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CRITICISM
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by Edgar Allan Poe
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IT HAS been said that a good critique on a poem may be written by
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one who is no poet himself. This, according to your idea and mine of
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poetry, I feel to be false- the less poetical the critic, the less
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just the critique, and the converse. On this account, and because
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the world's good opinion as proud of your own. Another than yourself
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might here observe, "Shakespeare is in possession of the world's
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good opinion, and yet Shakespeare is the greatest of poets. It appears
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then that as the world judges correctly, why should you be ashamed
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of their favourable judgment?" The difficulty lies in the
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interpretation of the word "judgment" or "opinion." The opinion is the
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world's, truly, but it may be called theirs as a man would call a book
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his, having bought it; he did not write the book, but it is his;
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they did not originate the opinion, but it is theirs. A fool, for
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example, thinks Shakespeare a great poet- yet the fool has never
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read Shakespeare. But the fool's neighbor, who is a step higher on the
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Andes of the mind, whose head (that is to say, his more exalted
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thought) is too far above the fool to be seen or understood, but whose
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feet (by which I mean his every-day actions) are sufficiently near
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to be discerned, and by means of which that superiority is
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ascertained, which but for them would never have been discovered- this
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neighbor asserts that Shakespeare is a great poet- the fool believes
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him, and it is henceforward his opinion. This neighbor's own opinion
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has, in like manner, been adopted from one above him, and so,
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ascendingly, to a few gifted individuals who kneel around the
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summit, beholding, face to face, the master spirit who stands upon the
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pinnacle....
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You are aware of the great barrier in the path of an American
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writer. He is read, if at all, in preference to the combined and
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established wit of the world. I say established; for it is with
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literature as with law or empire- an established name is an estate
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in tenure, or a throne in possession. Besides, one might suppose
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that books, like their authors, improve by travel- their having
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crossed the sea is, with us, so great a distinction. Our antiquaries
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abandon time for distance; our very fops glance from the binding to
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the bottom of the title-page, where the mystic characters which
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spell London, Paris, or Genoa, are precisely so many letters of
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recommendation.
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I mentioned just now a vulgar error as regards criticism. I think
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the notion that no poet can form a correct estimate of his own
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writings is another. I remarked before that in proportion to the
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poetical talent would be the justice of a critique upon poetry.
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Therefore a bad poet would, I grant, make a false critique, and his
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self-love would infallibly bias his little judgment in his favour; but
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a poet, who is indeed a poet, could not, I think, fail of making a
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just critique; whatever should be deducted on the score of self-love
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might be replaced on account of his intimate acquaintance with the
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subject; in short, we have more instances of false criticism than of
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just where one's own writings are the test, simply because we have
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more bad poets than good. There are, of course, many objections to
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what I say: Milton is a great example of the contrary, but his opinion
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with respect to the Paradise Regained is by no means fairly
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ascertained. By what trivial circumstances men are often led to assert
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what they do not really believe! Perhaps an inadvertent world has
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descended to posterity. But, in fact, the Paradise Regained is little,
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if at all inferior to the Paradise Lost and is only supposed so to
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be because men do not like epics, whatever they may say to the
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contrary, and reading those of Milton in their natural order, are
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too much wearied with the first to derive any pleasure from the
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second.
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I dare say Milton preferred Comos to either- if so- justly....
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As I am speaking of poetry, it will not be amiss to touch slightly
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upon the most singular heresy in its modern history- the heresy of
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what is called, very foolishly, the Lake School. Some years ago I
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might have been induced, by an occasion like the present, to attempt a
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formal refutation of their doctrine; at present it would be a work
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of supererogation. The wise must bow to the wisdom of such men as
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Coleridge and Southey, but being wise, have laughed at poetical
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theories so prosaically exemplified.
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Aristotle, with singular assurance, has declared poetry the most
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philosophical of all writings- but it required a Wordsworth to
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pronounce it the most metaphysical. He seems to think that the end
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of poetry is, or should be, instruction; yet it is a truism that the
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end of our existence is happiness; if so, the end of every separate
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part of our existence, everything connected with our existence, should
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be happiness. Therefore the end of instruction should be happiness;
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and happiness is another name for pleasure,- therefore the end of
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instruction should be pleasure; yet we see the above-mentioned opinion
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implies precisely the reverse.
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To proceed: ceteris paribus, he who pleases is of more importance to
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his fellow-men than he who instructs, since utility is happiness,
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and pleasure is the end already obtained while instruction is merely
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the means of obtaining.
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I see no reason, then, why our metaphysical poets should plume
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themselves so much on the utility of their works, unless indeed they
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refer to instruction with eternity in view; in which case, sincere
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respect for their piety would not allow me to express my contempt
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for their judgement; contempt which it would be difficult to
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conceal, since their writings are professedly to be understood by
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the few, and it is the many who stand in need of salvation. In such
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case I should no doubt be tempted to think of the devil in
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"Melmoth," who labours indefatigably, through three octavo volumes, to
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accomplish the destruction of one or two souls, while any common devil
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would have demolished one or two thousand.
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Against the subtleties which would make poetry a study- not a
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passion- it becomes the metaphysician to reason- but the poet to
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protest. Yet Wordsworth and Coleridge are men in years; the one imbued
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in contemplating from his childhood, the other a giant in intellect
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and learning. The diffidence, then, with which I venture to dispute
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their authority would be overwhelming did I not feel, from the
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bottom of my heart, that learning has little to do with the
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imagination- intellect with the passions- or age with poetry.
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Trifles, like straws, upon the surface flow;
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He who would search for pearls must dive below,
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are lines which have done much mischief. As regards the greater
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truths, men oftener err by seeking them at the bottom than at the top;
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Truth lies in the huge abysses where wisdom is sought- not in the
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palpable palaces where she is found. The ancients were not always
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right in hiding the goddess in a well; witness the light which Bacon
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has thrown upon philosophy; witness the principles of our divine
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faith- that moral mechanism by which the simplicity of a child may
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overbalance the wisdom of a man.
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We see an instance of Coleridge's liability to err, in his
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Biographia Literaria- professedly his literary life and opinions, but,
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in fact, a treatise de omni scibili et quibusdam aliis. He goes
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wrong by reason of his very profundity, and of his error we have a
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natural type in the contemplation of a star. He who regards it
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directly and intensely sees, it is true, the star, but it is the
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star without a ray- while he who surveys it less inquisitively is
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conscious of all for which the star is useful to us below- its
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brilliancy and its beauty.
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As to Wordsworth, I have no faith in him. That he had in youth the
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feelings of a poet I believe- for there are glimpses of extreme
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delicacy in his writings- (and delicacy is the poet's own kingdom- his
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El Dorado)- but they have the appearance of a better day
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recollected; and glimpses, at best, are little evidence of present
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poetic fire- we know that a few straggling flowers spring up daily
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in the crevices of the glacier.
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He was to blame in wearing away his youth in contemplation with
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the end of poetizing in his manhood. With the increase of his judgment
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the light which should make it apparent has faded away. His judgment
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consequently is too correct. This may not be understood,- but the
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old Goths of Germany would have understood it, who used to debate
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matters of importance to their State twice, once when drunk, and
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once when sober- sober that they might not be deficient in
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formality- drunk lest they should be destitute of vigour.
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The long wordy discussions by which he tries to reason us into
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admiration of his poetry, speak very little in his favour: they are
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full of such assertions as this (I have opened one of his volumes at
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random)- "Of genius the only proof is the act of doing well what is
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worthy to be done, and what was never done before";- indeed? then
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it follows that in doing what is unworthy to be done, or what has been
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done before, no genius can be evinced; yet the picking of pockets is
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an unworthy act, pockets have been picked time immemorial and
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Barrington, the pickpocket, in point of genius, would have thought
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hard of a comparison with William Wordsworth, the poet.
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Again- in estimating the merit of certain poems, whether they be
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Ossian's or M'Pherson's, can surely be of little consequence, yet,
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in order to prove their worthlessness, Mr. W. has expended many
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pages in the controversy. Tantaene animis? Can great minds descend
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to such absurdity? But worse still: that he may bear down every
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argument in favour of these poems, he triumphantly drags forward a
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passage in his abomination with which he expects the reader to
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sympathise. It is the beginning of the epic poem "Temora." "The blue
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waves of Ullin roll in light; the green hills are covered with day,
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trees shake their dusty heads in the breeze." And this- this gorgeous,
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yet simple imagery, where all is alive and panting with immortality-
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this, William Wordsworth, the author of "Peter Bell," has selected for
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his contempt. We shall see what better he, in his own person, has to
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offer. Imprimis:
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And now she's at the pony's tail,
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And now she's at the pony's head,
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On that side now, and now on this;
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And, almost stified with her bliss,
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A few sad tears does Betty shed....
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She pats the pony, where or when
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She knows not... happy Betty Foy!
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Oh, Johnny, never mind the doctor!
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Secondly:
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The dew was falling fast, the- stars began to blink;
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I heard a voice: it said- "Drink, pretty creature, drink!"
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And, looking o'er the hedge, be- fore me I espied
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A snow-white mountain lamb, with a- maiden at its side.
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No other sheep was near,- the lamb was all alone,
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And by a slender cord was- tether'd to a stone.
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Now, we have no doubt this is all true; we will believe it, indeed
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we will, Mr. W. Is it sympathy for the sheep you wish to excite? I
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love a sheep from the bottom of my heart.
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Wordsworth is reasonable. Even Stamboul, it is said, shall have an
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end, and the most unlucky blunders must come to a conclusion. Here
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is an extract from his preface:-
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"Those who have been accustomed to the phraseology of modern
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writers, if they persist in reading this book to a conclusion
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(impossible!) will, no doubt, have to struggle with feelings of
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awkwardness; (ha! ha! ha!) they will look round for poetry (ha! ha!
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ha! ha!), and will be induced to inquire by what species of courtesy
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these attempts have been permitted to assume that title." Ha! ha!
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ha! ha! ha!
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Yet, let not Mr. W. despair; he has given immortality to a wagon,
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and the bee Sophocles has transmitted to eternity a sore toe, and
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dignified a tragedy with a chorus of turkeys.
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Of Coleridge, I cannot speak but with reverence. His towering
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intellect! his gigantic power! He is one more evidence of the fact
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"que la plupart des sectes ont raison dans une bonne partie de ce
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qu'elles avancent, mais non pas en ce qu'elles nient." He has
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imprisoned his own conceptions by the barrier he has erected against
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those of others. It is lamentable to think that such a mind should
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be buried in metaphysics, and, like the Nyctanthes, waste its
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perfume upon the night alone. In reading that man's poetry, I
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tremble like one who stands upon a volcano, conscious from the very
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darkness bursting from the crater, of the fire and the light that
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are weltering below.
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What is Poetry?- Poetry! that Proteus- like idea, with as many
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appellations as the nine- titled Corcyra! Give me, I demanded of a
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scholar some time ago, give me a definition of poetry.
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"Tres-volontiers"; and he proceeded to his library, brought me a Dr.
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Johnson, and overwhelmed me with a definition. Shade of the immortal
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Shakespeare! I imagine to myself the scowl of your spiritual eye
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upon the profanity of the scurrilous Ursa Major. Think of poetry, dear
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of all that is airy and fairy-like, and then of all that is hideous
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and unwieldy, think of his huge bulk, the Elephant! and then- and then
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think of the Tempest- the Midsummer Night's Dream- Prospero- Oberon-
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and Titania!
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A poem, in my opinion, is opposed to a work of science by having,
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for its immediate object, pleasure, not truth; to romance, by having
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for its object, an indefinite instead of a definite pleasure, being
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a poem only so far as this object is attained; romance presenting
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perceptible images with definite poetry with indefinite sensations, to
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which end music is an essential, since the comprehension of sweet
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sound is our most indefinite conception. Music, when combined with a
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pleasurable idea, is poetry- music, without the idea, is simply music;
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the idea, without the music, is prose, from its very definitiveness.
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What was meant by the invective against him who had no music in
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his soul?
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doubt, perceive, for the metaphysical poets as poets, the most
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sovereign contempt. That they have followers proves nothing-
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No Indian prince has to his palace
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More followers than a thief to the gallows.
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THE CULPRIT FAY, AND OTHER POEMS
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Joseph Rodman Drake
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ALNWICK CASTLE, AND OTHER POEMS
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Fitz-Greene Halleck
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BEFORE entering upon the detailed notice which we propose of the
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volumes before us, we wish to speak a few words in regard to the
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present state of American criticism.
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It must be visible to all who meddle with literary matters, that
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of late years a thorough revolution has been effected in the
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censorship of our press. That this revolution is infinitely for the
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worse we believe. There was a time, it is true, when we cringed to
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foreign opinion- let us even say when we paid most servile deference
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to British critical dicta. That an American book could, by any
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possibility, be worthy perusal, was an idea by no means extensively
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prevalent in the land; and if we were induced to read at all the
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productions of our native writers, it was only after repeated
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assurances from England that such productions were not altogether
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contemptible. But there was, at all events, a shadow of excuse, and
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a slight basis of reason for a subserviency so grotesque. Even now,
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perhaps, it would not be far wrong to assert that such basis of reason
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may still exist. Let us grant that in many of the abstract sciences-
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that even in Theology, in Medicine, in Law, in Oratory, in the
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Mechanical Arts, we have no competitors whatever, still nothing but
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the most egregious national vanity would assign us a place, in the
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matter of Polite Literature, upon a level with the elder and riper
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climes of Europe, the earliest steps of whose children are among the
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groves of magnificently endowed Academies, and whose innumerable men
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of leisure, and of consequent learning, drink daily from those
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august fountains of inspiration which burst around them everywhere
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from out the tombs of their immortal dead, and from out their hoary
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and trophied monuments of chivalry and song. In paying then, as a
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nation, a respectful and not undue deference to a supremacy rarely
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questioned but by prejudice or ignorance, we should, of course, be
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doing nothing more than acting in a rational manner. The excess of our
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subserviency was blamable- but, as we have before said, this very
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excess might have found a shadow of excuse in the strict justice, if
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properly regulated, of the principle from which it issued. Not so,
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however, with our present follies. We are becoming boisterous and
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arrogant in the pride of a too speedily assumed literary freedom. We
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throw off, with the most presumptuous and unmeaning hauteur, all
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deference whatever to foreign opinion- we forget, in the puerile
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inflation of vanity, that the world is the true theatre of the
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biblical histrio- we get up a hue and cry about the necessity of
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encouraging native writers of merit- we blindly fancy that we can
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accomplish this by indiscriminate puffing of good, bad, and
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indifferent, without taking the trouble to consider that what we
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choose to denominate encouragement is thus, by its general
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application, rendered precisely the reverse. In a word, so far from
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being ashamed of the many disgraceful literary failures to which our
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own inordinate vanities and misapplied patriotism have lately given
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birth, and so far from deeply lamenting that these daily puerilities
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are of home manufacture, we adhere pertinaciously to our original
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blindly conceived idea, and thus often find ourselves involved in
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the gross paradox of liking a stupid book the better, because, sure
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enough, its stupidity is American.*
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* This charge of indiscriminant puffing will, of course, only
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apply to the general character of our criticism- there are some
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noble exceptions. We wish also especially to discriminate between
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those notices of new works which are intended merely to call public
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attention to them, and deliberate criticism on the works themselves.
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Deeply lamenting this unjustifiable state of public feeling, it
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has been our constant endeavor, since assuming the Editorial duties of
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this Journal, to stem, with what little abilities we possess, a
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current so disastrously undermining the health and prosperity of our
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literature.
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We have seen our efforts applauded by men whose applauses we
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value. From all quarters we have received abundant private as well
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as public testimonials in favor of our Critical Notices, and, until
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very lately, have heard from no respectable source one word
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impugning their integrity or candor. In looking over, however, a
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number of the New York Commercial Advertiser, we meet with the
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following paragraph.
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"'The last number of the Southern Literary Messenger is very
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readable and respectable. The contributions to the Messenger are
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much better than the original matter. The critical department of
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this work- much as it would seem to boast itself of impartiality and
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discernment,- is in our opinion decidedly quacky. There is in it a
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great assumption of acumen, which is completely unsustained. Many a
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work has been slashingly condemned therein, of which the critic
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himself could not write a page, were he to die for it. This
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affectation of eccentric sternness in criticism, without the power
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to back one's suit withal, so far from deserving praise, as some
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suppose, merits the strongest reprehension. Philadelphia Gazette.'
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"We are entirely of opinion with the Philadelphia Gazette in
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relation to the Southern Literary Messenger, and take this occasion to
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express our total dissent from the numerous and lavish encomiums we
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have seen bestowed upon its critical notices. Some few of them have
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been judicious, fair and candid; bestowing praise and censure with
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judgement and impartiality; but by far the greater number of those
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we have read, have been flippant, unjust, untenable and uncritical.
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The duty of the critic is to act as judge, not as enemy, of the writer
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whom he reviews; a distinction of which the Zoilus of the Messenger
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seems not to be aware. It is possible to review a book sincerely,
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without bestowing opprobrious epithets upon the writer, to condemn
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with courtesy, if not with kindness. The critic of the Messenger has
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been eulogized for his scorching and scarifying abilities, and he
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thinks it incumbent upon him to keep up his reputation in that line,
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by sneers, sarcasm and downright abuse; by straining his vision with
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microscopic intensity in search of faults, and shutting his eyes, with
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all his might to beauties. Moreover, we have detected him, more than
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once, in blunders quite as gross as those on which it was his pleasure
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to descant."*
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* In addition to these things we observe, in the New York Mirror,
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what follows: "Those who have read the Notices of American books in
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a certain Southern Monthly, which is striving to gain notoriety by the
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loudness of its abuse, may find amusement in the sketch on another
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page, entitled "The Successful Novel." The Southern Literary Messenger
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knows by experience what it is to write a successless novel." We have,
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in this case, only to deny, flatly, the assertion of the Mirror. The
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Editor of the Messenger never in his life wrote or published, or
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attempted to publish, a novel either successful or successless.
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In the paragraph from the Philadelphia Gazette, (which is edited
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by Mr. Willis Gaylord Clark, one of the editors of the
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Knickerbocker) we find nothing at which we have any desire to take
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exception. Mr. C. has a right to think us quacky if he pleases, and we
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do not remember having assumed for a moment that we could write a
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single line of the works we have reviewed. But there is something
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equivocal, to say the least, in the remarks of Col. Stone. He
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acknowledges that "some of our notices have been judicious, fair,
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and candid bestowing praise and censure with judgment and
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impartiality." This being the case, how can he reconcile his total
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dissent from the public verdict in our favor, with the dictates of
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justice? We are accused too of bestowing "opprobrious epithets" upon
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writers whom we review and in the paragraphs so accusing us are called
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nothing less than "flippant, unjust and uncritical."
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But there is another point of which we disapprove. While in our
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reviews we have at all times been particularly careful not to deal
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in generalities, and have never, if we remember aright, advanced in
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any single instance an unsupported assertion, our accuser has
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forgotten to give us any better evidence of our flippancy,
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injustice, personality, and gross blundering, than the solitary dictum
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of Col. Stone. We call upon the Colonel for assistance in this
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dilemma. We wish to be shown our blunders that we may correct them- to
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be made aware of our flippancy that we may avoid it hereafter- and
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above all to have our personalities pointed out that we may proceed
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forthwith with a repentant spirit, to make the amende honorable. In
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default of this aid from the Editor of the Commercial we shall take it
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for granted that we are neither blunderers, flippant, personal, nor
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unjust.
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Who will deny that in regard to individual poems no definitive
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opinions can exist, so long as to Poetry in the abstract we attach
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no definitive idea? Yet it is a common thing to hear our critics,
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day after day, pronounce, with a positive air, laudatory or
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condemnatory sentences, en masse, upon material works of whose
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merits or demerits they have, in the first place, virtually
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confessed an utter ignorance, in confessing it ignorance of all
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determinate principles by which to regulate a decision. Poetry has
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never been defined to the satisfaction of all parties. Perhaps, in the
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present condition of language it never will be. Words cannot hem it
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in. Its intangible and purely spiritual nature refuses to be bound
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down within the widest horizon of mere sounds. But it is not,
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therefore, misunderstood- at least, not by all men is it
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misunderstood. Very far from it, if indeed, there be any one circle of
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thought distinctly and palpably marked out from amid the jarring and
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tumultuous chaos of human intelligence, it is that evergreen and
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radiant Paradise which the true poet knows, and knows alone, as the
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limited realm of his authority- as the circumscribed Eden of his
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dreams. But a definition is a thing of words- a conception of ideas.
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And thus while we readily believe that Poesy, the term, it will be
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troublesome, if not impossible to define- still, with its image
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vividly existing in the world, we apprehend no difficulty in so
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describing Poesy, the Sentiment, as to imbue even the most obtuse
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intellect with a comprehension of it sufficiently distinct for all the
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purposes of practical analysis.
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To look upwards from any existence, material or immaterial to its
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design, is, perhaps, the most direct, and the most unerring method
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of attaining a just notion of the nature of the existence itself.
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Nor is the principle at fault when we turn our eyes from Nature even
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to Natures God. We find certain faculties, implanted within us, and
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arrive at a more plausible conception of the character and
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attributes of those faculties, by considering, with what finite
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judgment we possess, the intention of the Deity in so implanting
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them within us, than by any actual investigation of their powers, or
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any speculative deductions from their visible and material effects.
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Thus, for example, we discover in all men a disposition to look with
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reverence upon superiority, whether real or supposititious. In some,
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this disposition is to be recognized with difficulty, and, in very
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peculiar cases, we are occasionally even led to doubt its existence
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altogether, until circumstances beyond the common routine bring it
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accidentally into development. In others again it forms a prominent
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and distinctive feature of character, and is rendered palpably evident
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in its excesses. But in all human beings it is, in a greater or less
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degree, finally perceptible. It has been, therefore, justly considered
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a primitive sentiment. Phrenologists call it Veneration. It is,
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indeed, the instinct given to man by God as security for his own
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worship. And although, preserving its nature, it becomes perverted
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from its principal purpose, and although swerving from that purpose,
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it serves to modify the relations of human society- the relations of
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father and child, of master and slave, of the ruler and the ruled- its
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primitive essence is nevertheless the same, and by a reference to
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primal causes, may at any moment be determined.
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Very nearly akin to this feeling, and liable to the same analysis,
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is the Faculty of Ideality- which is the sentiment of Poesy. This
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sentiment is the sense of the beautiful, of the sublime, and of the
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mystical.* Thence spring immediately admiration of the fair flowers,
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the fairer forests, the bright valleys and rivers and mountains of the
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Earth- and love of the gleaming stars and other burning glories of
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Heaven- and, mingled up inextricably with this love and this
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admiration of Heaven and of Earth, the unconquerable desire- to
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know. Poesy is the sentiment of Intellectual Happiness here, and the
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Hope of a higher Intellectual Happiness hereafter.*(2)
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* We separate the sublime and the mystical- for, despite of high
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authorities, we are firmly convinced that the latter may exist, in the
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most vivid degree, without giving rise to the sense of the former.
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*(2) The consciousness of this truth was by no mortal more fully
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than by Shelley, although he has only once especially alluded to it.
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In his Hymn to intellectual Beauty we find these lines.
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While yet a boy I sought for ghosts, and sped
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Through many a listening chamber, cave and ruin,
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And starlight wood, with fearful steps pursuing
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Hopes of high talk with the departed dead:
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I called on poisonous names with which our youth is fed:
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I was not heard: I saw them not.
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When musing deeply on the lot
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Of life at that sweet time when birds are wooing
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All vital things that wake to bring
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News of buds and blossoming,
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Sudden thy shadow fell on me-
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I shrieked and clasped my hands in ecstasy!
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I vow'd that I would dedicate my powers
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To thee and thine: have I not kept the vow?
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With beating heart and streaming eyes, even now
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I call the phantoms of a thousand hours
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Each from his voiceless grave: they have in vision'd bowers
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Of studious zeal or love's delight
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Outwatch'd with me the envious night:
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They know that never joy illum'd my brow,
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Unlink'd with hope that thou wouldst free,
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This world from its dark slavery,
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That thou, O awful Loveliness,
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Wouldst give whate'er these words cannot express.
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Imagination is its soul.* With the passions of mankind- although
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it may modify them greatly- although it may exalt, or inflame, or
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purify, or control them- it would require little ingenuity to prove
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that it has no inevitable, and indeed no necessary co-existence. We
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have hitherto spoken of poetry in the abstract: we come now to speak
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of it in its everyday acceptation- that is to say, of the practical
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result arising from the sentiment we have considered.
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* Imagination is, possibly in man, a lesser degree of the creative
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power in God. What the Deity imagines, is, but was not before. What
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man imagines, is, but was also. The mind of man cannot imagine what is
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not. This latter point may be demonstrated.- See Les Premiers Traits
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de L'Erudition Universelle, par M. Le Baron de Biefield, 1767.
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And now it appears evident, that since Poetry, in this new sense, is
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the practical result, expressed in language, of this Poetic
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Sentiment in certain individuals, the only proper method of testing
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the merits of a poem is by measuring its capabilities of exciting
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the Poetic Sentiments in others. And to this end we have many aids- in
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observation, in experience, in ethical analysis, and in the dictates
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of common sense. Hence the Poeta nascitur, which is indisputably
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true if we consider the Poetic Sentiment, becomes the merest of
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absurdities when we regard it in reference to the practical result. We
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do not hesitate to say that a man highly endowed with the powers of
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Causality- that is to say, a man of metaphysical acumen- will, even
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with a very deficient share of Ideality, compose a finer poem (if we
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test it, as we should, by its measure of exciting the Poetic
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Sentiment) than one who, without such metaphysical acumen, shall be
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gifted, in the most extraordinary degree, with the faculty of
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Ideality. For a poem is not the Poetic faculty, but the means of
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exciting it in mankind. Now these means the metaphysician may discover
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by analysis of their effects in other cases than his own, without even
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conceiving the nature of these effects- thus arriving at a result
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which the unaided Ideality of his competitor would be utterly
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unable, except by accident, to attain. It is more than possible that
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the man who, of all writers, living or dead, has been most
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successful in writing the purest of all poems- that is to say, poems
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which excite more purely, most exclusively, and most powerfully the
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imaginative faculties in men- owed his extraordinary and almost
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magical preeminence rather to metaphysical than poetical powers. We
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allude to the author of Christabel, of the Rime of the Ancient
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Mariner, and of Love- to Coleridge- whose head, if we mistake not
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its character, gave no great phrenological tokens of Ideality, while
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the organs of Causality and Comparison were most singularly developed.
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Perhaps at this particular moment there are no American poems held
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in so high estimation by our countrymen, as the poems of Drake, and of
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Halleck. The exertions of Mr. George Dearborn have no doubt a far
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greater share in creating this feeling than the lovers of literature
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for its own sake and spiritual uses would be willing to admit. We have
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indeed seldom seen more beautiful volumes than the volumes now
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before us. But an adventitious interest of a loftier nature- the
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interest of the living in the memory of the beloved dead- attaches
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itself to the few literary remains of Drake. The poems which are now
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given to us with his name are nineteen in number; and whether all,
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or whether even the best of his writings, it is our present purpose to
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speak of these alone, since upon this edition his poetical
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reputation to all time will most probably depend.
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It is only lately that we have read The Culprit Fay. This is a
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poem of six hundred and forty irregular lines, generally iambic, and
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divided into thirty-six stanzas, of unequal length. The scene of the
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narrative, as we ascertain from the single line,
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The moon looks down on old Cronest,
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is principally in the vicinity of West Point on the Hudson. The plot
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is as follows. An Ouphe, one of the race of Fairies, has "broken his
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vestal vow,"
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He has loved an earthly maid
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And left for her his woodland shade;
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He has lain upon her lip of dew,
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And sunned him in her eye of blue,
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Fann'd her cheek with his wing of air,
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Play'd with the ringlets of her hair,
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And, nestling on her snowy breast,
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Forgot the lily-kings behest-
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in short, he has broken Fairy-law in becoming enamored of a mortal.
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The result of this misdemeanor we could not express so well as the
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poet, and will therefore make use of the language put into the mouth
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of the Fairy-King who reprimands the criminal.
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Fairy! Fairy! list and mark,
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Thou hast broke thine elfin chain,
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Thy flame-wood lamp is quench'd and dark
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And thy wings are dyed with a deadly stain.
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The Ouphe being in this predicament, it has become necessary that
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his case and crime should be investigated by a jury of his fellows,
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and to this end the "shadowy tribes of air" are summoned by the
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"sentry elve" who has been awakened by the "wood-tick"- are summoned
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we say to the "elfin-court" at midnight to hear the doom of the
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Culprit Fay.
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"Had a stain been found on the earthly fair," whose blandishments so
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bewildered the little Ouphe, his punishment would have been severe
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indeed. In such case he would have been (as we learn from the Fairy
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judge's exposition of the criminal code,)
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Tied to the hornet's shardy wings;
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Tossed on the pricks of nettles' stings;
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Or seven long ages doomed to dwell
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With the lazy worm in the walnut shell;
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Or every night to writhe and bleed
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Beneath the tread of the centipede,
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Or bound in a cobweb dungeon dim
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His jailer a spider huge and grim,
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Amid the carrion bodies to lie
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Of the worm and the bug and the murdered fly-
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Fortunately, however, for the Culprit, his mistress is proved to
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be of "sinless mind" and under such redeeming circumstances the
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sentence is, mildly, as follows-
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Thou shalt seek the beach of sand
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Where the water bounds the elfin land,
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Thou shalt watch the oozy brine
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Till the sturgeon leaps in the bright moonshine,
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Then dart the glistening arch below,
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And catch a drop from his silver bow.
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If the spray-bead be won
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The stain of thy wing is washed away,
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But another errand must be done
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Ere thy crime be lost for aye;
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Thy flame-wood lamp is quenched and dark,
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Thou must re-illume its spark.
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Mount thy steed and spur him high
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To the heaven's blue canopy,
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And when thou seest a shooting star
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Follow it fast and follow it far
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The last faint spark of its burning train
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Shall light the elfin lamp again.
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Upon this sin, and upon this sentence, depends the web of the
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narrative, which is now occupied with the elfin difficulties
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overcome by the Ouphe in washing away the stain of his wing, and
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re-illuming his flame-wood lamp. His soiled pinion having lost its
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power, he is under the necessity of wending his way on foot from the
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Elfin court upon Cronest to the river beach at its base. His path is
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encumbered at every step with "bog and briar," with "brook and
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mire," with "beds of tangled fern," with "groves of night-shade,"
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and with the minor evils of ant and snake. Happily, however, a spotted
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toad coming in sight, our adventurer jumps upon her back, and
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"bridling her mouth with a silk-weed twist" bounds merrily along
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Till the mountain's magic verge is past
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And the beach of sand is reached at last.
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Alighting now from his "courser-toad" the Ouphe folds his wings
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around his bosom, springs on a rock, breathes a prayer, throws his
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arms above his head,
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Then tosses a tiny curve in air
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And plunges in the waters blue.
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Here, however, a host of difficulties await him by far too
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multitudinous to enumerate. We will content ourselves with simply
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stating the names of his most respectable assailants. These are the
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"spirits of the wave" dressed in "snail-plate armor" and aided by
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the "mailed shrimp," the "prickly prong," the "blood-red leech," the
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"stony star-fish," the "jellied quarl," the "soldier-crab," and the
|
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"lancing squab." But the hopes of our hero are high, and his limbs are
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strong, so
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He spreads his arms like the swallow's wing,
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And throws his feet with a frog-like fling.
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All however, is to no purpose.
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On his thigh the leech has fixed his hold,
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The quarl's long arms are round him roll'd,
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The prickly prong has pierced his skin,
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And the squab has thrown his javelin,
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The gritty star has rubb'd him raw,
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And the crab has struck with his giant claw;
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He bawls with rage, and he shrieks with pain
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He strikes around but his blows are vain-
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So then,
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He turns him round and flies amain
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With hurry and dash to the beach again.
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Arrived safely on land our Fairy friend now gathers the dew from the
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"sorrel-leaf and henbane-bud" and bathing therewith his wounds,
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finally ties them up with cobweb. Thus recruited, he
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-treads the fatal shore
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As fresh and vigorous as before.
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At length espying a "purple-muscle shell" upon the beach, he
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determines to use it as a boat and thus evade the animosity of the
|
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water spirits whose powers extend not above the wave. Making a
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"sculler's notch" in the stern, and providing himself with an oar of
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the bootle-blade, the Ouphe a second time ventures upon the deep.
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His perils are now diminished, but still great. The imps of the
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river heave the billows up before the prow of the boat, dash the
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surges against her side, and strike against her keel. The quarl
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uprears "his island-back" in her path, and the scallop, floating in
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the rear of the vessel, spatters it all over with water. Our
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adventurer, however, bails it out with the colen bell (which he has
|
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luckily provided for the purpose of catching the drop from the
|
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silver bow of the sturgeon,) and keeping his little bark warily
|
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trimmed, holds on his course undiscomfited.
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The object of his first adventure is at length discovered in a
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"brownbacked sturgeon," who
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Like the heaven-shot javelin
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Springs above the waters blue,
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And, instant as the star-fall light
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Plunges him in the deep again,
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But leaves an arch of silver bright,
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The rainbow of the moony main.
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From this rainbow our Ouphe succeeds in catching, by means of his
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colen bell cup, a "droplet of the sparkling dew." One half of his task
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is accordingly done-
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His wings are pure, for the gem is won.
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On his return to land, the ripples divide before him, while the
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water-spirits, so rancorous before, are obsequiously attentive to
|
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his comfort. Having tarried a moment on the beach to breathe a prayer,
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he "spreads his wings of gilded blue" and takes his way to the elfin
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court- there resting until the cricket, at two in the morning,
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rouses him up for the second portion of his penance.
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His equipments are now an "acorn-helmet," a "thistle-down plume,"
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a corslet of the "wild-bee's" skin, a cloak of the "wings of
|
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butterflies," a shield of the "shell of the lady-bug," for lance
|
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"the sting of a wasp," for sword a "blade of grass," for horse "a
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fire-fly," and for spurs a couple of "cockle seed." Thus accoutred,
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Away like a glance of thought he flies
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To skim the heavens and follow far
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The fiery trail of the rocket-star.
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In the Heavens he has new dangers to encounter. The "shapes of
|
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air" have begun their work- a "drizzly mist" is cast around him-
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"storm, darkness, sleet and shade" assail him- "shadowy hands"
|
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twitch at his bridle-rein- "flame-shot tongues" play around him-
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"fiendish eyes" glare upon him- and
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Yells of rage and shrieks of fear
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Come screaming on his startled ear.
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Still our adventurer is nothing daunted.
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He thrusts before, and he strikes behind,
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Till he pierces the cloudy bodies through
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And gashes the shadowy limbs of mind.
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and the Elfin makes no stop, until he reaches the "bank of the milky
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|
way." He there checks his courser, and watches "for the glimpse of the
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planet shoot." While thus engaged, however, an unexpected adventure
|
|
befalls him. He is approached by a company of the "sylphs of Heaven
|
|
attired in sunset's crimson pall." They dance around him, and "skip
|
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before him on the plain." One receiving his "wasp-sting lance," and
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another taking his bridle-rein,
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With warblings wild they lead him on,
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To where, through clouds of amber seen,
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Studded with stars resplendent shone
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The palace of the sylphid queen.
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A glowing description of the queen's beauty follows: and as the form
|
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of an earthly Fay had never been seen before in the bowers of light,
|
|
she is represented as falling desperately in love at first sight
|
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with our adventurous Ouphe. He returns the compliment in some measure,
|
|
of course; but, although "his heart bent fitfully," the "earthly
|
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form imprinted there" was a security against a too vivid impression.
|
|
He declines, consequently, the invitation of the queen to remain
|
|
with her and amuse himself by "lying within the fleecy drift,"
|
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"hanging upon the rainbow's rim," having his "brow adorned with all
|
|
the jewels of the sky," "sitting within the Pleiad ring," "resting
|
|
upon Orion's belt" "riding upon the lightning's gleam," "dancing
|
|
upon the orbed moon," and "swimming within the milky way."
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Lady, he cries, I have sworn to-night
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On the word of a fairy knight
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To do my sentence task aright
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The queen, therefore, contents herself with bidding the Fay an
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affectionate farewell- having first directed him carefully to that
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particular portion of the sky where a star is about to fall. He
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reaches this point in safety, and in despite of the "fiends of the
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cloud," who "bellow very loud," succeeds finally in catching a
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"glimmering spark" with which he returns triumphantly to Fairy-land.
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The poem closes with an Io Paean chaunted by the elves in honor of
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these glorious adventures.
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It is more than probable that from ten readers of the Culprit Fay,
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nine would immediately pronounce it a poem betokening the most
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extraordinary powers of imagination, and of these nine, perhaps five
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or six, poets themselves, and fully impressed with the truth of what
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we have already assumed, that Ideality is indeed the soul of the
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Poetic Sentiment, would feel embarrassed between a
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half-consciousness that they ought to admire the production, and a
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wonder that they do not. This embarrassment would then arise from an
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indistinct conception of the results in which Ideality is rendered
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manifest. Of these results some few are seen in the Culprit Fay, but
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the greater part of it is utterly destitute of any evidence of
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imagination whatever. The general character of the poem will, we
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think, be sufficiently understood by any one who may have taken the
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trouble to read our foregoing compendium of the narrative. It will
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be there seen that what is so frequently termed the imaginative
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power of this story, lies especially- we should have rather said is
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thought to lie- in the passages we have quoted, or in others of a
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precisely similar nature. These passages embody, principally, mere
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specifications of qualities, of habiliments, of punishments, of
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occupations, of circumstances, &c., which the poet has believed in
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unison with the size, firstly, and secondly with the nature of his
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Fairies. To all which may be added specifications of other animal
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existences (such as the toad, the beetle, the lance-fly, the
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fire-fly and the like) supposed also to be in accordance. An example
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will best illustrate our meaning upon this point-
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He put his acorn helmet on;
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It was plumed of the silk of the thistle down:
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The corslet plate that guarded his breast
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Was once the wild bee's golden vest;
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His cloak of a thousand mingled dyes,
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Was formed of the wings of butterflies;
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His shield was the shell of a lady-bug queen,
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Studs of gold on a ground of green;*
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And the quivering lance which he brandished bright
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Was the sting of a wasp he had slain in fight.
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* Chestnut color, or more slack,
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Gold upon a ground of black.
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Ben Jonson.
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We shall now be understood. Were any of the admirers of the
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Culprit Fay asked their opinion of these lines, they would most
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probably speak in high terms of the imagination they display. Yet
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let the most stolid and the most confessedly unpoetical of these
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admirers only try the experiment, and he will find, possibly to his
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extreme surprise, that he himself will have no difficulty whatever
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in substituting for the equipments of the Fairy, as assigned by the
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poet, other equipments equally comfortable, no doubt, and equally in
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unison with the preconceived size, character, and other qualities of
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the equipped. Why we could accoutre him as well ourselves- let us see.
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His blue-bell helmet, we have heard
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Was plumed with the down of the hummingbird,
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The corslet on his bosom bold
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Was once the locust's coat of gold,
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His cloak, of a thousand mingled hues,
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Was the velvet violet, wet with dews,
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His target was, the crescent shell
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Of the small sea Sidrophel,
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And a glittering beam from a maiden's eye
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Was the lance which he proudly wav'd on high.
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The truth is, that the only requisite for writing verses of this
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nature, ad libitum is a tolerable acquaintance with the qualities of
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the objects to be detailed, and a very moderate endowment of the
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faculty of Comparison- which is the chief constituent of Fancy or
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the powers of combination. A thousand such lines may be composed
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without exercising in the least degree the Poetic Sentiment, which
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is Ideality, Imagination, or the creative ability. And, as we have
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before said, the greater portion of the Culprit Fay is occupied with
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these, or similiar things, and upon such, depends very nearly, if
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not altogether, its reputation. We select another example-
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But oh! how fair the shape that lay
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Beneath a rainbow bending bright,
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She seem'd to the entranced Fay
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The loveliest of the forms of light,
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Her mantle was the purple rolled
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At twilight in the west afar;
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T'was tied with threads of dawning gold,
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And button'd with a sparkling star.
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Her face was like the lily roon
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That veils the vestal planet's hue,
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Her eyes, two beamlets from the moon
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Set floating in the welkin blue.
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Her hair is like the sunny beam,
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And the diamond gems which round it gleam
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Are the pure drops of dewy even,
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That neer have left their native heaven.
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Here again the faculty of Comparison is alone exercised, and no mind
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possessing the faculty in any ordinary degree would find a
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difficulty in substituting for the materials employed by the poet
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other materials equally as good. But viewed as mere efforts of the
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Fancy and without reference to Ideality, the lines just quoted are
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much worse than those which were taken earlier. A congruity was
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observable in the accoutrements of the Ouphe, and we had no trouble in
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forming a distinct conception of his appearance when so accoutred. But
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the most vivid powers of Comparison can attach no definitive idea to
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even "the loveliest form of light," when habited in a mantle of
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"rolled purple tied with threads of dawn and buttoned with a star,"
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and sitting at the same time under a rainbow with "beamlet" eyes and a
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visage of "lily roon."
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But if these things evince no Ideality in their author, do they
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not excite it in others?- if so, we must conclude, that without
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being himself imbued with the Poetic Sentiment, he has still succeeded
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in writing a fine poem- a supposition as we have before endeavored
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to show, not altogether paradoxical. Most assuredly we think not. In
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the case of a great majority of readers the only sentiment aroused
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by compositions of this order is a species of vague wonder at the
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writer's ingenuity, and it is this indeterminate sense of wonder which
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passes but too frequently current for the proper influence of the
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Poetic power. For our own part we plead guilty to a predominant
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sense of the ludicrous while occupied in the perusal of the poem
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before us- a sense whose promptings we sincerely and honestly
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endeavored to quell, perhaps not altogether successfully, while
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penning our compend of the narrative. That a feeling of this nature is
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utterly at war with the Poetic Sentiment will not be disputed by those
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who comprehend the character of the sentiment itself. This character
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is finely shadowed out in that popular although vague idea so
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prevalent throughout all time, that a species of melancholy is
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inseparably connected with the higher manifestations of the beautiful.
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But with the numerous and seriously- adduced incongruities of the
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Culprit Fay, we find it generally impossible to connect other ideas
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than those of the ridiculous. We are bidden, in the first place, and
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in a tone of sentiment and language adapted to the loftiest breathings
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of the Muse, to imagine a race of Fairies in the vicinity of West
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Point. We are told, with a grave air, of their camp, of their king,
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and especially of their sentry, who is a wood-tick. We are informed
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that an Ouphe of about an inch in height has committed a deadly sin in
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falling in love with a mortal maiden, who may, very possibly, be six
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feet in her stockings. The consequence to the Ouphe is- what? Why,
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that he has "dyed his wings," "broken his elfin chain," and
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"quenched his flame-wood lamp." And he is therefore sentenced to what?
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To catch a spark from the tail of a falling star, and a drop of
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water from the belly of a sturgeon. What are his equipments for the
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first adventure? An acorn-helmet, a thistle-down plume, a butterfly
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cloak, a lady-bug shield, cockle-seed spurs, and a fire-fly horse. How
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does he ride to the second? On the back of a bullfrog. What are his
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opponents in the one? "Drizzle-mists," "sulphur and smoke," "shadowy
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hands and flame-shot tongues." What in the other? "Mailed shrimps,"
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"prickly prongs," "blood-red leeches," "jellied quarls," "stony star
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fishes," "lancing squabs" and "soldier crabs." Is that all? No-
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Although only an inch high he is in imminent danger of seduction
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from a "sylphid queen," dressed in a mantle of "rolled purple,"
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"tied with threads of dawning gold," "buttoned with a sparkling star,"
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and sitting under a rainbow with "beamlet eyes" and a countenance of
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"lily roon." In our account of all this matter we have had reference
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to the book- and to the book alone. It will be difficult to prove us
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guilty in any degree of distortion or exaggeration. Yet such are the
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puerilities we daily find ourselves called upon to admire, as among
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the loftiest efforts of the human mind, and which not to assign a rank
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with the proud trophies of the matured and vigorous genius of England,
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is to prove ourselves at once a fool; a maligner, and no patriot.*
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* A review of Drake's poems, emanating from one of our proudest
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Universities, does not scruple to make use of the following language
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in relation to the Culprit Fay. "It is, to say the least, an elegant
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production, the purest specimen of Ideality we have ever met with,
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sustaining in each incident a most bewitching interest. Its very title
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is enough," &c. &c. We quote these expressions as a fair specimen of
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the general unphilosophical and adulatory tenor of our criticism.
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As an instance of what may be termed the sublimely ridiculous we
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quote the following lines-
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With sweeping tail and quivering fin,
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Through the wave the sturgeon flew,
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And like the heaven-shot javelin,
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He sprung above the waters blue.
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Instant as the star-fall light,
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He plunged into the deep again,
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But left an arch of silver bright
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The rainbow of the moony main.
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It was a strange and lovely sight
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To see the puny goblin there,
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He seemed an angel form of light
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With azure wing and sunny hair,
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Throned on a cloud of purple fair
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Circled with blue and edged with white
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And sitting at the fall of even
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Beneath the bow of summer heaven.
