there, alone, record companies are in real trouble."
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Retransmit freely in cyberspace Author holds standard copyright
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Full issue of eye available in archive =3D=3D> gopher.io.org or ftp.io.org
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Mailing list available http://www.io.org/eye
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eye@io.org "Break the Gutenberg Lock..." 416-971-8421
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Date: Fri, 9 Sep 1994 01:07:01 PDT
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From: CuD Moderators <cudigest@mindvox.phantom.com>
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Subject: File 4--The Process of Writing a Cybercolumn (Robert Rossney Reprint)
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((MODERATORS' NOTE: In CuD 6.79, we wrote of a cyber-death watch (in
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The Well's News conference, topic 1581), which included summaries of
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two media stories of the event. We suggested that the media missed
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the real story. One media piece, a column by Robert Rossney, which
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appeared in the San Francisco Chronicle, also drew some criticism on
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The Well. In response, Rossney wrote a description of the genesis of
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his column, explaining the process by which an event is framed and how
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editorial and other constraints shape the final product.
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As critics of much of the media depiction of cyberspace, we often
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comment unfavorably on much that appears in the media. Some
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commentators are hopelessly uninformed, others opt for shameless
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sensationalism, and a few are competent writers who usually do a
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decent job in spite of the requisites of their medium that influence
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what ultimately appears in print. Rossney's commentary reminds us that
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even experienced writers are not always able to frame stories as they
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wish, and that the writing process requires a number of personal
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choices and confrontation of a variety of administrative obstacles (as
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his summary of the rejection of a proposed story on CuD archivist
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Brendan Kehoe illustrates). The following reminds us that writing is
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damned hard work, especially for conveying the complexities of
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cyberspace to a general audience. The post originally appeared
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on The Well in Media/833)).
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Let me tell you all how this column came about. If you're already bored
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with this topic, don't read this response; you'll be REALLY bored by the
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time you get to the end.
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* * *
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One of the things that I am trying to do in my column is to cover what
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goes on online as though the online world were an actual society with
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an actual culture. A society full of real people having real experiences,
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even if they share those experiences through the written word.
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In particular, I want to illuminate something for those readers who are NOT
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online: however technogeeky and insubstantial and weird the world they
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might have heard about from less brilliant and informed sources than little
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me, it is, nonetheless, vital and human.
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I thought this story fit in to these broader objectives pretty well. Here
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we have a pivotal life event -- the leaving of it -- and it's causing
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ripples to travel through this new and strange context. What happened
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in news 1581 struck me then, and strikes me still, as a perfect example
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of the making-it-up-as-we-go-along quality, the dreaded "co-creation,"
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that has made the online world such an exciting and fascinating place
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to hang over the last dozen or so years.
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The keyword here is ONLINE. It may have escaped notice in all the hooraw
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here, but that's the name of the column. I write about stuff that happens
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ONLINE. That's my mandate. Keep this in mind; it will be important
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later on.
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* * *
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Now, I had a political problem to struggle with. About six months ago,
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I wrote a piece about Brendan Kehoe. I thought it was remarkable and
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touching that you could find the story of his catastrophic accident
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everywhere on the net, and that his coworkers had set up a .plan for
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people to finger so that they could track changes in his condition.
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My editor killed it. Said it was "too depressing."
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Well, here I had another story that I really wanted to cover, only it was
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about something even more depressing, something that ended with an actual
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dead person at the end. Plus it happened on the WELL. I try very hard to
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avoid writing about the WELL too much; it would be easy to slip into
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omphaloskepsis and end up being boring and parochial.
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All of that was true, but the story I was watching happen was, from the
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perspective that I described above, too good to pass up.
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Fortunately, the WELL is famous at the moment. A piece in the Washington
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Post, a blurb in Time magazine, and now I had something that outweighed
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the depression quotient, as far as the people standing between me and
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the newspaper were concerned: a breaking story that had been covered by
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someone else. It was this that gave me the handle to get it into the
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paper.
