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Collaborative story outline: 09.26.89 Draft:
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General plot:
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Two men and two women meet during an island holiday trip. Each bought a
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"package" deal of "fun in the sun" at a Carribean resort. Sort of a "Club
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Med" thing. The men meet, sitting next to each other on the flight down.
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They were strangers, now they're "pals" for the long weekend, even though
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their personalities seem to be opposites.
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The ladies fly down together, both enjoying a "fling" together. They are
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friends, having known each other for about two years. They're dreaming of
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dining, dancing and having a "ball" with the "hunks" they're going to find
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down there (little do they know...)
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(before we get into more plot here... let's see who our "players" are.)
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MAN #1 (Name: ___________________)
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Early to mid-30's, 6' to 6'2", sandy blonde hair neatly trimmed and just
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a bit over the shoulders, blue eyes (stolen from Paul Neuman), 175 lbs, lean
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and very fit. He's starting to show "crow's feet" around the eyes when he
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laughs. Clean shaven. He's a successful salesman for a beachwear and access-
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ories company in California, reflecting the easy going, "Lets have fun" sort
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of attitude. (Now the real details): His chest hair is blonde and sparse,
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just enough to see. He has two small scars on his right knee (surf accident),
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a trim tush, and a 9 1/2" cock fully erect. Young and fit, he can come in
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bucketfulls with the right stimulation. He favorite position is the "doggy
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style" fuck with her legs closed, his on the outside. Favorite act: Comming
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on her pussy from behind.
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MAN #2 (Name: ___________________)
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Late 30's, just maybe 40. Short, neat dark brown hair, a few flecks of
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gray. Hazel eyes, broad shoulders. About 5'9" to 5'11", muscular although
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at 180-185 pounds, he could exercise more. He has a neat trim moustache.
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He is a pilot for a large Air-Cargo company, loves flying, scubadiving,
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boating, hiking, etc. He is smooth and gallant, "polished" comes to mind,
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with a dynamite smile (Omar Shariff or Tom Cruise take your pick). He is
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tough minded, practical, honest, and level headed. Origin: Western US.
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(Details: Think about Robert Conrad, just taller. He has dark hair on his
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chest, arms and legs, sparse on his stomach. Fully erect he is about 7" long
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but is thicker around than average. His favorite position is woman on top,
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or missionary. Favorite act: Coming in her mouth.)
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WOMAN #1: (Name: ________________)
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28 - 32 years, 5'7" to 5'10", 123-128 pounds, long golden blonde hair,
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nicely tan but not over-dark, very pretty, with a somewhat wide & sexy mouth.
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Her smile lights up her face. Blue eyes. Her hair reaches the middle of her
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back (at least), and is feathered on the sides. She likes to dress in sexy
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clothes that show her lean, fit figure, and her long graceful legs. She
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works as an Asst. Marketing Director for a Hi-tech company in the east.
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(Details: 36c-22-35, she has a neatly trimmed blonde bush, her tan stops at
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her breasts and hips, revealing a fair complexion. She is bisexual, although
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she leans more towards men. Her favorite position: Her on top, facing his
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feet. Favorite act: having her pussy eaten for hours.)
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WOMAN #2: (Name: ________________)
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23-26 years, 5'3" to 5'5", 110-115 pounds. The youngest & smallest player.
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She is a natural redhead (orange actually), with emerald green eyes. Also
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is fair of skin with some freckles (a sexy smattering across her nose & her
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cheeks). She is alluring. Petite, but fiery. She likes loud music, cars and
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(loud) sex. She works for the local newspaper where she lives as a photo-
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grapher. She has a B.A. in Journalism. Her smile is sexy, demure, and
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inticing all at the same time.
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(Details: 34d-20-34, bisexual and switches easily from men to women as her
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mood dictates. She is very oral, and she also one of those women who "let go"
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and thrash about. She has a beautifully striking orange triangle between
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her legs, but her labia are shaved regularly. She is a dirty talker in bed
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and will do (almost) anything for her partner's (and her own) sexual pleasure.
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She and the W#1 have never been to bed together and don't know the other
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is bisexual. Favorite position: Anything with deep penetration. Favorite
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act: Giving head while getting some from her girlfriend.)
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*Whew*
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Ok boys & girls, our job is to write a story that puts this foursome into
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contact, doing as many things as "realistically possible" in a 3-4 day week-
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end. No B&D or S&M flings (explain all that stuff showing up on the airport
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baggage x-ray machine!) They need to meet naturally and build on it from
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there.
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Some Ideas to consider:
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3 of us writing a story could get quite long. We could write this as either
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2, 3, or 4 shorter stories, each telling a different viewpoint. (I.E. The
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two guys telling their stories to the reader, and the two gals, or each of
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the people individually. This might make it feel realistic (but you have to
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re-write the dull parts too!)
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A 50-50 split probably would work best, where the gals tell their story,
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and the guys tell their version (could be fun).
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We need to know who does what, with whom, how, for how long, etc. We need
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some continuity. Let me start off the rest of the plot outline and see who
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makes what suggestions:
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Day 1:
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The guys and gals check in to the "club", getting 3 bungalows between
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them (1 for each guy, the gals saved money by sharing a room). The "club"
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will host dinner and dancing the first night (on the house), so people can
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meet and have a good time. Our boys & girls dance with other people but
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as the evening wears on, they pair up at a table until they wander outside
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and down the beach for a stroll. One couple wanders down the beach while
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the other couple sits and talks. The wandering pair find seclusion and
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go do it, the sitting couple kissing and "making out" on the beach.
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They re-meet on the beach, go back to their rooms (paired up) and spend
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the night !!!!ing each other.
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Day 2: They meet for breakfast and go on a shopping trip into town and...
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Day 3: ????
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Day 4: ????? !
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The island: Is, of course, tourist supported. Our folks don't find any
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trouble (crime etc) during their stay. There are nice places to eat, and
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there are "glitzy" tourist places to eat (our pilot can really pick the
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good spots for food!). There are nightclubs that are fancy-dress types,
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and there are plenty of strip-joints (full nudity permitted, some even
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have live-sex acts), and of course the "club" puts on shows of its own
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(Ahem...rated PG-13 for obvious reasons). The village(s) on the island
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have fancy "big name" shops, and thousands of small shops and open stands
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with goods ranging from top quality to shoddy. The road are paved (mostly)
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and there are plenty of secluded areas on the island to get away from it
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all. You can rent boats, cars, motorscooters, planes, hang-gliders, scuba
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gear, etc etc.
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Now...Let's have some FUN!
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P.B.
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