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The [lines of the last verse], if considered without their
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context, have a certain air of dignity, elegance, and chastity of
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thought. If however we apply the context, we are immediately
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overwhelmed with the grotesque. It is impossible to read without
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laughing, such expressions as "It was a strange and lovely sight"- "He
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seemed an angel form of light"- "And sitting at the fall of even,
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beneath the bow of summer heaven" to a Fairy- a goblin- an Ouphe- half
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|
an inch high, dressed in an acorn helmet and butterfly-cloak, and
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sitting on the water in a muscleshell, with a "brown-backed
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sturgeon" turning somersets over his head.
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In a world where evil is a mere consequence of good, and good a mere
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|
consequence of evil- in short where all of which we have any
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|
conception is good or bad only by comparison- we have never yet been
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|
fully able to appreciate the validity of that decision which would
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|
debar the critic from enforcing upon his readers the merits or
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|
demerits of a work with another. It seems to us that an adage has
|
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had more to do with this popular feeling than any just reason
|
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founded upon common sense. Thinking thus, we shall have no scruple
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in illustrating our opinion in regard to what is not Ideality or the
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Poetic Power, by an example of what is.*
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* As examples of entire poems of the purest ideality, we would
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cite the Prometheus Vinctus of Aeschylus, the Inferno of Dante,
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Cervantes' Destruction of Numantia, the Comus of Milton, Pope's Rape
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of the Lock, Burns' Tam O'Shanter, the Auncient Mariner, the
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Christabel, and the Kubla Khan of Coleridge, and most especially the
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Sensitive Plant of Shelley, and the Nightingale of Keats. We have seen
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American poems evincing the faculty in the highest degree.
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We have already given the description of the Sylphid Queen in the
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Culprit Fay. In the Queen Mab of Shelley a Fairy is thus introduced-
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Those who had looked upon the sight
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Passing all human glory,
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Saw not the yellow moon,
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Saw not the mortal scene,
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Heard not the night wind's rush,
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Heard not an earthly sound,
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Saw but the fairy pageant,
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Heard but the heavenly strains
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That filled the lonely dwelling-
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and thus described-
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The Fairy's frame was slight, yon fibrous cloud
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That catches but the faintest tinge of even,
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And which the straining eye can hardly seize
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When melting into eastern twilight's shadow,
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Were scarce so thin, so slight; but the fair star
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That gems the glittering coronet of morn,
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Sheds not a light so mild, so powerful,
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As that which, bursting from the Fairy's form,
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Spread a purpureal halo round the scene,
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Yet with an undulating motion,
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Swayed to her outline gracefully.
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In these exquisite lines the Faculty of mere Comparison is but
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little exercised- that of Ideality in a wonderful degree. It is
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probable that in a similar case the poet we are now reviewing would
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have formed the face of the Fairy of the "fibrous cloud," her arms
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of the "pale tinge of even," her eyes of the "fair stars," and her
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body of the "twilight shadow." Having so done, his admirers would have
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congratulated him upon his imagination, not, taking the trouble to
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think that they themselves could at any moment imagine a Fairy of
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materials equally as good, and conveying an equally distinct idea.
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Their mistake would be precisely analogous to that of many a schoolboy
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who admires the imagination displayed in Jack the Giant-Killer, and is
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finally rejoiced at; discovering his own imagination to surpass that
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of the author, since the monsters destroyed by Jack are only about
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forty feet in height, and he himself has no trouble in imagining
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some of one hundred and forty. It will, be seen that the Fairy of
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Shelley is not a mere compound of incongruous natural objects,
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inartificially put together, and unaccompanied by any moral sentiment-
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but a being, in the illustration of whose nature some physical
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elements are used collaterally as adjuncts, while the main
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conception springs immediately or thus apparently springs, from the
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brain of the poet, enveloped in the moral sentiments of grace, of
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color, of motion- of the beautiful, of the mystical, of the august- in
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short of the ideal.*
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* Among things, which not only in our opinion, but in the opinion of
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far wiser and better men, are to be ranked with the mere
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prettinesses of the Muse, are the positive similes so abundant in
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the writing of antiquity, and so much insisted upon by the critics
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of the reign of Queen Anne.
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It is by no means our intention to deny that in the Culprit Fay
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are passages of a different order from those to which we have
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objected- passages evincing a degree of imagination not to be
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discovered in the plot, conception, or general execution of the
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poem. The opening stanza will afford us a tolerable example.
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Tis the middle watch of a summer's night-
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The earth is dark but the heavens are bright
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Naught is seen in the vault on high
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But the moon, and the stars, and the cloudless sky,
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And the flood which rolls its milky hue
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A river of light on the welkin blue.
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The moon looks down on old Cronest,
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She mellows the shades of his shaggy breast,
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And seems his huge gray form to throw
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In a silver cone on the wave below,
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His sides are broken by spots of shade,
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By the walnut bow and the cedar made,
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And through their clustering branches dark
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Glimmers and dies the fire-fly's spark-
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Like starry twinkles that momently break
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Through the rifts of the gathering tempest rack.
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There is Ideality in these lines- but except in the case of the
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[second and the fourteenth lines]- it is Ideality not of a high order.
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We have, it is true, a collection of natural objects, each
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individually of great beauty, and, if actually seen as in nature,
|
|
capable of exciting in any mind, through the means of the Poetic
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|
Sentiment more or less inherent in all, a certain sense of the
|
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beautiful. But to view such natural objects as they exist, and to
|
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behold them through the medium of words, are different things. Let
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us pursue the idea that such a collection as we have here will
|
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produce, of necessity, the Poetic Sentiment, and we may as well make
|
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up our minds to believe that a catalogue of such expressions as
|
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moon, sky, trees, rivers, mountains, &c., shall be capable of exciting
|
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it,- it is merely an extension of the principle. But in the line
|
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"the earth is dark, but the heavens are bright" besides the simple
|
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mention of the "dark earth" "and the bright heaven," we have,
|
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directly, the moral sentiment of the brightness of the sky
|
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compensating for the darkness of the earth- and thus, indirectly, of
|
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the happiness of a future state compensating for the miseries of the
|
|
present. All this is effected by the simple introduction of the word
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but between the "dark earth" and the "bright heaven"- this
|
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introduction, however, was prompted by the Poetic Sentiment, and by
|
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the Poetic Sentiment alone. The case is analogous in the expression
|
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"glimmers and dies," where the imagination is exalted by the moral
|
|
sentiment of beauty heightened in dissolution.
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In one or two shorter passages of the Culprit Fay the poet will
|
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recognize the purely ideal, and be able at a glance to distinguish
|
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it from that baser alloy upon which we have descanted. We give them
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without farther comment.
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The winds are whist, and the owl is still,
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The bat in the shelvy rock is hid
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And naught is heard on the lonely hill
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But the cricket's chirp and the answer shrill
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Of the gauze-winged katydid;
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And the plaint of the wailing whippoorwill
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Who mourns unseen, and ceaseless sings
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Ever a note of wail and wo-
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Up to the vaulted firmament
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His path the fire-fly courser bent,
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And at every gallop on the wind
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He flung a glittering spark behind.
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He blessed the force of the charmed line
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And he banned the water-goblins' spite,
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For he saw around in the sweet moonshine,
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Their little wee faces above the brine,
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Grinning and laughing with all their might
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At the piteous hap of the Fairy wight.
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The poem "To a Friend" consists of fourteen Spenserian stanzas.
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They are fine spirited verses, and probably were not supposed by their
|
|
author to be more. Stanza the fourth, although beginning nobly,
|
|
concludes with that very common exemplification of the bathos, the
|
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illustrating natural objects of beauty or grandeur by references to
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the tinsel of artificiality.
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Oh! for a seat on Appalachia's brow,
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That I might scan the glorious prospects round,
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Wild waving woods, and rolling floods below,
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Smooth level glades and fields with grain embrowned,
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High heaving hills, with tufted forests crowned,
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Rearing their tall tops to the heaven's blue dome,
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And emerald isles, like banners green un-wound,
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Floating along the take, while round them roam
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Bright helms of billowy blue, and plumes of dancing foam.
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In the Extracts from Leon are passages not often surpassed in
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vigor of passionate thought and expression- and which induce us to
|
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believe not only that their author would have succeeded better in
|
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prose romance than in poetry, but that his attention would have
|
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naturally fallen into the former direction, had the Destroyer only
|
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spared him a little longer.
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This poem contains also lines of far greater poetic power than any
|
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to be found in the Culprit Fay. For example-
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The stars have lit in heaven their lamps of gold,
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The viewless dew falls lightly on the world;
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The gentle air that softly sweeps the leaves
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A strain of faint unearthly music weaves:
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As when the harp of heaven remotely plays,
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Or sygnets wail- or song of sorrowing fays
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That float amid the moonshine glimmerings pale,
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On wings of woven air in some enchanted vale.*
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* The expression "woven air," much insisted upon by the friends of
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Drake, seems to be accredited to him as original. It is to be found in
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many English writers- and can be traced back to Apuleius, who calls
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fine drapery ventum textilem.
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Niagara is objectionable in many respects, and in none more so
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than in its frequent inversions of language, and the artificial
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character of its versification. The invocation,
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Roar, raging torrent! and thou, mighty river,
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Pour thy white foam on the valley below!
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Frown ye dark mountains, &c.
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is ludicrous- and nothing more. In general, all such invocations
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have an air of the burlesque. In the present instance we may fancy the
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majestic Niagara replying, "Most assuredly I will roar, whether, worm!
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thou tellest me or not."
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The American Flag commences with a collection of those bald
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conceits, which we have already shown to have no dependence whatever
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upon the Poetic Power- springing altogether from Comparison.
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When Freedom from her mountain height
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Unfurled her standard to the air,
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She tore the azure robe of night
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And set the stars of glory there.
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She mingled with its gorgeous dyes
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The milky baldric of the skies,
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And striped its pure celestrial white
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With streakings of the morning light;
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Then from his mansion in the sun
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She called her eagle bearer down
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And gave into his mighty hand
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The symbol of her chosen land.
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Let us reduce all this to plain English, and we have- what? Why, a
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flag, consisting of the "azure robe of night," "set with stars of
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glory," interspersed with "streaks of morning light," relieved with
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a few pieces of "milky way," and the whole carried by an "eagle
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bearer," that is to say, an eagle ensign, who bears aloft this "symbol
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of our chosen land" in his "mighty hand," by which we are to
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understand his claw. In the second stanza, "the thunder-drum of
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Heaven" is bathetic and grotesque in the highest degree- a commingling
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of the most sublime music of Heaven with the most utterly contemptible
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and common-place of Earth. The two concluding verses are in a better
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spirit, and might almost be supposed to be from a different hand.
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The images contained in the lines
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When Death careering on the gale
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Sweeps darkly round the bellied sail,
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And frighted waves rush wildly back,
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Before the broadsides reeling rack,
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are of the highest order of Ideality. The deficiencies of the whole
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poem may be best estimated by reading it in connection with "Scots wha
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hae," with the "Mariners of England," or with "Hohenlinden." It is
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indebted for its high and most undeserved reputation to our
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patriotism- not to our judgment.
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The remaining poems in Mr. Dearborn's edition of Drake, are three
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Songs; Lines in an Album; Lines to a Lady; Lines on leaving New
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Rochelle; Hope; A Fragment; To-; To Eva; To a Lady; To Sarah; and
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Bronx. These are all poems of little compass, and with the exception
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of Bronx and a portion of the Fragment, they have no character
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distinctive from the mass of our current poetical literature. Bronx,
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however, is in our opinion, not only the best of the writings of
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Drake, but altogether a lofty and beautiful poem, upon which his
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admirers would do better to found a hope of the writer's ultimate
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reputation than upon the niaiseries of the Culprit Fay. In the
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Fragment is to be found the finest individual passage in the volume
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before us, and we quote it as a proper finale to our review.
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Yes! thou art lovelier now than ever,
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How sweet't would be when all the air
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In moonlight swims, along thy river
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To couch upon the grass, and hear
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Niagra's everlasting voice
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Far in the deep blue west away,
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That dreamy and poetic noise
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We mark not in the glare of day,
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Oh! how unlike its torrent-cry,
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When o'er the brink the tide is driven,
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As if the vast and sheeted sky
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In thunder fell from Heaven.
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Halleck's poetical powers appear to us essentially inferior, upon
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the whole, to those of his friend Drake. He has written nothing at all
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comparable to Bronx. By the hackneyed phrase, sportive elegance, we
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might possibly designate at once the general character of his writings
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and the very loftiest praise to which he is justly entitled.
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Alnwick Castle is an irregular poem of one hundred and
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twenty-eight lines- was written, as we are informed, in October
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1822- and is descriptive of a seat of the Duke of Northumberland, in
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Northumberlandshire, England. The effect of the first stanza is
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materially impaired by a defect in its grammatical arrangement. The
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fine lines,
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Home of the Percy's high-born race,
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Home of their beautiful and brave,
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Alike their birth and burial place,
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Their cradle and their grave!
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are of the nature of an invocation, and thus require a continuation of
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the address to the "Home, &c." We are consequently disappointed when
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the stanza proceeds with-
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Still sternly o'er the castle gate
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Their house's Lion stands in state
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As in his proud departed hours;
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And warriors frown in stone on high,
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And feudal banners "flout the sky"
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Above his princely towers.
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The objects of allusion here vary, in an awkward manner, from the
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castle to the lion, and from the Lion to the towers. By writing the
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verses thus the difficulty would be remedied.
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Still sternly o'er the castle gate
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Thy house's Lion stands in state,
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As in his proud departed hours;
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And warriors frown in stone on high,
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And feudal banners "flout the sky"
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Above thy princely towers.
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The second stanza, without evincing in any measure the loftier
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powers of a poet, has that quiet air of grace, both in thought and
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expression, which seems to be the prevailing feature of the Muse of
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Halleck.
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A gentle hill its side inclines,
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Lovely in England's fadeless green,
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To meet the quiet stream which winds
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Through this romantic scene
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As silently and sweetly still,
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As when, at evening, on that hill,
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While summer's wind blew soft and low,
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Seated by gallant Hotspur's side
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His Katherine was a happy bride
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A thousand years ago.
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There are one or two brief passages in the poem evincing a degree of
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rich imagination not elsewhere perceptible throughout the book. For
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example-
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Gaze on the Abbey's ruined pile:
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Does not the succoring Ivy keeping,
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Her watch around it seem to smile
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As o'er a lov'd one sleeping?
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and,
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One solitary turret gray
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Still tells in melancholy glory
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The legend of the Cheviot day.
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The commencement of the fourth stanza is of the highest order of
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Poetry, and partakes, in a happy manner, of that quaintness of
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expression so effective an adjunct to Ideality, when employed by the
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Shelleys, the Coleridges and the Tennysons, but so frequently debased,
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and rendered ridiculous, by the herd of brainless imitators.
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Wild roses by the abbey towers
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Are gay in their young bud and bloom:
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They were born of a race of funeral flowers,
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That garlanded in long-gone hours,
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A Templar's knightly tomb.
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The tone employed in the concluding portions of Alnwick Castle,
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is, we sincerely think, reprehensible, and unworthy of Halleck. No
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true poet can unite in any manner the low burlesque with the ideal,
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and not be conscious of incongruity and of a profanation. Such
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verses as
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Men in the coal and cattle line
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From Tevoit's bard and hero land,
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From royal Berwick's beach of sand,
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From Wooler, Morpeth, Hexham, and
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Newcastle upon Tyne.
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may lay claim to oddity- but no more. These things are the defects and
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not the beauties of Don Juan. They are totally out of keeping with the
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graceful and delicate manner of the initial portions of Alnwick
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Castle, and serve no better purpose than to deprive the entire poem of
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all unity of effect. If a poet must be farcical, let him be just that,
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and nothing else. To be drolly sentimental is bad enough, as we have
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just seen in certain passages of the Culprit Fay, but to be
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sentimentally droll is a thing intolerable to men, and Gods, and
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columns.
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Marco Bozzaris appears to have much lyrical without any high order
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of ideal beauty. Force is its prevailing character- a force,
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however, consisting more in a well ordered and sonorous arrangement of
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this metre, and a judicious disposal of what may be called the
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circumstances of the poem, than in the true material of lyric vigor.
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We are introduced, first, to the Turk who dreams, at midnight, in
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his guarded tent,
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of the hour
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When Greece her knee in suppliance bent,
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Should tremble at his power-
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He is represented as revelling in the visions of ambition.
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In dreams through camp and court he bore
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The trophies of a conqueror;
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In dreams his song of triumph heard;
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Then wore his monarch's signet ring;
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Then pressed that monarch's throne- a king;
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As wild his thoughts and gay of wing
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As Eden's garden bird.
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In direct contrast to this we have Bozzaris watchful in the
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forest, and ranging his band of Suliotes on the ground, and amid the
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memories of Plataea. An hour elapses, and the Turk awakes from his
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visions of false glory- to die. But Bozzaris dies- to awake. He dies
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in the flush of victory to awake, in death, to an ultimate certainty
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of Freedom. Then follows an invocation to death. His terrors under
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ordinary circumstances are contrasted with the glories of the
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dissolution of Bozzaris, in which the approach of the Destroyer is
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welcome as the cry
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That told the Indian isles were nigh
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To the world-seeking Genoese,
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When the land-wind from woods of palm,
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And orange groves and fields of balm,
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Blew o'er the Haytian seas.
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The poem closes with the poetical apotheosis of Marco Bozzaris as
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One of the few, the immortal names
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That are not born to die.
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It will be seen that these arrangements of the subject are
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skillfully contrived- perhaps they are a little too evident, and we
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are enabled too readily by the perusal of one passage, to anticipate
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the succeeding. The rhythm is highly artificial. The stanzas are
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well adapted for vigorous expression- the fifth will afford a just
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specimen of the versification of the whole poem.
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Come to the bridal Chamber, Death!
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Come to the mother's when she feels
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For the first time her first born's breath;
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Come when the blessed seals
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That close the pestilence are broke,
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And crowded cities wail its stroke,
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Come in consumption's ghastly form,
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The earthquake shock, the ocean storm;
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Come when the heart beats high and warm,
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With banquet song and dance, and wine;
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And thou art terrible- the tear,
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The groan, the knell, the pall, the bier,
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And all we know, or dream, or fear
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Of agony, are thine.
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Granting, however, to Marco Bozzaris, the minor excellences we
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have pointed out we should be doing our conscience great wrong in
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calling it, upon the whole, any more than a very ordinary matter. It
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is surpassed, even as a lyric, by a multitude of foreign and by many
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American compositions of a similar character. To Ideality it has few
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pretensions, and the finest portion of the poem is probably to be
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found in the verses we have quoted elsewhere-
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Thy grasp is welcome as the hand
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Of brother in a foreign land,
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Thy summons welcome as the cry
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That told the Indian isles were nigh
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To the world-seeking Genoese,
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When the land-wind from woods of palm
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And orange groves, and fields of balm
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Blew o'er the Haytian seas.
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The verses entitled Burns consist of thirty-eight quatrains- the
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three first lines of each quatrain being of four feet, the fourth of
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three. This poem has many of the traits of Alnwick Castle, and bears
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also a strong resemblance to some of the writings of Wordsworth. Its
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chief merits, and indeed the chief merit, so we think, of all the
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poems of Halleck is the merit of expression. In the brief extracts
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from Burns which follow, our readers will recognize the peculiar
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character of which we speak.
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Wild Rose of Alloway! my thanks:
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Thou mind'st me of that autumn noon
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When first we met upon "the banks
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And braes o'bonny Doon"-
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Like thine, beneath the thorn-tree's bough,
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My sunny hour was glad and brief-
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We've crossed the winter sea, and thou
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Art withered-flower and leaf,
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There have been loftier themes than his,
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And longer scrolls and louder lyres
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And lays lit up with Poesy's
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Purer and holier fires.
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And when he breathes his master-lay
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Of Alloways witch-haunted wall
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All passions in our frames of clay
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Come thronging at his call.
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Such graves as his are pilgrim-shrines,
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Shrines to no code or creed confined-
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The Delphian vales, the Palastines,
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The Meccas of the mind.
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They linger by the Doon's low trees,
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And pastoral Nith, and wooded Ayr,
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And round thy Sepulchres, Dumfries!
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The Poet's tomb is there.
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Wyoming is composed of nine Spenserian stanzas. With some unusual
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excellences, it has some of the worst faults of Halleck. The lines
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which follow are of great beauty.
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I then but dreamed: thou art before me now,
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In life- a vision of the brain no more,
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I've stood upon the wooded mountain's brow,
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That beetles high thy love! valley o'er;
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And now, where winds thy river's greenest shore,
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Within a bower of sycamores am laid;
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And winds as soft and sweet as ever bore
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The fragrance of wild flowers through sun and shade
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Are singing in the trees, whose low boughs press my head.
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The poem, however, is disfigured with the mere burlesque of some
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portions of Alnwick Castle- with such things as
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he would look particularly droll
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In his Iberian boot and Spanish plume;
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and
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A girl of sweet sixteen
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Love-darting eyes and tresses like the morn
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Without a shoe or stocking- hoeing corn,
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mingled up in a pitiable manner with images of real beauty.
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The Field of the Grounded Arms contains twenty-four quatrains,
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without rhyme, and, we think, of a disagreeable versification. In this
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poem are to be observed some of the finest passages of Halleck. For
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example-
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Strangers! your eyes are on that valley fixed
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Intently, as we gaze on vacancy,
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When the mind's wings o'erspread
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The spirit world of dreams.
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and again-
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O'er sleepless seas of grass whose waves are flowers.
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Red-jacket has much power of expression with little evidence of
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poetical ability. Its humor is very fine, and does not interfere, in
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any great degree, with the general tone of the poem.
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A Sketch should have been omitted from the edition as altogether
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unworthy of its author.
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The remaining pieces in the volume are Twilight, Psalm cxxxvii;
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To...; Love; Domestic Happiness; Magdalen, From the Italian; Woman;
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Connecticut; Music; On the Death of Lieut. William Howard Allen; A
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Poet's Daughter; and On the Death of Joseph Rodman Drake. Of the
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|
majority of these we deem it unnecessary to say more than that they
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partake, in a more or less degree, of the general character observable
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in the poems of Halleck. The Poet's Daughter appears to us a
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particularly happy specimen of that general character, and we doubt
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whether it be not the favorite of its author. We are glad to see the
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vulgarity of
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I'm busy in the cotton trade
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And sugar line,
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omitted in the present edition. The eleventh stanza is certainly not
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English as it stands- and besides it is altogether unintelligible.
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What is the meaning of this?
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But her who asks, though first among
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The good, the beautiful, the young
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The birthright of a spell more strong
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Than these have brought her.
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The Lines on the Death of Joseph Rodman Drake, we prefer to any of
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the writings of Halleck. It has that rare merit in composition of this
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kind- the union of tender sentiment and simplicity. This poem consists
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merely of six quatrains, and we quote them in full.
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Green be the turf above thee,
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Friend of my better days!
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None knew thee but to love thee,
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Nor named thee but to praise.
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Tears fell when thou wert dying
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From eyes unused to weep,
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And long, where thou art lying,
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Will tears the cold turf steep.
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When hearts whose truth was proven,
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Like thine are laid in earth,
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There should a wreath be woven
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To tell the world their worth.
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And I, who woke each morrow
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To clasp thy hand in mine,
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Who shared thy joy and sorrow,
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Whose weal and woe were thine-
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It should be mine to braid it
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Around thy faded brow,
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But I've in vain essayed it,
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And feel I cannot now.
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While memory bids me weep thee,
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Nor thoughts nor words are free,
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The grief is fixed too deeply,
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That mourns a man like thee.
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If we are to judge from the subject of these verses, they are a work
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of some care and reflection. Yet they abound in faults. In the line,
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Tears fell when thou wert dying;
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wert is not English.
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Will tears the cold turf steep,
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is an exceedingly rough verse. The metonymy involved in
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There should a wreath be woven
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To tell the world their worth,
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is unjust. The quatrain beginning,
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And I who woke each morrow,
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is ungrammatical in its construction when viewed in connection with
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the quatrain which immediately follows. "Weep thee" and "deeply" are
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inaccurate rhymes- and the whole of the first quatrain,
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Green be the turf, &c.
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although beautiful, bears too close a resemblance to the still more
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beautiful lines of William Wordsworth,
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She dwelt among the untrodden ways
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Beside the springs of Dove,
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A maid whom there were none to praise
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And very few to love.
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As a versifier Halleck is by no means equal to his friend, all of
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whose poems evince an ear finely attuned to the delicacies of
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melody. We seldom meet with more inharmonious lines than those,
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generally, of the author of Alnwick Castle. At every step such
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verses occur as,
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And the monk's hymn and minstrel's song-
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True as the steel of their tried blades-
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For him the joy of her young years-
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Where the Bard-peasant first drew breath-
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And withered my life's leaf like thine-
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in which the proper course of the rhythm would demand an accent upon
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syllables too unimportant to sustain it. Not infrequently, too, we
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meet with lines such as this,
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Like torn branch from death's leafless tree,
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in which the multiplicity of consonants renders the pronunciation of
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the words at all, a matter of no inconsiderable difficulty.
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But we must bring our notice to a close. It will be seen that
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while we are willing to admire in many respects the poems before us,
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we feel obliged to dissent materially from that public opinion
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(perhaps not fairly ascertained) which would assign them a very
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brilliant rank in the empire of Poesy. That we have among us poets
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of the loftiest order we believe- but we do not believe that these
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poets are Drake and Halleck.
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BRYANT'S POEMS
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MR. BRYANT'S poetical reputation, both at home and abroad, is
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greater, we presume, than that of any other American. British
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critics have frequently awarded him high praise, and here, the
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public press have been unanimous in approbation. We can call to mind
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no dissenting voice. Yet the nature, and, most especially the
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manner, of the expressed opinions in this case, should be considered
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as somewhat equivocal, and but too frequently must have borne to the
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mind of the poet doubts and dissatisfaction. The edition now before us
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may be supposed to embrace all such of his poems as he deems not
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unworthy his name. These (amounting to about one hundred) have been
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"carefully revised." With the exception of some few, about which
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nothing could well be said, we will speak briefly of them one by
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one, but in such order as we may find convenient.
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The Ages, a didactic piece of thirty-five Spenserian stanzas, is the
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first and longest in the volume. It was originally printed in 1821,
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With about half a dozen others now included in this collection. The
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design of the author in this poem is "from a survey of the past ages
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of the world, and of the successive advances of mankind in knowledge
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and virtue, to justify and confirm the hopes of the philanthropist for
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the future destinies of the human race." It is, indeed, an essay on
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the perfectability of man, wherein, among other better arguments
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some in the very teeth of analogy, are deduced from the eternal
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cycle of physical nature, to sustain a hope of progression in
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happiness. But it is only as a poem that we wish to examine The
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Ages. Its commencement is impressive. The four initial lines arrest
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the attention at once by a quiet dignity of manner, an air of placid
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contemplation, and a versification combining the extremes of melody
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and force-
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When to the common rest that crowns our days,
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Called in the noon of life, the good man goes,
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Or full of years, and ripe in wisdom, lays
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His silver temples in their last repose-
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The five concluding lines of the stanza, however, are not equally
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effective-
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When, o'er the buds of youth, the death-wind blows,
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And brights the fairest; when our bitterest tears
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Stream, as the eyes of those that love us close,
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We think on what they were, with many fears
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Lest goodness die with them, and leave the coming years.
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The defects, here, are all of a metrical and of course minor nature,
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but are still defects. The line
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When o'er the buds of youth the death-wind blows,
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is impeded in its flow by the final th in youth, and especially in
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death where w follows. The word tears cannot readily be pronounced
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after the final st in bitterest; and its own final consonants, rs,
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in like manner render an effort necessary in the utterance of stream
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which commences the next line. In the verse
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We think on what they were, with many fears
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the word many is, from its nature, too rapidly pronounced for the
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fulfilment of the time necessary to give weight to the foot of two
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syllables. All words of two syllables do not necessarily constitute
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a foot (we speak now of the Pentameter here employed) even although
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the syllables be entirely distinct, as in many, very, often, and the
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like. Such as, without effort, cannot employ in their pronunciation
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the time demanded by each of the preceding and succeeding feet of
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the verse, and occasionally of a preceding verse, will never fail to
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offend. It is the perception of this fact which so frequently forces
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the versifier of delicate ear to employ feet exceeding what are
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unjustly called legitimate dimensions. For example. We have the
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following lines-
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Lo! to the smiling Arno's classic side,
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The emulous nations of the West repair!
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These verses are exceedingly forcible, yet, upon scanning the latter
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we find a syllable too many. We shall be told possibly that there
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should be an elision of the e in the at the commencement. But no- this
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was not intended. Both the and emulous demand a perfect
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accentuation. The verse commencing Lo!
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Lo! to the smiling Arno's classic side,
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has, it will be observed, a Trochee in its first foot. As is usually
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the case, the whole line partakes, in consequence, of a stately and
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emphatic enunciation, and to equalize the time in the verse
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succeeding, something more is necessary than the succession of
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Iambuses which constitute the ordinary English Pentameter. The
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equalization is therefore judiciously effected by the introduction
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of an additional syllable. But in the lines
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Stream, as the eyes of those that love us close,
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We think on what they were with many fears,
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lines to which the preceding observations will equally apply, this
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additional syllable is wanting. Did the rhyme admit of the alteration,
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everything necessary could be accomplished by writing
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We think on what they were with many a fear,
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Lest goodness die with them and leave the coming year.
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These remarks may be considered hypercritical- yet it is undeniable
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that upon a rigid attention to minutiae such as we have pointed out,
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any great degree of metrical success must altogether depend. We are
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more disposed, too, to dwell upon the particular point mentioned
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above, since, with regard to it, the American Monthly, in a late
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critique upon the poems of Mr. Willis, has evidently done that
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gentleman injustice. The reviewer has fallen into what we conceive the
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error of citing, by themselves, (that is to say insulated from the
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context) such verses as
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The night-wind with a desolate moan swept by.
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With difficult energy and when the rod.
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Fell through, and with the tremulous hand of age.
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With supernatural whiteness loosely fell.
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for the purpose of animadversion. "The license" he says "of turning
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such words as 'passionate' and 'desolate' into two syllables could
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only have been taken by a pupil of the Fantastic School." We are quite
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sure that Mr. Willis had no purpose of turning them into words of
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two syllables- nor even, as may be supposed upon a careless
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examination, of pronouncing them in the same time which would be
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required for two ordinary, syllables. The excesses of measure are here
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employed (perhaps without any definite design on the part of the
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writer, who may have been guided solely by ear) with reference to
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the proper equalization, of balancing, if we may so term it, of
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time, throughout an entire sentence. This, we confess, is a novel
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idea, but, we think, perfectly tenable. Any musician will understand
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us. Efforts for the relief of monotone will necessarily produce
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fluctuations in the time of any metre, which fluctuations, if not
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subsequently counterbalanced, affect the ear like unresolved
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discords in music. The deviations then of which we have been speaking,
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from the strict rules of prosodial art, are but improvements upon
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the rigor of those rules, and are a merit, not a fault. It is the
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nicety of this species of equalization more than any other metrical
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merit which elevates Pope as a versifier above the mere
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couplet-maker of his day, and, on the other hand, it is the
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extension of the principle to sentences of greater length which
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elevates Milton above Pope. Knowing this, it was, of course, with some
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surprise that we found the American Monthly (for whose opinions we
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still have the highest respect,) citing Pope in opposition to Mr.
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Willis upon the very point to which we allude. A few examples will
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be sufficient to show that Pope not only made free use of the
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license referred to, but that he used it for the reasons, and under
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the circumstances which we have suggested.
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Oh thou! whatever title please thine ear,
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Dean, Drapier, Bickerstaff, or Gulliver!
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Whether thou choose Cervantes' serious air,
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Or laugh and shake in Rabelais easy chair.
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Any person will here readily perceive that the third line
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Whether thou choose Cervantes' serious air,
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differs in time from the usual course of the rhythm, and requires some
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counterbalance in the line which succeeds. It is indeed precisely such
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a verse as that of Mr. Bryant's upon which we have commented,
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Stream, as the eyes of those that love us close,
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and commences in the same manner with a Trochee. But again, from
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Pope we have-
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Hence hymning Tyburn's elegiac lines
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Hence Journals, Medleys, Mercuries, Magazines.
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Else all my prose and verse were much the same,
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This prose on stilts, that poetry fallen lame.
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And thrice he lifted high the birth-day brand
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And thrice he dropped it from his quivering hand.
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Here stood her opium, here she nursed her owls,
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And here she planned the imperial seat of fools.
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Here to her chosen all her works she shows;
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Prose swell'd to verse, verse loitering into prose.
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Rome in her Capitol saw Querno sit
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Throned on seven hills, the Antichrist of wit.
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And his this drum whose hoarse heroic bass
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Drowns the loud clarion of the braying ass.
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But such a bulk as no twelve bards could raise
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Twelve starveling bards of these degenerate days.
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These are all taken at random from the first book of the Dunciad. In
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the last example it will be seen that the two additional syllables are
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employed with a view of equalizing the time with that of the verse,
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But such a bulk as no twelve bards could raise,
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a verse which will be perceived to labor in its progress- and which
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Pope, in accordance with his favorite theory of making sound accord
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with sense, evidently intended so to labor. It is useless to say
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that the words should be written with elision-starv'ling and
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degen'rate. Their pronunciation is not thereby materially affected-
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and, besides, granting it to be so, it may be as well to make the
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elision also in the case of Mr. Willis. But Pope had no such
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intention, nor, we presume, had Mr. W. It is somewhat singular, we may
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remark, en passant, that the American Monthly, in a subsequent portion
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of the critique alluded to, quotes from Pope as a line of "sonorous
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grandeur" and one beyond the ability of our American poet, the well
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known
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Luke's iron crown and Damien's bed of steel.
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Now this is indeed a line of "sonorous grandeur"- but it is rendered
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so principally if not altogether by that very excess of metre (in
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the word Damien) which the reviewer has condemned in Mr. Willis. The
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lines which we quote below from Mr. Bryant's poem of The Ages will
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suffice to show that the author we are now reviewing fully appreciates
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the force of such occasional excess, and that he has only neglected it
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through oversight in the verse which suggested these observations.
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Peace to the just man's memory- let it grow
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Greener with years, and blossom through the flight
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Of ages- let the mimic canvass show
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His calm benevolent features.
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Does prodigal Autumn to our age deny
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The plenty that once swelled beneath his sober eye?
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Look on this beautiful world and read the truth
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In her fair page.
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Will then the merciful One who stamped our race
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With his own image, and who gave them sway
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O'er Earth and the glad dwellers on her face,
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Now that our flourishing nations far away
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Are spread, where'er the moist earth drinks the day,
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Forget the ancient care that taught and nursed
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His latest offspring?
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He who has tamed the elements shall not live
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The slave of his own passions.
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When liberty awoke
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New-born, amid those beautiful vales.
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Oh Greece, thy flourishing cities were a spoil
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Unto each other.
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And thou didst drive from thy unnatural breast
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Thy just and brave.
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Yet her degenerate children sold the crown.
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Instead of the pure heart and innocent hands-
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Among thy gallant sons that guard thee well
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Thou laugh'st at enemies. Who shall then declare-
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Far like the comet's way thro' infinite space.
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The full region leads
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New colonies forth.
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Full many a horrible worship that, of old,
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Held o'er the shuddering realms unquestioned sway.
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All these instances, and some others, occur in a poem of but
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thirty-five stanzas- yet in only a very few cases is the license
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improperly used. Before quitting this subject it may be as well to
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cite a striking example from Wordsworth-
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There was a youth whom I had loved so long,
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That when I loved him not I cannot say.
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Mid the green mountains many and many a song
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We two had sung like gladsome birds in May.
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Another specimen, and one still more to the purpose may be given
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from Milton whose accurate ear (although he cannot justly be called
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the best of versifiers) included and balanced without difficulty the
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rhythm of the longest passages.
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But say, if our Deliverer up to heaven
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Must re-ascend, what will betide the few
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His faithful, left among the unfaithful herd,
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The enemies of truth? who then shall guide
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His people, who defend? Will they not deal
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More with his fo than with him they dealt?
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Be sure they will, said the Angel.
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The other metrical faults in The Ages are few. Mr. Bryant is not
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always successful in his Alexandrines. Too great care cannot be taken,
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we think, in so regulating this species of verse as to admit of the
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necessary pause at the end of the third foot- or at least as not to
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render a pause necessary elsewhere. We object, therefore, to such
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lines as
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A palm like his, and catch from him the hallowed flame.
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The truth of heaven, and kneel to Gods that heard them not.
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That which concludes Stanza X, although correctly cadenced in the
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|
above respect, requires an accent on the monosyllable the, which is
|
|
too unimportant to sustain it. The defect is rendered the more
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|
perceptible by the introduction of a Trochee in the first foot.
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The sick untended then
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Languished in the damp shade, and died afar from men.
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We are not sure that such lines as
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A boundless sea of blood and the wild air.
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The smile of heaven, till a new age expands.
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are in any case justifiable, and they can be easily avoided. As in the
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Alexandrine mentioned above, the course of the rhythm demands an
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accent on monosyllables too unimportant to sustain it. For this
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prevalent heresy in metre we are mainly indebted to Byron, who
|
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introduced it freely, with the view of imparting an abrupt energy to
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his verse. There are, however, many better ways of relieving a
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monotone.
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Stanza VI is, throughout, an exquisite specimen of versification,
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besides embracing many beauties both of thought and expression.
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Look on this beautiful world and read the truth
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In her fair page; see every season brings
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New change, to her, of everlasting youth;
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Still the green soil with joyous living things
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Swarms; the wide air is full of joyous wings;
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And myriads, still, are happy in the sleep
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Of ocean's azure gulfs, and where he flings
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The restless surge. Eternal love doth keep
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In his complacent arms the earth, the air, the deep.
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The cadences, here, at the words page, swarms, and surge respectively,
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cannot be surpassed. We shall find, upon examination, comparatively
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few consonants in the stanza, and by their arrangement no impediment
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is offered to the flow of the verse. Liquids and the most melodious
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vowels abound. World, eternal, season, wide, change, full, air,
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everlasting, wings, flings, complacent, surge, gulfs, myriads,
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azure, ocean, sail, and joyous, are among the softest and most
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sonorous sounds in the language, and the partial line after the
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pause at surge, together with the stately march of the Alexandrine
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which succeeds, is one of the finest imaginable of finales-
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Eternal love doth keep
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In his complacent arms, the earth, the air, the deep.
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The higher beauties of the poem are not, we think, of the highest.
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It has unity, completeness,- a beginning, middle and end. The tone,
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too, of calm, hopeful, and elevated reflection, is well sustained
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throughout. There is an occasional quaint grace of expression, as in
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Nurse of full streams, and lifter up of proud
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Sky-mingling mountains that o'erlook the cloud-
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or of antithetical and rhythmical force combined, as in
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The shock that burled
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To dust in many fragments dashed and strewn
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The throne whose roots were in another world
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And whose far-stretching shadow awed our own.
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But we look in vain for something more worthy commendation. At the
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same time the piece is especially free from errors. Once only we
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meet with an unjust metonymy, where a sheet of water is said to
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Cradle, in his soft embrace, a gay
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Young group of grassy islands.
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We find little originality of thought, and less imagination. But in
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a poem essentially didactic, of course we cannot hope for the loftiest
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breathings of the Muse.
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To the Past is a poem of fourteen quatrains- three feet and four
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alternately. In the second quatrain, the lines
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And glorious ages gone
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Lie deep within the shadow of thy womb.
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are, to us, disagreeable. Such things are common, but at best,
|
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repulsive. In the present case there is not even the merit of
|
|
illustration. The womb, in any just imagery, should be spoken of
|
|
with a view to things future; here it is employed, in the sense of the
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tomb, and with a view to things past. In Stanza XI the idea is even
|
|
worse. The allegorical meaning throughout the poem, although generally
|
|
well sustained, is not always so. In the quatrain
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Thine for a space are they
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Yet shalt thou yield thy treasures up at last;
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Thy gates shall yet give way
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Thy bolts shall fall inexorable Past!
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it seems that The Past, as an allegorical personification, is
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confounded with Death.
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The Old Man's Funeral is of seven stanzas, each of six lines- four
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Pentameters and Alexandrine rhyming. At the funeral of an old man
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who has lived out his full quota of years, another, as aged,
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reproves the company for weeping. The poem is nearly perfect in its
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way- the thoughts striking and natural- the versification singularly
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sweet. The third stanza embodies a fine idea, beautifully expressed.
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Ye sigh not when the sun, his course fulfilled,
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His glorious course rejoicing earth and sky,
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In the soft evening when the winds are stilled,
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Sings where his islands of refreshment lie,
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And leaves the smile of his departure spread
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O'er the warm-colored heaven, and ruddy mountain head.
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The technical word chronic should have been avoided in the fifth
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line of Stanza VI-
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No chronic tortures racked his aged limb.
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The Rivulet has about ninety octo-syllabic verses. They contrast the
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changing and perishable nature of our human frame, with the greater
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durability of the Rivulet. The chief merit is simplicity. We should
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imagine the poem to be one of the earliest pieces of Mr. Bryant, and
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to have undergone much correction. In the first paragraph are,
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however, some awkward constructions. In the verses, for example
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This little rill that from the springs
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Of yonder grove its current brings,
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Plays on the slope awhile, and then
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Goes prattling into groves again.
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the reader is apt to suppose that rill is the nominative to plays,
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whereas it is the nominative only to drew in the subsequent lines,
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Oft to its warbling waters drew
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My little feet when life was new.
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The proper verb is, of course, immediately seen upon reading these
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latter lines- but the ambiguity has occurred.
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The Praries. This is a poem, in blank Pentameter, of about one
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hundred and twenty-five lines, and possesses features which do not
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appear in any of the pieces above mentioned. Its descriptive beauty is
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of a high order. The peculiar points of interest in the Prairie are
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vividly shown forth, and as a local painting, the work is, altogether,
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excellent. Here are moreover, evidences of fine imagination. For
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example-
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The great heavens
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Seem to stoop down upon the scene in love-
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A nearer vault and of a tenderer blue
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Than that which bends above the eastern hills.
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Till twilight blushed, and lovers walked and wooed
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In a forgotten language, and old tunes
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From instruments of unremembered form
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Gave the soft winds a voice.
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The bee
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Within the hollow oak. I listen long
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To his domestic hum and think I hear
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The sound of the advancing multitude
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Which soon shall fill these deserts.
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Breezes of the south!
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Who toss the golden and the flame-like flowers,
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And pass the prairie-hawk that poised on high,
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Flaps his broad wing yet moves not!
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There is an objectionable ellipsis in the expression "I behold
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them from the first," meaning "first time;" and either a grammatical
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or typographical error of moment in the fine sentence commencing
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Fitting floor
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For this magnificent temple of the sky-
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With flowers whose glory and whose multitude
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Rival the constellations!
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Earth, a poem of similar length and construction to The Prairies,
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embodies a noble conception. The poet represents himself as lying on
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the earth in a "midnight black with clouds," and giving ideal voices
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to the varied sounds of the coming tempest. The following passages
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remind us of some of the more beautiful portions of Young.
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On the breast of Earth
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I lie and listen to her mighty voice;
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A voice of many tones-sent up from streams
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That wander through the gloom, from woods unseen
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Swayed by the sweeping of the tides of air,
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From rocky chasm where darkness dwells all day,
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And hollows of the great invisible hills,
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And sands that edge the ocean stretching far
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Into the night- a melancholy sound!
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Ha! how the murmur deepens! I perceive
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And tremble at its dreadful import. Earth
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Uplifts a general cry for guilt and wrong
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And Heaven is listening. The forgotten graves
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Of the heart broken utter forth their plaint.
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The dust of her who loved and was betrayed,
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And him who died neglected in his age,
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The sepulchres of those who for mankind
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Labored, and earned the recompense of scorn,
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Ashes of martyrs for the truth, and bones
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Of those who in the strife for liberty
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Were beaten down, their corses given to dogs,
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Their names to infamy, all find a voice!
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In this poem and elsewhere occasionally throughout the volume, we
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meet with a species of grammatical construction, which, although it is
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to be found in writing of high merit, is a mere affectation, and, of
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course, objectionable. We mean the abrupt employment of a direct
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pronoun in place of the customary relative. For example-
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Or haply dost thou grieve for those that die-
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For living things that trod awhile thy face,
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The love of thee and heaven, and how they sleep,
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Mixed with the shapeless dust on which thy herds
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Trample and graze?
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The note of interrogation here, renders the affectation more
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perceptible.
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The poem To the Apenines resembles, in meter, that entitled The
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Old Man's Funeral, except that the former has a Pentameter in place of
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the Alexandrine. This piece is chiefly remarkable for the force,
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metrical and moral, of its concluding stanza.
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In you the heart that sighs for Freedom seeks
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Her image; there the winds no barrier know,
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Clouds come and rest and leave your fairy peaks;
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While even the immaterial Mind, below,
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And Thought, her winged offspring, chained by power,
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Pine silently for the redeeming hour.
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The Knight's Epitaph consists of about fifty lines of blank
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Pentameter. This poem is well conceived and executed. Entering the
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Church of St. Catherine at Pisa, the poet is arrested by the image
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of an armed knight graven upon the lid of a sepulchre. The epitaph
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consists of an imaginative portraiture of the knight, in which he is
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made the impersonation of the ancient Italian chivalry.
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Seventy-six has seven stanzas of a common, but musical
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versification, of which these lines will afford an excellent specimen.
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That death-stain on the vernal sword,
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Hallowed to freedom all the shore-
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In fragments fell the yoke abhorred-
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The footsteps of a foreign lord
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Profaned the soil no more.