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* * *
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At this point, I had two other problems to deal with. The first was that
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the obvious way to write this piece was dead wrong. The obvious way is
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the inspirational and uplifting story of the good people that all pulled
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together and supported kj, each in his or her way, in her final days.
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A COMMUNITY RALLIES IN THE FACE OF DEATH.
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There were at least four things wrong with this angle.
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First, it wasn't the whole story. There were MANY other currents going
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on besides that one: there was the flaming, and the blank postings, and
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the poetry, and all the other things that people were doing that had
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nothing at all to do with bringing aid and comfort to a dying woman.
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Second, it wasn't what was happening online. What people that followed
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this story online saw was how the direct, physical, offline community
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response, the one that actually meant something to kj, was described
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after the fact by tigereye and ralf and others. The act of going to
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someone's deathbed and offering aid and comfort is one thing; the act
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of coming back from someone's deathbed and bearing witness is another.
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It was the latter act that was occurring online. This is a troublesome
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distinction, and I'll revisit it in a bit.
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The third problem with writing that story is that it could not help but
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sentimentalize kj. Now, kj and I loathed one another. I thought she was
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unprincipled on her good days and batshit crazy on her bad ones. I don't
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know exactly what she thought of me, but I'd bet folding money it wasn't
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good.
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Nonetheless, however much I disliked kj, I didn't dislike her enough to
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write a warm piece about the glowing positive energy that coalesced about
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her in her final days. I found the idea distasteful, and I bet she would
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have too. Whatever else I can say about her, she was about the most
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fundamentally unsentimental person I ever met. I wasn't going to dishonor
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that.
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The fourth problem is that such a piece would be predictable and boring.
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* * *
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The approach I adopted instead was doomed from the start: ethnography.
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Take a complex society and pull apart one of its rituals, examining how
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the different consituents of the society participate in it and respond to
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one another. The traditional ethnographic essay, like, say, Clifford
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Geertz's "Deep Play: Notes on the Balinese Cockfight" or "Thick Descrip-
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tion," is about forty pages long. I had eight hundred words. Also, I
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am not Clifford Geertz.
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Nonetheless, it's a way of thinking that I'm comfortable with, and so I
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set to work. I discarded obvious aberrations, like <xxxxx>'s appalling
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response. (If you're looking for something in that topic that I actually
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disapproved of, that's it.)
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I read through the topic three or four times, cataloguing the major
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divisions that the responses seemed to fall into. I came up with ways
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to characterize these divisions that I thought would make sense to the
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readers. (Remember them?) And I decided that, in accordance with the
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kind of analysis that I was trying to do, I needed to adopt a detached
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tone.
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When I was done with this, I sat back to figure out what I thought about
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the whole thing. There were a couple of ideas that I explored and then
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abandoned.
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One was the idea that kj was, essentially, a placeholder for the
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proceedings.
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This wasn't at all true for what was going on offline, and it wasn't
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completely true for what was going on online either, but there was
|
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substance to the idea nonetheless: it was very clear to me that many
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of the people who were responding -- and, I guessed, the vast majority of
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those who were reading -- had only the vaguest idea who kj was.
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It could have been me, or you, who was dying, and while the topic would
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be completely different it would still have a lot of people in it who
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posted "I didn't know rbr, but I find this incredibly moving."
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I didn't like this idea because there were many, many counterexamples, and
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the counterexamples were some of the most interesting and affecting stuff
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that was happening in the topic. So I dropped it.
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Another idea that I rejected was the notion that there was a lot of
|
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grandstanding going on. This had been my impression the first time through
|
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the topic. I felt that here was a place where people came to talk about
|
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their feelings, and that the will to attention that drives most of us to
|
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post led people to rage against the dying of the light a little too loudly
|
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and too long. It seemed to me that people were preening their sensitivity.
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But on rereading the topic the three or four times I did, I found that
|
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this idea just didn't hold up. Read carefully, the topic looked much
|
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less facile than it had when I was skimming over the new postings every
|
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day. Even the strange sunflower thread, which I had thought was pretty
|
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ridiculous the first time through, proved to have a great deal more integ-
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rity than I had originally thought.