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The Living Lost has four stanzas of somewhat peculiar
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construction, but admirably adapted to the tone of contemplative
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melancholy which pervades the poem. We can call to mind few things
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more singularly impressive than the eight concluding verses. They
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combine ease with severity, and have antithetical force without effort
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or flippancy. The final thought has also a high ideal beauty.
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But ye who for the living lost
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That agony in secret bear
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Who shall with soothing words accost
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The strength of your despair?
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Grief for your sake is scorn for them
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Whom ye lament, and all condemn,
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And o'er the world of spirit lies
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A gloom from which ye turn your eyes.
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The first stanza commences with one of those affectations which we
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noticed in the poem "Earth."
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Matron, the children of whose love,
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Each to his grave in youth have passed,
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And now the mould is heaped above
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The dearest and the last.
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The Strange Lady is of the fourteen syllable metre, answering to two
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lines, one of eight syllables, the other six. This rhythm is
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unmanageable, and requires great care in the rejection of harsh
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consonants. Little, however, has been taken, apparently, in the
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construction of the verses
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As if they loved to breast the breeze that sweeps the cool
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clear sky.
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And thou shoudst chase the nobler game, and I bring
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down the bird.
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Or that strange dame so gay and fair were some mysterious foe, which
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are not to be pronounced without labor. The story is old- of a young
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gentleman who going out to hunt, is inveigled into the woods and
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destroyed by a fiend in the guise of a fair lady. The ballad character
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is nevertheless well preserved, and this, we presume, is nearly
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every thing intended.
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The Hunter's Vision is skilfully and sweetly told. It is a tale of a
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young hunter who, overcome with toil, dozes on the brink of a
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precipice. In this state between waking and sleeping, he fancies a
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spirit-land in the fogs of the valley beneath him, and sees
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approaching him the deceased lady of his love. Arising to meet her, he
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falls, with the effort, from the crag, and perishes. The state of
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reverie is admirably pictured in the following stanzas. The poem
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consists of nine such.
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All dim in haze the mountains lay
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With dimmer vales between;
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And rivers glimmered on their way
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By forests faintly seen;
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While ever rose a murmuring sound
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From brooks below and bees around.
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He listened till he seemed to hear
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A strain so soft and low
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That whether in the mind or ear
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The listener scarce might know.
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With such a tone, so sweet and mild
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The watching mother lulls her child.
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Catterskill Falls is a narrative somewhat similar. Here the hero
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is also a hunter- but of delicate frame. He is overcome with the
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cold at the foot of the falls, sleeps, and is near perishing- but
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being found by some woodmen, is taken care of, and recovers. As in the
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Hunters Vision, the dream of the youth is the main subject of the
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poem. He fancies a goblin palace in the icy network of the cascade,
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and peoples it in his vision with ghosts. His entry into this palace
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is, with rich imagination on the part of the poet, made to
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correspond with the time of the transition from the state of reverie
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to that of nearly total insensibility.
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They eye him not as they pass along,
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But his hair stands up with dread,
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When he feels that he moves with that phantom throng
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Till those icy turrets are over his head,
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And the torrent's roar as they enter seems
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Like a drowsy murmur heard in dreams.
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The glittering threshold is scarcely passed
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When there gathers and wraps him round
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A thick white twilight sullen and vast
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In which there is neither form nor sound;
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The phantoms, the glory, vanish all
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Within the dying voice of the waterfall.
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There are nineteen similar stanzas. The metre is formed of
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Iambuses and Anapests.
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The Hunter of the Prairies (fifty-six octosyllabic verses with
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alternate rhymes) is a vivid picture of the life of a hunter in the
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desert. The poet, however, is here greatly indebted to his subject.
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The Damsel of Peru is in the fourteen syllable metre, and has a most
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spirited, imaginative and musical commencement
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Where olive leaves were twinkling in every wind that blew,
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There sat beneath the pleasant shade a damsel of Peru.
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This is also a ballad, and a very fine one-full of action, chivalry,
|
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energy and rhythm. Some passages have even a loftier merit-that of a
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glowing ideality. For example-
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For the noon is coming on, and the sunbeams fiercely beat,
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And the silent hills and forest-tops seem reeling in the heat.
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The Song of Pitcairn's Island is a sweet, quiet and simple poem,
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|
of a versification differing from that of any preceding piece. We
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subjoin a specimen. The Tahetian maiden addresses her lover.
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Come talk of Europe's maids with me
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Whose necks and cheeks they tell
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Outshine the beauty of the sea,
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White foam and crimson shell.
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I'll shape like theirs my simple dress
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And bind like them each jetty tress,
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A sight to please thee well
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And for my dusky brow will braid
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A bonnet like an English maid.
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There are seven similar stanzas.
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Rispah is a scriptural theme from 2 Samuel, and we like it less than
|
|
any poem yet mentioned. The subject, we think, derives no additional
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interest from its poetical dress. The metre resembling, except in
|
|
the matter of rhyme, that of "Catterskill Falls," and consisting of
|
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mingled Iambuses and Anapaests, is the most positively disagreeable of
|
|
any which our language admits, and, having a frisky or fidgetty
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rhythm, is singularly ill-adapted to the lamentations of the
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bereaved mother. We cannot conceive how the fine ear of Mr. Bryant
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could admit such verses as,
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And Rispah once the loveliest of all
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That bloomed and smiled in the court of Saul, &c.
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The Indian Girl's Lament and The Arctic Lover have nearly all the
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peculiarities of the "Song of Pitcairn's Island."
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The Massacre at Scio is only remarkable for inaccuracy of expression
|
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in the two concluding lines-
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Till the last link of slavery's chain
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Is shivered to be worn no more.
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What shall be worn no more? The chain- but the link is implied.
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Monument Mountain is a poem of about a hundred and forty blank
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Pentameters and relates the tale of an Indian maiden who loved her
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|
cousin. Such a love being deemed incestuous by the morality of her
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tribe, she threw herself from a precipice and perished. There is
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little peculiar in the story or its narration. We quote a rough verse-
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The mighty columns with which earth props heaven.
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The use of the epithet old preceded by some other adjective, is
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found so frequently in this poem and elsewhere in the writings of
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Mr. Bryant, as to excite a smile upon each recurrence of the
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expression.
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In all that proud old world beyond the deep-
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There is a tale about these gray old rocks-
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The wide old woods resounded with her song-
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And the gray old men that passed-
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And from the gray old trunks that high in heaven.
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We dislike too the antique use of the word affect in such
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sentences as
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They deemed
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Like worshippers of the elder time that
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God Doth walk in the high places and affect
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The earth- o'erlooking mountains.
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Milton, it is true, uses it- we remember it especially in Comus-
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'T is most true
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That musing meditation most affects
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The pensive secrecy of desert cell-
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but then Milton would not use it were he writing Comus today.
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In the Summer Wind, our author has several successful attempts at
|
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making "the sound an echo to the sense." For example-
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For me, I lie
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Languidly in the shade, where the thick turf
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Yet virgin from the kisses of the sun
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Retains some freshness.
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All is silent, save the faint
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And interrupted murmur of the bee
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Settling on the sick flowers, and then again
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Instantly on the wing.
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All the green herbs
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Are stirring in his breath; a thousand flowers
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By the road side, and the borders of the brook
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Nod, gaily to each other.
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Autumn Woods. This is a poem of much sweetness and simplicity of
|
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expression, and including one or two fine thoughts, viz:
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the sweet South-west at play
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Flies, rustling where the painted leaves are strown
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Along the winding way.
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But 'neath yon crimson tree
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Lover to listening maid might breathe his flame,
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Nor mark within its roseate canopy
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Her flush of maiden shame.
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The mountains that unfold
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In their wide sweep the colored landscape round,
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Seem groups of giant kings in purple and gold
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That guard the enchanted ground.
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All this is beautiful- Happily to endow inanimate nature with
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sentience and a capability of moral action is one of the severest
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tests of the poet. Even the most unmusical ear will not fail to
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appreciate the rare beauty and strength of the extra syllable in the
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line
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Seem groups of giant kings in purple and gold.
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The Distinterred Warrior has a passage we do not clearly understand.
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Speaking of the Indian our author says-
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For he was fresher from the hand
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That formed of earth the human face,
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And to the elements did stand
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In nearer kindred than our race.
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There are ten similar quatrains in the poem.
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The Greek Boy consists of four spirited stanzas, nearly
|
|
resembling, in metre, The Living Lost. The two concluding lines are
|
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highly ideal.
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A shoot of that old vine that made
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The nations silent in its shade.
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When the Firmament Quivers with Daylight's Young Beam, belongs to
|
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a species of poetry which we cannot be brought to admire. Some natural
|
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phenomenon is observed, and the poet taxes his ingenuity to find a
|
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parallel in the moral world. In general, we may assume, that the
|
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more successful he is in sustaining a parallel, the farther he departs
|
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from the true province of the Muse. The title, here, is a specimen
|
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of the metre. This is a kind which we have before designated as
|
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exceedingly difficult to manage.
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To a Musquito, is droll, and has at least the merit of making, at
|
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the same time, no efforts at being sentimental. We are not inclined,
|
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however, to rank as poems, either this production or the article on
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New England Coal.
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The Conjunction of Jupiter and Venus has ninety Pentameters. One
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of them
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Kind influence. Lo! their orbs burn more bright,
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can only be read, metrically, by drawing out influence into three
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marked syllables, shortening the long monosyllable, Lo! and
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lengthening the short one, their.
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June is sweet and soft in its rhythm, and inexpressibly pathetic.
|
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There is an illy subdued sorrow and intense awe coming up, per force
|
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as it were to the surface of the poet's gay sayings about his grave,
|
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which we find thrilling us to the soul.
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And what if cheerful shouts, at noon,
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Come, from the village sent,
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Or songs of maids, beneath the moon
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With fairy laughter blent?
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And what if, in the evening light,
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Betrothed lovers walk in sight
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Of my low monument?
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I would the lovely scene around
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Might know no sadder sight nor sound.
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I know, I know I should not see
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The season's glorious show,
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Nor would its brightness shine for me
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Nor its wild music flow,
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But if, around my place of sleep,
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The friends I love should come to weep,
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They might not haste to go
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Soft airs, and song, and light, and bloom
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Should keep them lingering by my tomb.
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Innocent Child and Snow-White Flower, is remarkable only for the
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deficiency of a foot in one of its verses.
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White as those leaves just blown apart
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Are the folds of thy own young heart.
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and for the graceful repetition in its concluding quatrain
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Throw it aside in thy weary hour,
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Throw to the ground the fair white flower,
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Yet as thy tender years depart
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Keep that white and innocent heart.
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Of the seven original sonnets in the volume before us, it is
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somewhat difficult to speak. The sonnet demands, in a great degree,
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point, strength, unity, compression, and a species of completeness.
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Generally, Mr. Bryant has evinced more of the first and the last, than
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of the three mediate qualities. William Tell is feeble. No forcible
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line ever ended with liberty, and the best of the rhymes- thee, he,
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free, and the like, are destitute of the necessary vigor. But for this
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rhythmical defect the thought in the concluding couplet-
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The bitter cup they mingled strengthened thee
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For the great work to set thy country free
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would have well ended the sonnet. Midsummer is objectionable for the
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variety of its objects of allusion. Its final lines embrace a fine
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thought-
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As if the day of fire had dawned and sent
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Its deadly breath into the firmament-
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but the vigor of the whole is impaired by the necessity of placing
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an unwonted accent on the last syllable of firmament. October has
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little to recommend it, but the slight epigrammatism of its
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conclusion-
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And when my last sand twinkled in the glass,
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Pass silently from men- as thou dost pass.
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The Sonnet To Cole, is feeble in its final lines, and is worthy of
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praise only in the verses-
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Paths, homes, graves, ruins, from the lowest glen
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To where life shrinks from the fierce Alpine air.
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Mutation, a didactic sonnet, has few either of faults or beauties.
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November is far better. The lines
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And the blue Gentian flower that, in the breeze,
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Nods lonely, of her beauteous race the last,
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are very happy. A single thought pervades and gives unity to the
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piece. We are glad, too, to see an Alexandrine in the close. In the
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whole metrical construction of his sonnets, however, Mr. Bryant has
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very wisely declined confining himself to the laws of the Italian
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poem, or even to the dicta of Capel Lofft. The Alexandrine is beyond
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comparison the most effective finale, and we are astonished that the
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common Pentameter should ever be employed. The best sonnet of the
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seven is, we think, that To-. With the exception of a harshness in the
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last line but one it is perfect. The finale is inimitable.
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Ay, thou art for the grave; thy glances shine
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Too brightly to shine long; another Spring
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Shall deck her for men's eyes, but not for thine
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Sealed in a sleep which knows no wakening.
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The fields for thee have no medicinal leaf,
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And the vexed ore no mineral of power;
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And they who love thee wait in anxious grief
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Till the slow plague shall bring the fatal hour.
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Glide softly to thy rest, then; Death should come
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Gently to one of gentle mould like thee,
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As light winds wandering through groves of bloom
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Detach the delicate blossom from the tree.
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Close thy sweet eyes, calmly, and without pain,
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And we will trust in God to see thee yet again.
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To a Cloud, has another instance of the affectation to which we
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alluded in our notice of Earth, and The Living Lost.
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Whose sons at length have heard the call that comes
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From the old battle fields and tombs,
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And risen, and drawn the sword, and on the foe
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Have dealt the swift and desperate blow,
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And the Othman power is cloven, and the stroke
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Has touched its chains, and they are broke.
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Of the Translations in the volume it is not our intention to speak
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in detail. Mary Magdelen, from the Spanish of Bartoleme Leonardo De
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Argensola, is the finest specimen of versification in the book.
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Alexis, from the Spanish of Iglesias, is delightful in its exceeding
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delicacy, and general beauty. We cannot refrain from quoting it
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entire.
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Alexis calls me cruel-
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The rifted crags that hold
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The gathered ice of winter,
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He says, are not more cold.
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When even the very blossoms
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Around the fountain's brim,
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And forest walks, can witness
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The love I bear to him.
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I would that I could utter
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My feelings without shame
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And tell him how I love him
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Nor wrong my virgin fame.
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Alas! to seize the moment
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When heart inclines to heart,
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And press a suit with passion
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Is not a woman's part.
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If man come not to gather
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The roses where they stand,
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They fade among their foliage,
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They cannot seek his hand.
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The Waterfowl is very beautiful, but still not entitled to the
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admiration which it has occasionally elicited. There is a fidelity and
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force in the picture of the fowl as brought before the eve of the
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mind, and a fine sense of effect in throwing its figure on the
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background of the "crimson sky," amid "falling dew," "while glow the
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heavens with the last steps of day." But the merits which possibly
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have had most weight in the public estimation of the poem, are the
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melody and strength of its versification, (which is indeed
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excellent) and more particularly its completeness. Its rounded and
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didactic termination has done wonders:
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on my heart,
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Deeply hath sunk the lesson thou hast given
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And shall not soon depart.
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He, who, from zone to zone,
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Guides through the boundless sky thy certain flight
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In the long way that I must tread alone
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Will lead my steps aright.
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There are, however, points of more sterling merit. We fully
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recognize the poet in
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Thou art gone- the abyss of heaven
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Hath swallowed up thy form.
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There is a power whose care
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Teaches thy way along that pathless coast-
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The desert, and illimitable air-
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Lone, wandering, but not lost.
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The Forest Hymn consists of about a hundred and twenty blank
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Pentameters of whose great rhythmical beauty it is scarcely possible
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to speak too highly. With the exception of the line
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The solitude. Thou art in the soft winds,
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no fault, in this respect, can be found, while excellencies are
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frequent of a rare order, and evincing the greatest delicacy of ear.
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We might, perhaps, suggest, that the two concluding verses,
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beautiful as they stand, would be slightly improved by transferring to
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the last the metrical excess of the one immediately preceding. For the
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appreciation of this, it is necessary to quote six or seven lines in
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succession
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Oh, from these sterner aspects of thy face
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Spare me and mine, nor let us need the warmth
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Of the mad unchained elements, to teach
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Who rules them. Be it ours to meditate
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In these calm shades thy milder majesty,
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And to the beautiful order of thy works
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Learn to conform the order of our lives.
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There is an excess of one syllable in the [sixth line]. If we
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discard this syllable here, and adopt it in the final line, the
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close will acquire strength, we think, in acquiring a fuller volume.
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Be it ours to meditate
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In these calm shades thy milder majesty,
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And to the perfect order of thy works
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Conform, if we can, the order of our lives.
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Directness, boldness, and simplicity of expression, are main
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features in the poem.
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Oh God! when thou
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Dost scare the world with tempests, set on fire
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The heavens with falling thunderbolts, or fill
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With all the waters of the firmament
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The swift dark whirlwind that uproots the woods,
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And drowns the villages.
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Here an ordinary writer would have preferred the word fright to
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scare, and omitted the definite article before woods and villages.
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To the Evening Wind has been justly admired. It is the best specimen
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of that completeness which we have before spoken of as a
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characteristic feature in the poems of Mr. Bryant. It has a beginning,
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middle, and end, each depending upon the other, and each beautiful.
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Here are three lines breathing all the spirit of Shelley.
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Pleasant shall be thy way, where meekly bows
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The shutting flower, and darkling waters pass,
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And 'twixt the o'ershadowing branches and the grass.
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The conclusion is admirable-
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Go- but the circle of eternal change,
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Which is the life of Nature, shall restore,
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With sounds and scents from all thy mighty range,
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Thee to thy birth-place of the deep once more;
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Sweet odors in the sea air, sweet and strange,
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Shall tell the home-sick mariner of the shore,
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And, listening to thy murmur, he shall deem
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He hears the rustling leaf and running stream.
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Thanatopsis is somewhat more than half the length of The Forest
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Hymn, and of a character precisely similar. It is, however, the
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finer poem. Like The Waterfowl, it owes much to the point, force,
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and general beauty of its didactic conclusion. In the commencement,
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the lines
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To him who, in the love of nature, holds
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Communion with her visible forms, &c.
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belong to a class of vague phrases, which, since the days of Byron,
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have obtained too universal a currency. The verse
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Go forth under the open sky and list-
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is sadly out of place amid the forcible and even Miltonic rhythm of
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such lines as-
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Take the wings
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Of morning, and the Barcan desert pierce,
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Or lose thyself in the continuous woods
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Where rolls the Oregon
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But these are trivial faults indeed and the poem embodies a great
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degree of the most elevated beauty. Two of its passages, passages of
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the purest ideality, would alone render it worthy of the general
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commendation it has received.
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So live, that when thy summons comes to join
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The innumerable caravan that moves
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To that mysterious realm where each shall take
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His chamber in the silent halls of death,
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Thou go not, like the quarry slave at night,
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Scourged to his dungeon; but sustained and soothed
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By an unfaltering trust, approach thy grave
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Like one who wraps the drapery of his couch
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About him, and lies down to pleasant dream.
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The hills
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Rock-ribbed and ancient as the sun- the vales
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Stretching in pensive quietude between-
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The venerable woods- rivers that move
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In majesty, and the complaining brooks
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That make the meadows green- and, pured round all,
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Old Ocean's gray and melancholy waste-
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Are but the solemn decorations all
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Of the great tomb of man.
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Oh, fairest of the Rural Maids! is a gem, of which we cannot
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sufficiently express our admiration. We quote in full.
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Oh, fairest of the rural maids!
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Thy birth was in the forest shades;
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Green boughs and glimpses of the sky
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Were all that met thine infant eye.
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Thy sports, thy wanderings when a child
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Were ever in the sylvan wild;
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And all the beauty of the place
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Is in thy heart and on thy face.
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The twilight of the trees and rocks
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Is in the light shade of thy locks,
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Thy step is as the wind that weaves
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Its playful way among the leaves.
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Thine eyes are springs, in whose serene
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And silent waters Heaven is seen;
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Their lashes are the herbs that look
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On their young figures in the brook.
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The forest depths by foot impressed
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Are not more sinless than thy breast;
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The holy peace that fills the air
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Of those calm solitudes, is there.
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A rich simplicity is a main feature in this poem- simplicity of design
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and execution. This is strikingly perceptible in the opening and
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concluding lines, and in expression throughout. But there is a far
|
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higher and more strictly ideal beauty, which it is less easy to
|
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analyze. The original conception is of the very loftiest order of true
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Poesy. A maiden is born in the forest-
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Green boughs and glimpses of the sky
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Are all which meet her infant eye-
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She is not merely modelled in character by the associations of her
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childhood- this were the thought of an ordinary poet- an idea that
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we meet with every day in rhyme- but she imbibes, in her physical as
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well as moral being, the traits, the very features of the delicious
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scenery around her- its loveliness becomes a portion of her own-
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The twilight of the trees and rocks
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Is in the light shade of her locks,
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And all the beauty of the place
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Is in her heart and on her face.
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It would have been a highly poetical idea to imagine the tints in
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the locks of the maiden deducing a resemblance to the "twilight of the
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trees and rocks," from the constancy of her associations- but the
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spirit of Ideality is immeasurably more apparent when the "twilight"
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is represented as becoming identified with the shadows of her hair.
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The twilight of the trees and rocks
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Is in the light shade of her locks,
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And all the beauty of the place
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Is in her heart and on her face.
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Feeling thus, we did not, in copying the poem, [comment on] the lines,
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although beautiful,
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Thy step is as the wind that weaves
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Its playful way among the leaves,
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nor those which immediately follow. The two concluding verses however,
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are again of the most elevated species of poetical merit.
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The forest depths by foot impressed
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Are not more sinless than thy breast-
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The holy peace that fills the air
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Of those calm solitudes, is there.
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The image contained in the lines
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Thine eyes are springs in whose serene
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And silent waters Heaven is seen-
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is one which, we think, for appropriateness, completeness, and every
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perfect beauty of which imagery is susceptible, has never been
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surpassed- but imagery is susceptible of no beauty like that we have
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designated in the sentences above. The latter idea, moreover, is not
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original with our poet.
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In all the rhapsodies of Mr. Bryant, which have reference to the
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beauty or the majesty of nature, is a most audible and thrilling
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tone of love and exultation. As far as he appreciates her loveliness
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or her augustness, no appreciation can be more ardent, more full of
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heart, more replete with the glowing soul of adoration. Nor, either in
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the moral or physical universe coming within the periphery of his
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vision, does he at any time fail to perceive and designate, at once,
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the legitimate items of the beautiful. Therefore, could we consider
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(as some have considered) the mere enjoyment of the beautiful when
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perceived, or even this enjoyment when combined with the readiest
|
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and truest perception and discrimination in regard to beauty
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presented, as a sufficient test of the poetical sentiment we could
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|
have no hesitation in according to Mr. Bryant the very highest
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poetical rank. But something more, we have elsewhere presumed to
|
|
say, is demanded. Just above, we spoke of "objects in the moral or
|
|
physical universe coming within the periphery of his vision." We now
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|
mean to say, that the relative extent of these peripheries of poetical
|
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vision must ever be a primary consideration in our classification of
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poets. Judging Mr. B. in this manner, and by a general estimate of the
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|
volume before us, we should, of course, pause long before assigning
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him a place with the spiritual Shelleys, or Coleridges, or
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Wordsworths, or with Keats, or even Tennyson, or Wilson, or with
|
|
some other burning lights of our own day, to be valued in a day to
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|
come. Yet if his poems, as a whole, will not warrant us in assigning
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him this grade, one such poem as the last upon which we have
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commented, is enough to assure us that he may attain it.
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The writings of our author, as we find them here, are
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|
characterized by an air of calm and elevated contemplation more than
|
|
by any other individual feature. In their mere didactics, however,
|
|
they err essentially and primitively, inasmuch as such things are
|
|
the province rather of Minerva than of the Camenae. Of imagination, we
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|
discover much- but more of its rich and certain evidences, than of its
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ripened fruit. In all the minor merits Mr. Bryant is pre-eminent.
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|
His ars celare artem is most efficient. Of his "completeness,"
|
|
unity, and finish of style we have already spoken. As a versifier,
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|
we know of no writer, living or dead, who can be said greatly to
|
|
surpass him. A Frenchman would assuredly call him "un poete des plus
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correctes."
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Between Cowper and Young, perhaps, (with both of whom he has many
|
|
points of analogy,) would be the post assigned him by an examination
|
|
at once general and superficial. Even in this view, however, he has
|
|
a juster appreciation of the beautiful than the one, of the sublime
|
|
than the other- a finer taste than Cowper- an equally vigorous, and
|
|
far more delicate imagination than Young. In regard to his proper rank
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among American poets there should be no question whatever. Few- at
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|
least few who are fairly before the public, have more than very
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|
shallow claims to a rivalry with the author of Thanatopsis.
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THE OLD CURIOSITY SHOP, AND OTHER TALES
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By Charles Dickens, With Numerous Illustrations by Cattermole
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and Browne. Philadelphia: Lea & Blanchard.
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MASTER HUMPHEREY'S CLOCK
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By Charles Dickens. (Boz.) With Ninty-one Illustrations by
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George Cattermole and Hablot Browne. Philadelphia: Lea & Blanchard.
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WHAT WE here give [the above titles] is the duplicate title, on
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two separate title-pages, of an octavo volume of three hundred and
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sixty-two pages. Why this method of nomenclature should have been
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adopted is more than we can understand- although it arises, perhaps,
|
|
from a certain confusion and hesitation observable in the whole
|
|
structure of the book itself. Publishers have an idea, however, (and
|
|
no doubt they are the best judges in such matters) that a complete
|
|
work obtains a readier sale than one "to be continued;" and we see
|
|
plainly that it is with the design of intimating the entireness of the
|
|
volume now before us, that "The Old Curiosity Shop and other Tales,"
|
|
has been made not only the primary and main title, but the name of the
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|
whole publication as indicated by the back. This may be quite fair
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|
in trade, but is morally wrong not the less. The volume is only one of
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|
a series- only part of a whole; and the title has no right to
|
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insinuate otherwise. So obvious is this intention to misguide, that it
|
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has led to the absurdity of putting the inclusive, or general, title
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of the series, as a secondary instead of a primary one. Anybody may
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see that if the wish had been fairly to represent the plan and
|
|
extent of the volume, something like this would have been given on a
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single page-
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MASTER HUMPHREY'S CLOCK
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By Charles Dickens. Part I. Containing The Old Curiosity Shop,
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and other tales, with numerous illustrations, &c. &c.
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This would have been better for all parties, a good deal more
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honest, and a vast deal more easily understood. In fact, there is
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sufficient uncertainty of purpose in the book itself, without resort
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to mystification in the matter of title. We do not think it altogether
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impossible that the rumors in respect to the sanity of Mr. Dickens
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which were so prevalent during the publication of the first numbers of
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the work, had some slight- some very slight foundation in truth. By
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this, we mean merely to say that the mind of the author, at the
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time, might possibly have been struggling with some of those
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manifold and multiform aberrations by which the nobler order of genius
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is so frequently beset- but which are still so very far removed from
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disease.
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There are some facts in the physical world which have a really
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wonderful analogy with others in the world of thought, and seem thus
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to give some color of truth to the (false) rhetorical dogma, that
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metaphor or simile may be made to strengthen an argument, as well as
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to embellish a description. The principle of the vis inertiae, for
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example, with the amount of momentum proportionate with it and
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consequent upon it, seems to be identical in physics and
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metaphysics. It is not more true, in the former, that a large body
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is with more difficulty set in motion than a smaller one, and that its
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subsequent impetus is commensurate with this difficulty, than it is,
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in the latter, that intellects of the vaster capacity, while more
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forcible, more constant, and more extensive in their movements than
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those of inferior grade, are yet the less readily moved, and are
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more embarrassed and more full of hesitation in the first few steps of
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their progress. While, therefore, it is not impossible, as we have
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just said, that some slight mental aberration might have given rise to
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the hesitancy and indefinitiveness of purpose which are so very
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perceptible in the first pages of the volume before us, we are still
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the more willing to believe these defects the result of the moral fact
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just stated, since we find the work itself of an unusual order of
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excellence, even when regarded as the production of the author of
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"Nicholas Nickleby." That the evils we complain of are not, and were
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not, fully perceived by Mr. Dickens himself, cannot be supposed for
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a moment. Had his book been published in the old way, we should have
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seen no traces of them whatever.
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The design of the general work, "Humphrey's Clock," is simply the
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common-place one of putting various tales into the mouths of a
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social party. The meetings are held at the house of Master Humphrey-
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an antique building in London, where an old-fashioned clock case is
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the place of deposit for the M.S.S. Why such designs have become
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common is obvious. One half the pleasure experienced at a theatre
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arises from the spectator's sympathy with the rest of the audience,
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and, especially, from his belief in their sympathy with him. The
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eccentric gentleman who not long ago, at the Park, found himself the
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solitary occupant of box, pit, and gallery, would have derived but
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little enjoyment from his visit, had he been suffered to remain. It
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was an act of mercy to turn him out. The present absurd rage for
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lecturing is founded in the feeling in question. Essays which we would
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|
not be hired to read- so trite is their subject- so feeble is their
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execution- so much easier is it to get better information on similar
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themes out of any Encyclopaedia in Christendom- we are brought to
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tolerate, and alas, even to applaud in their tenth and twentieth
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repetition, through the sole force of our sympathy with the throng. In
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the same way we listen to a story with greater zest when there are
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others present at its narration besides ourselves. Aware of this,
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authors without due reflection have repeatedly attempted, by supposing
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a circle of listeners, to imbue their narratives with the interest
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of sympathy. At a cursory glance the idea seems plausible enough. But,
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in the one case, there is an actual, personal, and palpable
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sympathy, conveyed in looks, gestures and brief comments- a sympathy
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of real individuals, all with the matters discussed to be sure, but
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then especially, each with each. In the other instance, we, alone in
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our closet, are required to sympathise with the sympathy of fictitious
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listeners, who, so far from being present in body, are often
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studiously kept out of sight and out of mind for two or three
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hundred pages at a time. This is sympathy double-diluted- the shadow
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of a shade. It is unnecesary to say that the design invariably fails
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of its effect.
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In his preface to the present volume, Mr. Dickens seems to feel
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the necessity for an apology in regard to certain portions of his
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commencement, without seeing clearly what apology he should make, or
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for what precise thing he should apologize. He makes an effort to
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get over the difficulty, by saying something about its never being
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"his intention to have the members of 'Master Humphrey's Clock' active
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agents in the stories they relate," and about his "picturing to
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himself the various sensations of his hearers-thinking how Jack
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Redburn might incline to poor Kit- how the deaf gentleman would have
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his favorite and Mr. Miles his," &c. &c.- but we are quite sure that
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all this is as pure a fiction as "The Curiosity Shop?" itself. Our
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author is deceived. Occupied with little Nell and her grandfather,
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he had forgotten the very existence of his interlocutors until he
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found himself, at the end of his book, under the disagreeable
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necessity of saying a word or two concerning them, by way of winding
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them up. The simple truth is that, either for one of the two reasons
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at which we have already hinted, or else because the work was begun in
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a hurry, Mr. Dickens did not precisely know his own plans when he
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penned the five or six first chapters of the "Clock."
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The wish to preserve a certain degree of unity between various
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narratives naturally unconnected, is a more obvious and a better
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|
reason for employing interlocutors. But such unity as may be thus
|
|
had is scarcely worth having. It may, in some feeble measure,
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satisfy the judgment by a sense of completeness; but it seldom
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|
produces a pleasant effect; and if the speakers are made to take
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|
part in their own stories (as has been the Case here) they become
|
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injurious by creating confusion. Thus, in "The Curiosity Shop," we
|
|
feel displeased to find Master Humphrey commencing the tale in the
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first person, dropping this for the third, and concluding by
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|
introducing himself as the "single gentleman" who figures in the
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|
story. In spite of all the subsequent explanation we are forced to
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look upon him as two. All is confusion, and what makes it worse, is
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that Master Humphrey is painted as a lean and sober personage, while
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his second self is a fat, bluff and boisterous old bachelor.
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Yet the species of connexion in question, besides preserving the
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|
unity desired, may be made, if well managed, a source of consistent
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and agreeable interest. It has been so made by Thomas Moore- the
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|
most skilful literary artist of his day- perhaps of any day- a man who
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|
stands in the singular and really wonderful predicament of being
|
|
undervalued on account of the profusion with which he has scattered
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|
about him his good things. The brilliancies on any one page of Lalla
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|
Roohk would have sufficed to establish that very reputation which
|
|
has been in a great measure self-dimmed by the galazied lustre of
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|
the entire book. It seems that the horrid laws of political economy
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|
cannot be evaded even by the inspired, and that a perfect
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|
versification, a vigorous style, and a never-tiring fancy, may, like
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|
the water we drink and die without, yet despise, be so plentifully set
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forth as to be absolutely of no value at all.
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By far the greater portion of the volume now published, is
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|
occupied with the tale of "The Old Curiosity Shop," narrated by Master
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Humphrey himself. The other stories are brief. The "Giant
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|
Chronicles" is the title of what appears to be meant for a series
|
|
within a series, and we think this design doubly objectionable. The
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narrative of "The Bowyer," as well as of "John Podgers," is not
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|
altogether worthy of Mr. Dickens. They were probably sent to press
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|
to supply a demand for copy, while he was occupied with the "Curiosity
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|
Shop." But the "Confession Found in a Prison in the Time of Charles
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|
the Second" is a paper of remarkable power, truly original in
|
|
conception, and worked out with great ability.
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The story of "The Curiosity Shop" is very simple. Two brothers of
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|
England, warmly attached to each other, love the same lady, without
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|
each other's knowledge. The younger at length discovers the elder's
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|
secret, and, sacrificing himself to fraternal affection, quits the
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|
country and resides for many years in a foreign land, where he amasses
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|
great wealth. Meantime his brother marries the lady, who soon dies,
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|
leaving an infant daughter- her perfect resemblance. In the
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|
widower's heart the mother lives again through the child. This
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|
latter grows up, marries unhappily, has a son and a daughter, loses
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her husband, and dies herself shortly afterward. The grandfather takes
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the orphans to his home. The boy spurns his protection, falls into bad
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|
courses, and becomes an outcast. The girl- in whom a third time
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|
lives the object of the old man's early choice- dwells with him alone,
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|
and is loved by him with a most doting affection. He has now become
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poor, and at length is reduced to keeping a shop for antiquities and
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|
curiosities. Finally, through his dread of involving the child in
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|
want, his mind becomes weakened. He thinks to redeem his fortune by
|
|
gambling, borrows money for this purpose of a dwarf, who, at length,
|
|
discovering the true state of the old man's affairs, seizes his
|
|
furniture and turns him out of doors. The girl and himself set out,
|
|
without farther object than to relieve themselves of the sight of
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|
the hated city, upon a weary pilgrimage, whose events form the basis
|
|
or body of the tale. In fine, just as a peaceful retirement is secured
|
|
for them, the child, wasted with fatigue and anxiety, dies. The
|
|
grandfather, through grief, immediately follows her to the tomb. The
|
|
younger brother, meantime, has received information of the old man's
|
|
poverty, hastens to England, and arrives only in time to be at the
|
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closing scene of the tragedy.
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This plot is the best which could have been constructed for the main
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|
object of the narrative. This object is the depicting of a fervent and
|
|
dreamy love for the child on the part of the grandfather- such a
|
|
love as would induce devotion to himself on the part of the orphan. We
|
|
have thus the conception of a childhood, educated in utter ignorance
|
|
of the world, filled with an affection which has been, through its
|
|
brief existence, the sole source of its pleasures, and which has no
|
|
part in the passion of a more mature youth for an object of its own
|
|
age- we have the idea of this childhood, full of ardent hopes, leading
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|
by the hand, forth from the heated and wearying city, into the green
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|
fields, to seek for bread, the decrepid imbecility of a doting and
|
|
confiding old age, whose stern knowledge of man, and of the world it
|
|
leaves behind, is now merged in the sole consciousness of receiving
|
|
love and protection from that weakness it has loved and protected.
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This conception is indeed most beautiful. It is simply and
|
|
severely grand. The more fully we survey it the more thoroughly we are
|
|
convinced of the lofty character of that genius which gave it birth.
|
|
That in its present simplicity of form, however, it was first
|
|
entertained by Mr. Dickens, may well be doubted. That it was not, we
|
|
are assured by the title which the tale bears. When in its
|
|
commencement he called it "The Old Curiosity Shop," his design was far
|
|
different from what we see it in its completion. It is evident that
|
|
had he now to name the story he would not so term it; for the shop
|
|
itself is a thing of an altogether collateral interest, and is
|
|
spoken of merely in the beginning. This is only one among a hundred
|
|
instances of the disadvantage under which the periodical novelist
|
|
labors. When his work is done, he never fails to observe a thousand
|
|
defects which he might have remedied, and a thousand alterations, in
|
|
regard to the book as a whole, which might be made to its manifest
|
|
improvement.
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But of the conception of this story deserves praise, its execution
|
|
is beyond all- and here the subject naturally leads us from the
|
|
generalization which is the proper province of the critic, into
|
|
details among which it is scarcely fitting that he should venture.
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|
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The Art of Mr. Dickens, although elaborate and great, seems only a
|
|
happy modification of Nature. In this respect he differs remarkably
|
|
from the author of "Night and Morning." The latter, by excessive
|
|
care and by patient reflection, aided by much rhetorical knowledge,
|
|
and general information, has arrived at the capability of producing
|
|
books which be mistaken by ninety-nine readers out of a hundred for
|
|
the genuine inspirations of genius. The former, by the promptings of
|
|
the truest genius itself, has been brought to compose, and evidently
|
|
without effort, works which have effected a long-sought
|
|
consummation- which have rendered him the idol of the people, while
|
|
defying and enchanting the critics. Mr. Bulwer, through art, has
|
|
almost created a genius. Mr. Dickens, through genius, has perfected
|
|
a standard from which Art itself will derive its essence, in rules.
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|
|
|
When we speak in this manner of the "Old Curiosity Shop," we speak
|
|
with entire deliberation, and know quite well what it is we assert. We
|
|
do not mean to say that it is perfect, as a whole- this could not well
|
|
have been the case under the circumstances of its composition. But
|
|
we know that, in all the higher elements which go to make up
|
|
literary greatness, it is supremely excellent. We think, for instance,
|
|
that the introduction of Nelly's brother (and here we address those
|
|
who have read the work) is supererogatory- that the character of Quilp
|
|
would have been more in keeping had he been confined to petty and
|
|
grotesque acts of malice- that his death should have been made the
|
|
immediate consequence of his attempt at revenge upon Kit; and that
|
|
after matters had been put fairly in train for this poetical
|
|
justice, he should not have perished by an accident inconsequential
|
|
upon his villany. We think, too, that there is an air of
|
|
ultra-accident in the finally discovered relationship between Kit's
|
|
master and the bachelor of the old church- that the sneering
|
|
politeness put into the mouth of Quilp, with his manner of
|
|
commencing a question which he wishes answered in the affirmative,
|
|
with an affirmative interrogatory, instead of the ordinary negative
|
|
one- are fashions borrowed from the authors own Fagin- that he has
|
|
repeated himself in many other instances- that the practical tricks
|
|
and love of mischief of the dwarf's boy are too nearly consonant
|
|
with the traits of the master- that so much of the propensities of
|
|
Swiveller as relate to his inapposite appropriation of odds and ends
|
|
of verse, is stolen from the generic loafer of our fellow-townsman,
|
|
Neal- and that the writer has suffered the overflowing kindness of his
|
|
own bosom to mislead him in a very important point of art, when he
|
|
endows so many of his dramatis personae with a warmth of feeling so
|
|
very rare in reality. Above all, we acknowledge that the death of
|
|
Nelly is excessively painful- that it leaves a most distressing
|
|
oppression of spirit upon the reader- and should, therefore, have been
|
|
avoided.
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|
|
|
But when we come to speak of the excellences of the tale these
|
|
defects appear really insignificant. It embodies more originality in
|
|
every point, but in character especially, than any single work
|
|
within our knowledge. There is the grandfather- a truly profound
|
|
conception; the gentle and lovely Nelly- we have discoursed of her
|
|
before; Quilp, with mouth like that of the panting dog- (a bold idea
|
|
which the engraver has neglected to embody) with his hilarious antics,
|
|
his cowardice, and his very petty and spoilt-child- like
|
|
malevolence, Dick Swiveller, that prince of goodhearted,
|
|
good-for-nothing, lazy, luxurious, poetical, brave, romantically
|
|
generous, gallant, affectionate, and not over-and-above honest,
|
|
"glorious Apollos;" the marchioness, his bride; Tom Codlin and his
|
|
partner; Miss Sally Brass, that "fine fellow;" the pony that had an
|
|
opinion of its own; the boy that stood upon his head; the sexton;
|
|
the man at the forge; not forgetting the dancing dogs and baby
|
|
Nubbles. There are other admirably drawn characters- but we note these
|
|
for their remarkable originality, as well as for their wonderful
|
|
keeping, and the glowing colors in which they are painted. We have
|
|
heard some of them called caricatures- but the charge is grossly
|
|
ill-founded. No critical principle is more firmly based in reason than
|
|
that a certain amount of exaggeration is essential to the proper
|
|
depicting of truth itself. We do not paint an object to be true, but
|
|
to appear true to the beholder. Were we to copy nature with accuracy
|
|
the object copied would seem unnatural. The columns of the Greek
|
|
temples, which convey the idea of absolute proportion, are very
|
|
considerably thicker just beneath the capital than at the base. We
|
|
regret that we have not left ourselves space in which to examine
|
|
this whole question as it deserves. We must content ourselves with
|
|
saying that caricature seldom exists (unless in so gross a form as
|
|
to disgust at once) where the component parts are in keeping; and that
|
|
the laugh excited by it, in any case, is radically distinct from
|
|
that induced by a properly artistical incongruity- the source of all
|
|
mirth. Were these creations of Mr. Dickens' really caricatures they
|
|
would not live in public estimation beyond the hour of their first
|
|
survey. We regard them as creations- (that is to say as original
|
|
combinations of character) only not all of the highest order,
|
|
because the elements employed are not always of the highest. In the
|
|
instances of Nelly, the grandfather, the Sexton, and the man of the
|
|
furnace, the force of the creative intellect could scarcely have
|
|
been engaged with nobler material, and the result is that these
|
|
personages belong to the most august regions of the Ideal.
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|
|
|
In truth, the great feature of the "Curiosity Shop" is its chaste,
|
|
vigorous, and glorious imagination. This is the one charm, all potent,
|
|
which alone would suffice to compensate for a world more of error than
|
|
Mr. Dickens ever committed. It is not only seen in the conception, and
|
|
general handling of the story, or in the invention of character; but
|
|
it pervades every sentence of the book. We recognise its prodigious
|
|
influence in every inspired word. It is this which induces the
|
|
reader who is at all ideal, to pause frequently, to reread the
|
|
occasionally quaint phrases, to muse in uncontrollable delight over
|
|
thoughts which, while he wonders he has never hit upon them before, he
|
|
yet admits that he never has encountered. In fact it is the wand of
|
|
the enchanter.
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|
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|
Had we room to particularize, we would mention as points evincing
|
|
most distinctly the ideality of the "Curiosity Shop"- the picture of
|
|
the shop itself- the newly-born desire of the worldly old man for
|
|
the peace of green fields- his whole character and conduct, in
|
|
short- the schoolmaster, with his desolate fortunes, seeking affection
|
|
in little children- the haunts of Quilp among the wharf-rats- the
|
|
tinkering of the Punchmen among the tombs- the glorious scene where
|
|
the man of the forge sits poring, at deep midnight, into that dread
|
|
fire- again the whole conception of this character, and, last and
|
|
greatest, the stealthy approach of Nell to her death- her gradual
|
|
sinking away on the journey to the village, so skilfully indicated
|
|
rather than described- her pensive and prescient meditation- the fit
|
|
of strange musing which came over her when the house in which she
|
|
was to die first broke upon her sight- the description of this
|
|
house, of the old church, and of the churchyard- everything in rigid
|
|
consonance with the one impression to be conveyed- that deep
|
|
meaningless well- the comments of the Sexton upon death, and upon
|
|
his own secure life- this whole world of mournful yet peaceful idea
|
|
merging, at length, into the decease of the child Nelly, and the
|
|
uncomprehending despair of the grandfather. These concluding scenes
|
|
are so drawn that human language, urged by human thought, could go
|
|
no farther in the excitement of human feelings. And the pathos is of
|
|
that best order which is relieved, in great measure, by ideality. Here
|
|
the book has never been equalled,- never approached except in one
|
|
instance, and that is in the case of the "Undine" by De La Motte
|
|
Fouque. The imagination is perhaps as great in this latter work, but
|
|
the pathos, although truly beautiful and deep, fails of much of its
|
|
effect through the material from which it is wrought. The chief
|
|
character, being endowed with purely fanciful attributes, cannot
|
|
command our full sympathies, as can a simple denizen of earth. In
|
|
saying above, that the death of the child left too painful an
|
|
impression, and should therefore have been avoided, we must, of
|
|
course, be understood as referring to the work as a whole, and in
|
|
respect to its general appreciation and popularity. The death, as
|
|
recorded, is, we repeat, of the highest order of literary
|
|
excellence- yet while none can deny this fact, there are few who
|
|
will be willing to read the concluding passages a second time.
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|
|
|
Upon the whole we think the "Curiosity Shop" very much the best of
|
|
the works of Mr. Dickens. It is scarcely possible to speak of it too
|
|
well. It is in all respects a tale which will secure for its author
|
|
the enthusiastic admiration of every man of genius.
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|
|
|
The edition before us is handsomely printed, on excellent paper. The
|
|
designs by Cattermole and Browne are many of them excellent- some of
|
|
them outrageously bad. Of course, it is difficult for us to say how
|
|
far the American engraver is in fault. In conclusion, we must enter
|
|
our solemn protest against the final page full of little angels in
|
|
smock frocks, or dimity chemises.
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THE QUACKS OF HELICON
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A Satire. By L. A. Wilmer
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|
|
A SATIRE, professedly such, at the present day, and especially by an
|
|
American writer, is a welcome novelty indeed. We have really done very
|
|
little in the line upon this side of the Atlantic- nothing certainly
|
|
of importance- Trumbull's clumsy poem and Halleck's "Croakers" to
|
|
the contrary notwithstanding. Some things we have produced, to be
|
|
sure, which were excellent in the way of burlesque, without
|
|
intending a syllable that was not utterly solemn and serious. Odes,
|
|
ballads, songs, sonnets, epics, and epigrams, possessed of this
|
|
unintentional excellence, we could have no difficulty in designating
|
|
by the dozen; but in the matter of directly meant and genuine
|
|
satire, it cannot be denied that we are sadly deficient. Although,
|
|
as a literary people, however, we are not exactly Archilochuses-
|
|
although we have no pretensions to the echeenpes iamboi- although in
|
|
short, we are no satirists ourselves, there can be no question that we
|
|
answer sufficiently well as subjects for satire.
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|
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|
We repeat that we are glad to see this book of Mr. Wilmer's;
|
|
first, because it is something new under the sun; secondly, because,
|
|
in many respects, it is well executed; and thirdly, because, in the
|
|
universal corruption and rigmarole, amid which we gasp for breath,
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it is really a pleasant thing to get even one accidental whiff of
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the unadulterated air of truth.
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"The Quacks of Helicon," as a poem and otherwise, has many
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defects, and these we shall have no scruple in pointing out-
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although Mr. Wilmer is a personal friend of our own, and we are
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happy and proud to say so- but it has also many remarkable merits-
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merits which it will be quite useless for those aggrieved by the
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satire- quite useless for any clique, or set of cliques, to attempt to
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frown down, or to affect not to see, or to feel, or to understand.
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Its prevalent blemishes are referable chiefly to the leading sin
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of imitation. Had the work been composed professedly in paraphrase
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of the whole manner of the sarcastic epistles of the times of Dryden
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and Pope, we should have pronounced it the most ingenious and truthful
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thing of the kind upon record. So close is the copy that it extends to
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the most trivial points- for example, to the old forms of punctuation.
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The turns of phraseology, the tricks of rhythm, the arrangement of the
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paragraphs, the general conduct of the satire- everything- all- are
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Dryden's. We cannot deny, it is true, that the satiric model of the
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days in question is insusceptible of improvement, and that the
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modern author who deviates therefrom must necessarily sacrifice
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something of merit at the shrine of originality. Neither can we shut
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our eyes to the fact that the imitation in the present case has
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conveyed, in full spirit, the high qualities, as well as in rigid
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letter, the minor elegancies and general peculiarities of the author
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of "Absalom and Achitophel." We have here the bold, vigorous, and
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sonorous verse, the biting sarcasm, the pungent epigrammatism, the
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unscrupulous directness, as of old. Yet it will not do to forget
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that Mr. Wilmer has been shown how to accomplish these things. He is
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thus only entitled to the praise of a close observer, and of a
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thoughtful and skilful copyist. The images are, to be sure, his own.
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They are neither Popes, nor Dryden's, nor Rochester's, nor
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Churchill's- but they are moulded in the identical mould used by these
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satirists.
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This servility of imitation has seduced our author into errors,
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which his better sense should have avoided. He sometimes mistakes
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intentions; at other times, he copies faults, confounding them with
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beauties. In the opening of the poem, for example, we find the lines-
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Against usurpers, Olney, I declare
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A righteous, just and patriotic war.
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The rhymes war and declare are here adopted from Pope, who employs
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them frequently; but it should have been remembered that the modern
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relative pronunciation of the two words differs materially from the
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relative pronunciation of the era of the "Dunciad."
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We are also sure that the gross obscenity, the filth- we can use
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no gentler name- which disgraces "The Quacks of Helicon," cannot be
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the result of innate impurity in the mind of the writer. It is but a
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part of the slavish and indiscriminating imitation of the Swift and
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Rochester school. It has done the book an irreparable injury, both
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in a moral and pecuniary view, without affecting anything whatever
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on the score of sarcasm, vigour or wit. "Let what is to be said, he
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said plainly." True, but let nothing vulgar be ever said or conceived.
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In asserting that this satire, even in its mannerism, has imbued
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itself with the full spirit of the polish and of the pungency of
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Dryden, we have already awarded it high praise. But there remains to
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be mentioned the far loftier merit of speaking fearlessly the truth,
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at an epoch when truth is out of fashion, and under circumstances of
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social position which would have deterred almost any man in our
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community from a similar Quixotism. For the publication of "The Quacks
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of Helicon"- a poem which brings under review, by name, most of our
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prominent literati and treats them, generally, as they deserve (what
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treatment could be more bitter?)- for the publication of this
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attack, Mr. Wilmer, whose subsistence lies in his pen, has little to
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look for- apart from the silent respect of those at once honest and
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timid- but the most malignant open or covert persecution. For this
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reason, and because it is the truth which he has spoken, do we say
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to him, from the bottom of our hearts, "God speed!"
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We repeat it: it is the truth which he has spoken; and who shall
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contradict us? He has said unscrupulously what every reasonable man
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among us has long known to be "as true as the Pentateuch"- that, as
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a literary people, we are one vast perambulating humbug. He has
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asserted that we are clique-ridden; and who does not smile at the
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obvious truism of that assertion? He maintains that chicanery is, with
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us, a far surer road than talent to distinction in letters. Who
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|
gainsays this? The corrupt nature of our ordinary criticism has become
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|
notorious. Its powers have been prostrated by its own arm. The
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|
intercourse between critic and publisher, as it now almost universally
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|
stands, is comprised either in the paying and pocketing of
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|
blackmail, as the price of a simple forebearance, or in a direct
|
|
system of petty and contemptible bribery, properly so-called- a system
|
|
even more injurious than the former to the true interests of the
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|
public, and more degrading to the buyers and sellers of good
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opinion, on account of the more positive character of the service here
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|
rendered for the consideration received. We laugh at the idea of any
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denial of our assertions upon this topic; they are infamously true. In
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the charge of general corruption, there are undoubtedly many noble
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|
exceptions to be made. There are, indeed, some very few editors,
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who, maintaining an entire independence, will receive no books from
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publishers at all, or who receive them with a perfect understanding,
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|
on the part of these latter, that an unbiassed critique will be given.
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But these cases are insufficient to have much effect on the popular
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|
mistrust; a mistrust heightened by late exposure of the machinations
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|
of coteries in New York-coteries which, at the bidding of leading
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|
booksellers, manufacture, as required from time to time, a
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pseudo-public opinion by wholesale, for the benefit of any little
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hanger-on of the party, or pettifogging protector of the firm.
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We speak of these things in the bitterness of scorn. It is
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|
unnecessary to cite instances, where one is found in almost every
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|
issue of a book. It is needless to call to mind the desperate case
|
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of Fay- a case where the pertinacity of the effort to gull- where
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|
the obviousness of the attempt at forestalling a judgment- where the
|
|
wofully overdone bemirrorment of that man-of-straw, together with
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|
the pitiable platitude of his production, proved a dose somewhat too
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|
potent for even the well-prepared stomach of the mob. We say it is
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|
supererogatory to dwell upon "Norman Leslie," or other by-gone
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|
follies, when we have before our eyes hourly instances of the
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|
machinations in question. To so great an extent of methodical
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|
assurance has the system of puffery arrived, that publishers, of late,
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|
have made no scruple of keeping on hand an assortment of
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|
commendatory notices, prepared by their men of all work, and of
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|
sending these notices around to the multitudinous papers within
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|
their influence, done up within the fly leaves of the book. The
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|
grossness of these base attempts, however, has not escaped indignant
|
|
rebuke from the more honourable portion of the press; and we hail
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|
these symptoms of restiveness under the yoke of unprincipled ignorance
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|
and quackery (strong only in combination) as the harbinger of a better
|
|
era for the interests of real merit, and of the national literature as
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|
a whole.
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It has become, indeed, the plain duty of each individual connected
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|
with our periodicals heartily to give whatever influence he
|
|
possesses to the good cause of integrity and the truth. The results
|
|
thus attainable will be found worthy his closest attention and best
|
|
efforts. We shall thus frown down all conspiracies to foist inanity
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|
upon the public consideration at the obvious expense of every man of
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|
talent who is not a member of a clique in power. We may even arrive in
|
|
time at that desirable point from which a distinct view of our men
|
|
of letters may be obtained, and their respective pretensions
|
|
adjusted by the standard of a rigorous and self-sustaining criticism
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|
alone. That their several positions are as yet properly settled;
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|
that the posts which a vast number of them now hold are maintained
|
|
by any better tenure than that of the chicanery upon which we have
|
|
commented, will be asserted by none but the ignorant, or the parties
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|
who have best right to feel an interest in the "good old condition
|
|
of things." No two matters can be more radically different than the
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|
reputation of some of our prominent litterateurs as gathered from
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|
the mouths of the people (who glean it from the paragraphs of the
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|
papers), and the same reputation as deduced from the private
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|
estimate of intelligent and educated men. We do not advance this
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|
fact as a new discovery. Its truth, on the contrary, is the subject,
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|
and has long been so, of every-day witticism and mirth.
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Why not? Surely there can be few things more ridiculous than the
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|
general character and assumptions of the ordinary critical notices
|
|
of new books! An editor, sometimes without the shadow of the commonest
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|
attainment- often without brains, always without time- does not
|
|
scruple to give the world to understand that he is in the daily
|
|
habit of critically reading and deciding upon a flood of publications,
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|
one-tenth of whose title pages he may possibly have turned over,
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|
three-fourths of whose contents would be Hebrew to his most
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|
desperate efforts at comprehension, and whose entire mass and
|
|
amount, as might be mathematically demonstrated, would be sufficient
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|
to occupy, in the most cursory perusal, the attention of some ten or
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|
twenty readers for a month! What he wants in plausibility, however, he
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|
makes up in obsequiousness; what he lacks in time he supplies in
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|
temper. He is the most easily pleased man in the world. He admires
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|
everything, from the big Dictionary of Noah Webster to the last
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|
diamond edition of Tom Thumb. Indeed, his sole difficulty is in
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|
finding tongue to express his delight. Every pamphlet is a miracle-
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|
every book in boards is an epoch in letters. His phrases, therefore,
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|
get bigger and bigger every day, and, if it were not for talking
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|
Cockney, we might call him a "regular swell."
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Yet, in the attempt at getting definite information in regard to any
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|
one portion of our literature, the merely general reader, or the
|
|
foreigner, will turn in vain from the lighter to the heavier journals.
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|
But it is not our intention here to dwell upon the radical, antique,
|
|
and systematized rigmarole of our Quarterlies. The articles here are
|
|
anonymous. Who writes?- who causes to be written? Who but an ass
|
|
will put faith in tirades which may be the result of personal
|
|
hostility, or in panegyrics which nine times out of ten may be laid,
|
|
directly or indirectly, to the charge of the author himself? It is
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|
in the favour of these saturnine pamphlets that they contain, now
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|
and then, a good essay de omnibus rebus et quibusdam aliis, which
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|
may be looked into, without decided somnolent consequences, at any
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|
period, not immediately subsequent to dinner. But it is useless to
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|
expect criticism from periodicals called "Reviews" from never
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|
reviewing. Besides, all men know, or should know, that these books are
|
|
sadly given to verbiage. It is a part of their nature, a condition
|
|
of their being, a point of their faith. A veteran reviewer loves the
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|
safety of generalities and is therefore rarely particular. "Words,
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|
words, words," are the secret of his strength. He has one or two ideas
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|
of his own and is both wary and fussy in giving them out. His wit
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|
lies, with his truth, in a well, and there is always a world of
|
|
trouble in getting it up. He is a sworn enemy to all things simple and
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|
direct. He gives no ear to the advice of the giant
|
|
Moulineau-"Belier, mon ami commencez au commencement." He either jumps
|
|
at once into the middle of his subject, or breaks in at a back door,
|
|
or sidles up to it with the gait of a crab. No other mode of
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|
approach has an air of sufficient profundity. When fairly into it,
|
|
however, he becomes dazzled with the scintillations of his own wisdom,
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|
and is seldom able to see his way out. Tired of laughing at his
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|
antics, or frightened at seeing him flounder, the reader, at length,
|
|
shuts him up, with the book. "What song the Syrens sang," says Sir
|
|
Thomas Browne, "or what name Achilles assumed when he hid himself
|
|
among women, though puzzling questions, are not beyond all
|
|
conjecture";- but it would puzzle Sir Thomas, backed by Achilles and
|
|
all the Syrens in Heathendom, to say, in nine cases out of ten, what
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|
is the object of a thoroughgoing Quarterly Reviewer.
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Should the opinions promulgated by our press at large be taken, in
|
|
their wonderful aggregate, as an evidence of what American
|
|
literature absolutely is (and it may be said that, in general, they
|
|
are really so taken), we shall find ourselves the most enviable set of
|
|
people upon the face of the earth. Our fine writers are legion. Our
|
|
very atmosphere is redolent of genius; and we, the nation, are a huge,
|
|
well-contented chameleon, grown pursy by inhaling it. We are teretes
|
|
et rotundi- enwrapped in excellence. All our poets are Milton
|
|
neither mute nor inglorious; all our poetesses are "American
|
|
Hemanses"; nor will it do to deny that all our novelists are Great
|
|
Knowns or Great Unknowns, and that everybody who writes, in every
|
|
possible and impossible department, is the Admirable Crichton, or,
|
|
at least, the Admirable Crichton's ghost. We are thus in a glorious
|
|
condition, and will remain so until forced to disgorge our ethereal
|
|
honours. In truth there is some danger that the jealousy of the Old
|
|
World will interfere. It cannot long submit to that outrageous
|
|
monopoly of "all the decency and all the talent," of which the
|
|
gentlemen of the press give such undoubted assurance of our being
|
|
the possessors.
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But we feel angry with ourselves for the jesting tone of our
|
|
observations upon this topic. The prevalence of the spirit of
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|
puffery is a subject far less for merriment than for disgust. Its
|
|
truckling, yet dogmatical character- its bold, unsustained, yet
|
|
self-sufficient and wholesale laudation- is becoming, more and more,
|
|
an insult to the common sense of the community. Trivial as it
|
|
essentially is, it has yet been made the instrument of the grossest
|
|
abuse in the elevation of imbecility, to the manifest injury, to the
|
|
utter ruin, of true merit. Is there any man of good feeling and of
|
|
ordinary understanding- is there one single individual among all our
|
|
readers- who does not feel a thrill of bitter indignation, apart
|
|
from any sentiment of mirth, as he calls to mind instance after
|
|
instance of the purest, of the most unadulterated quackery in letters,
|
|
which has risen to a high post in the apparent popular estimation, and
|
|
which still maintains it, by the sole means of a blustering arrogance,
|
|
or of a busy wriggling conceit, or of the most barefaced plagiarism,
|
|
or even through the simple immensity of its assumptions- assumptions
|
|
not only unopposed by the press at large, but absolutely supported
|
|
in proportion to the vociferous clamour with which they are made- in
|
|
exact accordance with their utter baselessness and untenability? We
|
|
should have no trouble in pointing out to-day some twenty or thirty
|
|
so-called literary personages, who, if not idiots, as we half think
|
|
them, or if not hardened to all sense of shame by a long course of
|
|
disingenuousness, will now blush in the perusal of these words,
|
|
through consciousness of the shadowy nature of that purchased pedestal
|
|
upon which they stand-will now tremble in thinking of the feebleness
|
|
of the breath which will be adequate to the blowing it from beneath
|
|
their feet. With the help of a hearty good will, even we may yet
|
|
tumble them down.
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|
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|
So firm, through a long endurance, has been the hold taken upon
|
|
the popular mind (at least so far as we may consider the popular
|
|
mind reflected in ephemeral letters) by the laudatory system which
|
|
we have deprecated, that what is, in its own essence, a vice, has
|
|
become endowed with the appearance, and met with the reception of a
|
|
virtue. Antiquity, as usual, has lent a certain degree of speciousness
|
|
even to the absurd. So continuously have we puffed, that we have, at
|
|
length, come to think puffing the duty, and plain speaking the
|
|
dereliction. What we began in gross error, we persist in through
|
|
habit. Having adopted, in the earlier days of our literature, the
|
|
untenable idea that this literature, as a whole, could be advanced
|
|
by an indiscriminate approbation bestowed on its every effort-
|
|
having adopted this idea, we say, without attention to the obvious
|
|
fact that praise of all was bitter although negative censure to the
|
|
few alone deserving, and that the only result of the system, in the
|
|
fostering way, would be the fostering of folly- we now continue our
|
|
vile practice through the supineness of custom, even while, in our
|
|
national self-conceit, we repudiate that necessity for patronage and
|
|
protection in which originated our conduct. In a word, the press
|
|
throughout the country has not been ashamed to make head against the
|
|
very few bold attempts at independence which have from time to time
|
|
been made in the face of the reigning order of things. And if in
|
|
one, or perhaps two, insulated cases, the spirit of severe truth,
|
|
sustained by an unconquerable will, was not to be so put down, then,
|
|
forthwith, were private chicaneries set in motion; then was had
|
|
resort, on the part of those who considered themselves injured by
|
|
the severity of criticism (and who were so, if the just contempt of
|
|
every ingenuous man is injury), resort to arts of the most virulent
|
|
indignity, to untraceable slanders, to ruthless assassination in the
|
|
dark. We say these things were done while the press in general
|
|
looked on, and, with a full understanding of the wrong perpetrated,
|
|
spoke not against the wrong. The idea had absolutely gone abroad-
|
|
had grown up little by little into toleration- that attacks, however
|
|
just, upon a literary reputation, however obtained, however untenable,
|
|
were well retaliated by the basest and most unfounded traduction of
|
|
personal fame. But is this an age- is this a day- in which it can be
|
|
necessary even to advert to such considerations as that the book of
|
|
the author is the property of the public, and that the issue of the
|
|
book is the throwing down of the gauntlet to the reviewer- to the
|
|
reviewer whose duty is the plainest; the duty not even of approbation,
|
|
or of censure, or of silence, at his own, will but at the sway of
|
|
those sentiments and of those opinions which are derived from the
|
|
author himself, through the medium of his written and published words?
|
|
True criticism is the reflection of the thing criticized upon the
|
|
spirit of the critic.
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But a nos moutons- to "The Quacks of Helicon." This satire has
|
|
many faults besides those upon which we have commented. The title, for
|
|
example, is not sufficiently distinctive, although otherwise good.
|
|
It does not confine the subject to American quacks, while the work
|
|
does. The two concluding lines enfeeble instead of strengthening the
|
|
finale, which would have been exceedingly pungent without them. The
|
|
individual portions of the thesis are strung together too much at
|
|
random- a natural sequence is not always preserved- so that,
|
|
although the lights of the picture are often forcible, the whole has
|
|
what, in artistical parlance, is termed an accidental and spotty
|
|
appearance. In truth, the parts of the poem have evidently been
|
|
composed each by each, as separate themes, and afterwards fitted
|
|
into the general satire in the best manner possible.
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But a more reprehensible sin than an or than all of these is yet
|
|
to be mentioned- the sin of indiscriminate censure. Even here Mr.
|
|
Wilmer has erred through imitation. He has held in view the sweeping
|
|
denunciations of the Dunciad, and of the later (abortive) satire of
|
|
Byron. No one in his senses can deny the justice of the general
|
|
charges of corruption in regard to which we have just spoken from
|
|
the text of our author. But are there no exceptions? We should,
|
|
indeed, blush if there were not. And is there no hope? Time will show.
|
|
We cannot do everything in a day- Non se gano Zonora en un ora. Again,
|
|
it cannot be gainsaid that the greater number of those who hold high
|
|
places in our poetical literature are absolute nincompoops- fellows
|
|
alike innocent of reason and of rhyme. But neither are we all
|
|
brainless, nor is the devil himself so black as he is painted. Mr.
|
|
Wilmer must read the chapter in Rabelais's "Gargantua," "de ce
|
|
qu'est signifie par les couleurs blanc et bleu,"- for there is some
|
|
difference after all. It will not do in a civilized land to run a-muck
|
|
like a Malay. Mr. Morris has written good songs. Mr. Bryant is not all
|
|
a fool. Mr. Willis is not quite an ass. Mr. Longfellow will steal,
|
|
but, perhaps, he cannot help it (for we have heard of such things),
|
|
and then it must not be denied that nil tetigit quod non ornavit.
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The fact is that our author, in the rank exuberance of his zeal,
|
|
seems to think as little of discrimination as the Bishop of Autun* did
|
|
of the Bible. Poetical "things in general" are the windmills at
|
|
which he spurs his Rozinante. He as often tilts at what is true as
|
|
at what is false; and thus his lines are like the mirrors of the
|
|
temples of Smyrna, which represent the fairest images as deformed. But
|
|
the talent, the fearlessness, and especially the design of this
|
|
book, will suffice to preserve it from that dreadful damnation of
|
|
"silent contempt," to which editors throughout the country, if we
|
|
are not much mistaken, will endeavour, one and all to consign it.
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* Talleyrand.
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EXORDIUM
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EXORDIUM
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[Graham's Magazine, January, 1842]
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IN Commencing, with the New Year, a New Volume, we shall be
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permitted to say a very few words by way of exordium to our usual
|
|
chapter of Reviews, or, as we should prefer calling them, of
|
|
Critical Notices. Yet we speak not for the sake of the exordium, but
|
|
because we have really something to say, and know not when or where
|
|
better to say it.
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That the public attention, in America, has, of late days, been
|
|
more than usually directed to the matter of literary criticism, is
|
|
plainly apparent. Our periodicals are beginning to acknowledge the
|
|
importance of the science (shall we so term it?) and to disdain the
|
|
flippant opinion which so long has been made its substitute.
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|
|
|
Time was when we imported our critical decisions from the mother
|
|
country. For many years we enacted a perfect farce of subserviency
|
|
to the dicta of Great Britain. At last a revulsion of feeling, with
|
|
self-disgust, necessarily ensued. Urged by these, we plunged into
|
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the opposite extreme. In throwing totally off that "authority,"
|
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whose voice had so long been so sacred, we even surpassed, and by
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much, our original folly. But the watchword now was, "a national
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literature!"- as, if any true literature could be "national"- as if
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the world at large were not the only proper stage for the literary
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histrio. We became, suddenly, the merest and maddest partizans in
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|
letters. Our papers spoke of "tariffs" and "protection." Our Magazines
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had habitual passages about that "truly native novelist, Mr.
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Cooper," or that "staunch American genius, Mr. Paulding." Unmindful of
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the spirit of the axioms that "a prophet has no honor in his own land"
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and that "a hero is never a hero to his valet-de-chambre"- axioms
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founded in reason and in truth- our reviews urged the propriety- our
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booksellers the necessity, of strictly "American" themes. A foreign
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subject, at this epoch, was a weight more than enough to drag down
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into the very depths of critical damnation the finest writer owning
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nativity in the States; while, on the reverse, we found ourselves
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daily in the paradoxical dilemma of liking, or pretending to like, a
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stupid book the better because (sure enough) its stupidity was of
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our own growth, and discussed our own affairs.
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It is, in fact, but very lately that this anomalous state of feeling
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has shown any signs of subsidence. Still it is subsiding. Our views of
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literature in general having expanded, we begin to demand the use-
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to inquire into the offices and provinces of criticism- to regard it
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more as an art based immovably in nature, less as a mere system of
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fluctuating and conventional dogmas. And, with the prevalence of these
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ideas, has arrived a distaste even to the home-dictation of the
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bookseller-coteries. If our editors are not as yet all independent
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of the will of a publisher, a majority of them scruple, at least, to
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confess a subservience, and enter into no positive combinations
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against the minority who despise and discard it. And this is a very
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great improvement of exceedingly late date.
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Escaping these quicksands, our criticism is nevertheless in some
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|
danger- some very little danger- of falling into the pit of a most
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detestable species of cant- the cant of generality. This tendency
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|
has been given it, in the first instance, by the onward and tumultuous
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spirit of the age. With the increase of the thinking-material comes
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the desire, if not the necessity, of abandoning particulars for
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masses. Yet in our individual case, as a nation, we seem merely to
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|
have adopted this bias from the British Quarterly Reviews, upon
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|
which our own Quarterlies have been slavishly and pertinaciously
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modelled. In the foreign journal, the review or criticism properly
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|
so termed, has gradually yet steadily degenerated into what we see
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it at present- that is to say, into anything but criticism. Originally
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a "review" was not so called as lucus a non lucendo. Its name conveyed
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a just idea of its design. It reviewed, or surveyed the book whose
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title formed its text, and, giving an analysis of its contents, passed
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|
judgment upon its merits or defects. But, through the system of
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|
anonymous contribution, this natural process lost ground from day to
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|
day. The name of a writer being known only to a few, it became to
|
|
him an object not so much to write well, as to write fluently, at so
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|
many guineas per sheet. The analysis of a book is a matter of time and
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|
of mental exertion. For many classes of composition there is
|
|
required a deliberate perusal, with notes, and subsequent
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|
generalization. An easy substitute for this labor was found in a
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|
digest or compendium of the work noticed, with copious extracts- or
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|
a still easier, in random comments upon such passages as
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|
accidentally met the eye of the critic, with the passages themselves
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|
copied at full length. The mode of reviewing most in favor, however,
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|
because carrying with it the greatest semblance of care, was that of
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|
diffuse essay upon the subject matter of the publication, the
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|
reviewer(?) using the facts alone which the publication supplied,
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|
and using them as material for some theory, the sole concern, bearing,
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|
and intention of which, was mere difference of opinion with the
|
|
author. These came at length to be understood and habitually practised
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|
as the customary or conventional fashions of review; and although
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the nobler order of intellects did not fall into the full heresy of
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|
these fashions- we may still assert that even Macaulay's nearest
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|
approach to criticism in its legitimate sense, is to be found in his
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|
article upon Ranke's "History of the Popes"- an article in which the
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|
whole strength of the reviewer is put forth to account for a single
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|
fact- the progress of Romanism- which the book under discussion has
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|
established.
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Now, while we do not mean to deny that a good essay is a good thing,
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|
we yet assert that these papers on general topics have nothing
|
|
whatever to do with that criticism which their evil example has
|
|
nevertheless infected in se. Because these dogmatizing pamphlets,
|
|
which were once "Reviews," have lapsed from their original faith, it
|
|
does not follow that the faith itself is extinct- that "there shall be
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|
no more cakes and ale"- that criticism, in its old acceptation, does
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|
not exist. But we complain of a growing inclination on the part of our
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lighter journals to believe, on such grounds, that such is the fact-
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that because the British Quarterlies, through supineness, and our own,
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|
through a degrading imitation, have come to merge all varieties of
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|
vague generalization in the one title of "Review," it therefore
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|
results that criticism, being everything in the universe, is,
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|
consequently, nothing whatever in fact. For to this end, and to none
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|
other conceivable, is the tendency of such propositions, for
|
|
example, as we find in a late number of that very clever monthly
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|
magazine, Arcturus.
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"But now" (the emphasis on the now is our own)- "but now," says
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Mr. Mathews, in the preface to the first volume of his journal,
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"criticism has a wider scope and a universal interest. It dismisses
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|
errors of grammer, and hands over an imperfect rhyme or a false
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|
quantity to the proofreader; it looks now to the heart of the
|
|
subject and the author's design. It is a test of opinion. Its
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|
acuteness is not pedantic, but philosophical; it unravels the web of
|
|
the author's mystery to interpret his meaning to others; it detects
|
|
his sophistry, because sophistry is injurious to the heart and life;
|
|
it promulgates his beauties with liberal, generous praise, because
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|
this is his true duty as the servant of truth. Good criticism may be
|
|
well asked for, since it is the type of the literature of the day.
|
|
It gives method to the universal inquisitiveness on every topic
|
|
relating to life or action. A criticism, now, includes every form of
|
|
literature, except perhaps the imaginative and the strictly
|
|
dramatic. It is an essay, a sermon, an oration, a chapter in
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|
history, a philosophical speculation, a prose-poem, an art-novel, a
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|
dialogue, it admits of humor, pathos, the personal feelings of
|
|
autobiography, the broadest views of statesmanship. As the ballad
|
|
and the epic were the productions of the days of Homer, the review
|
|
is the native characteristic growth of the nineteenth century."
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We respect the talents of Mr. Mathews, but must dissent from
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|
nearly all that he here says. The species of "review" which he
|
|
designates as the "characteristic growth of the nineteenth century" is
|
|
only the growth of the last twenty or thirty years in Great Britain.
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|
The French Reviews, for example, which are not anonymous, are very
|
|
different things, and preserve the unique spirit of true criticism.
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|
And what need we say of the Germans?- what of Winckelmann, of Novalis,
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|
of Schelling, of Goethe, of Augustus William, and of Frederick
|
|
Schlegel?- that their magnificent critiques raisonnees differ from
|
|
those of Kames, of Johnson, and of Blair, in principle not at all,
|
|
(for the principles of these artists will not fail until Nature
|
|
herself expires,) but solely in their more careful elaboration,
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|
their greater thoroughness, their more profound analysis and
|
|
application of the principles themselves. That a criticism "now"
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|
should be different in spirit, as Mr. Mathews supposes, from a
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|
criticism at any previous period, is to insinuate a charge of
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|
variability in laws that cannot vary- the laws of man's heart and
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|
intellect- for these are the sole basis, upon which the true
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|
critical art is established. And this art "now" no more than in the
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|
days of the "Dunciad," can, without neglect of its duty, "dismiss
|
|
errors of grammar," or "hand over an imperfect rhyme or a false
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|
quantity to the proof-reader." What is meant by a "test of opinion" in
|
|
the connection here given the words by Mr. M., we do not comprehend as
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|
clearly as we could desire. By this phrase we are as completely
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|
enveloped in doubt as was Mirabeau in the castle of If. To our
|
|
imperfect appreciation it seems to form a portion of that general
|
|
vagueness which is the tone of the whole philosophy at this point:-
|
|
but all that which our journalist describes a criticism to be, is
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|
all that which we sturdily maintain it is not. Criticism is not, we
|
|
think, an essay, nor a sermon, nor an oration, nor a chapter in
|
|
history, nor a philosophical speculation, nor a prose-poem, nor an
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|
art-novel, nor a dialogue. In fact, it can be nothing in the world
|
|
but- a criticism. But if it were all that Arcturus imagines, it is not
|
|
very clear why it might not be equally "imaginative, or "dramatic"-
|
|
a romance or a melodrama, or both. That it would be a farce cannot
|
|
be doubted.
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It is against this frantic spirit of generalization that we protest.
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|
We have a word, "criticism," whose import is sufficiently distinct,
|
|
through long usage, at least, and we have an art of high importance
|
|
and clearly ascertained limit, which this word is quite well enough
|
|
understood to represent. Of that conglomerate science to which Mr.
|
|
Mathews so eloquently alludes, and of which we are instructed that
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|
it is anything and everything at once- of this science we know
|
|
nothing, and really wish to know less; but we object to our
|
|
contemporary's appropriation in its behalf, of a term to which we,
|
|
in common with a large majority of mankind, have been accustomed to
|
|
attach a certain and very definitive idea. Is there no word but
|
|
"criticism" which may be made to serve the purposes of "Arcturus"? Has
|
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it any objection to Orphicism, or Dialism, or Emersonism, or any other
|
|
pregnant compound indicative of confusion worse confounded?
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Still, we must not pretend a total misapprehension of the idea of
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|
Mr. Mathews, and we should be sorry that he misunderstood us. It may
|
|
be granted that we differ only in terms- although the difference
|
|
will yet be found not unimportant in effect. Following the highest
|
|
authority, we would wish, in a word, to limit literary criticism to
|
|
comment upon Art. A book is written- and it is only as the book that
|
|
we subject it to review. With the opinions of the work, considered
|
|
otherwise than in their relation to the work itself, the critic has
|
|
really nothing to do. It is his part simply to decide upon the mode in
|
|
which these opinions are brought to bear. Criticism is thus no "test
|
|
of opinion." For this test, the work, divested of its pretensions as
|
|
an art-product, is turned over for discussion to the world at large-
|
|
and first, to that class which it especially addresses- if a
|
|
history, to the historian- if a metaphysical treatise, to the
|
|
moralist. In this, the only true and intelligible sense, it will be
|
|
seen that criticism, the test or analysis of Art, (not of opinion,) is
|
|
only properly employed upon productions which have their basis in
|
|
art itself, and although the journalist (whose duties and objects
|
|
are multiform) may turn aside, at pleasure, from the mode or vehicle
|
|
of opinion to discussion of the opinion conveyed- it is still clear
|
|
that he is "critical" only in so much as he deviates from his true
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province not at all.
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And of the critic himself what shall we say?- for as yet we have
|
|
spoken only the proem to the true epopea. What can we better say of
|
|
him than, with Bulwer, that "he must have courage to blame boldly,
|
|
magnanimity to eschew envy, genius to appreciate, learning to compare,
|
|
an eye for beauty, an ear for music, and a heart for feeling." Let
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us add, a talent for analysis and a solemn indifference to abuse.
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BALLADS AND OTHER POEMS
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By Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, author of "Voices of the Night,"
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"Hyperion," &c. Second edition. John Owen, Cambridge.
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"IL Y A A PARIER," says Chamfort, "que toute idee publique, toute
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|
convention recue, est une sottise, car elle a convenu au plus grand
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|
notore."- One would be safe in wagering that any given public idea
|
|
is erroneous, for it has been yielded to the clamor of the
|
|
majority,- and this strictly philosophical, although somewhat French
|
|
assertion has especial bearing upon the whole race of what are
|
|
termed maxims and popular proverbs; nine-tenths of which are the
|
|
quintessence of folly. One of the most deplorably false of them is the
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|
antique adage, De gustibus non est disputandum- there should be no
|
|
disputing about taste. Here the idea designed to be conveyed is that
|
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any one person has as just right to consider his own taste the true,
|
|
as has any one other- that taste itself, in short, is an arbitrary
|
|
something, amenable to no law, and measurable by no definite rules. It
|
|
must be confessed, however, that the exceedingly vague and impotent
|
|
treatises which are alone extant, have much to answer for as regards
|
|
confirming the general error. Not the least important service which,
|
|
hereafter, mankind will owe to Phrenology, may, perhaps, be recognized
|
|
in an analysis of the real principles, and a digest of the resulting
|
|
laws of taste. These principles, in fact, are as clearly traceable,
|
|
and these laws as really susceptible of system as are any whatever.
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In the meantime, the inane adage above mentioned is in no respect
|
|
more generally, more stupidly, and more pertinaciously quoted than
|
|
by the admirers of what is termed the "good old Pope," or the "good
|
|
old Goldsmith school" of poetry, in reference to the bolder, more
|
|
natural and more ideal compositions of such authors as Coetlogon and
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|
Lamartine* in France; Herder, Korner, and Uhland, in Germany; Brun and
|
|
Baggesen in Denmark; Bellman, Tegner, Nyberg*(2) in Sweden; Keats,
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|
Shelley, Coleridge, and Tennyson in England; Lowell and Longfellow
|
|
in America. "De gustibus non," say these "good-old school" fellows;
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and we have no doubt that their mental translation of the phrase is-
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"We pity your taste- we pity every body's taste but our own."
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* We allude here chiefly to the "David" of Coetlogon and only to the
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"Chute d'un Ange" of Lamartine.
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*(2) Julia Nyberg, author of the "Dikter von Euphrosyne."
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It is our purpose hereafter, when occasion shall be afforded us,
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|
to controvert in an article of some length, the popular idea that
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the poets, just mentioned owe to novelty, to trickeries of expression,
|
|
and to other meretricious effects, their appreciation by certain
|
|
readers:- to demonstrate (for the matter is susceptible of
|
|
demonstration) that such poetry and such alone has fulfilled the
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|
legitimate office of the muse; has thoroughly satisfied an earnest and
|
|
unquenchable desire existing in the heart of man. In the present
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|
number of our Magazine we have left ourselves barely room to say a few
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|
random words of welcome to these "Ballads," by Longfellow, and to
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|
tender him, and all such as he, the homage of our most earnest love
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|
and admiration.
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The volume before us (in whose outward appearance the keen "taste"
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|
of genius is evinced with nearly as much precision as in its
|
|
internal soul) includes, with several brief original pieces, a
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|
translation from the Swedish of Tegner. In attempting (what never
|
|
should be attempted) a literal version of both the words and the metre
|
|
of this poem, Professor Longfellow has failed to do justice either
|
|
to his author or himself. He has striven to do what no man ever did
|
|
well and what, from the nature of the language itself, never can be
|
|
well done. Unless, for example, we shall come to have an influx of
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|
spondees in our English tongue, it will always be impossible to
|
|
construct an English hexameter. Our spondees, or, we should say, our
|
|
spondiac words, are rare. In the Swedish they are nearly as abundant
|
|
as in the Latin and Greek. We have only "compound," "context,"
|
|
"footfall," and a few other similar ones. This is the difficulty;
|
|
and that it is so will become evident upon reading "The Children of
|
|
the Lord's Supper," where the sole readable verses are those in
|
|
which we meet with the rare spondaic dissyllables. We mean to say
|
|
readable as Hexameters; for many of them will read very well as mere
|
|
English Dactylics, with certain irregularities.
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But within the narrow compass now left us we must not indulge in
|
|
anything like critical comment. Our readers will be better satisfied
|
|
perhaps with a few brief extracts from the original poems of the
|
|
volume- which we give for their rare excellence, without pausing now
|
|
to say in what particulars this excellence exists.
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And, like the water's flow
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Under December's snow
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Came a dull voice of woe,
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From the heart's chamber.
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So the loud laugh of scorn,
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Out of those lips unshorn
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From the deep drinking-horn
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Blew the foam lightly.
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As with his wings aslant
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Sails the fierce cormorant
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Seeking some rocky haunt,
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With his prey laden,
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So toward the open main,
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Beating to sea again,
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Through the wild hurricane,
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Bore I the maiden.
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Down came the storm and smote amain
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The vessel in its strength;
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She shuddered and paused like a frighted steed
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Then leaped her cable's length.
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She drifted a dreary wreck,
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And a whooping billow swept the crew
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Like icicles from her deck.
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He hears the parson pray and preach
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He hears his daughter's voice,
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Singing in the village choir,
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And it makes his heart rejoice;
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It sounds to him like her mother's voice
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Singing in Paradise!
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He needs must think of her once more
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How in the grave she lies;
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And with his hard rough hand he wipes
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A tear out of his eyes.
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Thus the flaming forge of life
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Our fortunes must be wrought;
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Thus on its sounding anvil shaped
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Each burning deed and thought.
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The rising moon has hid the stars
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Her level rays like golden bars
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Lie on the landscape green
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With shadows brown between.
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Love lifts the boughs whose shadows deep
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Are life's oblivion, the soul's sleep,
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And kisses the closed eyes
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Of him who slumbering lies.
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Friends my soul with joy remembers!
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How like quivering flames they start,
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When I fan the living embers
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On the hearth-stone of my heart.
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Hearest thou voices on the shore,
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That our ears perceive no more
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Deafened by the cataract's roar?
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And from the sky, serene and far
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A voice fell like a falling star.
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Some of these passages cannot be fully appreciated apart from the
|
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context- but we address those who have read the book. Of the
|
|
translations we have not spoken. It is but right to say, however, that
|
|
"The Luck of Edenhall" is a far finer poem, in every respect than
|
|
any of the original pieces. Nor would we have our previous
|
|
observations misunderstood. Much as we admire the genius of Mr.
|
|
Longfellow, we are fully sensible of his many errors of affectation
|
|
and imitation. His artistical skill is great and his ideality high.
|
|
But his conception of the aims of poesy is all wrong, and this we
|
|
shall prove at some future day- to our own satisfaction, at least. His
|
|
didactics are all out of place. He has written brilliant poems- by
|
|
accident; that is to say when permitting his genius to get the
|
|
better of his conventional habit of thinking- a habit deduced from
|
|
German study. We do not mean to say that a didactic moral may not be
|
|
well made the under-current of a poetical thesis; but that it can
|
|
never be well put so obtrusively forth, as in the majority of his
|
|
compositions. There is a young American who, with ideality not
|
|
richer than that of Longfellow, and with less artistical knowledge,
|
|
has yet composed far truer poems, merely through the greater propriety
|
|
of his themes. We allude to James Russell Lowell; and in the number of
|
|
this Magazine for last month, will be found a ballad entitled
|
|
"Rosaline," affording an excellent exemplification of our meaning.
|
|
This composition has unquestionably its defects, and the very
|
|
defects which are not perceptible in Mr. Longfellow- but we
|
|
sincerely think that no American poem equals it in the higher elements
|
|
of song.
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|
In our last number we had some hasty observations on these
|
|
"Ballads"- observations which we propose, in some measure, to
|
|
amplify and explain.
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|
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|
It may be remembered that, among other points, we demurred to Mr.
|
|
Longfellow's themes, or rather to their general character. We found
|
|
fault with the too obtrusive nature of their didacticism. Some years
|
|
ago, we urged a similar objection to one or two of the longer pieces
|
|
of Bryant, and neither time nor reflection has sufficed to modify,
|
|
in the slightest particular, our conviction upon this topic.
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|
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|
We have said that Mr. Longfellow's conception of the aims of poesy
|
|
is erroneous; and that thus, labouring at a disadvantage, he does
|
|
violent wrong to his own high powers; and now the question is, What
|
|
are his ideas of the aims of the Muse, as we gather these ideas from
|
|
the general tendency of his poems? It will be at once evident that,
|
|
imbued with the peculiar spirit of German song (a pure
|
|
conventionality), he regards the inculcation of a moral as
|
|
essential. Here we find it necessary to repeat that we have
|
|
reference only to the general tendency of his compositions; for
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there are some magnificent exceptions, where, as if by accident, he
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has permitted his genius to get the better of his conventional
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prejudice. But didacticism is the prevalent tone of his song. His
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invention, his imagery, his all, is made subservient to the
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elucidation of some one or more points (but rarely of more than one)
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which he looks upon as truth. And that this mode of procedure will
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find stern defenders should never excite surprise, so long as the
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world is full to overflowing with cant and conventicles. There are men
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who will scramble on all fours through the muddiest sloughs of vice to
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pick up a single apple of virtue. There are things called men who,
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so long as the sun rolls, will greet with snuffling huzzas every
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figure that takes upon itself the semblance of truth, even although
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the figure, in itself only a "stuffed Paddy," be as much out of
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place as a toga on the statue of Washington, or out of season as
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rabbits in the days of the dog-star.
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Now, with as deep a reverence for "the true" as ever inspired the
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bosom of mortal man, we would limit, in many respects, its modes of
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inculcation. We would limit, to enforce them. We would not render them
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impotent by dissipation. The demands of truth are severe. She has no
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sympathy with the myrtles. All that is indispensable in song is all
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with which she has nothing to do. To deck her in gay robes is to
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render her a harlot. It is but making her a flaunting paradox to
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wreathe her in gems and flowers. Even in stating this our present
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proposition, we verify our own words- we feel the necessity, in
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enforcing this truth, of descending from metaphor. Let us then be
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simple and distinct. To convey "the true" we are required to dismiss
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from the attention all inessentials. We must be perspicuous,
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precise, terse. We need concentration rather than expansion of mind.
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We must be calm, unimpassioned, unexcited- in a word, we must be in
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that peculiar mood which, as nearly as possible, is the exact converse
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of the poetical. He must be blind indeed who cannot perceive the
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radical and chasmal difference between the truthful and the poetical
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modes of inculcation. He must be grossly wedded to conventionalisms
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who, in spite of this difference, shall still attempt to reconcile the
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obstinate oils and waters of Poetry and Truth.
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Dividing the world of mind into its most obvious and immediately
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recognisable distinctions, we have the pure intellect, taste and the
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moral sense. We place taste between the intellect and the moral sense,
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because it is just this intermediate space which, in the mind, it
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occupies. It is the connecting link in the triple chain.
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It serves to sustain a mutual intelligence between the extremes.
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It appertains, in strict appreciation, to the former, but is
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distinguished from the latter by so faint a difference that
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Aristotle has not hesitated to class some of its operations among
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the Virtues themselves. But the offices of the trio are broadly
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marked. Just as conscience, or the moral sense, recognises duty;
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just as the intellect deals with truth; so is it the part of taste
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alone to inform us BEAUTY. And Poesy is the handmaiden but of Taste.
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Yet we would not be misunderstood. This handmaiden is not forbidden to
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moralise- in her own fashion. She is not forbidden to depict- but to
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reason and preach of virtue. As of this latter. conscience
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recognises the obligation, so intellect teaches the expediency,
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while taste contents herself with displaying the beauty; waging war
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with vice merely on the ground of its inconsistency with fitness,
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harmony, proportion- in a word with- 'to kalon.'