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* * *
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The only idea that I came up with that seemed to be solid came out of
|
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the fact that there were so many different kinds of responses to kj's
|
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dying.
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Some, like the blank postings, were all but totally opaque. There was
|
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selflessness to be found, and self-centeredness. There was a certain
|
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amount of shock and despair. There were people who were inarticulate and
|
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people who were glib.
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This was, essentially, much like any other topic online: full of the chaos
|
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that attends a group of independent minds who are far from unanimity. And
|
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it was a topic that didn't have the we've-all-done-this-before character
|
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that many topics that we see tend to develop.
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Because we HAVEN'T all done this before. Only three WELL users have made
|
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their deaths known to the WELL over the last ten years. This is a new
|
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world for us here. We haven't yet developed the language that we'll be
|
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using when it happens for the tenth or twentieth time. We're still
|
|
figuring out what to say. No clear picture of the right way to respond
|
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emerged from this topic.
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So that was my handle for the column: bewilderment.
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And at this point, I think you can see how it goes together and why.
|
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Graf 1: the note that convinces my editor not to kill it. Grafs 2-4:
|
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Americans aren't good at dealing with death. Everything up to the
|
|
conclusion: here's the story, emphasis on the contradictory ways
|
|
that people online are learning to deal with death. Conclusion: this
|
|
kind of response is new right now, but ten years from now as people
|
|
develop more familiarity with it we will see traditions emerge.
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|
There was some careless stuff in there that I regret. I wish I'd gotten
|
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the numbers right; that was just dumb. The bit about "stammering inco-
|
|
herently in the face of the void" is cute, but it was dumb too. I could
|
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have avoided using "peculiar" twice. But really, I've done lots worse,
|
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and I don't know any columnist who hasn't.
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* * *
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Now, for the last week I've had to listen to a lot of remarkable stuff.
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(Not all of it came from people who disagreed with me, either. A number
|
|
of comments, like chuck's and humdog's, were, while supportive, utterly
|
|
baffling to me. I still can't see how someone can read this column and
|
|
come away from it with a sense of who kj was, except insofar as the
|
|
column is unsentimental and so was she. It wasn't *about* kj.)
|
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Mostly, the negative response here just makes me uncomfortable. Not that
|
|
people would disagree with Lofty Me, but that people could find something
|
|
to disagree with in a column so utterly flensed of actual opinion. By the
|
|
time I was done with this column, about the only opinion that I still had
|
|
about news 1581 was that xxxxx's response was really creepy. (And it
|
|
really is. "I'm so sorry you're dying, you're one of the few people that
|
|
backs me up." There's a fucking comfort to the afflicted for you.)
|
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|
|
Most of tigereye's ire, I think, comes from a fundamental difference of
|
|
perspective. Her interest lies, as it ought to, with the dozens of people
|
|
who provided aid and comfort to kj, and she's concerned that their story
|
|
not be shortchanged. I don't disagree with that.
|
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But I was telling a different story. My story was about what happened
|
|
online. That's my *job*.
|
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|
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The grim truth is that the only reason kj's death appeared in the paper
|
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at all is the online developments that accompanied it. I think that's
|
|
pretty stark, and if kj had been my friend it would make me bitter,
|
|
but it's true. The REAL story, the one that was happening in real life
|
|
24 hours a day and not just when the reporters were logged in, that story
|
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never saw print, and probably never will.
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From my perspective as a cog in the media machine, I'm standing pretty
|
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firm. I had good reasons for choosing this story in the first place,
|
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good reasons for taking the approach to it that I did, I described what I
|
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saw accurately and fairly, and I drew my audience towards an overall
|
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sensibility that I think is good for us all. Apart from one factual
|
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inaccuracy, and a certain walking-on-eggshells tone that I couldn't get
|
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rid of, I'm not unhappy with it.
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I sure am tired of hearing about it, though.
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Date: Thu, 13 Aug 1994 22:51:01 CDT
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From: CuD Moderators <tk0jut2@mvs.cso.niu.edu>
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