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An important condition of man's immortal nature is thus, plainly,
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the sense of the Beautiful. This it is which ministers to his
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delight in the manifold forms and colours and sounds and sentiments
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amid which he exists. And, just as the eyes of Amaryllis are
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repeated in the mirror, or the living lily in the lake, so is the mere
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|
record of these forms and colours and sounds and sentiments- so is
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their mere oral or written repetition a duplicate source of delight.
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But this repetition is not Poesy. He who shall merely sing with
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whatever rapture, in however harmonious strains, or with however vivid
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a truth of imitation, of the sights and sounds which greet him in
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common with all mankind- he, we say, has yet failed to prove his
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divine title. There is still a longing unsatisfied, which he has
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|
been impotent to fulfil. There is still a thirst unquenchable, which
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to allay he has shown us no crystal springs. This burning thirst
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|
belongs to the immortal essence of man's nature. It is equally a
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|
consequence and an indication of his perennial life. It is the
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|
desire of the moth for the star. It is not the mere appreciation of
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the beauty before us. It is a wild effort to reach the beauty above.
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It is a forethought of the loveliness to come. It is a passion to be
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satiated by no sublunary sights, or sounds, or sentiments, and the
|
|
soul thus athirst strives to allay its fever in futile efforts at
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|
creation. Inspired with a prescient ecstasy of the beauty beyond the
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|
grave, it struggles by multiform novelty of combination among the
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|
things and thoughts of Time, to anticipate some portion of that
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loveliness whose very elements, perhaps, appertain solely to Eternity,
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and the result of such effort, on the part of souls fittingly
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constituted, is alone what mankind have agreed to denominate Poetry.
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We say this with little fear of contradiction. Yet the spirit of our
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|
assertion must be more heeded than the letter. Mankind have seemed
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to define Poesy in a thousand, and in a thousand conflicting,
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definitions. But the war is one only of words. Induction is as well
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|
applicable to this subject as to the most palpable and utilitarian;
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|
and by its sober processes we find that, in respect to compositions
|
|
which have been really received as poems, the imaginative, or, more
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|
popularly, the creative portions alone have ensured them to be so
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|
received. Yet these works, on account of these portions, having once
|
|
been so received and so named, it has happened naturally and
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|
inevitably, that other portions totally unpoetic have not only come to
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|
be regarded by the popular voice as poetic, but have been made to
|
|
serve as false standards of perfection in the adjustment of other
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|
poetical claims. Whatever has been found in whatever has been received
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as a poem, has been blindly regarded as ex statu poetic. And this is a
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species of gross error which scarcely could have made its way into any
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|
less intangible topic. In fact that license which appertains to the
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Muse herself, it has been thought decorous, if not sagacious, to
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indulge in all examination of her character.
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Poesy is thus seen to be a response- unsatisfactory it is true-
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|
but still in some measure a response, to a natural and irrepressible
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|
demand. Man being what he is, the time could never have been in
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|
which poesy was not. Its first element is the thirst for supernal
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BEAUTY- a beauty which is not afforded the soul by any existing
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|
collocation of earth's forms- a beauty which, perhaps, no possible
|
|
combination of these forms would fully produce. Its second element
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|
is the attempt to satisfy this thirst by novel combinations among
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|
those forms of beauty which already exist- or by novel combinations of
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|
those combinations which our predecessors, toiling in chase of the
|
|
same phantom have already set in order. We thus clearly deduce the
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novelty, the originality, the invention, the imagination, or lastly
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|
the creation of BEAUTY (for the terms as here employed are
|
|
synonymous), as the essence of all Poesy. Nor is this idea so much
|
|
at variance with ordinary opinion as, at first sight, it may appear. A
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|
multitude of antique dogmas on this topic will be found when
|
|
divested of extrinsic speculation, to be easily resoluble into the
|
|
definition now proposed. We do nothing more than present tangibly
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|
the vague clouds of the world's idea. We recognize the idea itself
|
|
floating, unsettled, indefinite, in every attempt which has yet been
|
|
made to circumscribe the conception of "Poesy" in words. A striking
|
|
instance of this is observable in the fact that no definition exists
|
|
in which either the "beautiful," or some one of those qualities
|
|
which we have mentioned above designated synonymously with "creation,"
|
|
has not been pointed out as the chief attribute of the Muse.
|
|
"Invention," however, or "imagination," is by far more commonly
|
|
insisted upon. The word poiesis itself (creation) speaks volumes
|
|
upon this point. Neither will it be amiss here to mention Count
|
|
Bielfeld's definition of poetry as "L'art d'exprimer les pensees par
|
|
la fiction." With this definition (of which the philosophy is profound
|
|
to a certain extent) the German terms Dichtkunst, the art of
|
|
fiction, and Dichten, to feign, which are used for "poetry" and "to
|
|
make verses," are in full and remarkable accordance. It is,
|
|
nevertheless, in the combination of the two omniprevalent ideas that
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the novelty and, we believe, the force of our own proposition is to be
|
|
found.
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So far we have spoken of Poesy as of an abstraction alone. As
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|
such, it is obvious that it may be applicable in various moods. The
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|
sentiment may develop itself in Sculpture, in Painting, in Music, or
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|
otherwise. But our present business is with its development in
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|
words- that development to which, in practical acceptation, the
|
|
world has agreed to limit the term. And at this point there is one
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|
consideration which induces us to pause. We cannot make up our minds
|
|
to admit (as some have admitted) the inessentiality of rhythm. On
|
|
the contrary, the universality of its use in the earliest poetical
|
|
efforts of all mankind would be sufficient to assure us, not merely of
|
|
its congeniality with the Muse, or of its adaptation to her
|
|
purposes, but of its elementary and indispensable importance. But here
|
|
we must, perforce, content ourselves with mere suggestion; for this
|
|
topic is of a character which would lead us too far. We have already
|
|
spoken of Music as one of the moods of poetical development. It is
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|
in Music, perhaps, that the soul most nearly attains that end upon
|
|
which we have commented- the creation of supernal beauty. It may be,
|
|
indeed, that this august aim is here even partially or imperfectly
|
|
attained, in fact. The elements of that beauty which is felt in sound,
|
|
may be the mutual or common heritage of Earth and Heaven. In the
|
|
soul's struggles at combination it is thus not impossible that a
|
|
harp may strike notes not unfamiliar to the angels. And in this view
|
|
the wonder may well be less that all attempts at defining the
|
|
character or sentiment of the deeper musical impressions have been
|
|
found absolutely futile. Contenting ourselves, therefore, with the
|
|
firm conviction that music (in its modifications of rhythm and
|
|
rhyme) is of so vast a moment in Poesy as never to be neglected by him
|
|
who is truly poetical- is of so mighty a force in furthering the great
|
|
aim intended that he is mad who rejects its assistance- content with
|
|
this idea we shall not pause to maintain its absolute essentiality,
|
|
for the mere sake of rounding a definition. We will but add, at this
|
|
point, that the highest possible development of the Poetical Sentiment
|
|
is to be found in the union of song with music, in its popular
|
|
sense. The old Bards and Minnesingers possessed, in the fullest
|
|
perfection, the finest and truest elements of Poesy; and Thomas Moore,
|
|
singing his own ballads, is but putting the final touch to their
|
|
completion as poems.
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|
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|
To recapitulate, then, we would define in brief the Poetry of
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|
words as the Rhythmical Creation of Beauty. Beyond the limits of
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|
Beauty its province does not extend. Its sole arbiter is Taste. With
|
|
the Intellect or with the Conscience it has only collateral relations.
|
|
It has no dependence, unless incidentally, upon either Duty or
|
|
Truth. That our definition will necessarily exclude much of what,
|
|
through a supine toleration, has been hitherto ranked as poetical,
|
|
is a matter which affords us not even momentary concern. We address
|
|
but the thoughtful, and heed only their approval- with our own. If our
|
|
suggestions are truthful, then "after many days" shall they be
|
|
understood as truth, even though found in contradiction of all that
|
|
has been hitherto so understood. If false, shall we not be the first
|
|
to bid them die?
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We would reject, of course, all such matters as "Armstrong on
|
|
Health," a revolting production; Pope's "Essay on Man," which may well
|
|
be content with the title of an "Essay in Rhyme"; "Hudibras," and
|
|
other merely humorous pieces. We do not gainsay the peculiar merits of
|
|
either of these latter compositions- but deny them the position they
|
|
have held. In a notice of Brainard's Poems, we took occasion to show
|
|
that the common use of a certain instrument (rhythm) had tended,
|
|
more than aught else, to confound humorous verse with poetry. The
|
|
observation is now recalled to corroborate what we have just said in
|
|
respect to the vast effect or force of melody in itself- an effect
|
|
which could elevate into even momentary confusion with the highest
|
|
efforts of mind, compositions such as are the greater number of
|
|
satires or burlesques.
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|
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|
Of the poets who have appeared most fully instinct with the
|
|
principles now developed, we may mention Keats as the most remarkable.
|
|
He is the sole British poet who has never erred in his themes.
|
|
Beauty is always his aim.
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|
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|
We have thus shown our ground of objection to the general themes
|
|
of Professor Longfellow. In common with all who claim the sacred title
|
|
of poet, he should limit his endeavours to the creation of novel moods
|
|
of beauty, in form, in colour, in sound, in sentiment; for over all
|
|
this wide range has the poetry of words dominion. To what the world
|
|
terms prose may be safely and properly left all else. The artist who
|
|
doubts of his thesis, may always resolve his doubt by the single
|
|
question- "might not this matter be as well or better handled in
|
|
prose?" If it may, then is it no subject for the Muse. In the
|
|
general acceptation of the term Beauty we are content to rest, being
|
|
careful only to suggest that, in our peculiar views, it must be
|
|
understood as inclusive of the sublime.
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|
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|
Of the pieces which constitute the present volume there are not more
|
|
than one or two thoroughly fulfilling the idea above proposed;
|
|
although the volume as a whole is by no means so chargeable with
|
|
didacticism as Mr. Longfellow's previous book. We would mention as
|
|
poems nearly true, "The Village Blacksmith," "The Wreck of the
|
|
Hesperus," and especially "The Skeleton in Armor." In the first-
|
|
mentioned we have the beauty of simple-mindedness as a genuine thesis;
|
|
and this thesis is inimitably handled until the concluding stanza,
|
|
where the spirit of legitimate poesy is aggrieved in the pointed
|
|
antithetical deduction of a moral from what has gone before. In "The
|
|
Wreck of the Hesperus" we have the beauty of child- like confidence
|
|
and innocence, with that of the father's courage and affection. But,
|
|
with slight exception, those particulars of the storm here detailed
|
|
are not poetic subjects. Their thrilling horror belongs to prose, in
|
|
which it could be far more effectively discussed, as Professor
|
|
Longfellow may assure himself at any moment by experiment. There are
|
|
points of a tempest which afford the loftiest and truest poetical
|
|
themes- points in which pure beauty is found, or, better still, beauty
|
|
heightened into the sublime, by terror. But when we read, among
|
|
other similar things, that
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|
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The salt sea was frozen on her breast,
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|
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|
The salt tears in her eyes.
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|
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|
we feel, if not positive disgust, at least a chilling sense of the
|
|
inappropriate. In "The Skeleton in Armor" we find a pure and perfect
|
|
thesis artistically treated. We find the beauty of bold courage and
|
|
self-confidence, of love and maiden devotion, of reckless adventure,
|
|
and finally the life-contemning grief. Combined with all this, we have
|
|
numerous points of beauty apparently insulated, but all aiding the
|
|
main effect or impression. The heart is stirred, and the mind does not
|
|
lament its malinstruction. The metre is simple, sonorous,
|
|
well-balanced, and fully adapted to the subject. Upon the whole, there
|
|
are few truer poems than this. It has not one defect- an important
|
|
one. The prose remarks prefacing the narrative are really necessary.
|
|
But every work of art should contain within itself all that is
|
|
requisite for its own comprehension. And this remark is especially
|
|
true of the ballad. In poems of magnitude the mind of the reader is
|
|
not, at all times, enabled to include, in one comprehensive survey,
|
|
the proportions and proper adjustment of the whole. He is pleased,
|
|
if at all with particular passages; and the sum of his pleasure is
|
|
compounded of the sums of the pleasurable sentiments inspired by these
|
|
individual passages in the progress of perusal. But, in pieces of less
|
|
extent, the pleasure is unique, in the proper acceptation of this
|
|
term- the understanding is employed, without difficulty, in the
|
|
contemplation of the picture as a whole; and thus its effect will
|
|
depend, in great measure, upon the perfection of its finish, upon
|
|
the nice adaptation of its constituent parts, and especially, upon
|
|
what is rightly termed by Schlegel the unity or totality of
|
|
interest. But the practice of prefixing explanatory passages is
|
|
utterly at variance with such unity. By the prefix, we are either
|
|
put in possession of the subject of the poem, or some hint, historic
|
|
fact, or suggestion, is thereby afforded, not included in the body
|
|
of the piece, which, without the hint, is incomprehensible. In the
|
|
latter case, while perusing the poem, the reader must revert, in
|
|
mind at, least, to the prefix, for the necessary explanation. In the
|
|
former, the poem being a mere paraphrase of the prefix, the interest
|
|
is divided between the prefix and the paraphrase. In either instance
|
|
the totality of effect is destroyed.
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|
|
|
Of the other original poems in the volume before us there is none in
|
|
which the aim of instruction, or truth, has not been too obviously
|
|
substituted for the legitimate aim, beauty. We have heretofore taken
|
|
occasion to say that a didactic moral might be happily made the
|
|
under-current of a poetical theme, and we have treated this point at
|
|
length in a review of Moore's "Alciphron"; but the moral thus conveyed
|
|
is invariably an ill effect when obtruding beyond the upper-current of
|
|
the thesis itself. Perhaps the worst specimen of this obtrusion is
|
|
given us by our poet in "Blind Bartimeus" and the "Goblet of Life,"
|
|
where it will be observed that the sole interest of the
|
|
upper-current of meaning depends upon its relation or reference to the
|
|
under. What we read upon the surface would be vox et praeterea nihil
|
|
in default of the moral beneath. The Greek finales of "Blind
|
|
Bartimeus" are an affectation altogether inexcusable. What the
|
|
small, second-hand, Gibbonish pedantry of Byron introduced, is
|
|
unworthy the imitation of Longfellow.
|
|
|
|
Of the translations we scarcely think it necessary to speak at
|
|
all. We regret that our poet will persist in busying himself about
|
|
such matters. His time might be better employed in original
|
|
conception. Most of these versions are marked with the error upon
|
|
which we have commented. This error is, in fact, essentially Germanic.
|
|
"The Luck of Edenhall," however, is a truly beautiful poem; and we say
|
|
this with all that deference which the opinion of the "Democratic
|
|
Review" demands. This composition appears to us one of the very
|
|
finest. It has all the free, hearty, obvious movement of the true
|
|
ballad-legend. The greatest force of language is combined in it with
|
|
the richest imagination, acting in its most legitimate province.
|
|
Upon the whole, we prefer it even to the "Sword-Song" of Korner. The
|
|
pointed moral with which it terminates is so exceedingly natural- so
|
|
perfectly fluent from the incidents- that we have hardly heart to
|
|
pronounce it in ill-taste. We may observe of this ballad, in
|
|
conclusion, that its subject is more physical than is usual in
|
|
Germany. Its images are rich rather in physical than in moral
|
|
beauty. And this tendency in Song is the true one. It is chiefly, if
|
|
we are not mistaken- it is chiefly amid forms of physical loveliness
|
|
(we use the word forms in its widest sense as embracing
|
|
modifications of sound and colour) that the soul seeks the realisation
|
|
of its dreams of BEAUTY. It is to her demand in this sense especially,
|
|
that the poet, who is wise, will most frequently and most earnestly
|
|
respond.
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|
|
|
"The Children of the Lord's Supper" is, beyond doubt, a true and
|
|
most beautiful poem in great part, while, in some particulars, it is
|
|
too metaphysical to have any pretension to the name. We have already
|
|
objected, briefly, to its metre- the ordinary Latin or Greek
|
|
Hexameter-dactyls and spondees at random, with a spondee in
|
|
conclusion. We maintain that the hexameter can never be introduced
|
|
into our language, from the nature of that language itself. This
|
|
rhythm demands, for English ears, a preponderance of natural spondees.
|
|
Our tongue has few. Not only does the Latin and Greek, with the
|
|
Swedish, and some others, abound in them; but the Greek and Roman
|
|
ear had become reconciled (why or how is unknown) to the reception
|
|
of artificial spondees- that is to say, spondaic words formed partly
|
|
of one word and partly of another, or from an excised part of one
|
|
word. In short, the ancients were content to read as they scanned,
|
|
or nearly so. It may be safely prophesied that we shall never do this;
|
|
and thus we shall never admit English hexameters. The attempt to
|
|
introduce them, after the repeated failures of Sir Philip Sidney and
|
|
others, is perhaps somewhat discreditable to the scholarship of
|
|
Professor Longfellow. The "Democratic Review," in saying that he has
|
|
triumphed over difficulties in this rhythm, has been deceived, it is
|
|
evident, by the facility with which some of these verses may be
|
|
read. In glancing over the poem, we do not observe a single verse
|
|
which can be read, to English ears, as a Greek hexameter. There are
|
|
many, however, which can be well read as mere English dactylic verses;
|
|
such, for example, as the well-known lines of Byron, commencing
|
|
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|
Know ye the / land where the / cypress and / myrtle.
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|
|
|
These lines (although full of irregularities) are, in their
|
|
perfection, formed of three dactyls and a caesura- just as if we
|
|
should cut short the initial verse of the Bucolics thus-
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|
|
|
Tityre / tu patu / lae recu / bans-
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|
|
The "myrtal," at the close of Byron's line, is a double rhyme, and
|
|
must be understood as one syllable.
|
|
|
|
Now a great number, of Professor Longfellow's hexameters are
|
|
merely these dactylic lines, continued for two feet. For example-
|
|
|
|
Whispered the / race of the / flowers and / merry on / balancing /
|
|
branches.
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|
|
|
In this example, also, "branches," which is a double ending, must be
|
|
regarded as the caesura, or one syllable, of which alone it has the
|
|
force.
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|
|
|
As we have already alluded, in one or two regards, to a notice of
|
|
these poems which appeared in the "Democratic Review," we may as
|
|
well here proceed with some few further comments upon the article in
|
|
question- with whose general tenor we are happy to agree.
|
|
|
|
The Review speaks of "Maidenhood" as a poem, "not to be understood
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but at the expense of more time and trouble than a song can justly
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claim." We are scarcely less surprised at this opinion from Mr.
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Langtree than we were at the condemnation of "The Luck of Edenhall."
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"Maidenhood" is faulty, it appears to us, only on the score of its
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theme, which is somewhat didactic. Its meaning seems simplicity
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itself. A maiden on the verge of womanhood hesitating to enjoy life
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(for which she has a strong appetite) through a false idea of duty, is
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bidden to fear nothing, having purity of heart as her lion of Una.
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What Mr. Langtree styles "an unfortunate peculiarity" in Mr.
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Longfellow, resulting from "adherence to a false system," has really
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been always regarded by us as one of his idiosyncratic merits. "In
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each poem," says the critic, "he has but one idea, which, in the
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progress of his song, is gradually unfolded, and at last reaches its
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full development in the concluding lines: this singleness of thought
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might lead a harsh critic to suspect intellectual barrenness." It
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leads us, individually, only to a full sense of the artistical power
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and knowledge of the poet. We confess that now, for the first time, we
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hear unity of conception objected to as a defect. But Mr. Langtree
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seems to have fallen into the singular error of supposing the poet
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to have absolutely but one idea in each of his ballads. Yet how "one
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idea" can be "gradually unfolded" without other ideas is, to us, a
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mystery of mysteries. Mr. Longfellow, very properly, has but one
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leading idea which forms the basis of his poem; but to the aid and
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development of this one there are innumerable others, of which the
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rare excellence is that all are in keeping, that none could be well
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omitted, that each tends to the one general effect. It is
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unnecessary to say another word upon this topic.
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In speaking of "Excelsior," Mr. Langtree (are we wrong in
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attributing the notice to his very forcible pen?) seems to labour
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under some similar misconception. "It carries along with it," says he,
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"a false moral which greatly diminishes its merit in our eyes. The
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great merit of a picture, whether made with the pencil or pen, is
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its truth; and this merit does not belong to Mr. Longfellow's
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sketch. Men of genius may, and probably do, meet with greater
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difficulties in their struggles with the world than their fellow men
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who are less highly gifted; but their power of overcoming obstacles is
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proportionately greater, and the result of their laborious suffering
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is not death but immortality."
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That the chief merit of a picture is its truth, is an assertion
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deplorably erroneous. Even in Painting, which is, more essentially
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than Poetry, a mimetic art, the proposition cannot be sustained. Truth
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is not even the aim. Indeed it is curious to observe how very slight a
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degree of truth is sufficient to satisfy the mind, which acquiesces in
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the absence of numerous essentials in the thing depicted. An outline
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frequently stirs the spirit more pleasantly than the most elaborate
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picture. We need only refer to the compositions of Flaxman and of
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Retzsch. Here all details are omitted- nothing can be farther from
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truth. Without even colour the most thrilling effects are produced. In
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statues we are rather pleased than disgusted with the want of the
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eyeball. The hair of the Venus de Medicis was gilded. Truth indeed!
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The grapes of Zeuxis as well as the curtain of Parrhasius were
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received as indisputable evidence of the truthful ability of these
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artists- but they were not even classed among their pictures. If truth
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is the highest aim of either Painting or Poesy, then Jan Steen was a
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greater artist than Angelo, and Crabbe is a nobler poet than Milton.
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But we have not quoted the observation of Mr. Langtree to deny its
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philosophy; our design was simply to show that he has misunderstood
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the poet. "Excelsior" has not even a remote tendency to the
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interpretation assigned it by the critic. It depicts the earnest
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upward impulse of the soul- an impulse not to be subdued even in
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Death. Despising danger, resisting pleasure, the youth, bearing the
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banner inscribed "Excelsior!" (higher stilll) struggles through all
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difficulties to an Alpine summit. Warned to be content with the
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elevation attained, his cry is still "Excelsior!" and even in
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falling dead on the highest pinnacle, his cry is still "Excelsior!"
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There is yet an immortal height to be surmounted- an ascent in
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Eternity. The poet holds in view the idea of never-ending progress.
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That he is misunderstood is rather the misfortune of Mr. Langtree tree
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the fault of Mr. Longfellow. There is an old adage about the
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difficulty of one's furnishing an auditor both with matter to be
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comprehended and brains for its comprehension.
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HAWTHORNE'S TWICE-TOLD TALES
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By Nathaniel Hawthorne. James Munroe & Co.: Boston
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WE HAVE always regarded the Tale (using this word in its popular
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acceptation) as affording the best prose opportunity for display of
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the highest talent. It has peculiar advantages which the novel does
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not admit. It is, of course, a far finer field than the essay. It
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has even points of superiority over the poem. An accident has deprived
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us, this month, of our customary space for review, and thus nipped
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in the bud a design long cherished of treating this subject in detail;
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taking Mr. Hawthorne's volumes as a text. In May we shall endeavor
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to carry out our intention. At present we are forced to be brief.
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With rare exception- in the case of Mr. Irving's "Tales of a
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Traveller" and a few other works of a like cast- we have had no
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American tales of high merit. We have had no skilful compositions-
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nothing which could bear examination as works of art. Of twaddle
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called tale- writing we have had, perhaps more than enough. We have
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had a superabundance of the Rosa-Matilda effusions- gilt-edged paper
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all couleur de rose: a full allowance of cut-and-thrust blue-blazing
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melodramaticisms; a nauseating surfeit of low miniature copying of low
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life, much in the manner, and with about half the merit, of the
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Dutch herrings and decayed cheeses of Van Tuyssel- of all this, eheu
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jam satis!
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Mr. Hawthorne's volumes appear misnamed to us in two respects. In
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the first place they should not have been called "Twice-Told Tales"-
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for this is a title which will not bear repetition. If in the first
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collected edition they were twice-told, of course now they are
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thrice-told.- May we live to hear them told a hundred times. In the
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second place, these compositions are by no means all "Tales." The most
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of them are essays properly so called. It would have been wise in
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their author to have modified his title, so as to have had reference
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to all included. This point could have been easily arranged.
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But under whatever titular blunders we receive this book, it is most
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cordially welcome. We have seen no prose composition by any American
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which can compare with some of these articles in the higher merits, or
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indeed in the lower; while there is not single piece which would do
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dishonor to the best of the British essayists.
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"The Rill from the Town Pump" which, through the ad captandum nature
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of its title, has attracted more of the public notice than any other
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of Mr. Hawthorne's compositions, is perhaps, the least meritorious.
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Among his best we may briefly mention "The Hollow of the Three
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Hills" "The Minister's Black Veil"; "Wakefield"; "Mr. Higginbotham's
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Catastrophe"; "Fancy's Show-Box"; "Dr. Heidegger's Experiment"; "David
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Swan"; "The Wedding Knell"; and "The White Old Maid." It is remarkable
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that all of these, with one exception, are from the first volume.
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The style of Mr. Hawthorne is purity itself. His tone is
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singularly effective- wild, plaintive, thoughtful, and in full
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accordance with his themes. We have only to object that there is
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insufficient diversity in these themes themselves, or rather in
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their character. His originality both of incident and reflection is
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very remarkable; and this trait alone would insure him at least our
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warmest regard and commendation. We speak here chiefly of the tales;
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the essays are not so markedly novel. Upon the whole we look upon
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him as one of the few men of indisputable genius to whom our country
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has as yet given birth. As such, it will be our delight to do him
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honor; and lest, in these undigested and cursory remarks, without
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proof and without explanation, we should appear to do him more honor
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than is his due, we postpone all farther comment until a more
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favorable opportunity.
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We said a few hurried words about Mr. Hawthorne in our last
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number, with the design of speaking more fully in the present. We
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are still, however, pressed for room, and must necessarily discuss his
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volumes more briefly and more at random than their high merits
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deserve.
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The book professes to be a collection of tales, yet is, in two
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respects, misnamed. These pieces are now in their third republication,
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and, of course, are thrice-told. Moreover, they are by no means all
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tales, either in the ordinary or in the legitimate understanding of
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the term. Many of them are pure essays; for example, "Sights from a
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Steeple," "Sunday at Home," "Little Annies Ramble," "A Rill from the
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Town Pump," "The Toll-Gatherer's Day," "The Haunted Mind," "The Sister
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Sister Years," "Snow-Flakes," "Night Sketches," and "Foot-Prints on
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the Sea-Shore." We mention these matters chiefly on account of their
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discrepancy with that marked precision and finish by which the body of
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the work is distinguished.
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Of the Essays just named, we must be content to speak in brief. They
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are each and all beautiful, without being characterized by the
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polish and adaptation so visible in the tales proper. A painter
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would at once note their leading or predominant feature, and style
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it repose. There is no attempt at effect. All is quiet, thoughtful,
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subdued. Yet this respose may exist simultaneously with high
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originality of thought; and Mr. Hawthorne has demonstrated the fact.
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At every turn we meet with novel combinations; yet these
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combinations never surpass the limits of the quiet. We are soothed
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as we read; and withal is a calm astonishment that ideas so apparently
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obvious have never occurred or been presented to us before. Herein our
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author differs materially from Lamb or Hunt or Hazlitt- who, with
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vivid originality of manner and expression, have less of the true
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novelty of thought than is generally supposed, and whose
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originality, at best, has an uneasy and meretricious quaintness,
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replete with startling effects unfounded in nature, and inducing
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trains of reflection which lead to no satisfactory result. The
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Essays of Hawthorne have much of the character of Irving, with more of
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originality, and less of finish; while, compared with the Spectator,
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they have a vast superiority at all points. The Spectator, Mr. Irving,
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and Mr. Hawthorne have in common that tranquil and subdued manner
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which we have chosen to denominate repose; but in the case of the
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two former, this repose is attained rather by the absence of novel
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combination, or of originality, than otherwise, and consists chiefly
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in the calm, quiet, unostentatious expression of commonplace thoughts,
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in an unambitious unadulterated Saxon. In them, by strong effort, we
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are made to conceive the absence of all. In the essays before us the
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absence of effort is too obvious to be mistaken, and a strong
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under-current of suggestion runs continuously beneath the upper stream
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of the tranquil thesis. In short, these effusions of Mr. Hawthorne are
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the product of a truly imaginative intellect, restrained, and in
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some measure repressed, by fastidiousness of taste, by
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constitutional melancholy and by indolence.
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But it is of his tales that we desire principally to speak. The tale
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proper, in our opinion, affords unquestionably the fairest field for
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the exercise of the loftiest talent, which can be afforded by the wide
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domains of mere prose. Were we bidden to say how the highest genius
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could be most advantageously employed for the best display of its
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|
own powers, we should answer, without hesitation- in the composition
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|
of a rhymed poem, not to exceed in length what might be perused in
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|
an hour. Within this limit alone can the highest order of true
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|
poetry exist. We need only here say, upon this topic, that, in
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|
almost all classes of composition, the unity of effect or impression
|
|
is a point of the greatest importance. It is clear, moreover, that
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|
this unity cannot be thoroughly preserved in productions whose perusal
|
|
cannot be completed at one sitting. We may continue the reading of a
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|
prose composition, from the very nature of prose itself, much longer
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|
than we can persevere, to any good purpose, in the perusal of a
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|
poem. This latter, if truly fulfilling the demands of the poetic
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|
sentiment, induces an exaltation of the soul which cannot be long
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|
sustained. All high excitements are necessarily transient. Thus a long
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|
poem is a paradox And, without unity of impression, the deepest
|
|
effects cannot be brought about. Epics were the offspring of an
|
|
imperfect sense of Art, and their reign is no more. A poem too brief
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|
may produce a vivid, but never an intense or enduring impression.
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|
Without a certain continuity of effort- without a certain duration
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|
or repetition of purpose- the soul is never deeply moved. There must
|
|
be the dropping of the water upon the rock. De Beranger has wrought
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|
brilliant things- pungent and spirit-stirring- but, like all immassive
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|
bodies, they lack momentum, and thus fail to satisfy the Poetic
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|
Sentiment. They sparkle and excite, but, from want of continuity, fail
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|
deeply to impress. Extreme brevity will degenerate into epigrammatism;
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|
but the sin of extreme length is even more unpardonable. In medio
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tutissimus ibis.
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Were we called upon, however, to designate that class of composition
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|
which, next to such a poem as we have suggested, should best fulfil
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|
the demands of high genius- should offer it the most advantageous
|
|
field of exertion- we should unhesitatingly speak of the prose tale,
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|
as Mr. Hawthorne has here exemplified it. We allude to the short prose
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|
narrative, requiring from a half-hour to one or two hours in its
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|
perusal. The ordinary novel is objectionable, from its length, for
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|
reasons already stated in substance. As it cannot be read at one
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|
sitting, it deprives itself, of course, of the immense force derivable
|
|
from totality. Worldly interests intervening during the pauses of
|
|
perusal, modify, annul, or counteract, in a greater or less degree,
|
|
the impressions of the book. But simple cessation in reading, would,
|
|
of itself, be sufficient to destroy the true unity. In the brief tale,
|
|
however, the author is enabled to carry out the fulness of his
|
|
intention, be it what it may. During the hour of perusal the soul of
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|
the reader is at the writer's control. There are no external or
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|
extrinsic influences- resulting from weariness or interruption.
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A skilful literary artist has constructed a tale. If wise, he has
|
|
not fashioned his thoughts to accommodate his incidents; but having
|
|
conceived, with deliberate care, a certain unique or single effect
|
|
to be wrought out, he then invents such incidents- he then combines
|
|
such events as may best aid him in establishing this preconceived
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|
effect. If his very initial sentence tend not to the out-bringing of
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|
this effect, then he has failed in his first step. In the whole
|
|
composition there should be no word written, of which the tendency,
|
|
direct or indirect, is not to the one pre-established design. And by
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|
such means, with such care and skill, a picture is at length painted
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|
which leaves in the mind of him who contemplates it with a kindred
|
|
art, a sense of the fullest satisfaction. The idea of the tale has
|
|
been presented unblemished, because undisturbed; and this is an end
|
|
unattainable by the novel. Undue brevity is just as exceptionable here
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|
as in the poem; but undue length is yet more to be avoided.
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We have said that the tale has a point of superiority even over
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the poem. In fact, while the rhythm of this latter is an essential aid
|
|
in the development of the poem's highest idea- the idea of the
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|
Beautiful- the artificialities of this rhythm are an inseparable bar
|
|
to the development of all points of thought or expression which have
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|
their basis in Truth. But Truth is often, and in very great degree,
|
|
the aim of the tale. Some of the finest tales are tales of
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|
ratiocination. Thus the field of this species of composition, if not
|
|
in so elevated a region on the mountain of Mind, is a table- land of
|
|
far vaster extent than the domain of the mere poem. Its products are
|
|
never so rich, but infinitely more numerous, and more appreciable by
|
|
the mass of mankind. The writer of the prose tale, in short, may bring
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|
to his theme a vast variety of modes or inflections of thought and
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|
expression- (the ratiocinative, for example, the sarcastic or the
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|
humorous) which are not only antagonistical to the nature of the poem,
|
|
but absolutely forbidden by one of its most peculiar and indispensable
|
|
adjuncts; we allude, of course, to rhythm. It may be added, here,
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|
par parenthese, that the author who aims at the purely beautiful in
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|
a prose tale is laboring at great disadvantage. For Beauty can be
|
|
better treated in the poem. Not so with terror, or passion, or horror,
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|
or a multitude of such other points. And here it will be seen how full
|
|
of prejudice are the usual animadversions against those tales of
|
|
effect, many fine examples of which were found in the earlier
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|
numbers of Blackwood. The impressions produced were wrought in a
|
|
legitimate sphere of action, and constituted a legitimate although
|
|
sometimes an exaggerated interest. They were relished by every man
|
|
of genius: although there were found many men of genius who
|
|
condemned them without just ground. The true critic will but demand
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|
that that the design intended be accomplished, to the fullest
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|
extent, by the means most advantageously applicable.
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We have very few American tales of real merit- we may say, indeed,
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|
none, with the exception of "The Tales of a Traveller" of Washington
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|
Irving, and these "Twice-Told Tales" of Mr. Hawthorne. Some of the
|
|
pieces of Mr. John Neal abound in vigor and originality; but in
|
|
general his compositions of this class are excessively diffuse,
|
|
extravagant, and indicative of an imperfect sentiment of Art. Articles
|
|
at random are, now and then, met with in our periodicals which might
|
|
be advantageously compared with the best effusions of the British
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|
Magazines; but, upon the whole, we are far behind our progenitors in
|
|
this department of literature.
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Of Mr. Hawthorne's Tales we would say, emphatically, that they
|
|
belong to the highest region of Art- and Art subservient to genius
|
|
of a very lofty order. We had supposed, with good reason for so
|
|
supposing, that he had been thrust into his present position by one of
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|
the impudent cliques which beset our literature, and whose pretensions
|
|
it is our full purpose to expose at the earliest opportunity, but we
|
|
have been most agreeably mistaken. We know of few compositions which
|
|
the critic can more honestly commend than these "Twice-Told Tales." As
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|
Americans, we feel proud of the book.
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Mr. Hawthornes distinctive trait is invention, creation,
|
|
imagination, originality- a trait which, in the literature of fiction,
|
|
is positively worth all the rest. But the nature of originality, so
|
|
far as regards its manifestation in letters, is but imperfectly
|
|
understood. The inventive or original mind as frequently displays
|
|
itself in novelty of tone as in novelty of matter. Mr. Hawthorne is
|
|
original at all points.
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It would be a matter of some difficulty to designate the best of
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|
these tales; we repeat that, without exception, they are beautiful.
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|
"Wakefield" is remarkable for the skill with which an old idea- a
|
|
well-known incident- is worked up or discussed. A man of whims
|
|
conceives the purpose of quitting his wife and residing incognito, for
|
|
twenty years, in her immediate neighborhood. Something of this kind
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|
actually happened in London. The force of Mr. Hawthornes tale lies
|
|
in the analysis of the motives which must or might have impelled the
|
|
husband to such folly, in the first instance, with the possible causes
|
|
of his perseverance. Upon this thesis a sketch of singular power has
|
|
been constructed.
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"The Wedding Knell" is full of the boldest imagination- an
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|
imagination fully controlled by taste. The most captious critic
|
|
could find no flaw in this production.
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|
"The Minister's Black Veil" is a masterly composition of which the
|
|
sole defect is that to the rabble its exquisite skill will be caviare.
|
|
The obvious meaning of this article will be found to smother its
|
|
insinuated one. The moral put into the mouth of the dying minister
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|
will be supposed to convey the true import of the narrative, and
|
|
that a crime of dark dye, (having reference to the "young lady") has
|
|
been committed, is a point which only minds congenial with that of the
|
|
author will perceive.
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"Mr. Higginbotham's Catastrophe" is vividly original and managed
|
|
most dexterously.
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"Dr. Heidegger's Experiment" is exceedingly well imagined, and
|
|
executed, with surpassing ability. The artist breathes in every line
|
|
of it.
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"The White Old Maid" is objectionable, even more than the
|
|
"Minister's Black Veil," on the score of its mysticism. Even with
|
|
the thoughtful and analytic, there will be much trouble in penetrating
|
|
its entire import.
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"The Hollow of the Three Hills" we would quote in full, had we
|
|
space;- not as evincing higher talent than any of the other pieces,
|
|
but as affording an excellent example of the author's peculiar
|
|
ability. The subject is commonplace. A witch, subjects the Distant and
|
|
the Past to the view of a mourner. It has been the fashion to
|
|
describe, in such cases, a mirror in which the images of the absent
|
|
appear, or a cloud of smoke is made to arise, and thence the figures
|
|
are gradually unfolded. Mr. Hawthorne has wonderfully heightened his
|
|
effect by making the ear, in place of the eye, the medium by which the
|
|
fantasy is conveyed. The head of the mourner is enveloped in the cloak
|
|
of the witch, and within its magic, folds there arise sounds which
|
|
have an all-sufficient intelligence. Throughout this article also, the
|
|
artist is conspicuous- not more in positive than in negative merits.
|
|
Not only is all done that should be done, but (what perhaps is an
|
|
end with more difficulty attained) there is nothing done which
|
|
should not be. Every word tells, and there is not a word which does
|
|
not tell.
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|
In "Howes Masquerade" we observe something which resembles a
|
|
plagiarism- but which may be a very flattering coincidence of thought.
|
|
We quote the passage in question.
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"With a dark flush of wrath upon his brow they saw the general
|
|
draw his sword and advance to meet the figure in the cloak before
|
|
the latter had stepped one pace upon the floor.
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"'Villain, unmuffle yourself,' cried he, 'you pass no further!"
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"The figure without blanching a hair's breadth from the sword
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which was pointed at his breast, made a solemn pause, and lowered
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the cape of the cloak from his face, yet not sufficiently for the
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spectators to catch a glimpse of it. But Sir William Howe had
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evidently seen enough. The sternness of his countenance gave place
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to a look of wild amazement, if not horror, while he recoiled
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several steps from the figure, and let fall his sword upon the floor."
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The idea here is, that the figure in the cloak is the phantom or
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reduplication of Sir William Howe, but in an article called "William
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Wilson," one of the "Tales of the Grotesque and Arabesque," we have
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not only the same idea, but the same idea similarly presented in
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several respects. We quote two paragraphs, which our readers may
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compare with what has been already given.
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"The brief moment in which I averted my eyes had been sufficient
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to produce, apparently, a material change in the arrangement at the
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upper or farther end of the room. A large mirror, it appeared to me,
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now stood where none had been perceptible before: and as I stepped
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up to it in extremity of terror, mine own image, but with features all
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pale and dabbled in blood, advanced with a feeble and tottering gait
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to meet me.
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"Thus it appeared I say, but was not. It was Wilson, who then
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stood before me in the agonies of dissolution. Not a line in all the
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marked and singular lineaments of that face which was not even
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identically mine own. His mask and cloak lay where he had thrown them,
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upon the floor."
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Here it will be observed, not only are the two general conceptions
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identical but there are various points of similarity. In each case the
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figure seen is the wraith or duplication of the beholder. In each case
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the scene is a masquerade. In each case the figure is cloaked. In
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each, there is a quarrel- that is to say, angry words pass between the
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parties. In each the beholder is enraged. In each the cloak and
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sword fall upon the floor. The "villain, unmuffle yourself," of Mr. H.
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is precisely paralleled by a passage of "William Wilson."
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In the way of objection we have scarcely a word to say of these
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tales. There is, perhaps, a somewhat too general or prevalent tone-
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a tone of melancholy and mysticism. The subjects are insufficiently
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varied. There is not so much of versatility evinced as we might well
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be warranted in expecting from the high powers of Mr. Hawthorne. But
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beyond these trivial exceptions we have really none to make. The style
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is purity itself. Force abounds. High imagination gleams from every
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page. Mr. Hawthorne is a man of the truest genius. We only regret that
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the limits of our Magazine will not permit us to pay him that full
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tribute of commendation, which, under other circumstances, we should
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be so eager to pay.
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THE AMERICAN DRAMA
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A BIOGRAPHIST of Berryer calls him "l'homme qui, dans ses
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description, demande le plus grande quantite possible d'
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antithese,"- but that ever-recurring topic, the decline of the
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drama, seems to have consumed of late more of the material in question
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than would have sufficed for a dozen prime ministers- even admitting
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them to be French. Every trick of thought and every harlequinade of
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phrase have been put in operation for the purpose "de nier ce qui est,
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et d'expliquer ce qui n'est pas."
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Ce qui n'est pas:- for the drama has not declined. The facts and the
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philosophy of the case seem to be these. The great opponent to
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Progress is Conservatism. In other words- the great adversary of
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Invention is Imitation: the propositions are in spirit identical. Just
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as an art is imitative, is it stationary. The most imitative arts
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are the most prone to repose and the converse. Upon the utilitarian-
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upon the business arts, where Necessity impels, Invention, Necessity's
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well-understood offspring, is ever in attendance. And the less we
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see of the mother the less we behold of the child. No one complains of
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the decline of the art of Engineering. Here the Reason, which never
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retrogrades or reposes, is called into play. But let us glance at
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Sculpture. We are not worse here, than the ancients, let pedantry
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|
say what it may (the Venus of Canova is worth, at any time, two of
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that of Cleomenes), but it is equally certain that we have made, in
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general, no advances; and Sculpture, properly considered, is perhaps
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the most imitative of all arts which have a right to the title of
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Art at all. Looking next at Painting, we find that we have to boast of
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|
progress only in the ratio of the inferior imitativeness of
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Painting, when compared with Sculpture. As far indeed as we have any
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means of judging, our improvement has been exceedingly little, and did
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we know anything of ancient Art in this department, we might be
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astonished at discovering that we had advanced even far less than we
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suppose. As regards Architecture, whatever progress we have made has
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been precisely in those particulars which have no reference to
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imitation:- that is to say, we have improved the utilitarian and not
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the ornamental provinces of the art. Where Reason predominated, we
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advanced; where mere Feeling or Taste was the guide, we remained as we
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were.
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Coming to the Drama, we shall see that in its mechanisms we have
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made progress, while in its spirituality we have done little or
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|
nothing for centuries certainly- and, perhaps, little or nothing for
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thousands of years. And this is because what we term the
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spirituality of the drama is precisely its imitative portion- is
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exactly that portion which distinguishes it as one of the principal of
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the imitative arts.
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Sculptors, painters, dramatists, are, from the very nature of
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their material- their spiritual material-imitators-conservatists-prone
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to repose in old Feeling and in antique Taste. For this reason- and
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for this reason only- the arts of Sculpture, Painting, and the Drama
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have not advanced- or have advanced feebly, and inversely in the ratio
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of their imitativeness.
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But it by no means follows that either has declined. All seem to
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have declined, because they have remained stationary while the
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multitudinous other arts (of reason) have flitted so rapidly by
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them. In the same manner the traveller by railroad can imagine that
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the trees by the wayside are retrograding. The trees in this case
|
|
are absolutely stationary but the Drama has not been altogether so,
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|
although its progress has been so slight as not to interfere with
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the general effect- that of seeming retrogradation or decline.
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This seeming retrogradation, however, is to all practical intents an
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|
absolute one. Whether the Drama has declined, or whether it has merely
|
|
remained stationary, is a point of no importance, so far as concerns
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the public encouragement of the Drama. It is unsupported, in either
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case, because it does not deserve support.
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But if this stagnation, or deterioration, grows out of the very
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idiosyncracy of the drama itself, as one of the principal of the
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imitative arts, how is it possible that a remedy shall be applied-
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since it is clearly impossible to alter the nature of the art, and yet
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leave it the art which it now is?
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We have already spoken of the improvements effected in Architecture,
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in all its utilitarian departments, and in the Drama, at all the
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|
points of its mechanism. "Wherever Reason predominates, we advance;
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where mere Feeling or Taste is the guide, we remain as we are." We
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wish now to suggest that, by the engrafting of Reason upon Feeling and
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Taste, we shall be able, and thus alone shall be able, to force the
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modern drama into the production of any profitable fruit.
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At present, what is it we do? We are content if, with Feeling and
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|
Taste, a dramatist does as other dramatists have done. The most
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successful of the more immediately modern playwrights has been
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|
Sheridan Knowles, and to play Sheridan Knowles seems to be the highest
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ambition of our writers for the stage. Now the author of "The
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|
Hunchback" possesses what we are weak enough to term the true
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|
"dramatic feeling," and this true dramatic feeling he has manifested
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|
in the most preposterous series of imitations of the Elizabethan drama
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|
by which ever mankind were insulted and begulled. Not only did he
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adhere to the old plots, the old characters, the old stage
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|
conventionalities throughout; but he went even so far as to persist in
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|
the obsolete phraseologies of the Elizabethan period- and, just in
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|
proportion to his obstinacy and absurdity at all points, did we
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|
pretend to like him the better, and pretend to consider him a great
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dramatist.
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Pretend- for every particle of it was pretence. Never was enthusiasm
|
|
more utterly false than that which so many "respectable audiences"
|
|
endeavoured to get up for these plays- endeavoured to get up, first,
|
|
because there was a general desire to see the drama revive, and
|
|
secondly, because we had been all along entertaining the fancy that
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"the decline of the drama" meant little, if anything, else than its
|
|
deviation from the Elizabethan routine- and that, consequently, the
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|
return to the Elizabethan routine was, and of necessity must be, the
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revival of the drama.
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But if the principles we have been at some trouble in explaining are
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true- and most profoundly do we feel them to be so- if the spirit of
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|
imitation is, in fact, the real source, of the drama's stagnation- and
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|
if it is so because of the tendency in in all imitation to render
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Reason subservient to Feeling and to Taste it is clear that only by
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deliberate counteracting of the spirit, and of the tendency of the
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spirit, we can hope to succeed in the drama's revival.
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The first thing necessary is to burn or bury the "old models," and
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|
to forget, as quickly as possible, that ever a play has been penned.
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|
The second thing is to consider de novo what are the capabilities of
|
|
the drama- not merely what hitherto have been its conventional
|
|
purposes. The third and last point has reference to the composition of
|
|
a play (showing to the fullest extent these capabilities) conceived
|
|
and constructed with Feeling and with Taste, but with Feeling and
|
|
Taste guided and controlled in every particular by the details of
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|
Reason- of Common Sense- in a word, of a Natural Art.
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It is obvious, in the meantime, that towards the good end in view
|
|
much may be effected by discriminative criticism on what has already
|
|
been done. The field, thus stated, is, of course, practically
|
|
illimitable- and to Americans the American drama is the special
|
|
point of interest. We propose, therefore, in a series of papers, to
|
|
take a somewhat deliberate survey of some few of the most noticeable
|
|
American plays. We shall do this without reference either to the
|
|
date of the composition or its adaptation for the closet or the stage.
|
|
We shall speak with absolute frankness both of merits and defects- our
|
|
principal object being understood not as that of mere commentary on
|
|
the individual play- but on the drama in general, and on the
|
|
American drama in especial, of which each individual play is a
|
|
constituent part. We will commence at once with
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TORTESA, THE USURER
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This is the third dramatic attempt of Mr. Willis, and may be
|
|
regarded as particularly successful, since it has received, both on
|
|
the stage and in the closet, no stinted measure of commendation.
|
|
This success, as well as the high reputation of the author, will
|
|
justify us in a more extended notice of the play than might, under
|
|
other circumstances, be desirable.
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The story runs thus:- Tortesa, a usurer of Florence, and whose
|
|
character is a mingled web of good and evil feelings, gets into his
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|
possession the palace and lands of a certain Count Falcone. The usurer
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|
would wed the daughter (Isabella) of Valcone, not through love, but in
|
|
his own words,
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"To please a devil that inhabits him-"
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|
in fact, to mortify the pride of the nobility, and avenge himself of
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|
their scorn. He therefore bargains with Falcone [a narrow-souled
|
|
villain] for the hand of Isabella. The deed of the Falcone property is
|
|
restored to the Count upon an agreement that the lady shall marry
|
|
the usurer- this contract being invalid should Falcone change his mind
|
|
in regard to the marriage, or should the maiden demur- but valid
|
|
should the wedding be prevented through any fault of Tortesa, or
|
|
through any accident not springing from the will of the father or
|
|
child. The first Scene makes us aware of this bargain, and
|
|
introduces us to Zippa, a glover's daughter, who resolves, with a view
|
|
of befriending Isabella, to feign a love for Tortesa [which, in fact
|
|
she partially feels], hoping thus to break off the match.
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The second Scene makes us acquainted with a young painter
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(Angelo), poor, but of high talents and ambition, and with his servant
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|
(Tomaso), an old bottle-loving rascal, entertaining no very exalted
|
|
opinion of his master's abilities. Tomaso does some injury to a
|
|
picture, and Angelo is about to run him through the body when he is
|
|
interrupted by a sudden visit from the Duke of Florence, attended by
|
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Falcone. The Duke is enraged at the murderous attempt, but admires the
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|
paintings in the studio. Finding that the rage of the great man will
|
|
prevent his patronage if he knows the aggressor as the artist,
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Angelo passes off Tomaso as himself (Angelo), making an exchange of
|
|
names. This is a point of some importance, as it introduces the true
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Angelo to a job which he has long coveted- the painting of the
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portrait of Isabella, of whose beauty he had become enamoured
|
|
through report. The Duke wishes the portrait painted. Falcone,
|
|
however, on account of a promise to Tortesa, would have objected to
|
|
admit to his daughter's presence the handsome Angelo, but in regard to
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Tomaso has no scruple. Supposing Tomaso to be Angelo and the artist,
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|
the Count writes a note to Isabella, requiring her "to admit the
|
|
painter Angelo." The real Angelo is thus admitted. He and the lady
|
|
love at first sight (much in the manner of Romeo and Juliet), each
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|
ignorant of the other's attachment.
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The third Scene of the second Act is occupied with a conversation
|
|
between Falcone and Tortesa, during which a letter arrives from the
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|
Duke, who, having heard of the intended sacrifice of Isabella,
|
|
offers to redeem the Count's lands and palace, and desires him to
|
|
preserve his daughter for a certain Count Julian. But Isabella,-
|
|
who, before seeing Angelo, had been willing to sacrifice herself for
|
|
her father's sake, and who, since seeing him, had entertained hopes of
|
|
escaping the hateful match through means of a plot entered into by
|
|
herself and Zippa-Isabella, we say, is now in despair. To gain time,
|
|
she at once feigns a love for the usurer, and indignantly rejects
|
|
the proposal of the Duke. The hour for the wedding draws near. The
|
|
lady has prepared a sleeping potion, whose effects resemble those of
|
|
death. (Romeo and Juliet.) She swallows it- knowing that her
|
|
supposed corpse would lie at night, pursuant to an old custom, in
|
|
the sanctuary of the cathedral; and believing that Angelo- whose
|
|
love for herself she has elicited, by a stratagem, from his own
|
|
lips- will watch by the body, in the strength of his devotion. Her
|
|
ultimate design (we may suppose, for it is not told) is to confess all
|
|
to her lover on her revival, and throw herself upon his protection-
|
|
their marriage being concealed, and herself regarded as dead by the
|
|
world. Zippa, who really loves Angelo- (her love for Tortesa, it
|
|
must be understood, is a very equivocal feeling, for the fact cannot
|
|
be denied that Mr. Willis makes her love both at the same time)-
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Zippa, who really loves Angelo- who has discovered his passion for
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Isabella- and who, as well as that lady, believes that the painter
|
|
will watch the corpse in the cathedral,- determines, through jealousy,
|
|
to prevent his so doing, and with this view informs Tortesa that she
|
|
has learned it to be Angelo's design to steal the body for
|
|
purposes,- in short, as a model to be used in his studio. The
|
|
usurer, in consequence, sets a guard at the doors of the cathedral.
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|
This guard does, in fact, prevent the lover from watching the
|
|
corpse, but, it appears, does not prevent the lady, on her revival and
|
|
disappointment in not seeing the one she sought, from passing
|
|
unperceived from the church. Weakened by her long sleep, she wanders
|
|
aimlessly through the streets, and at length finds herself, when
|
|
just sinking with exhaustion, at the door of her father. She has no
|
|
resource but to knock. The Count, who here, we must say, acts very
|
|
much as Thimble of old- the knight, we mean, of the "scolding wife"-
|
|
maintains that she is dead, and shuts the door in her face. In other
|
|
words, he supposes it to be the ghost of his daughter who speaks;
|
|
and so the lady is left to perish on the steps. Meantime Angelo is
|
|
absent from home, attempting to get access to the cathedral; and his
|
|
servant Tomaso takes the opportunity of absenting himself also, and of
|
|
indulging his bibulous propensities while perambulating the town. He
|
|
finds Isabella as we left her, and through motives which we will leave
|
|
Mr. Willis to explain, conducts her unresistingly to Angelo's
|
|
residence, and- deposits her in Angelo's bed. The artist now
|
|
returns- Tomaso is kicked out of doors- and we are not told, but
|
|
left to presume, that a fun explanation and perfect understanding
|
|
are brought about between the lady and her lover.
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We find them, next morning, in the studio, where stands, leaning
|
|
against an easel the portrait (a full length) of Isabella, with
|
|
curtains adjusted before it. The stage-directions, moreover, inform us
|
|
that "the black wall of the room is such as to form a natural ground
|
|
for the picture." While Angelo is occupied in retouching it, he is
|
|
interrupted by the arrival of Tortesa with a guard, and is accused
|
|
of having stolen the corpse from the sanctuary- the lady, meanwhile,
|
|
having stepped behind the curtain. The usurer insists upon seeing
|
|
the painting, with a view of ascertaining whether any new touches
|
|
had been put upon it, which would argue an examination, post mortem,
|
|
of those charms of neck and bosom which the living Isabella would
|
|
not have unveiled. Resistance in vain- the curtain is torn down;
|
|
but, to the surprise of Angelo, the lady herself is discovered,
|
|
"with her hands crossed on her breast, and her eyes fixed on the
|
|
ground, standing motionless in the frame which had contained the
|
|
picture." The tableau we are to believe, deceives Tortesa, who steps
|
|
back to contemplate what he supposes to be the portrait of his
|
|
betrothed. In the meantime, the guards, having searched the house,
|
|
find the veil which had been thrown over the imagined corpse in the
|
|
sanctuary, and upon this evidence the artist is carried before the
|
|
Duke. Here he is accused, not only of sacrilege, but of the murder
|
|
of Isabella, and is about to be condemned to death, when his
|
|
mistress comes forward in person; thus resigning herself to the usurer
|
|
to save the life of her lover. But the noble nature of Tortesa now
|
|
breaks forth; and, smitten with admiration of the lady's conduct, as
|
|
well as convinced that her love for himself was feigned, he resigns
|
|
her to Angelo- although now feeling and acknowledging for the first
|
|
time that a fervent love has, in his own bosom, assumed the place of
|
|
the misanthropic ambition which, hitherto, had alone actuated him in
|
|
seeking her hand. Moreover, he endows Isabella with the lands of her
|
|
father Falcone. The lovers are thus made happy. The usurer weds Zippa;
|
|
and the curtain drops upon the promise of the Duke to honour the
|
|
double nuptials with his presence.
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This story, as we have given it, hangs better together (Mr. Willis
|
|
will pardon our modesty), and is altogether more easily
|
|
comprehended, than in the words of the play itself. We have really put
|
|
the best face upon the matter, and presented the whole in the simplest
|
|
and clearest light in our power. We mean to say that "Tortesa"
|
|
(partaking largely, in this respect, of the drama of Cervantes and
|
|
Calderon) is over-clouded- rendered misty- by a world of unnecessary
|
|
and impertinent intrigue. This folly was adopted by the Spanish
|
|
comedy, and is imitated by us, with the idea of imparting "action,"
|
|
"business," "vivacity." But vivacity, however desirable, can be
|
|
attained in many other ways, and is dearly purchased, indeed, when the
|
|
price is intelligibility.
|
|
|
|
The truth is that cant has never attained a more owl- like dignity
|
|
than in the discussion of dramatic principle. A modern stage critic is
|
|
nothing, if not a lofty contemner of all things simple and direct.
|
|
He delights in mystery- revels in mystification- has transcendental
|
|
notions concerning P. S. and O. P, and talks about "stage business and
|
|
stage effect" as if he were discussing the differential calculus.
|
|
For much of all this we are indebted to the somewhat overprofound
|
|
criticisms of Augustus William Schlegel.
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|
|
|
But the dicta of common sense are of universal application, and,
|
|
touching this matter of intrigue, if, from its superabundance, we
|
|
are compelled, even in the quiet and critical perusal of a play, to
|
|
pause frequently and reflect long- to re-read passages over and over
|
|
again, for the purpose of gathering their bearing upon the whole- of
|
|
maintaining in our mind a general connection- what but fatigue can
|
|
result from the exertion? How, then, when we come to the
|
|
representation?- when these passages- trifling, perhaps, in
|
|
themselves, but important when considered in relation to the plot- are
|
|
hurried and blurred over in the stuttering enunciation of some
|
|
miserable rantipole, or omitted altogether through the
|
|
constitutional lapse of memory so peculiar to those lights of the
|
|
age and stage, bedight (from being of no conceivable use)
|
|
supernumeraries? For it must be borne in mind that these bits of
|
|
intrigue (we use the term in the sense of the German critics)
|
|
appertain generally, indeed altogether, to the after thoughts of the
|
|
drama- to the underplots- are met with consequently, in the mouth of
|
|
the lackeys and chambermaids- and are thus consigned to the tender
|
|
mercies of the stellae minores. Of course we get but an imperfect idea
|
|
of what is going on before our eyes. Action after action ensues
|
|
whose mystery we can not unlock without the little key which these
|
|
barbarians have thrown away and lost. Our weariness increases in
|
|
proportion to the number of these embarrassments, and if the play
|
|
escape damnation at all it escapes in spite of that intrigue to which,
|
|
in nine cases out of ten, the author attributes his success, and which
|
|
he will persist in valuing exactly in proportion to the misapplied
|
|
labour it has cost him.
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|
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|
But dramas of this kind are said, in our customary parlance, to
|
|
"abound in plot." We have never yet met any one, however, who could
|
|
tell us what precise ideas he connected with the phrase. A mere
|
|
succession of incidents, even the most spirited, will no more
|
|
constitute a plot than a multiplication of zeros, even the most
|
|
infinite, will result in the production of a unit. This all will
|
|
admit- but few trouble themselves to think further. The common
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notion seems be in favour of mere complexity; but a plot, properly
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understood, is perfect only inasmuch as we shall find ourselves unable
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to detach from it or disarrange any single incident involved,
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without destruction to the mass.
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This we say is the point of perfection- a point never yet
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attained, but not on that account unattainable. Practically, we may
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consider a plot as of high excellence, when no one of its component
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parts shall be susceptible of removal without detriment to the
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whole. Here, indeed, is a vast lowering of the demand- and with less
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than this no writer of refined taste should content himself.
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As this subject is not only in itself of great importance, but
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will have at all points a bearing upon what we shall say hereafter, in
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the examination of various plays, we shall be pardoned for quoting
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from the "Democratic Review" some passages (of our own which enter
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more particularly into the rationale of the subject:-
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"All the Bridgewater treatises have failed in noticing the great
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idiosyncrasy in the Divine system of adaptation:- that idiosyncrasy
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which stamps the adaptation as divine, in distinction from that
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which is the work of merely human constructiveness. I speak of the
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complete mutuality of adaptation. For example:- in human
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constructions, a particular cause has a particular effect- a
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particular purpose brings about a particular object; but we see no
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reciprocity. The effect does not react upon the cause- the object does
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not change relations with the purpose. In Divine constructions, the
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object is either object or purpose as we choose to regard it, while
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the purpose is either purpose or object; so that we can never
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(abstractly- without concretion- without reference to facts of the
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moment) decide which is which.
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"For secondary example:- In polar climates, the human frame, to
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maintain its animal heat, requires, for combustion in the capillary
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system, an abundant supply of highly azotized food, such as train oil.
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Again:- in polar climates nearly the sole food afforded man is the oil
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of abundant seals and whales. Now whether is oil at hand because
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imperatively demanded? or whether is it the only thing demanded
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because the only thing fo be obtained? It is impossible to say:- there
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is an absolute reciprocity of adaptation for which we seek in vain
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among the works of man.
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"The Bridgewater tractists may have avoided this point, on account
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of its apparent tendency to overthrow the idea of cause in general-
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consequently of a First Cause-of God. But it is more probable that
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they have failed to perceive what no one preceding them has, to my
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knowledge, perceived.
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"The pleasure which we derive from any exertion of human
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ingenuity, is in the direct ratio of the approach to this species of
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reciprocity between cause and effect. In the construction of plot, for
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example, in fictitious literature, we should aim at so arranging the
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points, or incidents, that we cannot distinctly see, in respect to any
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one of them, whether that one depends from any one other or upholds
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it. In this sense, of course, perfection of plot is unattainable in
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fact- because Man is the constructor. The plots of God are perfect.
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The Universe is a plot of God."
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The pleasure derived from the contemplation of the unity resulting
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from plot is far more intense than is ordinarily supposed, and, as
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in Nature we meet with no such combination of incident, appertains
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to a very lofty region of the ideal. In speaking thus we have not said
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that plot is more than an adjunct to the drama- more than a
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perfectly distinct and separable source of pleasure. It is not an
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essential. In its intense artificiality it may even be conceived
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injurious in a certain degree (unless constructed with consummate
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skill) to that real lifelikeness which is the soul of the drama of
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character. Good dramas have been written with very little plot-
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capital dramas might be written with none at all. Some plays of high
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merit, having plot, abound in irrelevant incident- in incident, we
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mean, which could be displaced or removed altogether without effect
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upon the plot itself, and yet are by no means objectionable as dramas;
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and for this reason- that the incidents are evidently irrelevant-
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obviously episodical. Of their disgressive nature the spectator is
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so immediately aware that he views them, as they arise, in the
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simple light of interlude, and does not fatigue his attention by
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attempting to establish for them a connection, or more than an
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illustrative connection, with the great interests of the subject. Such
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are the plays of Shakespeare. But all this is very different from that
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irrelevancy of intrigue which disfigures and very usually damns the
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work of the unskilful artist. With him the great error lies in
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inconsequence. Underplot is piled upon underplot (the very word is a
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paradox), and all to no purpose- to no end. The interposed incidents
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have no ultimate effect upon the main ones. They may hang upon the
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mass- they may even coalesce with it, or, as in some intricate
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cases, they may be so intimately blended as to be lost amid the
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chaos which they have been instrumental in bringing about- but still
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they have no portion in the plot, which exists, if at all,
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independently of their influence. Yet the attempt is made by the
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author to establish and demonstrate a dependence- an identity, and
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it is the obviousness of this attempt which is the cause of
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weariness in the spectator, who, of course, cannot at once see that
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his attention is challenged to no purpose- that intrigues so
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obtrusively forced upon it are to be found, in the end, without effect
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upon the leading interests of the day.
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"Tortesa" will afford us plentiful examples of this irrelevancy of
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intrigue- of this misconception of the nature and of the capacities of
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plot. We have said that our digest of the story is more easy of
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comprehension than the detail of Mr. Willis. If so, it is because we
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have forborne to give such portions as had no influence upon the
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whole. These served but to embarrass the narrative and fatigue the
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attention. How much was irrelevant is shown by the brevity of the
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space in which we have recorded, somewhat at length, all the
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influential incidents of a drama of five acts. There is scarcely a
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scene in which is not to be found the germ of an underplot- a germ,
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however, which seldom proceeds beyond the condition of a bud, or, if
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so fortunate as to swell into a flower, arrives, in no single
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instance, at the dignity of fruit. Zippa, a lady altogether without
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character (dramatic), is the most pertinacious of all conceivable
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concoctors of plans never to be matured- of vast designs that
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terminate in nothing- of cul-de-sac machinations. She plots in one
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page and counter-plots in the next. She schemes her way from P. S.
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to O. P., and intrigues perseveringly from the footlights to the
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slips. A very singular instance of the inconsequence of her manoeuvres
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is found towards the conclusion of the play. The whole of the second
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scene (occupying five pages), in the fifth act, is obviously
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introduced for the purpose of giving her information, through Tomaso's
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means, of Angelo's arrest for the murder of Isabella. Upon learning
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his danger she rushes from the stage, to be present at the trial,
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exclaiming that her evidence can save his life. We, the audience, of
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course applaud, and now look with interest to her movements in the
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scene of the judgment-hall. She, Zippa, we think, is somebody after
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all; she will be the means of Angelo's salvation; she will thus be the
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chief unraveller of the plot. All eyes are bent, therefore, upon
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Zippa- but alas! upon the point at issue, Zippa does not so much as
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open her mouth. It is scarcely too much to say that not a single
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action of this impertinent little busybody has any real influence upon
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the play;- yet she appears upon every occasion- appearing only to
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perplex.
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Similar things abound; we should not have space even to allude to
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them all. The whole conclusion of the play is supererogatory. The
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immensity of pure fuss with which it is overloaded forces us to the
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reflection that all of it might have been avoided by one word of
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explanation to the Duke an amiable man who admires the talents of
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Angelo, and who, to prevent Isabella's marrying against her will,
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had previously offered to free Falcone of his bonds to the usurer.
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That he would free him now, and thus set all matters straight, the
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spectator cannot doubt for an instant, and he can conceive no better
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reason why explanations are not made than that Mr. Willis does not
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think proper they should be. In fact, the whole drama is exceedingly
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ill motivirt.
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We have already mentioned an inadvertence, in the fourth Act,
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where Isabella is made to escape from the sanctuary through the
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midst of guards who prevented the ingress of Angelo. Another occurs
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where Falcone's conscience is made to reprove him, upon the appearance
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of his daughter's supposed ghost, for having occasioned her death by
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forcing her to marry against her will. The author had forgotten that
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Falcone submitted to the wedding, after the Dukes interposition,
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only upon Isabella's assurance that she really loved the usurer. In
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the third Scene, too, of the first Act, the imagination of the
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spectator is no doubt a little taxed when he finds Angelo, in the
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|
first moment of his introduction to the palace of Isabella, commencing
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her portrait by laying on colour after colour, before he has made
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any attempt at an outline. In the last Act, moreover, Tortesa gives to
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Isabella a deed
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"Of the Falcone palaces and lands,
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And all the money forfeit by Falcone."
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This is a terrible blunder, and the more important as upon this act of
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the usurer depends the development of his newborn sentiments of honour
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and virtue- depends, in fact, the most salient point of the play.
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Tortesa, we say, gives to Isabella the lands forfeited by Falcone; but
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Tortesa was surely not very generous in giving what, clearly, was
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not his own to give. Falcone had not forfeited the deed, which had
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been restored to him by the usurer, and which was then in his
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(Falcone's) possession. Here Tortesa:-
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He put it in the bond,
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That if, by any humour of my own,
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Or accident that came not from himself,
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Or from his daughter's will, the match were marred,
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His tenure stood intact."
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Now Falcone is still resolute for the match; but this new generous
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"humour" of Tortesa induces him (Tortesa) to decline it. Falcone's
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tenure is then intact; he retains the deed, the usurer is giving
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away property not his own.
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As a drama of character, "Tortesa" is by no means open to so many
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|
objections as when we view it in the light of its plot; but it is
|
|
still faulty. The merits are so exceedingly negative, that it is
|
|
difficult to say anything about them. The Duke is nobody, Falcone,
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|
nothing; Zippa, less than nothing. Angelo may be regarded simply as
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|
the medium through which Mr. Willis conveys to the reader his own
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|
glowing feelings- his own refined and delicate fancy- (delicate, yet
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|
bold)- his own rich voluptuousness of sentiment- a voluptuousness
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|
which would offend in almost any other language than that in which
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|
it is so skilfully apparelled. Isabella is- the heroine of the
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|
Hunchback. The revolution in the character of Tortesa- or rather the
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|
final triumph of his innate virtue- is a dramatic point far older than
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|
the hills. It may be observed, too, that although the representation
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|
of no human character should be quarrelled with for its inconsistency,
|
|
we yet require that the inconsistencies be not absolute antagonisms to
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|
the extent of neutralization: they may be permitted to be oils and
|
|
waters, but they must not be alkalis and acids. When, in the course of
|
|
the denouement, the usurer bursts forth into an eloquence virtue-
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|
inspired, we cannot sympathize very heartily in his fine speeches,
|
|
since they proceed from the mouth of the self-same egotist who,
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|
urged by a disgusting vanity, uttered so many sotticisms (about his
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|
fine legs, etc.) in the earlier passages of the play. Tomaso is,
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|
upon the whole, the best personage. We recognize some originality in
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|
his conception, and conception was seldom more admirably carried out.
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One or two observations at random. In the third Scene of the fifth
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|
Act, Tomaso, the buffoon, is made to assume paternal authority over
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Isabella (as usual, without sufficient purpose), by virtue of a law
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|
which Tortesa thus expounds:-
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"My gracious liege, there is a law in Florence
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That if a father, for no guilt or shame,
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Disown and shut his door upon his daughter,
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She is the child of him who succours her,
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Who by the shelter of a single night,
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Becomes endowed with the authority
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Lost by the other."
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No one, of course, can be made to believe that any such stupid law
|
|
as this ever existed either in Florence or Timbuctoo; but, on the
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|
ground que le vrai n'est pas toujours le vraisemblable, we say that
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even its real existence would be no justification of Mr. Willis. It
|
|
has an air of the far-fetched- of the desperate- which a fine taste
|
|
will avoid as a pestilence. Very much of the same nature is the
|
|
attempt of Tortesa to extort a second bond from Falcone. The
|
|
evidence which convicts Angelo of murder is ridiculously frail. The
|
|
idea of Isabella's assuming the place of the portrait, and so
|
|
deceiving the usurer, is not only glaringly improbable, but seems
|
|
adopted from the "Winter's Tale." But in this latter-play, the
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|
deception is at least possible, for the human figure but imitates a
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statue. What, however, are we to make of Mr. W.'s stage direction
|
|
about the back wall's being "so arranged as to form a natural ground
|
|
for the picture"? Of course, the very slightest movement of Tortesa
|
|
(and he makes many) would have annihilated the illusion by
|
|
disarranging the perspective, and in no manner could this latter
|
|
have been arranged at all for more than one particular point of
|
|
view- in other words, for more than one particular person in the whole
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|
audience. The "asides," moreover, are unjustifiably frequent. The
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|
prevalence of this folly (of speaking aside) detracts as much from the
|
|
acting merit of our drama generally as any other inartisticality. It
|
|
utterly destroys verisimilitude. People are not in the habit of
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|
soliloquising aloud- at least, not to any positive extent; and why
|
|
should an author have to be told, what the slightest reflection
|
|
would teach him, that an audience, by dint of no imagination, can or
|
|
will conceive that what is sonorous in their own ears at the
|
|
distance of fifty feet cannot be heard by an actor at the distance
|
|
of one or two?
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|
Having spoken thus of "Tortesa" in terms of nearly unmitigated
|
|
censure- our readers may be surprised to hear us say that we think
|
|
highly of the drama as a whole- and have little hesitation in
|
|
ranking it before most of the dramas of Sheridan Knowles. Its
|
|
leading faults are those of the modern drama generally- they are not
|
|
peculiar to itself- while its great merits are. If in support of our
|
|
opinion we do not cite points of commendation, it is because those
|
|
form the mass of the work. And were we to speak of fine passages, we
|
|
should speak of the entire play. Nor by "fine passages" do we mean
|
|
passages of merely fine language, embodying fine sentiment, but such
|
|
as are replete with truthfulness, and teem with the loftiest qualities
|
|
of the dramatic art. Points- capital points abound; and these have far
|
|
more to do with the general excellence of a play than a too
|
|
speculative criticism has been willing to admit. Upon the whole, we
|
|
are proud of "Tortesa"- and her again, for the fiftieth time at least,
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|
record our warm admiration of the abilities of Mr. Willis.
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We proceed now to Mr. Longfellow's
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SPANISH STUDENT
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The reputation of its author as a poet, and as a graceful writer
|
|
of prose, is, of course, long and deservedly established- but as a
|
|
dramatist he was unknown before the publication of this play. Upon its
|
|
original appearance, in Graham's Magazine, the general opinion was
|
|
greatly in favour- if not exactly of "The Spanish Student"- at all
|
|
events of the writer of "Outre-Mer." But this general opinion is the
|
|
most equivocal thing in the world. It is never self-formed. It has
|
|
very seldom indeed an original development. In regard to the work of
|
|
an already famous or infamous author it decides, to be sure, with a
|
|
laudable promptitude; making up all the mind that it has, by reference
|
|
to the reception of the author's immediately previous publication-
|
|
making up thus the ghost of a mind pro tem.- a species of critical
|
|
shadow that fully answers, nevertheless, all the purposes of a
|
|
substance itself until the substance itself shall be forthcoming.
|
|
But beyond this point the general opinion can only be considered
|
|
that of the public, as a man may call a book his, having bought it.
|
|
When a new writer arises, the shop of the true, thoughtful or critical
|
|
opinion is not simultaneously thrown away- is not immediately set
|
|
up. Some weeks elapse; and, during this interval, the public, at a
|
|
loss where to procure an opinion of the debutante, have necessarily no
|
|
opinion of him at all for the nonce.
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|
The popular voice, then, which ran so much in favour of "The Spanish
|
|
Student," upon its original issue, should be looked upon as merely the
|
|
ghost pro tem.- as based upon critical decisions respecting the
|
|
previous works of the author- as having reference in no manner to "The
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|
Spanish Student" itself- and thus as utterly meaningless and valueless
|
|
per se.
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The few, by which we mean those who think, in contradistinction from
|
|
the many who think they think- the few who think at first hand, and
|
|
thus twice before speaking at all- these received the play with a
|
|
commendation somewhat less pronounced- somewhat more guardedly
|
|
qualified- than Professor Longfellow might have desired, or may have
|
|
been taught to expect. Still the composition was approved upon the
|
|
whole. The few words of censure were very far indeed from amounting to
|
|
condemnation. The chief defect insisted upon was the feebleness of the
|
|
denouement, and, generally, of the concluding scenes, as compared with
|
|
the opening passages. We are not sure, however, that anything like
|
|
detailed criticism has been attempted in the case- nor do we propose
|
|
now to attempt it. Nevertheless, the work has interest, not only
|
|
within itself, but as the first dramatic effort of an author who has
|
|
remarkably succeeded in almost every other department of light
|
|
literature than that of the drama. It may be as well, therefore, to
|
|
speak of it, if not analytically, at least somewhat in detail; and
|
|
we cannot, perhaps, more suitably commence than by a quotation,
|
|
without comment of some of the finer passages:
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"And, though she is a virgin outwardly,
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Within she is a sinner, like those panels
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Of doors and altar-pieces the old monks
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Painted in convents, with the Virgin Mary
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|
|
On the outside, and on the inside Venus."
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"I believe
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That woman, in her deepest degradation,
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Holds something sacred, something undefiled,
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Some pledge and keepsake of her higher nature,
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|
And, like the diamond in the dark, retains
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Some quenchless gleam of the celestial light."
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"And we shall sit together unmolested,
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And words of true love pass from tongue to tongue
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|
As singing birds from one bough to another."
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"Our feelings and our thoughts
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|
Tend ever on and rest not in the Present,
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|
As drops of rain fall into some dark well,
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And from below comes a scarce audible sound,
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So fall our thoughts into the dark
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|
Hereafter, And their mysterious echo reaches us."
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"Her tender limbs are still, and, on her breast,
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The cross she prayed to, ere she fell asleep,
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Rises or falls with the soft tide of dreams,
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Like a light barge safe moored."
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"Hark! how the large and ponderous mace of Time
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|
Knocks at the golden portals of the day!"
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"The lady Violante bathed in tears
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Of love and anger, like the maid of Colchis,
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Whom thou, another faithless Argonaut,
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Having won that golden fleece, a woman's love,
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Desertest for this Glauce."
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"I read, or sit in reverie and watch
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The changing colour of the waves that break
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Upon the idle sea-shore of the mind."
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"I will forget her. All dear recollections
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Pressed in my heart, like flowers within a book,
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Shall be tom out and scattered to the winds."
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"Oh yes! I see it now-
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Yet rather with my heart than with mine eyes,
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So faint it is. And all my thoughts sail thither,
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Freighted with prayers and hopes, and forward urged,
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Against all stress of accident, as, in
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The Eastern Tale, against the wind and tide
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|
Great ships were drawn to the Magnetic Mountains."
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"But there are brighter dreams than those of Fame,
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Which are the dreams of Love! Out of the heart
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Rises the bright ideal of these dreams,
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As from some woodland fount a spirit rises
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And sinks again into its silent deeps,
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Ere the enamoured knight can touch her robe!
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'Tis this ideal that the soul of Man,
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Like the enamoured knight beside the fountain,
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Waits for upon the margin of Life's stream;
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Waits to behold her rise from the dark waters,
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Clad in a mortal shape! Alas, how many
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Must wait in vain! The stream flows evermore,
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But from its silent deeps no spirit rises!
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Yet I, born under a propitious star,
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Have found the bright ideal of my dreams."
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"Yes; by the Darro's side
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My childhood passed. I can remember still
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The river, and the mountains capped with snow;
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The villages where, yet a little child,
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I told the traveller's fortune in the street;
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The smugglers horse; the brigand and the shepherd;
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The march across the moor; the halt at noon;
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The red fire of the evening camp, that lighted
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The forest where we slept; and, farther back,
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As in a dream, or in some former life,
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Gardens and palace walls."
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"This path will lead us to it,
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Over the wheatfields, where the shadows sail
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Across the running sea, now green, now blue,
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And, like an idle mariner on the ocean,
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Whistles the quail."
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These extracts will be universally admired. They are graceful,
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well expressed, imaginative, and altogether replete with the true
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poetic feeling. We quote them now, at the beginning of our review,
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by way of justice to the poet, and because, in what follows, we are
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not sure that we have more than a very few words of what may be termed
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commendation to bestow.
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"The Spanish Student" has an unfortunate beginning, in a most
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unpardonable, and yet to render the matter worse, in a most
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indispensable "Preface:-
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"The subject of the following play," says Mr. L., "is taken in
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part from the beautiful play of Cervantes, La Gitanilla. To this
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source, however, I am indebted for the main incident only, the love of
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a Spanish student for a Gipsy girl, and the name of the heroine,
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Preciosa. I have not followed the story in any of its details. In
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Spain this subject has been twice handled dramatically, first by
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Juan Perez de Montalvan in La Gitanilla, and afterwards by Antonio
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de Solis y Rivadeneira in La Gitanilla de Madrid. The same subject has
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also been made use of by Thomas Middleton, an English dramatist of the
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seventeenth century. His play is called The Spanish Gipsy. The main
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plot is the same as in the Spanish pieces; but there runs through it a
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tragic underplot of the loves of Rodrigo and Dona Clara, which is
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taken from another tale of Cervantes, La Fuerza de la Sangre. The
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reader who is acquainted with La Gitanilla of Cervantes, and the plays
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of Montalvan, Solis, and Middleton, will perceive that my treatment of
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the subject differs entirely from theirs."
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Now the autorial originality, properly considered, is threefold.
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There is, first, the originality of the general thesis, secondly, that
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of the several incidents or thoughts by which the thesis is developed,
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and thirdly, that of manner or tone, by which means alone an old
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subject, even when developed through hackneyed incidents or
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thoughts, may be made to produce a fully original effect- which, after
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all, is the end truly in view.
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But originality, as it is one of the highest, is also one of the
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rarest of merits. In America it is especially and very remarkably
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rare:- this through causes sufficiently well understood. We are
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content perforce, therefore, as a general thing, with either of the
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lower branches of originality mentioned above, and would regard with
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high favour indeed any author who should supply the great
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desideratum in combining the three. Still the three should be
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combined; and from whom, if not from such men as Professor Longfellow-
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if not from those who occupy the chief niches in our Literary
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Temple- shall we expect the combination? But in the present
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instance, what has Professor Longfellow accomplished? Is he original
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at any one point? Is he original in respect to the first and most
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important of our three divisions? "The [subject] of the following
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play," he says himself, "is taken [in part] from the beautiful play of
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Cervantes, 'La Gitanilla.' To this source, however, I am indebted
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for [the main incident only,] the love of the Spanish student for a
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Gipsy girl, and the name of the heroine, Preciosa."
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The [brackets] are our own, and the [bracketed words] involve an
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obvious contradiction. We cannot understand how "the love of the
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Spanish student for the Gipsy girl" can be called an "incident," or
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even a "main incident," at all. In fact, this love- this discordant
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and therefore eventful or incidental love is the true thesis of the
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drama of Cervantes. It is this anomalous "love," which originates
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the incidents by means of which itself, this "love," the thesis, is
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developed. Having based his play, then, upon this "love," we cannot
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admit his claim to originality upon our first count; nor has he any
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right to say that he has adopted his "subject" "in part." It is
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clear that he has adopted it altogether. Nor would he have been
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entitled to claim originality of subject, even had he based his
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story upon any variety of love arising between parties naturally
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separated by prejudices of caste- such, for example, as those which
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divide the Brahmin from the Pariah, the Ammonite from the African,
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or even the Christian from the Jew. For here in its ultimate analysis,
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is the real thesis of the Spaniard. But when the drama is founded, not
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merely upon this general thesis, but upon this general thesis in the
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identical application given it by Cervantes- that is to say, upon
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the prejudice of caste exemplified in the case of a Catholic, and this
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Catholic a Spaniard, and this Spaniard a student, and this student
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loving a Gipsy, and this Gipsy a dancing-girl, and this dancing-girl
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bearing the name Preciosa- we are not altogether prepared to be
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informed by Professor Longfellow that he is indebted for an
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"incident only" to the "beautiful 'Gitanilla' of Cervantes."
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Whether our author is original upon our second and third points-
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in the true incidents of his story, or in the manner and tone of their
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handling- will be more distinctly seen as we proceed.
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It is to be regretted that "The Spanish Student" was not subentitled
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"A Dramatic Poem," rather than "A Play." The former title would have
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more fully conveyed the intention of the poet; for, of course, we
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shall not do Mr. Longfellow the injustice to suppose that his design
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has been, in any respect, a play, in the ordinary acceptation of the
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term. Whatever may be its merits in a merely poetical view, "The
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Spanish Student" could not be endured upon the stage.
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Its plot runs thus:- Preciosa, the daughter of a Spanish
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gentleman, is stolen, while an infant, by Gipsies, brought up as his
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own daughter, and as a dancing-girl, by a Gipsy leader, Cruzado; and
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by him betrothed to a young Gipsy, Bartolome. At Madrid, Preciosa
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loves and is beloved by Victorian, a student of Alcala, who resolves
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to marry her, notwithstanding her caste, rumours involving her purity,
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the dissuasions of his friends, and his betrothal to an heiress of
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Madrid. Preciosa is also sought by the Count of Lara, a roue. She
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rejects him. He forces his way into her chamber, and is there seen
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by Victorian, who, misinterpreting some words overheard, doubts the
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fidelity of his mistress, and leaves her in anger, after challenging
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the Count of Lara. In the duel, the Count receives his life at the
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hands of Victorian: declares his ignorance of the understanding
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between Victorian and Preciosa; boasts of favours received from the
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latter, and, to make good his words, produces a ring which she gave
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him, he asserts, as a pledge of her love. This ring is a duplicate
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of one previously given the girl by Victorian, and known to have
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been so given by the Count. Victorian mistakes it for his own,
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believes all that has been said, and abandons the field to his
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rival, who, immediately afterwards, while attempting to procure access
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to the Gipsy, is assassinated by Bartolome. Meantime, Victorian,
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wandering through the country, reaches Guadarrama. Here he receives
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a letter from Madrid, disclosing the treachery practiced by Lara,
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and telling that Preciosa, rejecting his addresses, had been through
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his instrumentality hissed from the stage, and now again roamed with
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the Gipsies. He goes in search of her, finds her in a wood near
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Guadarrama; approaches her, disguising his voice; she recognizes
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him, pretending she does not, and unaware that he knows her innocence;
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a conversation of equivoque ensues; he sees his ring upon her
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finger; offers to purchase it; she refuses to part with it, a full
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eclairissement takes place; at this juncture a servant of
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Victorian's arrives with "news from court," giving the first
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intimation of the true parentage of Preciosa. The lovers set out,
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forthwith, for Madrid, to see the newly discovered father. On the
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route, Bartolome dogs their steps; fires at Preciosa; misses her;
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the shot is returned; he falls; and "The Spanish Student" is
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concluded.
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This plot, however, like that of "Tortesa," looks better in our
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naked digest than amidst the details which develop only to disfigure
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it. The reader of the play itself will be astonished, when he
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remembers the name of the author, at the inconsequence of the
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incidents- at the utter want of skill- of art-manifested in their
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conception and introduction. In dramatic writing, no principle is more
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clear than that nothing should be said or done which has not a
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tendency to develop the catastrophe, or the characters. But Mr.
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Longfellow's play abounds in events and conversations that have no
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ostensible purpose, and certainly answer no end. In what light, for
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example, since we cannot suppose this drama intended for the stage,
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are we to regard the second scene of the second act, where a long
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dialogue between an Archbishop and a Cardinal is wound up by a dance
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from Preciosa? The Pope thinks of abolishing public dances in Spain,
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and the priests in question have been delegated to examine,
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personally, the proprieties or improprieties of such exhibitions. With
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this view, Preciosa is summoned and required to give a specimen of her
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skill. Now this, in a mere spectacle, would do very well; for here all
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that is demanded is an occasion or an excuse for a dance; but what
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business has it in a pure drama? or in what regard does it further the
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end of a dramatic poem, intended only to be read? In the same
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manner, the whole of Scene the eighth, in the same act, is occupied
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with six lines of stage directions, as follows:-
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The Theatre: the orchestra plays the Cachuca. Sound of castinets
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behind the scenes. The curtain rises and discovers Preciosa in the
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attitude of commencing the dance. The Cachuca. Tumult. Hisses. Cries
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of Brava! and Aguera! She falters and pauses. The music stops. General
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confusion. Preciosa faints.
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But the inconsequence of which we complain will be best
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exemplified by an entire scene. We take Scene the Fourth, Act the
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First:-
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"An inn on the road to Alcala. BALTASAR asleep on a bench. Enter
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CHISPA."
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CHISPA. And here we are, half way to Alcala, between cocks and
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midnight. Body o' me! what an inn this is! The light out and the
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landlord asleep! Hola! ancient Baltasar!
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BALTASAR. [waking]. Here I am.
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CHISPA. Yes, there you are, like a one-eyed alcalde in a town
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without inhabitants. Bring a light, and let me have supper.
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BALTASAR. Where is your master?
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CHISPA. Do not trouble yourself about him. We have stopped a
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moment to breathe our horses; and if he chooses to walk up and down in
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the open air, looking into the sky as one who hears it rain, that does
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not satisfy my hunger, you know. But be quick, for I am in a hurry,
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and every one stretches his legs according to the length of his
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coverlet. What have we here?
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BALTASAR. [setting a light on the table]. Stewed rabbit.
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CHISPA. [eating]. Conscience of Portalegre! stewed kitten you mean!
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BALTASAR. And a pitcher of Pedro Ximenes, with a roasted pear in it.
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CHISPA [drinking]. Ancient Baltasar, amigo! You know how to cry wine
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and sell vinegar. I tell you this is nothing but Vino Tinto of La
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Mancha, with a tang of the swine-skin.
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BALTASAR. I swear to you by Saint Simon and Judas, it is all as I
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say.
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CHISPA. And I swear to you by Saint Peter and Saint Paul that it
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is no such thing. Moreover, your supper is like the hidalgo's
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dinner- very little meat and a great deal of tablecloth.
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BALTASAR. Ha! ha! ha!
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CHISPA. And more noise than nuts.
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BALTASAR. Ha! ha! ha! You must have your joke, Master Chispa. But
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shall I not ask Don Victorian in to take a draught of the Pedro
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Ximenes?
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CHISPA. No; you might as well say, "Don't you want some?" to a
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dead man.
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BALTASAR. Why does he go so often to Madrid?
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CHISPA. For the same reason that he eats no supper. He is in love.
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Were you ever in love, Baltasar?
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BALTASAR. I was never out of it, good Chispa. It has been the
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|
torment of my life.
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CHISPA. What! are you on fire, too, old hay-stack? Why, we shall
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never be able to put you out.
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VICTORIAN [without] Chispa!
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CHISPA. Go to bed, Pero Grullo, for the cocks are crowing.
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VICTORIAN. Ea! Chispa! Chispa!
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CHISPA. Ea! Senor. Come with me, ancient Baltasar, and bring water
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for the horses. I will pay for the supper tomorrow. [Exeunt.]
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Now here the question occurs- what is accomplished? How has the
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subject been forwarded? We did not need to learn that Victorian was in
|
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love- that was known before; and all that we glean is that a stupid
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imitation of Sancho Panza drinks in the course of two minutes (the
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|
time occupied in the perusal of the scene) a bottle of vino tinto,
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|
by way of Pedro Ximenes, and devours a stewed kitten in place of a
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rabbit.
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In the beginning of the play this Chispa is the valet of
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Victorian; subsequently we find him the servant of another; and near
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|
the denouement he returns to his original master. No cause is
|
|
assigned, and not even the shadow of an object is attained; the
|
|
whole tergiversation being but another instance of the gross
|
|
inconsequence which abounds in the play.
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|
The authors deficiency of skill is especially evinced in the scene
|
|
of the eclaircissement between Victorian and Preciosa. The former
|
|
having been enlightened respecting the true character of the latter by
|
|
means of a letter received at Guadarrama, from a friend at Madrid (how
|
|
wofully inartistical is this!), resolves to go in search of her
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|
forthwith, and forthwith, also, discovers her in a wood close at hand.
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Whereupon he approaches, disguising his voice:- yes, we are required
|
|
to believe that a lover may so disguise his voice from his mistress as
|
|
even to render his person in full view irrecognizable! He
|
|
approaches, and each knowing the other, a conversation ensues under
|
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the hypothesis that each to the other is unknown- a very unoriginal,
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|
and, of course, a very silly source of equivoque, fit only for the
|
|
gum- elastic imagination of an infant. But what we especially complain
|
|
of here is that our poet should have taken so many and so obvious
|
|
pains to bring about this position of equivoque, when it was
|
|
impossible that it could have served any other purpose than that of
|
|
injuring his intended effect! Read, for example, this passage:-
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VICTORIAN. I never loved a maid;
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For she I loved was then a maid no more.
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PRECIOSA. How know you that?
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VICTORIA. A little bird in the air
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Whispered the secret.
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PRECIOSA. There, take back your gold!
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Your hand is cold like a deceiver's hand!
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There is no blessing in its charity!
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Make her your wife, for you have been abused;
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And you shall mend your fortunes mending hers.
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VICTORIAN. How like an angel's speaks the tongue of woman,
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When pleading in another's cause her own!
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Now here it is clear that if we understood Preciosa to be really
|
|
ignorant of Victorian's identity, the "pleading in another's cause her
|
|
own" would create a favourable impression upon the reader or
|
|
spectator. But the advice- "Make her your wife, etc.," takes an
|
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interested and selfish turn when we remember that she knows to whom
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she speaks.
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Again, when Victorian says:
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That is a pretty ring upon your finger,
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Pray give it me!
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and when she replies:
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No, never from my hand
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Shall that be taken,
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we are inclined to think her only an artful coquette, knowing, as we
|
|
do, the extent of her knowledge, on the hand we should have
|
|
applauded her constancy (as the author intended) had she been
|
|
represented ignorant of Victorian's presence. The effect upon the
|
|
audience, in a word, would be pleasant in place of disagreeable were
|
|
the case altered as we suggest, while the effect upon Victorian
|
|
would remain altogether untouched.
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|
A still more remarkable instance of deficiency in the dramatic
|
|
tact is to be found in the mode of bringing about the discovery of
|
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Preciosa's parentage. In the very moment of the eclaircissement
|
|
between the lovers, Chispa arrives almost as a matter of course, and
|
|
settles the point in a sentence:-
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Good news from the Court; Good news! Beltran Cruzado,
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The Count of the Cales, is not your father,
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But your true father has returned to Spain
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Laden with wealth. You are no more a Gipsy.
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|
Now here are three points:- first, the extreme baldness, platitude,
|
|
and independence of the incident narrated by Chispa. The opportune
|
|
return of the father (we are tempted to say the excessively opportune)
|
|
stands by itself- has no relation to any other event in the play- does
|
|
not appear to arise, in the way of result, from any incident or
|
|
incidents that have arisen before. It has the air of a happy chance,
|
|
of a God-send, of an ultra-accident, invented by the play-wright by
|
|
way of compromise for his lack of invention. Nec Deus intersit,
|
|
etc.- but here the God has interposed, and the knot is laughably
|
|
unworthy of the God.
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|
|
The second point concerns the return of the father "laden with
|
|
wealth." The lover has abandoned his mistress in her poverty, and,
|
|
while yet the words of his proffered reconciliation hang upon his
|
|
lips, comes his own servant with the news that the mistress' father
|
|
has returned "laden with wealth." Now, so far as regards the audience,
|
|
who are behind the scenes and know the fidelity of the lover- so far
|
|
as regards the audience, all is right; but the poet had no business to
|
|
place his heroine in the sad predicament of being forced, provided she
|
|
is not a fool, to suspect both the ignorance and the disinterestedness
|
|
of the hero.
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The third point has reference to the words- "You are now no more a
|
|
Gipsy." The thesis of this drama, as we have already said, is love
|
|
disregarding the prejudices of caste, and in the development of this
|
|
thesis, the powers of the dramatist have been engaged, or should
|
|
have been engaged, during the whole of the three acts of the play. The
|
|
interest excited lies in our admiration of the sacrifice, and of the
|
|
love that could make it; but this interest immediately and
|
|
disagreeably subsides when we find that the sacrifice has been made to
|
|
no purpose. "You are no more a Gipsy" dissolves the charm, and
|
|
obliterates the whole impression which the author has been at so
|
|
much labour to convey. Our romantic sense of the hero's chivalry
|
|
declines into a complacent satisfaction with his fate. We drop our
|
|
enthusiasm, with the enthusiast, and jovially shake by the hand the
|
|
mere man of good luck. But is not the latter feeling the more
|
|
comfortable of the two? Perhaps so; but "comfortable" is not exactly
|
|
the word Mr. Longfellow might wish applied to the end of his drama,
|
|
and then why be at the trouble of building up an effect through a
|
|
hundred and eighty pages, merely to knock it down at the end of the
|
|
hundred and eighty-first?
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|
We have already given, at some length, our conceptions of the nature
|
|
of plot- and of that of "The Spanish Student", it seems almost
|
|
superfluous to speak at all. It has nothing of construction about
|
|
it. Indeed there is scarcely a single incident which has any necessary
|
|
dependence upon any one other. Not only might we take away
|
|
two-thirds of the whole without ruin- but without detriment- indeed
|
|
with a positive benefit to the mass. And, even as regards the mere
|
|
order of arrangement, we might with a very decided chance of
|
|
improvement, put the scenes in a bag, give them a shake or two by
|
|
way of shuffle, and tumble them out. The whole mode of collocation-
|
|
not to speak of the feebleness of the incidents in themselves-
|
|
evinces, on the part of the author, an utter and radical want of the
|
|
adapting or constructive power which the drama so imperatively
|
|
demands.
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|
|
|
Of the unoriginality of the thesis we have already spoken; and
|
|
now, to the unoriginality of the events by which the thesis is
|
|
developed, we need do little more than alude. What, indeed, could we
|
|
say of such incidents as the child stolen by Gipsies- as her education
|
|
as a danseuse- as her betrothal to a Gipsy- as her preference for a
|
|
gentleman- as the rumours against her purity- as her persecution by
|
|
a roue- as the irruption of the roue into her chamber- as the
|
|
consequent misunderstanding between her and her lover- as the duel- as
|
|
the defeat of the roue- as the receipt of his life from the hero- as
|
|
his boasts of success with the girl- as the ruse of the duplicate
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|
ring- as the field, in consequence, abandoned by the lover- as the
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assassination of Lara while scaling the girl's bed-chamber- as the
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disconsolate peregrination of Victorian- as the equivoque scene with
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Preciosa- as the offering to purchase the ring and the refusal to part
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with it- as the "news from court," telling of the Gipsy's true
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parentage- what could we say of all these ridiculous things, except
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that we have met them, each and all, some two or three hundred times
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before, and that they have formed, in a great or less degree, the
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staple material of every Hop-O'My-Thumb tragedy since the flood? There
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is not an incident, from the first page of "The Spanish Student" to
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the last and most satisfactory, which we would not undertake to find
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bodily, at ten minutes' notice, in some one of the thousand and one
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comedies of intrigue attributed to Calderon and Lope de Vega.
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But if our poet is grossly unoriginal in his subject, and in the
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events which evolve it, may he not be original in his handling or
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tone? We really grieve to say that he is not, unless, indeed, we grant
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him the need of originality for the peculiar manner in which he has
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jumbled together the quaint and stilted tone of the old English
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dramatists with the degagee air of Cervantes. But this is a point upon
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which, through want of space, we must necessarily permit the reader to
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judge altogether for himself. We quote, however, a passage from the
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second scene of the first act, by way of showing how very easy a
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matter it is to make a man discourse Sancho Panza:-
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Chispa. Abernuncio Satanas! and a plague upon all lovers who
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ramble about at night, drinking the elements, instead of sleeping
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quietly in their beds. Every dead man to his cemetery, say I; and
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every friar to his monastery. Now, here's my master Victorian,
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yesterday a cow-keeper and to-day a gentleman; yesterday a student and
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to-day a lover; and I must be up later than the nightingale, for as
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the abbot sings so must the sacristan respond. God grant he may soon
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be married, for then shall all this serenading cease. Ay, marry,
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marry, marry! Mother, what does marry mean? It means to spin, to
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bear children, and to weep, my daughter! and, of a truth, there is
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something more in matrimony than the wedding-ring. And now, gentlemen,
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Pax vobiscum! as the ass said to the cabbages!
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And we might add, as an ass only should say.
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In fact, throughout "The Spanish Student," as well as throughout
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other compositions of its author, there runs a very obvious vein of
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imitation. We are perpetually reminded of something we have seen
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before- some old acquaintance in manner or matter, and even where
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the similarity cannot be said to amount to plagiarism, it is still
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injurious to the poet in the good opinion of him who reads.
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Among the minor defects of the play, we may mention the frequent
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allusion to book incidents not generally known, and requiring each a
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Note by way of explanation. The drama demands that everything be so
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instantaneously evident that he who runs may read; and the only
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impression effected by these Notes to a play is, that the author is
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desirous of showing his reading.
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We may mention, also, occasional tautologies, such as:-
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Never did I behold thee so attired
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And garmented in beauty as to-night!
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Or-
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What we need
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Is the celestial fire to change the fruit
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Into transparent crystal, bright and clear!
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We may speak, too, of more than occasional errors of grammar. For
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example:-
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"Did no one see thee? None, my love, but thou."
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Here "but" is not a conjunction, but a preposition, and governs thee
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in the objective. "None but thee" would be right; meaning none
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except thee, saving thee. Earlier, "mayest" is somewhat incorrectly
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written "may'st." And we have:-
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I have no other saint than thou to pray to.
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Here authority and analogy are both against Mr. Longfellow. "Than"
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also is here a preposition governing the objective, and meaning save
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or except. "I have none other God than thee, etc" See Horne Tooke. The
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Latin "quam te" is exactly equivalent. [Later] we read:-
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Like thee I am a captive, and, like thee,
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I have a gentle gaoler.
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Here "like thee" (although grammatical of course) does not convey
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the idea. Mr. L. does not mean that the speaker is like the bird
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itself, but that his condition resembles it. The true reading would
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thus be:-
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As thou I am a captive, and, as thou,
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I have a gentle poler.
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That is to say, as thou art and as thou hast.
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Upon the whole, we regret that Professor Longfellow has written this
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work, and feel especially vexed that he has committed himself by its
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republication. Only when regarded as a mere poem can it be said to
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have merit of any kind. For in fact it is only when we separate the
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poem from the drama that the passages we have commended as beautiful
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can be understood to have beauty. We are not too sure, indeed, that
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a "dramatic poem" is not a flat contradiction in terms. At all
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events a man of true genius (and such Mr. L. unquestionably is) has no
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business with these hybrid and paradoxical compositions. Let a poem be
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a poem only, let a play be a play and nothing more. As for "The
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Spanish Student," its thesis is unoriginal; its incidents are antique;
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its plot is no plot; its characters have no character, in short, it is
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a little better than a play upon words to style it "A Play" at all.
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PREFACE TO THE RAVEN AND OTHER POEMS
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THESE TRIFLES are collected and republished chiefly with a view to
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their redemption from the many improvements to which they have been
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subjected while "going the rounds of the press." I am naturally
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anxious that if what I have written is to circulate at all, it
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should circulate as I wrote it. In defence of my own taste,
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nevertheless, it is incumbent on me to say that I think nothing in
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this volume of much value to the public, or very creditable to myself.
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Events not to be controlled have prevented me from making, at any
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time, any serious effort in what, under happier circumstances would
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have been the field of my choice. With me poetry has not been a
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purpose, but a passion; and the passions should be held in
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reverence; they must not- they cannot at will be excited, with an
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eye to the paltry compensations, or the more paltry commendations,
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of mankind
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E. A. P.
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THE PHILOSOPHY OF COMPOSITION
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CHARLES DICKENS, in a note now lying before me, alluding to an
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examination I once made of the mechanism of "Barnaby Rudge," says- "By
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the way, are you aware that Godwin wrote his 'Caleb Williams'
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backwards? He first involved his hero in a web of difficulties,
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forming the second volume, and then, for the first, cast about him for
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some mode of accounting for what had been done."
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I cannot think this the precise mode of procedure on the part of
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Godwin- and indeed what he himself acknowledges, is not altogether
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in accordance with Mr. Dickens' idea- but the author of "Caleb
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Williams" was too good an artist not to perceive the advantage
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derivable from at least a somewhat similar process. Nothing is more
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clear than that every plot, worth the name, must be elaborated to
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its denouement before anything be attempted with the pen. It is only
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with the denouement constantly in view that we can give a plot its
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indispensable air of consequence, or causation, by making the
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incidents, and especially the tone at all points, tend to the
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development of the intention.
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There is a radical error, I think, in the usual mode of constructing
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a story. Either history affords a thesis- or one is suggested by an
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incident of the day- or, at best, the author sets himself to work in
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the combination of striking events to form merely the basis of his
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narrative-designing, generally, to fill in with description, dialogue,
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or autorial comment, whatever crevices of fact, or action, may, from
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page to page, render themselves apparent.
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I prefer commencing with the consideration of an effect. Keeping
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originality always in view- for he is false to himself who ventures to
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dispense with so obvious and so easily attainable a source of
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interest- I say to myself, in the first place, "Of the innumerable
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effects, or impressions, of which the heart, the intellect, or (more
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|
generally) the soul is susceptible, what one shall I, on the present
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occasion, select?" Having chosen a novel, first, and secondly a
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vivid effect, I consider whether it can be best wrought by incident or
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tone- whether by ordinary incidents and peculiar tone, or the
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converse, or by peculiarity both of incident and tone- afterward
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looking about me (or rather within) for such combinations of event, or
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tone, as shall best aid me in the construction of the effect.
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I have often thought how interesting a magazine paper might be
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written by any author who would- that is to say, who could- detail,
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step by step, the processes by which any one of his compositions
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attained its ultimate point of completion. Why such a paper has
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never been given to the world, I am much at a loss to say- but,
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perhaps, the autorial vanity has had more to do with the omission than
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any one other cause. Most writers- poets in especial- prefer having it
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understood that they compose by a species of fine frenzy- an
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ecstatic intuition- and would positively shudder at letting the public
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|
take a peep behind the scenes, at the elaborate and vacillating
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|
crudities of thought- at the true purposes seized only at the last
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|
moment- at the innumerable glimpses of idea that arrived not at the
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maturity of full view- at the fully-matured fancies discarded in
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despair as unmanageable- at the cautious selections and rejections- at
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the painful erasures and interpolations- in a word, at the wheels
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|
and pinions- the tackle for scene-shifting- the step-ladders, and
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|
demon-traps- the cock's feathers, the red paint and the black patches,
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which, in ninety-nine cases out of a hundred, constitute the
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properties of the literary histrio.
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I am aware, on the other hand, that the case is by no means
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common, in which an author is at all in condition to retrace the steps
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by which his conclusions have been attained. In general,
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suggestions, having arisen pell-mell are pursued and forgotten in a
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|
similar manner.
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For my own part, I have neither sympathy with the repugnance alluded
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to, nor, at any time, the least difficulty in recalling to mind the
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progressive steps of any of my compositions, and, since the interest
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of an analysis or reconstruction, such as I have considered a
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|
desideratum, is quite independent of any real or fancied interest in
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the thing analysed, it will not be regarded as a breach of decorum
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on my part to show the modus operandi by which some one of my own
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|
works was put together. I select 'The Raven' as most generally
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|
known. It is my design to render it manifest that no one point in
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|
its composition is referable either to accident or intuition- that the
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|
work proceeded step by step, to its completion, with the precision and
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|
rigid consequence of a mathematical problem.
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Let us dismiss, as irrelevant to the poem, per se, the circumstance-
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or say the necessity- which, in the first place, gave rise to the
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|
intention of composing a poem that should suit at once the popular and
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|
the critical taste.
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We commence, then, with this intention.
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The initial consideration was that of extent. If any literary work
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is too long to be read at one sitting, we must be content to
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|
dispense with the immensely important effect derivable from unity of
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|
impression- for, if two sittings be required, the affairs of the world
|
|
interfere, and everything like totality is at once destroyed. But
|
|
since, ceteris paribus, no poet can afford to dispense with anything
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|
that may advance his design, it but remains to be seen whether there
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|
is, in extent, any advantage to counterbalance the loss of unity which
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|
attends it. Here I say no, at once. What we term a long poem is, in
|
|
fact, merely a succession of brief ones- that is to say, of brief
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|
poetical effects. It is needless to demonstrate that a poem is such
|
|
only inasmuch as it intensely excites, by elevating the soul; and
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|
all intense excitements are, through a psychal necessity, brief. For
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|
this reason, at least, one-half of the "Paradise Lost" is
|
|
essentially prose- a succession of poetical excitements
|
|
interspersed, inevitably, with corresponding depressions- the whole
|
|
being deprived, through the extremeness of its length, of the vastly
|
|
important artistic element, totality, or unity of effect.
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|
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|
It appears evident, then, that there is a distinct limit, as regards
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|
length, to all works of literary art- the limit of a single sitting-
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|
and that, although in certain classes of prose composition, such as
|
|
"Robinson Crusoe" (demanding no unity), this limit may be
|
|
advantageously overpassed, it can never properly be overpassed in a
|
|
poem. Within this limit, the extent of a poem may be made to bear
|
|
mathematical relation to its merit- in other words, to the
|
|
excitement or elevation-again, in other words, to the degree of the
|
|
true poetical effect which it is capable of inducing; for it is
|
|
clear that the brevity must be in direct ratio of the intensity of the
|
|
intended effect- this, with one proviso- that a certain degree of
|
|
duration is absolutely requisite for the production of any effect at
|
|
all.
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|
Holding in view these considerations, as well as that degree of
|
|
excitement which I deemed not above the popular, while not below the
|
|
critical taste, I reached at once what I conceived the proper length
|
|
for my intended poem- a length of about one hundred lines. It is, in
|
|
fact, a hundred and eight.
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|
My next thought concerned the choice of an impression, or effect, to
|
|
be conveyed: and here I may as well observe that throughout the
|
|
construction, I kept steadily in view the design of rendering the work
|
|
universally appreciable. I should be carried too far out of my
|
|
immediate topic were I to demonstrate a point upon which I have
|
|
repeatedly insisted, and which, with the poetical, stands not in the
|
|
slightest need of demonstration- the point, I mean, that Beauty is the
|
|
sole legitimate province of the poem. A few words, however, in
|
|
elucidation of my real meaning, which some of my friends have
|
|
evinced a disposition to misrepresent. That pleasure which is at
|
|
once the most intense, the most elevating, and the most pure is, I
|
|
believe, found in the contemplation of the beautiful. When, indeed,
|
|
men speak of Beauty, they mean, precisely, not a quality, as is
|
|
supposed, but an effect- they refer, in short, just to that intense
|
|
and pure elevation of soul- not of intellect, or of heart- upon
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|
which I have commented, and which is experienced in consequence of
|
|
contemplating the "beautiful." Now I designate Beauty as the
|
|
province of the poem, merely because it is an obvious rule of Art that
|
|
effects should be made to spring from direct causes- that objects
|
|
should be attained through means best adapted for their attainment- no
|
|
one as yet having been weak enough to deny that the peculiar elevation
|
|
alluded to is most readily attained in the poem. Now the object Truth,
|
|
or the satisfaction of the intellect, and the object Passion, or the
|
|
excitement of the heart, are, although attainable to a certain
|
|
extent in poetry, far more readily attainable in prose. Truth, in
|
|
fact, demands a precision, and Passion, a homeliness (the truly
|
|
passionate will comprehend me), which are absolutely antagonistic to
|
|
that Beauty which, I maintain, is the excitement or pleasurable
|
|
elevation of the soul. It by no means follows, from anything here
|
|
said, that passion, or even truth, may not be introduced, and even
|
|
profitably introduced, into a poem for they may serve in
|
|
elucidation, or aid the general effect, as do discords in music, by
|
|
contrast- but the true artist will always contrive, first, to tone
|
|
them into proper subservience to the predominant aim, and, secondly,
|
|
to enveil them, as far as possible, in that Beauty which is the
|
|
atmosphere and the essence of the poem.
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|
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|
Regarding, then, Beauty as my province, my next question referred to
|
|
the tone of its highest manifestation- and all experience has shown
|
|
that this tone is one of sadness. Beauty of whatever kind in its
|
|
supreme development invariably excites the sensitive soul to tears.
|
|
Melancholy is thus the most legitimate of all the poetical tones.
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|
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|
The length, the province, and the tone, being thus determined, I
|
|
betook myself to ordinary induction, with the view of obtaining some
|
|
artistic piquancy which might serve me as a key-note in the
|
|
construction of the poem- some pivot upon which the whole structure
|
|
might turn. In carefully thinking over all the usual artistic effects-
|
|
or more properly points, in the theatrical sense- I did not fail to
|
|
perceive immediately that no one had been so universally employed as
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|
that of the refrain. The universality of its employment sufficed to
|
|
assure me of its intrinsic value, and spared me the necessity of
|
|
submitting it to analysis. I considered it, however, with regard to
|
|
its susceptibility of improvement, and soon saw it to be in a
|
|
primitive condition. As commonly used, the refrain, or burden, not
|
|
only is limited to lyric verse, but depends for its impression upon
|
|
the force of monotone- both in sound and thought. The pleasure is
|
|
deduced solely from the sense of identity- of repetition. I resolved
|
|
to diversify, and so heighten the effect, by adhering in general to
|
|
the monotone of sound, while I continually varied that of thought:
|
|
that is to say, I determined to produce continuously novel effects, by
|
|
the variation of the application of the refrain- the refrain itself
|
|
remaining for the most part, unvaried.
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|
These points being settled, I next bethought me of the nature of
|
|
my refrain. Since its application was to be repeatedly varied it was
|
|
clear that the refrain itself must be brief, for there would have been
|
|
an insurmountable difficulty in frequent variations of application
|
|
in any sentence of length. In proportion to the brevity of the
|
|
sentence would, of course, be the facility of the variation. This
|
|
led me at once to a single word as the best refrain.
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|
|
|
The question now arose as to the character of the word. Having
|
|
made up my mind to a refrain, the division of the poem into stanzas
|
|
was of course a corollary, the refrain forming the close to each
|
|
stanza. That such a close, to have force, must be sonorous and
|
|
susceptible of protracted emphasis, admitted no doubt, and these
|
|
considerations inevitably led me to the long o as the most sonorous
|
|
vowel in connection with r as the most producible consonant.
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|
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|
The sound of the refrain being thus determined, it became
|
|
necessary to select a word embodying this sound, and at the same
|
|
time in the fullest possible keeping with that melancholy which I
|
|
had pre-determined as the tone of the poem. In such a search it
|
|
would have been absolutely impossible to overlook the word
|
|
"Nevermore." In fact it was the very first which presented itself.
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|
|
|
The next desideratum was a pretext for the continuous use of the one
|
|
word "nevermore." In observing the difficulty which I had at once
|
|
found in inventing a sufficiently plausible reason for its
|
|
continuous repetition, I did not fail to perceive that this difficulty
|
|
arose solely from the preassumption that the word was to be so
|
|
continuously or monotonously spoken by a human being- I did not fail
|
|
to perceive, in short, that the difficulty lay in the reconciliation
|
|
of this monotony with the exercise of reason on the part of the
|
|
creature repeating the word. Here, then, immediately arose the idea of
|
|
a non-reasoning creature capable of speech, and very naturally, a
|
|
parrot, in the first instance, suggested itself, but was superseded
|
|
forthwith by a Raven as equally capable of speech, and infinitely more
|
|
in keeping with the intended tone.
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|
|
I had now gone so far as the conception of a Raven, the bird of
|
|
ill-omen, monotonously repeating the one word "Nevermore" at the
|
|
conclusion of each stanza in a poem of melancholy tone, and in
|
|
length about one hundred lines. Now, never losing sight of the object-
|
|
supremeness or perfection at all points, I asked myself- "Of all
|
|
melancholy topics what, according to the universal understanding of
|
|
mankind, is the most melancholy?" Death, was the obvious reply. "And
|
|
when," I said, "is this most melancholy of topics most poetical?" From
|
|
what I have already explained at some length the answer here also is
|
|
obvious- "When it most closely allies itself to Beauty: the death then
|
|
of a beautiful woman is unquestionably the most poetical topic in
|
|
the world, and equally is it beyond doubt that the lips best suited
|
|
for such topic are those of a bereaved lover."
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|
|
|
I had now to combine the two ideas of a lover lamenting his deceased
|
|
mistress and a Raven continuously repeating the word "Nevermore." I
|
|
had to combine these, bearing in mind my design of varying at every
|
|
turn the application of the word repeated, but the only intelligible
|
|
mode of such combination is that of imagining the Raven employing
|
|
the word in answer to the queries of the lover. And here it was that I
|
|
saw at once the opportunity afforded for the effect on which I had
|
|
been depending, that is to say, the effect of the variation of
|
|
application. I saw that I could make the first query propounded by the
|
|
lover- the first query to which the Raven should reply "Nevermore"-
|
|
that I could make this first query a commonplace one, the second
|
|
less so, the third still less, and so on, until at length the lover,
|
|
startled from his original nonchalance by the melancholy character
|
|
of the word itself, by its frequent repetition, and by a consideration
|
|
of the ominous reputation of the fowl that uttered it, is at length
|
|
excited to superstition, and wildly propounds queries of a far
|
|
different character- queries whose solution he has passionately at
|
|
heart- propounds them half in superstition and half in that species of
|
|
despair which delights in self-torture- propounds them not
|
|
altogether because he believes in the prophetic or demoniac
|
|
character of the bird (which reason assures him is merely repeating
|
|
a lesson learned by rote), but because he experiences a frenzied
|
|
pleasure in so modelling his questions as to receive from the expected
|
|
"Nevermore" the most delicious because the most intolerable of
|
|
sorrows. Perceiving the opportunity thus afforded me, or, more
|
|
strictly, thus forced upon me in the progress of the construction, I
|
|
first established in my mind the climax or concluding query- that
|
|
query to which "Nevermore" should be in the last place an answer- that
|
|
query in reply to which this word "Nevermore" should involve the
|
|
utmost conceivable amount of sorrow and despair.
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|
Here then the poem may be said to have had its beginning- at the end
|
|
where all works of art should begin- for it was here at this point
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of my preconsiderations that I first put pen to paper in the
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composition of the stanza:
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"Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil! prophet still if bird or devil!
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By that Heaven that bends above us- by that God we both adore,
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Tell this soul with sorrow laden, if, within the distant Aidenn,
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It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels name Lenore-
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Clasp a rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore."
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Quoth the Raven- "Nevermore."
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I composed this stanza, at this point, first that, by establishing
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the climax, I might the better vary and graduate, as regards
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seriousness and importance, the preceding queries of the lover, and
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secondly, that I might definitely settle the rhythm, the metre, and
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the length and general arrangement of the stanza, as well as
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graduate the stanzas which were to precede, so that none of them might
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surpass this in rhythmical effect. Had I been able in the subsequent
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composition to construct more vigorous stanzas I should without
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scruple have purposely enfeebled them so as not to interfere with
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the climacteric effect.
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And here I may as well say a few words of the versification. My
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first object (as usual) was originality. The extent to which this
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has been neglected in versification is one of the most unaccountable
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things in the world. Admitting that there is little possibility of
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variety in mere rhythm, it is still clear that the possible
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varieties of metre and stanza are absolutely infinite, and yet, for
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centuries, no man, in verse, has ever done, or ever seemed to think of
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doing, an original thing. The fact is that originality (unless in
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minds of very unusual force) is by no means a matter, as some suppose,
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of impulse or intuition. In general, to be found, it must be
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elaborately sought, and although a positive merit of the highest
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class, demands in its attainment less of invention than negation.
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Of course I pretend to no originality in either the rhythm or
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metre of the "Raven." The former is trochaic- the latter is
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octametre acatalectic, alternating with heptametre catalectic repeated
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in the refrain of the fifth verse, and terminating with tetrametre
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catalectic. Less pedantically the feet employed throughout
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(trochees) consist of a long syllable followed by a short, the first
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line of the stanza consists of eight of these feet, the second of
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seven and a half (in effect two-thirds), the third of eight, the
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fourth of seven and a half, the fifth the same, the sixth three and
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a half. Now, each of these lines taken individually has been
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employed before, and what originality the "Raven" has, is in their
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combination into stanza; nothing even remotely approaching this has
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ever been attempted. The effect of this originality of combination
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is aided by other unusual and some altogether novel effects, arising
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from an extension of the application of the principles of rhyme and
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alliteration.
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The next point to be considered was the mode of bringing together
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the lover and the Raven- and the first branch of this consideration
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was the locale. For this the most natural suggestion might seem to
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be a forest, or the fields- but it has always appeared to me that a
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close circumscription of space is absolutely necessary to the effect
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of insulated incident- it has the force of a frame to a picture. It
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has an indisputable moral power in keeping concentrated the attention,
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and, of course, must not be confounded with mere unity of place.
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I determined, then, to place the lover in his chamber- in a
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chamber rendered sacred to him by memories of her who had frequented
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it. The room is represented as richly furnished- this in mere
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pursuance of the ideas I have already explained on the subject of
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Beauty, as the sole true poetical thesis.
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The locale being thus determined, I had now to introduce the bird-
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and the thought of introducing him through the window was
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inevitable. The idea of making the lover suppose, in the first
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instance, that the flapping of the wings of the bird against the
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shutter, is a "tapping" at the door, originated in a wish to increase,
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by prolonging, the reader's curiosity, and in a desire to admit the
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incidental effect arising from the lover's throwing open the door,
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finding all dark, and thence adopting the half-fancy that it was the
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spirit of his mistress that knocked.
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I made the night tempestuous, first to account for the Raven's
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seeking admission, and secondly, for the effect of contrast with the
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(physical) serenity within the chamber.
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I made the bird alight on the bust of Pallas, also for the effect of
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contrast between the marble and the plumage- it being understood
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that the bust was absolutely suggested by the bird- the bust of Pallas
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being chosen, first, as most in keeping with the scholarship of the
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lover, and secondly, for the sonorousness of the word, Pallas, itself.
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About the middle of the poem, also, I have availed myself of the
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force of contrast, with a view of deepening the ultimate impression.
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For example, an air of the fantastic- approaching as nearly to the
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ludicrous as was admissible- is given to the Raven's entrance. He
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comes in "with many a flirt and flutter."
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Not the least obeisance made he- not a moment stopped or stayed he,
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But with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door.
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In the two stanzas which follow, the design is more obviously
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carried out:-
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Then this ebony bird, beguiling my sad fancy into smiling
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By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore,
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"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou," I said, "art sure no
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craven,
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Ghastly grim and ancient Raven wandering from the Nightly shore-
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Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore?"
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Quoth the Raven- "Nevermore."
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Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
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Though its answer little meaning- little relevancy bore;
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For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
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Ever yet was blessed with seeing bird above his chamber door-
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Bird or beast upon the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
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With such name as "Nevermore."
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The effect of the denouement being thus provided for, I
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immediately drop the fantastic for a tone of the most profound
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seriousness- this tone commencing in the stanza directly following the
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one last quoted, with the line,
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But the Raven, sitting lonely on that placid bust, spoke only, etc.
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From this epoch the lover no longer jests- no longer sees anything
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even of the fantastic in the Raven's demeanour. He speaks of him as
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a "grim, ungainly, ghastly, gaunt, and ominous bird of yore," and
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feels the "fiery eyes" burning into his "bosom's core." This
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revolution of thought, or fancy, on the lover's part, is intended to
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induce a similar one on the part of the reader- to bring the mind into
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a proper frame for the denouement- which is now brought about as
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rapidly and as directly as possible.
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With the denouement proper- with the Raven's reply, "Nevermore,"
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to the lover's final demand if he shall meet his mistress in another
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world- the poem, in its obvious phase, that of a simple narrative, may
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be said to have its completion. So far, everything is within the
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limits of the accountable- of the real. A raven, having learned by
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rote the single word "Nevermore," and having escaped from the
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custody of its owner, is driven at midnight, through the violence of a
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storm, to seek admission at a window from which a light still
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gleams- the chamber-window of a student, occupied half in poring
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over a volume, half in dreaming of a beloved mistress deceased. The
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casement being thrown open at the fluttering of the bird's wings,
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the bird itself perches on the most convenient seat out of the
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immediate reach of the student, who amused by the incident and the
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oddity of the visitor's demeanour, demands of it, in jest and
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|
without looking for a reply, its name. The raven addressed, answers
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with its customary word, "Nevermore"- a word which finds immediate
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|
echo in the melancholy heart of the student, who, giving utterance
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aloud to certain thoughts suggested by the occasion, is again startled
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by the fowl's repetition of "Nevermore." The student now guesses the
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state of the case, but is impelled, as I have before explained, by the
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human thirst for self-torture, and in part by superstition, to
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propound such queries to the bird as will bring him, the lover, the
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most of the luxury of sorrow, through the anticipated answer,
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"Nevermore." With the indulgence, to the extreme, of this
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self-torture, the narration, in what I have termed its first or
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obvious phase, has a natural termination, and so far there has been no
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overstepping of the limits of the real.
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But in subjects so handled, however skillfully, or with however
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vivid an array of incident, there is always a certain hardness or
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|
nakedness which repels the artistical eye. Two things are invariably
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|
required- first, some amount of complexity, or more properly,
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|
adaptation; and, secondly, some amount of suggestiveness- some
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under-current, however indefinite, of meaning. It is this latter, in
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especial, which imparts to a work of art so much of that richness
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(to borrow from colloquy a forcible term), which we are too fond of
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|
confounding with the ideal. It is the excess of the suggested meaning-
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it is the rendering this the upper instead of the under-current of the
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theme- which turns into prose (and that of the very flattest kind),
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the so-called poetry of the so-called transcendentalists.
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Holding these opinions, I added the two concluding stanzas of the
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poem- their suggestiveness being thus made to pervade all the
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narrative which has preceded them. The under-current of meaning is
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rendered first apparent in the line-
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"Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my
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door!"
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Quoth the Raven "Nevermore!"
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It will be observed that the words, "from out my heart," involve the
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|
first metaphorical expression in the poem. They, with the answer,
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"Nevermore," dispose the mind to seek a moral in all that has been
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|
previously narrated. The reader begins now to regard the Raven as
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emblematical- but it is not until the very last line of the very
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|
last stanza that the intention of making him emblematical of
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Mournful and never ending Remembrance is permitted distinctly to be
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|
seen:
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And the Raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting,
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On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
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And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon that is dreaming,
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And the lamplight o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
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And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
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Shall be lifted- nevermore.
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THE RATIONALE OF VERSE
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THE WORD "Verse" is here used not in its strict or primitive
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sense, but as the term most convenient for expressing generally and
|
|
without pedantry all that is involved in the consideration of
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|
rhythm, rhyme, metre, and versification.
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|
There is, perhaps, no topic in polite literature which has been more
|
|
pertinaciously discussed, and there is certainly not one about which
|
|
so much inaccuracy, confusion, misconception, misrepresentation,
|
|
mystification, and downright ignorance on all sides, can be fairly
|
|
said to exist. Were the topic really difficult, or did it lie, even,
|
|
in the cloudland of metaphysics, where the doubt- vapors may be made
|
|
to assume any and every shape at the will or at the fancy of the
|
|
gazer, we should have less reason to wonder at all this
|
|
contradiction and perplexity; but in fact the subject is exceedingly
|
|
simple; one-tenth of it, possibly, may be called ethical; nine-tenths,
|
|
however, appertain to mathematics; and the whole is included within
|
|
the limits of the commonest common sense.
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|
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|
"But, if this is the case, how," it will be asked, "can so much
|
|
misunderstanding have arisen? Is it conceivable that a thousand
|
|
profound scholars, investigating so very simple a matter for
|
|
centuries, have not been able to place it in the fullest light, at
|
|
least, of which it is susceptible?" These queries, I confess, are
|
|
not easily answered: at all events, a satisfactory reply to them might
|
|
cost more trouble than would, if properly considered, the whole vexata
|
|
quaestio to which they have reference. Nevertheless, there is little
|
|
difficulty or danger in suggesting that the "thousand profound
|
|
scholars" may have failed first, because they were scholars; secondly,
|
|
because they were profound; and thirdly, because they were a
|
|
thousand-the impotency of the scholarship and profundity having been
|
|
thus multiplied a thousand fold. I am serious in these suggestions;
|
|
for, first again, there is something in "scholarship" which seduces us
|
|
into blind worship of Bacon's Idol of the Theatre- into irrational
|
|
deference to antiquity, secondly, the proper "profundity" is rarely
|
|
profound- it is the nature of Truth in general, as of some ores in
|
|
particular, to be richest when most superficial; thirdly, the clearest
|
|
subject may be over-clouded by mere superabundance of talk. In
|
|
chemistry, the best way of separating two bodies is to add a third; in
|
|
speculation, fact often agrees with fact and argument with argument
|
|
until an additional well-meaning fact or argument sets everything by
|
|
the ears. In one case out of a hundred a point is excessively
|
|
discussed because it is obscure; in the ninety-nine remaining it is
|
|
obscure because excessively discussed. When a topic is thus
|
|
circumstanced, the readiest mode of investigating it is to forget that
|
|
any previous investigation has been attempted.
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|
But, in fact, while much has been written on the Greek and Latin
|
|
rhythms, and even on the Hebrew, little effort has been made at
|
|
examining that of any of the modern tongues. As regards the English,
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|
comparatively nothing has been done. It may be said, indeed, that we
|
|
are without a treatise on our own verse. In our ordinary grammars
|
|
and in our works on rhetoric or prosody in general, may be found
|
|
occasional chapters, it is true, which have the heading,
|
|
"Versification," but these are, in all instances, exceedingly
|
|
meagre. They pretend to no analysis; they propose nothing like system;
|
|
they make no attempts at even rule; everything depends upon
|
|
"authority." They are confined, in fact, to mere exemplification of
|
|
the supposed varieties of English feet and English lines- although
|
|
in no work with which I am acquainted are these feet correctly given
|
|
or these lines detailed in anything like their full extent. Yet what
|
|
has been mentioned is all- if we except the occasional introduction of
|
|
some pedagogue-ism, such as this borrowed from the Greek Prosodies:
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|
"When a syllable is wanting the verse is said to be catalectic; when
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|
the measure is exact, the line is acatalectic; when there is a
|
|
redundant syllable, it forms hypermeter." Now, whether a line be
|
|
termed catalectic or acatalectic is, perhaps, a point of no vital
|
|
importance- it is even possible that the student may be able to
|
|
decide, promptly, when the a should be employed and when omitted,
|
|
yet be incognizant, at the same time, of all that is worth knowing
|
|
in regard to the structure of verse.
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|
A leading defect in each of our treatises (if treatises they can
|
|
be called) is the confining the subject to mere Versification, while
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Verse in general, with the understanding given to the term in the
|
|
heading of this paper, is the real question at issue. Nor am I aware
|
|
of even one of our Grammars which so much as properly defines the word
|
|
versification itself. "Versification," says a work now before me, of
|
|
which the accuracy is far more than usual- the "English Grammar" of
|
|
Goold Brown- "Versification is the art of arranging words into lines
|
|
of correspondent length, so as to produce harmony by the regular
|
|
alternation of syllables differing in quantity." The commencement of
|
|
this definition might apply, indeed, to the art of versification,
|
|
but not to versification itself. Versification is not the art of
|
|
arranging, etc, but the actual arranging- a distinction too obvious to
|
|
need comment. The error here is identical with one which has been
|
|
too long permitted to disgrace the initial page of every one of our
|
|
school grammars. I allude to the definitions of English Grammar
|
|
itself. "English Grammar," it is said, "is the art of speaking and
|
|
writing the English language correctly." This phraseology, or
|
|
something essentially similar, is employed, I believe, by Bacon,
|
|
Miller, Fisk, Greenleaf, Ingersoll, Kirkland, Cooper, Flint, Pue,
|
|
Comly, and many others. These gentlemen, it is presumed, adopted it
|
|
without examination from Murray, who derived it from Lily (whose
|
|
work was "quam solam Regia Majestas in omnibus scholis docendam
|
|
praecipit"), and who appropriated it without acknowledgment, but
|
|
with some unimportant modification, from the Latin Grammar of
|
|
Leonicenus. It may be shown, however, that this definition, so
|
|
complacently received, is not, and cannot be, a proper definition of
|
|
English Grammar. A definition is that which so describes its object as
|
|
to distinguish it from all others- it is no definition of any one
|
|
thing if its terms are applicable to any one other. But if it be
|
|
asked- "What is the design- the end- the aim of English Grammar?"
|
|
our obvious answer is, "The art of speaking and writing the English
|
|
language correctly"- that is to say, we must use the precise words
|
|
employed as the definition of English Grammar itself. But the object
|
|
to be obtained by any means is, assuredly, not the means. English
|
|
Grammar and the end contemplated by English Grammar are two matters
|
|
sufficiently distinct; nor can the one be more reasonably regarded
|
|
as the other than a fishing- hook as a fish. The definition,
|
|
therefore, which is applicable in the latter instance, cannot, in
|
|
the former, be true. Grammar in general is the analysis of language;
|
|
English Grammar of the English.
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|
But to return to Versification as defined in our extract above.
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|
"It is the art," says the extract "of arranging words into lines of
|
|
correspondent length." Not so:- a correspondence in the length of
|
|
lines is by no means essential. Pindaric odes are, surely, instances
|
|
of versification, yet these compositions are noted for extreme
|
|
diversity in the length of their lines.
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|
The arrangement is moreover said to be for the purpose of
|
|
producing "harmony by the regular alternation," etc. But harmony is
|
|
not the sole aim- not even the principal one. In the construction of
|
|
verse, melody should never be left out of view; yet this is a point
|
|
which all our Prosodies have most unaccountably forborne to touch.
|
|
Reasoned rules on this topic should form a portion of all systems of
|
|
rhythm.
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|
"So as to produce harmony," says the definition, "by the regular
|
|
alternation," etc. A regular alternation, as described, forms no
|
|
part of any principle of versification. The arrangement of spondees
|
|
and dactyls, for example, in the Greek hexameter, is an arrangement
|
|
which may be termed at random. At least it is arbitrary. Without
|
|
interference with the line as a whole, a dactyl may be substituted for
|
|
a spondee, or the converse, at any point other than the ultimate and
|
|
penultimate feet, of which the former is always a spondee, the
|
|
latter nearly always a dactyl. Here, it is clear, we have no
|
|
"regular alternation of syllables differing in quantity."
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|
"So as to produce harmony," proceeds the definition "by the
|
|
regular alternation of syllables differing in quantity,"- in other
|
|
words by the alternation of long and short syllables; for in rhythm
|
|
all syllables are necessarily either short or long. But not only do
|
|
I deny the necessity of any regularity in the succession of feet
|
|
and, by consequence, of syllables, but dispute the essentiality of any
|
|
alternation regular or irregular, of syllables long and short. Our
|
|
author, observe, is now engaged in a definition of versification in
|
|
general, not of English versification in particular. But the Greek and
|
|
Latin metres abound in the spondee and pyrrhic- the former
|
|
consisting of two long syllables, the latter of two short; and there
|
|
are innumerable instances of the immediate succession of many spondees
|
|
and many pyrrhics.
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|
Here is a passage from Silius Italicus:
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Fallit te mensas inter quod credis inermem
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Tot bellis quaesita viro, tot caedibus armat
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Majestas aeterna ducem: si admoveris ora
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Cannas et Trebium ante oculos Trasymenaque busta
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Et Pauli stare ingentem miraberis umbram.
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|
Making the elisions demanded by the classic Prosodies, we should
|
|
scan these Hexameters thus:
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Fallit / te men / sas in / ter quod / credis in / ermem /
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Tot bel / lis quae / sita tot / caedibus / armat /
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Majes / tas ae / terna du / cem s'ad / moveris / ora /
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Cannas / et Trebi / ant ocu / los Trasy / menaque / busta /
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Et Pau / li sta / r' ingen / tem mi / raberis / umbram /
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It will be seen that, in the first and last of these lines, we
|
|
have only two short syllables in thirteen, with an uninterrupted
|
|
succession of no less than nine long syllables. But how are we to
|
|
reconcile all this with a definition of versification which
|
|
describes it as "the art of arranging words into lines of
|
|
correspondent length so as to produce harmony by the regular
|
|
alternation of syllables differing in quantity"?
|
|
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|
It may be urged, however, that our prosodist's intention was to
|
|
speak of the English metres alone, and that, by omitting all mention
|
|
of the spondee and pyrrhic, he has virtually avowed their exclusion
|
|
from our rhythms. A grammarian is never excusable on the ground of
|
|
good intentions. We demand from him, if from any one, rigorous
|
|
precision of style. But grant the design. Let us admit that our
|
|
author, following the example of all authors on English Prosody,
|
|
has, in defining versification at large, intended a definition
|
|
merely of the English. All these prosodists, we will say, reject the
|
|
spondee and pyrrhic. Still all admit the iambus, which consists of a
|
|
short syllable followed by a long; the trochee, which is the
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converse of the iambus; the dactyl, formed of one long syllable
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followed by two short; and the anapaest- two short succeeded by a
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long. The spondee is improperly rejected, as I shall presently show.
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The pyrrhic is rightfully dismissed. Its existence in either ancient
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or modern rhythm is purely chimerical, and the insisting on so
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perplexing a nonentity as a foot of two short syllables, affords,
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perhaps, the best evidence of the gross irrationality and subservience
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to authority which characterise our Prosody. In the meantime the
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acknowledged dactyl and anapaest are enough to sustain my
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proposition about the "alternation," etc, without reference to feet
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which are assumed to exist in the Greek and Latin metres alone- for an
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anapaest and a dactyl may meet in the same line, when, of course, we
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shall have an uninterrupted succession of four short syllables. The
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meeting of these two feet, to be sure, is an accident not contemplated
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in the definition now discussed; for this definition, in demanding a
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"regular alternation of syllables differing in quantity," insists on a
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regular succession of similar feet. But here is an example:
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Sing to me / Isabelle.
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This is the opening line of a little ballad now before me which
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proceeds in the same rhythm- a peculiarly beautiful one. More than all
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this:- English lines are often well composed, entirely, of a regular
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succession of syllables all of the same quantity:- the first line, for
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instance, of the following quatrain by Arthur C. Coxe:
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March! march! march!
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Making sounds as they tread,
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Ho! ho! how they step,
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Going down to the dead!
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The [first line] is formed of three caesuras. The caesura, of
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which I have much to say hereafter, is rejected by the English
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Prosodies, and grossly misrepresented in the classic. It is a
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perfect foot- the most important in all verse- and consists of a
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single long syllable; but the length of this syllable varies.
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It has thus been made evident that there is not one point of the
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definition in question which does not involve an error, and for
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anything more satisfactory or more intelligible we shall look in
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vain to any published treatise on the topic.
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So general and so total a failure can be referred only to radical
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misconception. In fact the English Prosodists have blindly followed
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the pedants. These latter, like les moutons de Panurge, have been
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occupied in incessant tumbling into ditches, for the excellent
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reason that their leaders have so tumbled before. The Iliad, being
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taken as a starting point, was made to stand instead of Nature and
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common sense. Upon this poem, in place of facts and deduction from
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fact, or from natural law, were built systems of feet, metres,
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rhythms, rules,- rules that contradict each other every five
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minutes, and for nearly all of which there may be found twice as
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many exceptions as examples. If any one has a fancy to be thoroughly
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confounded- to see how far the infatuation of what is termed
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"classical scholarship," can lead a bookworm in the manufacture of
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darkness out of sunshine, let him turn over for a few moments any of
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the German Greek Prosodies. The only thing clearly made out in them is
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a very magnificent contempt for Leibnitzs principle of "a sufficient
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reason."
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To divert attention from the real matter in hand by any further
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reference to these works is unnecessary, and would be weak. I cannot
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call to mind at this moment one essential particular of information
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that is to be gleaned from them, and I will drop them here with merely
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this one observation,- that employing from among the numerous
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"ancient" feet the spondee, the trochee, the iambus, the anapaest, the
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dactyl, and the caesura alone, I will engage to scan correctly any
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of the Horatian rhythms, or any true rhythm that human ingenuity can
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conceive. And this excess of chimerical feet is perhaps the very least
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of the scholastic supererogations. Ex uno disce omnia. The fact is
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that quantity is a point in whose investigation the lumber of mere
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learning may be dispensed with, if ever in any. Its appreciation is
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universal. It appertains to no region, nor race, nor era in special.
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To melody and to harmony the Greeks hearkened with ears precisely
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similar to those which we employ for similar purposes at present,
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and I should not be condemned for heresy in asserting that a
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pendulum at Athens would have vibrated much after the same fashion
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as does a pendulum in the city of Penn.
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Verse originates in the human enjoyment of equality, fitness. To
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this enjoyment, also, all the moods of verse, rhythm, metre, stanza,
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rhyme, alliteration, the refrain, and other analagous effects, are
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to be referred. As there are some readers who habitually confound
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rhythm and metre, it may be as well here to say that the former
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concerns the character of feet (that is arrangements of syllables)
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while the latter has to do with the number of these feet. Thus by "a
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dactylic rhythm" we express a sequence of dactyls. By "a dactylic
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hexameter" we imply a line or measure consisting of six of these
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dactyls.
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To return to equality. Its idea embraces those of similarity,
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proportion, identity, repetition, and adaptation or fitness. It
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might not be very difficult to go even behind the idea of equality,
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and show both how and why it is that the human nature takes pleasure
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in it, but such an investigation would, for any purpose now in view,
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be supererogatory. It is sufficient that the fact is undeniable- the
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fact that man derives enjoyment from his perception of equality. Let
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us examine a crystal. We are at once interested by the equality
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between the sides and between the angles of one of its faces; the
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equality of the sides pleases us, that of the angles doubles the
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pleasure. On bringing to view a second face in all respects similar to
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the first, this pleasure seems to be squared; on bringing to view a
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third it appears to be cubed, and so on. I have no doubt, indeed, that
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the delight experienced, if measurable, would be found to have exact
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mathematical relation such as I suggest, that is to say, as far as a
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certain point, beyond which there would be a decrease in similar
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relations.
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The perception of pleasure in the equality of sounds is the
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principle of Music. Unpractised ears can appreciate only simple
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equalities, such as are found in ballad airs. While comparing one
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simple sound with another they are too much occupied to be capable
|
|
of comparing the equality subsisting between these two simple sounds
|
|
taken conjointly, and two other similar simple sounds taken
|
|
conjointly. Practised ears, on the other hand, appreciate both
|
|
equalities at the same instant, although it is absurd to suppose
|
|
that both are heard at the same instant. One is heard and
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|
appreciated from itself, the other is heard by the memory, and the
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instant glides into and is confounded with the secondary appreciation.
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|
Highly cultivated musical taste in this manner enjoys not only these
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|
double equalities, all appreciated at once, but takes pleasurable
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|
cognizance, through memory, of equalities the members of which occur
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|
at intervals so great that the uncultivated taste loses them
|
|
altogether. That this latter can properly estimate or decide on the
|
|
merits of what is called scientific music is of course impossible. But
|
|
scientific music has no claim to intrinsic excellence; it is fit for
|
|
scientific ears alone. In its excess it is the triumph of the physique
|
|
over the morale of music. The sentiment is overwhelmed by the sense.
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|
On the whole, the advocates of the simpler melody and harmony have
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infinitely the best of the argument, although there has been very
|
|
little of real argument on the subject.
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In verse, which cannot be better designated than as an inferior or
|
|
less capable Music, there is, happily, little chance for complexity.
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Its rigidly simple character not even Science- not even Pedantry can
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greatly pervert.
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The rudiment of verse may possibly be found in the spondee. The very
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|
germ of a thought seeking satisfaction in equality of sound would
|
|
result in the construction of words of two syllables, equally
|
|
accented. In corroboration of this idea we find that spondees most
|
|
abound in the most ancient tongues. The second step we can easily
|
|
suppose to be the comparison, that is to say, the collocation of two
|
|
spondees- or two words composed each of a spondee. The third step
|
|
would be the juxtaposition of three of these words. By this time the
|
|
perception of monotone would induce further consideration; and thus
|
|
arises what Leigh Hunt so flounders in discussing under the title of
|
|
"The Principle of Variety in Uniformity." Of course there is no
|
|
principle in the case- nor in maintaining it. The "Uniformity" is
|
|
the principle- the "Variety" is but the principle's natural
|
|
safeguard from self-destruction by excess of self. "Uniformity,"
|
|
besides, is the very worst word that could have been chosen for the
|
|
expression of the general idea at which it aims.
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The perception of monotone having given rise to an attempt at its
|
|
relief, the first thought in this new direction would be that of
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|
collating two or more words formed each of two syllables differently
|
|
accented (that is to say, short and long) but having the same order in
|
|
each word- in other terms, of collating two or more iambuses, or two
|
|
or more trochees. And here let me pause to assert that more pitiable
|
|
nonsense has been written on the topic of long and short syllables
|
|
than on any other subject under the sun. In general, a syllable is
|
|
long or short, just as it is difficult or easy of enunciation. The
|
|
natural long syllables are those encumbered- the natural short
|
|
syllables are those unencumbered with consonants; all the rest is mere
|
|
artificiality and jargon. The Latin Prosodies have a rule that a
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|
"vowel before two consonants is long." This rule is deduced from
|
|
"authority"- that is, from the observation that vowels so
|
|
circumstanced, in the ancient poems, are always in syllables long by
|
|
the laws of scansion. The philosophy of the rule is untouched, and
|
|
lies simply in the physical difficulty of giving voice to such
|
|
syllables- of performing the lingual evolutions necessary for their
|
|
utterance. Of course, it is not the vowel that is long (although the
|
|
rule says so), but the syllable of which the vowel is a part. It
|
|
will be seen that the length of a syllable, depending on the
|
|
facility or difficulty of its enunciation, must have great variation
|
|
in various syllables; but for the purposes of verse we suppose a
|
|
long syllable equal to two short ones, and the natural deviation
|
|
from this relativeness we correct in perusal. The more closely our
|
|
long syllables approach this relation with our short ones, the better,
|
|
ceteris paribus, will be our verse: but if the relation does not exist
|
|
of itself we force it by emphasis, which can, of course, make any
|
|
syllable as long as desired;- or, by an effort we can pronounce with
|
|
unnatural brevity a syllable that is naturally too long. Accented
|
|
syllables are, of course, always long, but where unencumbered with
|
|
consonants, must be classed among the unnaturally long. Mere custom
|
|
has declared that we shall accent them- that is to say, dwell upon
|
|
them; but no inevitable lingual difficulty forces us to do so. In
|
|
fine, every long syllable must of its own accord occupy in its
|
|
utterance, or must be made to occupy, precisely the time demanded
|
|
for two short ones. The only exception to this rule is found in the
|
|
caesura- of which more anon.
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|
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|
The success of the experiment with the trochees or iambuses (the one
|
|
would have suggested the other) must have led to a trial of dactyls or
|
|
anapaests- natural dactyls or anapaests- dactylic or anapaestic words.
|
|
And now some degree of complexity has been attained. There is an
|
|
appreciation, first, of the equality between the several dactyls or
|
|
anapaests, and secondly, of that between the long syllable and the two
|
|
short conjointly. But here it may be said, that step after step
|
|
would have been taken, in continuation of this routine, until all
|
|
the feet of the Greek Prosodies became exhausted. Not so; these
|
|
remaining feet have no existence except in the brains of the
|
|
scholiasts. It is needless to imagine men inventing these things,
|
|
and folly to explain how and why they invented them, until it shall be
|
|
first shown that they are actually invented. All other "feet" than
|
|
those which I have specified are, if not impossible at first view,
|
|
merely combinations of the specified; and, although this assertion
|
|
is rigidly true, I will, to avoid misunderstanding, put it in a
|
|
somewhat different shape. I will say, then, that at present I am aware
|
|
of no rhythm- nor do I believe that any one can be constructed- which,
|
|
in its last analysis, will not be found to consist altogether of the
|
|
feet I have mentioned, either existing in their individual and obvious
|
|
condition, or interwoven with each other in accordance with simple
|
|
natural laws which I will endeavour to point out hereafter.
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|
|
|
We have now gone so far as to suppose men constructing indefinite
|
|
sequences of spondaic, iambic, trochaic, dactylic, or anapaestic
|
|
words. In extending these sequences, they would be again arrested by
|
|
the sense of monotone. A succession of spondees would immediately have
|
|
displeased; one of iambuses or of trochees, on account of the
|
|
variety included within the foot itself, would have taken longer to
|
|
displease, one of dactyls or anapaests, still longer; but even the
|
|
last, if extended very far, must have become wearisome. The idea first
|
|
of curtailing, and secondly of defining, the length of a sequence
|
|
would thus at once have arisen. Here then is the line of verse
|
|
proper.* The principle of equality being constantly at the bottom of
|
|
the whole process, lines would naturally be made, in the first
|
|
instance, equal in the number of their feet; in the second instance,
|
|
there would be variation in the mere number; one line would be twice
|
|
as long as another, then one would be some less obvious multiple of
|
|
another; then still less obvious proportions would be adopted-
|
|
nevertheless there would be proportion, that is to say, a phase of
|
|
equality, still.
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|
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|
* Verse, from the Latin vertere, to turn, is so called on account of
|
|
the turning or re-commencement of the series of feet. Thus a verse
|
|
strictly speaking is a line. In this sense, however, I have
|
|
preferred using the latter word alone; employing the former in the
|
|
general acceptation given it in the heading of this paper.
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|
|
|
Lines being once introduced, the necessity of distinctly defining
|
|
these lines to the ear (as yet written verse does not exist), would
|
|
lead to a scrutiny of their capabilities at their terminations- and
|
|
now would spring up the idea of equality in sound between the final
|
|
syllables- in other words, of rhyme. First, it would be used only in
|
|
the iambic, anapaestic, and spondaic rhythms (granting that the latter
|
|
had not been thrown aside long since, on account of its tameness),
|
|
because in these rhythms the concluding syllable being long, could
|
|
best sustain the necessary protraction of the voice. No great while
|
|
could elapse, however, before the effect, found pleasant as well as
|
|
useful, would be applied to the two remaining rhythms. But as the
|
|
chief force of rhyme must lie in the accented syllable, the attempt to
|
|
create rhyme at all in these two remaining rhythms, the trochaic and
|
|
dactylic, would necessarily result in double and triple rhymes, such
|
|
as beauty with duty (trochaic), and beautiful with dutiful (dactylic).
|
|
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|
It must be observed that in suggesting these processes I assign them
|
|
no date; nor do I even insist upon their order. Rhyme is supposed to
|
|
be of modern origin, and were this proved my positions remain
|
|
untouched. I may say, however, in passing, that several instances of
|
|
rhyme occur in the "Clouds" of Aristophanes, and that the Roman
|
|
poets occasionally employed it. There is an effective species of
|
|
ancient rhyming which has never descended to the moderns: that in
|
|
which the ultimate and penultimate syllables rhyme with each other.
|
|
For example:
|
|
|
|
Parturiunt montes; nascetur ridiculus mus.
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|
|
|
And again:
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|
|
|
Litoreis ingens inventa sub ilicibus sus.
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|
|
|
The terminations of Hebrew verse (as far as understood) show no
|
|
signs of rhyme; but what thinking person can doubt that it did
|
|
actually exist? That men have so obstinately and blindly insisted,
|
|
in general, even up to the present day, in confining rhyme to the ends
|
|
of lines, when its effect is even better applicable elsewhere,
|
|
intimates in my opinion the sense of some necessity in the
|
|
connection of the ends with the rhyme- hints that the origin of
|
|
rhyme lay in a necessity which connected it with the end- shows that
|
|
neither mere accident nor mere fancy gave rise to the
|
|
connection-points, in a word, at the very necessity which I have
|
|
suggested (that of some mode of defining lines to the ear), as the
|
|
true origin of rhyme. Admit this and we throw the origin far back in
|
|
the night of Time- beyond the origin of written verse.
|
|
|
|
But to resume. The amount of complexity I have now supposed to be
|
|
attained is very considerable. Various systems of equalization are
|
|
appreciated at once (or nearly so) in their respective values and in
|
|
the value of each system with reference to all the others. As our
|
|
present ultimatum of complexity, we have arrived at triple-rhymed,
|
|
natural-dactylic lines, existing proportionally as well as equally
|
|
with regard to other triple-rhymed, natural-dactylic lines. For
|
|
example:
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|
|
Virginal Lilian, rigidly, humblily dutiful;
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|
|
Saintlily, lowlily,
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|
|
Thrillingly, holily
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|
Beautiful!
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|
|
|
Here we appreciate, first, the absolute equality between the long
|
|
syllable of each dactyl and the two short conjointly; secondly, the
|
|
absolute equality between each dactyl and any other dactyl, in other
|
|
words, among all the dactyls; thirdly, the absolute equality between
|
|
the two middle lines; fourthly, the absolute equality between the
|
|
first line and the three others taken conjointly, fifthly, the
|
|
absolute equality between the last two syllables of the respective
|
|
words "dutiful" and "beautiful"; sixthly, the absolute equality
|
|
between the two last syllables of the respective words "lowlily" and
|
|
"holily"; seventhly, the proximate equality between the first syllable
|
|
of "dutiful" and the first syllable of "beautiful"; eighthly, the
|
|
proximate equality between the first syllable of "lowlily" and that of
|
|
"holily"; ninthly, the proportional equality (that of five to one)
|
|
between the first line and each of its members, the dactyls;
|
|
tenthly, the proportional equality (that of two to one) between each
|
|
of the middle lines and its members, the dactyls, eleventhly, the
|
|
proportional equality between the first line and each of the two
|
|
middle, that of five to two; twelfthly, the proportional equality
|
|
between the first line and the last, that of five to one;
|
|
thirteenthly, the proportional equality between each of the middle
|
|
lines and the last, that of two to one, lastly, the proportional
|
|
equality, as concerns number, between all the lines taken
|
|
collectively, and any individual line, that of four to one.
|
|
|
|
The consideration of this last equality would give birth immediately
|
|
to the idea of stanza,* that is to say, the insulation of lines into
|
|
equal or obviously proportional masses. In its primitive (which was
|
|
also its best) form the stanza would most probably have had absolute
|
|
unity. In other words, the removal of any one of its lines would
|
|
have rendered it imperfect, as in the case above, where if the last
|
|
line, for example, be taken away there is left no rhyme to the
|
|
"dutiful" of the first. Modern stanza is excessively loose, and
|
|
where so, ineffective as a matter of course.
|
|
|
|
* A stanza is often vulgarly, and with gross impropriety, called a
|
|
verse.
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|
|
|
Now, although in the deliberate written statement which I have
|
|
here given of these various systems of equalities, there seems to be
|
|
an infinity of complexity so much that it is hard to conceive the mind
|
|
taking cognisance of them all in the brief period occupied by the
|
|
perusal or recital of the stanza, yet the difficulty is in fact
|
|
apparent only when we will it to become so. Any one fond of mental
|
|
experiment may satisfy himself, by trial, that in listening to the
|
|
lines he does actually (although with a seeming unconsciousness, on
|
|
account of the rapid evolutions of sensation) recognise and
|
|
instantaneously appreciate (more or less intensely as his is
|
|
cultivated) each and all of the equalizations detailed. The pleasure
|
|
received or receivable has very much such progressive increase, and in
|
|
very nearly such mathematical relations as those which I have
|
|
suggested in the case of the crystal.
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|
|
|
It will be observed that I speak of merely a proximate equality
|
|
between the first syllable of "dutiful" and that of "beautiful," and
|
|
it may be asked why we cannot imagine the earliest rhymes to have
|
|
had absolute instead of proximate equality of sound. But absolute
|
|
equality would have involved the use of identical words, and it is the
|
|
duplicate sameness or monotony, that of sense as well as that of
|
|
sound, which would have caused these rhymes to be rejected in the very
|
|
first instance.
|
|
|
|
The narrowness of the limits within which verse composed of
|
|
natural feet alone must necessarily have been confined would have led,
|
|
after a very brief interval, to the trial and immediate adoption of
|
|
artificial feet, that is to say, of feet not constituted each of a
|
|
single word but two, or even three words, or of parts of words.
|
|
These feet would be intermingled with natural ones. For example:
|
|
|
|
A breath / can make / them as / a breath / his made.
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|
|
This is an iambic line in which each iambus is formed of two words.
|
|
Again:
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|
|
|
The un / ima / gina / ble might / of Jove.
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|
|
|
This is an iambic line in which the first foot is formed of a word and
|
|
a part of a word; the second and third of parts taken from the body or
|
|
interior of a word; the fourth of a part and a whole; the fifth of two
|
|
complete words. There are no natural feet in either line. Again:
|
|
|
|
Can it be / fancied that / Deity / ever vin / dictively
|
|
|
|
Made in his / image a / mannikin / merely to / madden it?
|
|
|
|
These are two dactylic lines in which we find natural feet ("Deity,"
|
|
"mannikin"); feet composed of two words ("fancied that," "image a,"
|
|
"merely to," "madden it"); feet composed of three words, ("can it be,"
|
|
"made in his"); a foot composed of a part of a word ("dictively"); and
|
|
a foot composed of a word and a part of a word ("ever vin").
|
|
|
|
And now, in our suppositional progress, we have gone so far as to
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exhaust all the essentialities of verse. What follows may, strictly
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speaking, be regarded as embellishment merely, but even in this
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embellishment the rudimental sense of equality would have been the
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never-ceasing impulse. It would, for example, be simply in seeking
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further administration to this sense that men would come in time to
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think of the refrain or burden, where, at the closes of the several
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stanzas of a poem, one word or phrase is repeated; and of
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alliteration, in whose simplest form a consonant is repeated in the
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commencements of various words. This effect would be extended so as to
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embrace repetitions both of vowels and of consonants in the bodies
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as well as in the beginnings of words, and at a later period would
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be made to infringe on the province of rhyme by the introduction of
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general similarity of sound between whole feet occurring in the body
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of a line- all of which modifications I have exemplified in the line
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above.
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Made in his image a mannikin merely to madden it.
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Further cultivation would improve also the refrain by relieving
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its monotone in slightly varying the phrase at each repetition, or (as
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I have attempted to do in "The Raven") in retaining the phrase and
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varying its application, although this latter point is not strictly
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a rhythmical effect alone. Finally, poets when fairly wearied with
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following precedent, following it the more closely the less they
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perceived it in company with Reason, would adventure so far as to
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indulge in positive rhyme at other points than the ends of lines.
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First, they would put it in the middle of the line, then at some point
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where the multiple would be less obvious, then, alarmed at their own
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audacity, they would undo all their work by cutting these lines in
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two. And here is the fruitful source of the infinity of "short
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metre" by which modern poetry, if not distinguished, is at least
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disgraced. It would require a high degree, indeed, both of cultivation
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and of courage on the part of any versifier to enable him to place his
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rhymes, and let them remain at unquestionably their best position,
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that of unusual and unanticipated intervals.
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On account of the stupidity of some people, or (if talent be a
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more respectable word), on account of their talent for
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misconception- I think it necessary to add here, first, that I believe
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the "processes" above detailed to be nearly, if not accurately,
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those which did occur in the gradual creation of what we now can
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verse; secondly, that, although I so believe, I yet urge neither the
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assumed fact nor my belief in it as a part of the true propositions of
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this paper, thirdly, that in regard to the aim of this paper, it is of
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no consequence whether these processes did occur either in the order I
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have assigned them, or at all; my design being simply, in presenting a
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general type of what such processes might have been and must have
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resembled, to help them, the "some people," to an easy understanding
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of what I have further to say on the topic of Verse.
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There is one point, which, in my summary of the processes, I have
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purposely forborne to touch; because this point, being the most
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important of all on account of the immensity of error usually involved
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in its consideration, would have led me into a series of detail
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inconsistent with the object of a summary.
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Every reader of verse must have observed how seldom it happens
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that even any one line proceeds uniformly with a succession, such as I
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have supposed, of absolutely equal feet; that is to say, with a
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succession of iambuses only, or of trochees only, or of dactyls
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only, or of anapaests only, or of spondees only. Even in the most
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musical lines we find the succession interrupted. The iambic
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pentameters of Pope, for example, will be found on examination,
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frequently varied by trochees in the beginning, or by (what seem to
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be) anapaests in the body of the line.
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oh thou / whate / ver ti / tle please / thine ear /
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Dean Dra / pier Bick / erstaff / or Gull / iver /
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Whether / thou choose / Cervan / tes' / se / rious air /
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or laugh / and shake / in Rab / elais' ea / sy chair /
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Were any one weak enough to refer to the Prosodies for the solution of
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the difficulty here, he would find it solved as usual by a rule,
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stating the fact (or what it, the rule, supposes to be the fact),
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but without the slightest attempt at the rationale. "By a synaeresis
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of the two short syllables," say the books, "an anapaest may sometimes
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be employed for an iambus, or dactyl for a trochee.... In the
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beginning of a line a trochee is often used for an iambus."
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Blending is the plain English for synaeresis- but there should be no
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blending; neither is an anapaest ever employed for an iambus, or a
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dactyl for a trochee. These feet differ in time, and no feet so
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differing can ever be legitimately used in the same line. An
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anapaest is equal to four short syllables- an iambus only to three.
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Dactyls and trochees hold the same relation. The principle of
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equality, in verse, admits, it is true, of variation at certain
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points, for the relief of monotone, as I have already shown, but the
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point of time is that point which, being the rudimental one, must
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never be tampered with at all.
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To explain:- In further efforts for the relief of monotone than
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those to which I have alluded in the summary, men soon came to see
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that there was no absolute necessity for adhering to the precise
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number of syllables, provided the time required for the whole foot was
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preserved inviolate. They saw, for instance, that in such a line as
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or laugh / and shake / in Rab / elais ea / sy chair /
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the equalisation of the three syllables elais ea with the two
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syllables composing any of the other feet could be readily effected by
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pronouncing the two syllables elais in double quick time. By
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pronouncing each of the syllables e and lais twice as rapidly as the
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syllable sy, or the syllable in, or any other short syllable, they
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could bring the two of them, taken together, to the length, that is to
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say to the time, of any one short syllable. This consideration enabled
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them to effect the agreeable variation of three syllables in place
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of the uniform two. And variation was the object-variation to the ear.
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What sense is there, then, in supposing this object rendered null by
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the blending of the two syllables so as to render them, in absolute
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|
effect, one? Of course, there must be no blending. Each syllable
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must be pronounced as distinctly as possible (or the variation is
|
|
lost), but with twice the rapidity in which the ordinary short
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syllable is enunciated. That the syllables elais ea do not compose
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an anapaest is evident, and the signs of their accentuation are
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erroneous. The foot might be written with inverted crescents
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expressing double quick time; and might be called a bastard iambus.
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Here is a trochaic line:
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See the / delicate-footed / rain-deer.
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The prosodies- that is to say the most considerate of them- would
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here decide that "delicate" is a dactyl used in place of a trochee,
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and would refer to what they call their "rule, for justification.
|
|
Others, varying the stupidity, would insist upon a Procrustean
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adjustment thus (del'cate) an adjustment recommended to all such words
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as silvery, murmuring. etc., which, it is said, should be not only
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|
pronounced but written silv'ry, murm'ring, and so on, whenever they
|
|
find themselves in trochaic predicament. I have only to say that
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"delicate," when circumstanced as above, is neither a dactyl nor a
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dactyl's equivalent; that I think it as well to call it a bastard
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trochee; and that all words, at all events, should be written and
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pronounced in full, and as nearly as possible as nature intended them.
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About eleven years ago, there appeared in "The American Monthly
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|
Magazine" (then edited, I believe, by Messrs Hoffman and Benjamin,)
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a review of Mr. Willis's Poems; the critic putting forth his strength,
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|
or his weakness, in an endeavor to show that the poet was either
|
|
absurdly affected, or grossly ignorant of the laws of verse; the
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|
accusation being based altogether on the fact that Mr. W. made
|
|
occasional use of this very word "delicate," and other similar
|
|
words, in "the Heroic measure, which every one knew consisted of
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|
feet of two syllables." Mr. W. has often, for example, such lines as
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That binds him to a woman's delicate love-
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In the gay sunshine, reverent in the storm
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With its invisible fingers my loose hair.
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Here of course, the feet licate love, verent in and sible fin, are
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bastard iambuses; are not anapaests and are not improperly used. Their
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|
employment, on the contrary, by Mr. Willis, is but one of the
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|
innumerable instances he has given of keen sensibility in all those
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|
matters of taste which may be classed under the general head of
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|
fanciful embellishment.
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It is also about eleven years ago, if I am not mistaken, since Mr.
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Horne (of England,) the author of "Orion," one of the noblest epics in
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|
any language, thought it necessary to preface his "Chaucer Modernized"
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|
by a very long and evidently a very elaborate essay, of which the
|
|
greater portion was occupied in a discussion of the seemingly
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|
anomalous foot of which we have been speaking. Mr. Horne upholds
|
|
Chaucer in its frequent use; maintains his superiority, on account
|
|
of his so frequently using it, over all English versifiers; and
|
|
indignantly repelling the common idea of those who make verse on their
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|
fingers- that the superfluous syllable is a roughness and an error-
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|
very chivalrously makes battle for it as a "grace." That a grace it
|
|
is, there can be no doubt; and what I complain of is, that the
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|
author of the most happily versified long poem in existence, should
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have been under the necessity of discussing this grace merely as a
|
|
grace, through forty or fifty vague pages, solely because of his
|
|
inability to show how and why it is a grace- by which showing the
|
|
question would have been settled in an instant.
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About the trochee used for an iambus, as we see in the beginning
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|
of the line,
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|
Whether thou choose Cervantes' serious air,
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|
there is little that need be said. It brings me to the general
|
|
proposition that, in all rhythms, the prevalent or distinctive feet
|
|
may be varied at will and nearly at random, by the occasional
|
|
introduction of feet- that is to say, feet the sum of whose syllabic
|
|
times is equal to the sum of the syllabic times of the distinctive
|
|
feet. Thus, the trochee, whether is equal, in the sum of the times
|
|
of its syllables, to the iambus, thou choose, in the sum of the
|
|
times of its syllables; each foot being in time equal to three short
|
|
syllables. Good versifiers who happen to be also good poets,
|
|
contrive to relieve the monotony of a series of feet by the use of
|
|
equivalent feet only at rare intervals, and at such points of their
|
|
subject as seem in accordance with the startling character of the
|
|
variation. Nothing of this care is seen in the line quoted above-
|
|
although Pope has some fine instances of the duplicate effect. Where
|
|
vehemence is to be strongly expressed, I am not sure that we should be
|
|
wrong in venturing on two consecutive equivalent feet- although I
|
|
cannot say that I have ever known the adventure made, except in the
|
|
following passage, which occurs in "Al Aaraaf," a boyish poem
|
|
written by myself when a boy. I am referring to the sudden and rapid
|
|
advent of a star:
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|
Dim was its little disk, and angel eyes
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|
Alone could see the phantom in the skies,
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|
When first the phantoms course was found to be
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|
Headlong hithirward o'er the starry sea.
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|
In the "general proposition" above, I speak of the occasional
|
|
introduction of equivalent feet. It sometimes happens that unskilful
|
|
versifiers, without knowing what they do, or why they do it, introduce
|
|
so many "variations" as to exceed in number the "distinctive" feet,
|
|
when the ear becomes at once balked by the bouleversement of the
|
|
rhythm. Too many trochees, for example, inserted in an iambic rhythm
|
|
would convert the latter to a trochaic. I may note here that in all
|
|
cases the rhythm designed should be commenced and continued, without
|
|
variation, until the ear has had full time to comprehend what is the
|
|
rhythm. In violation of a rule so obviously founded in common sense,
|
|
many even of our best poets do not scruple to begin an iambic rhythm
|
|
with a trochee, or the converse; or a dactylic with an anapaest or the
|
|
converse; and so on.
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|
|
|
A somewhat less objectionable error, although still a decided one,
|
|
is that of commencing a rhythm not with a different equivalent foot
|
|
but with a "bastard" foot of the rhythm intended. For example:
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|
Many a / thought will / come to / memory. /
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|
Here 'many a' is what I have explained to be a bastard trochee, and to
|
|
be understood should be accented with inverted crescents. It is
|
|
objectionable solely on account of its position as the opening foot of
|
|
a trochaic rhythm. Memory, similarly accented is also a bastard
|
|
trochee, but unobjectionable, although by no means demanded.
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|
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|
The further illustration of this point will enable me to take an
|
|
important step.
|
|
|
|
One of our finest poets, Mr. Christopher Pearse Cranch, begins a
|
|
very beautiful poem thus:
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|
Many are the thoughts that come to me
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|
In my lonely musing;
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|
And they drift so strange and swift
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|
There's no time for choosing
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|
|
Which to follow; for to leave
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|
Any, seems a losing.
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|
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|
"A losing" to Mr. Cranch, of course- but this en passant. It will be
|
|
seen here that the intention is trochaic;- although we do not see this
|
|
intention by the opening foot as we should do, or even by the
|
|
opening line. Reading the whole stanza, however, we perceive the
|
|
trochaic rhythm as the general design, and so after some reflection,
|
|
we divide the first line thus:
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|
Many are the / thoughts that / come to / me.
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|
|
|
Thus scanned, the line will seem musical. It is highly so. And it is
|
|
because there is no end to instances of just such lines of
|
|
apparently incomprehensible music, that Coleridge thought proper to
|
|
invent his nonsensical system of what he calls "scanning by
|
|
accents"- as if "scanning by accents" were anything more than a
|
|
phrase. Whenever "Christabel" is really not rough, it can be as
|
|
readily scanned by the true I laws (not the supposititious rules) of
|
|
verse, as can the simplest pentameter of Pope; and where it is rough
|
|
(passim) these same laws will enable any one of common sense to show
|
|
why it is rough and to point out instantaneously the remedy for the
|
|
roughness.
|
|
|
|
A reads and re-reads a certain line, and pronounces it false in
|
|
rhythm-unmusical. B, however, reads it to A, and A is at once struck
|
|
with the perfection of the rhythm, and wonders at his dulness in not
|
|
"catching" it before. Henceforward he admits the line to be musical.
|
|
B, triumphant, asserts that, to be sure the line is musical- for it
|
|
is the work of Coleridge- and that it is A who is not; the fault being
|
|
in A's false reading. Now here A is right and B wrong. That rhythm
|
|
is erroneous (at some point or other more or less obvious), which
|
|
any ordinary reader can, without design, read improperly. It is the
|
|
business of the poet so to construct his line that the intention
|
|
must be caught at once. Even when these men have precisely the same
|
|
understanding of a sentence, they differ, and often widely, in their
|
|
modes of enunciating it. Any one who has taken the trouble to
|
|
examine the topic of emphasis (by which I here mean not accent of
|
|
particular syllables, but the dwelling on entire words), must have
|
|
seen that men emphasize in the most singularly arbitrary manner. There
|
|
are certain large classes of people, for example, who persist in
|
|
emphasizing their monosyllables. Little uniformity of emphasis
|
|
prevails; because the thing itself- the idea, emphasis- is referabie
|
|
to no natural- at least to no well comprehended and therefore
|
|
uniform-law. Beyond a very narrow and vague limit, the whole matter is
|
|
conventionality. And if we differ in emphasis even when we agree in
|
|
comprehension, how much more so in the former when in the latter
|
|
too! Apart, however, from the consideration of natural disagreement,
|
|
is it not clear that, by tripping here and mouthing there, any
|
|
sequence of words may be twisted into any species of rhythm? But are
|
|
we thence to deduce that all sequences of words are rhythmical in a
|
|
rational understanding of the term?- for this is the deduction
|
|
precisely to which the reductio ad absurdum will, in the end, bring
|
|
all the propositions of Coleridge. Out of a hundred readers of
|
|
"Christabel," fifty will be able to make nothing of its rhythm,
|
|
while forty-nine of the remaining fifty with some ado, fancy they
|
|
comprehend it, after the fourth or fifth perusal. The one out of the
|
|
whole hundred who shall both comprehend and admire it at first
|
|
sight- must be an unaccountably clever person- and I am by far too
|
|
modest to assume, for a moment, that that very clever person is
|
|
myself.
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|
|
|
In illustration of what is here advanced I cannot do better than
|
|
quote a poem:
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|
|
|
Pease porridge hot pease porridge cold
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|
|
Pease porridge in the pot- nine days old.
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|
|
|
Now those of my readers who have never heard this poem pronounced
|
|
according to the nursery conventionality, will find its rhythm as
|
|
obscure as an explanatory note; while those who have heard it will
|
|
divide it thus, declare it musical, and wonder how there can be any
|
|
doubt about it.
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|
|
|
Pease / porridge / hot / pease / porridge / cold /
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|
Pease / porridge / in the / pot / nine / days / old. /
|
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|
|
The chief thing in the way of this species of rhythm, is the necessity
|
|
which it imposes upon the poet of travelling in constant company
|
|
with his compositions, so as to be ready at a moment's notice, to
|
|
avail himself of a well-understood poetical license- that of reading
|
|
aloud one's own doggerel.
|
|
|
|
In Mr. Cranch's line,
|
|
|
|
Many are the / thoughts that / come to / me,
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|
|
|
the general error of which I speak is, of course, very partially
|
|
exemplified, and the purpose for which, chiefly, I cite it, lies yet
|
|
further on in our topic.
|
|
|
|
The two divisions (thoughts that) and (come to) are ordinary
|
|
trochees. The first division (many are the) would be thus accented
|
|
by the Greek Prosodies (many are the), and would be called by them
|
|
astrologos. The Latin books would style the foot Paeon Primus, and
|
|
both Greek and Latin would swear that it was compoded of a trochee and
|
|
what they term a pyrrhic- that is to say, a foot of two short
|
|
syllables- a thing that cannot be, as I shall presently show large
|
|
|
|
But now, there is an obvious difficulty. The astrologos, according
|
|
to the Prosodies' own showing, is equal to five short syllables, and
|
|
the trochee to three- yet, in the line quoted, these two feet are
|
|
equal. They occupy, precisely, the same time. In fact, the whole music
|
|
of the line depends upon their being made to occupy the same time. The
|
|
Prosodies then, have demonstrated what all mathematicians have
|
|
stupidly failed in demonstrating- that three and five are one and
|
|
the same thing. After what I have already said, however, about the
|
|
bastard trochee and the bastard iambus, no one can have any trouble in
|
|
understanding that many are the is of similar character. It is
|
|
merely a bolder variation than usual from the routine of trochees, and
|
|
introduces to the bastard trochee one additional syllable. But this
|
|
syllable is not short. That is, it is not short in the sense of
|
|
"short" as applied to the final syllable of the ordinary trochee,
|
|
where the word means merely the half of long.
|
|
|
|
In this case (that of the additional syllable) "short," if used at
|
|
all, must be used in the sense of the sixth of long. And all the three
|
|
final syllables can be called short only with the same understanding
|
|
of the term. The three together are equal only to the one short
|
|
syllable (whose place they supply) of the ordinary trochee. It follows
|
|
that there is no sense in accenting these syllables with [a crescent
|
|
placed with the curve to the bottom]. We must devise for them some new
|
|
character which shall denote the sixth of long. Let it be the crescent
|
|
placed with the curve to the left. The whole foot (many are the) might
|
|
be called a quick trochee.
|
|
|
|
We now come to the final division (me) of Mr. Cranch's line. It is
|
|
clear that this foot, short as it appears, is fully equal in time to
|
|
each of the preceding. It is, in fact, the caesura- the foot which, in
|
|
the beginning of this paper, I called the most important in all verse.
|
|
Its chief office is that of pause or termination; and here- at the end
|
|
of a line- its use is easy, because there is no danger of
|
|
misapprehending its value. We pause on it, by a seeming necessity,
|
|
just so long as it has taken us to pronounce the preceding feet,
|
|
whether iambuses, trochees, dactyls, or anapaests. It is thus a
|
|
variable foot, and, with some care, may be well introduced into the
|
|
body of a line, as in a little poem of great beauty by Mrs. Welby:
|
|
|
|
I have / a lit / tle step / son / of on / ly three / years old. /
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|
|
|
Here we dwell on the caesura, son just as long as it requires us to
|
|
pronounce either of the preceding or succeeding iambuses. Its value,
|
|
therefore, in this line, is that of three short syllables. In the
|
|
following dactylic line its value is that of four short syllables.
|
|
|
|
Pale as a / lily was / Emily / [Gray]. /
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|
|
|
I have accented the caesura with brackets by way of expressing this
|
|
variability of value.
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|
|
|
I observed just now that there could be no such foot as one of two
|
|
short syllables. What we start from in the very beginning of all
|
|
idea on the topic of verse, is quantity, length. Thus when we
|
|
enunciate an independent syllable it is long, as a matter of course.
|
|
If we enunciate two, dwelling on both we express equality in the
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enunciation, or length, and have a right to call them two long
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syllables. If we dwell on one more than the other, we have also a
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right to call one short, because it is short in relation to the other.
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But if we dwell on both equally, and with a tripping voice, saying
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to ourselves here are two short syllables, the query might well be
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asked of us- "in relation to what are they short?" Shortness is but
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the negation of length. To say, then, that two syllables, placed
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independently of any other syllable, are short, is merely to say
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that they have no positive length, or enunciation- in other words,
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that they are no syllables- that they do not exist at all. And if,
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persisting, we add anything about their equality, we are merely
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floundering in the idea of an identical equation, where, x being equal
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to x, nothing is shown to be equal to zero. In a word, we can form
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no conception of a pyrrhic as of an independent foot. It is a mere
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chimera bred in the mad fancy of a pedant.
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From what I have said about the equalization of the several feet
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of a line, it must not be deduced that any necessity for equality in
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time exists between the rhythm of several lines. A poem, or even a
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stanza, may begin with iambuses in the first line, and proceed with
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anapaests in the second, or even with the less accordant dactyls, as
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in the opening of quite a pretty specimen of verse by Miss Mary A.
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S. Aldrich:
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The wa / ter li / ly sleeps / in pride /
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Down in the / depths of the / Azure / [lake.] /
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Here azure is a spondee, equivalent to a dactyl; lake a caesura.
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I shall now best proceed in quoting the initial lines of Byron's
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"Bride of Abydos":
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Know ye the land where, the cypress and myrtle
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Are emblems of deeds that are done in their clime,
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Where the rage of the vulture, the love of the turtle
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Now melt into softness, now madden to crime?
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Know ye the land of the cedar and vine,
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Where the flowers ever blossom, the beams ever shine,
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And the light wings of Zephyr, oppressed with perfume.
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Wax faint o'er the gardens of Gul in their bloom?
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Where the citron and olive are fairest of fruit
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And the voice of the nightingale never is mute-
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Where the virgins are soft as the roses they twine,
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And all save the spirit of man is divine?
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'Tis the land of the East- 'tis the clime of the Sun-
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Can he smile on such deeds as his children have done?
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Oh, wild as the accents of lovers' farewell
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Are the hearts that they bear and the tales that they tell.
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Now the flow of these lines (as times go) is very sweet and musical.
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They have been often admired, and justly- as times go- that is to say,
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it is a rare thing to find better versification of its kind. And where
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verse is pleasant to the ear, it is silly to find fault with it
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because it refuses to be scanned. Yet I have heard men, professing
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to be scholars, who made no scruple of abusing these lines of
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Byron's on the ground that they were musical in spite of all law.
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Other gentlemen, not scholars, abused "all law" for the same reason-
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and it occurred neither to the one party nor to the other that the law
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about which they were disputing might possibly be no law at all- an
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ass of a law in the skin of a lion.
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The Grammars said nothing about dactylic lines, and it was easily
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seen that these lines were at least meant for dactylic. The first
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one was, therefore, thus divided:
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Know ye the / land where the / cypress and / myrtle. /
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The concluding foot was a mystery; but the Prosodies said
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something about the dactylic "measure" calling now and then for a
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double rhyme; and the court of inquiry were content to rest in the
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double rhyme, without exactly perceiving what a double rhyme had to do
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with the question of an irregular foot. Quitting the first line, the
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second was thus scanned:
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are emblems / of deeds that / are done in / their clime. /
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It was immediately seen, however, that this would not do- it was at
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war with the whole emphasis of the reading. It could not be supposed
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that Byron, or any one in his senses, intended to place stress upon
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such monosyllables as "are," "of," and "their," nor could "their
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clime," collated with "to crime," in the corresponding line below,
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be fairly twisted into anything like a "double rhyme," so as to
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bring everything within the category of the Grammars. But farther
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these Grammars spoke not. The inquirers, therefore, in spite of
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their sense of harmony in the lines, when considered without reference
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to scansion, fell upon the idea that the "Are" was a blunder- an
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excess for which the poet should be sent to Coventry- and, striking it
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out, they scanned the remainder of the line as follows:
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-emblems of / deeds that are / done in their / clime.
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This answered pretty well; but the Grammars admitted no such foot as a
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foot of one syllable; and besides the rhythm was dactylic. In despair,
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the books are well searched, however, and at last the investigators
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are gratified by a full solution of the riddle in the profound
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"Observation" quoted in the beginning of this article:- "When a
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syllable is wanting, the verse is said to be catalectic, when the
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measure is exact, the line is acatalectic; when there is a redundant
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syllable it forms hypermeter" This is enough. The anomalous line is
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pronounced to be catalectic at the head and to form hypermeter at
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the tail- and so on, and so on; it being soon discovered that nearly
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all the remaining lines are in a similar predicament, and that what
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flows so smoothly to the ear, although so roughly to the eye, is,
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after all, a mere jumble of catalecticism, acatalecticism, and
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hypermeter- not to say worse.
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Now, had this court of inquiry been in possession of even the shadow
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of the philosophy of Verse, they would have had no trouble in
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reconciling this oil and water of the eye and ear, by merely
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scanning the passage without reference to lines, and, continuously,
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thus:
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Know ye the / land where the / cypress and myrtle Are / emblems of
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deeds that are / done in their / clime Where the rage of the /
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vulture the / love of the / turtle Now / melt into / softness now /
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madden to / Know ye the / land of the / cedar and / vine Where the
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flowers ever / blossom the / beams ever / shine And the / light
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wings of / Zephyr op / pressed by per / fume Wax / faint o'er the /
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gardens of / Gul in their / bloom where the / citron and / olive are /
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fairest of / fruit And the / voice of the / nightingale / never is /
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mute Where the / virgins are / soft as the / roses they / twine And
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/ all save the / spirit of / man is di / vine. 'Tis the / land of
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the / East 'tis the / clime of the / sum Can he / smile on such /
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deeds as his / children have / done Oh / wild as the / accents of /
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lovers' fare / well Are the / hearts that they / bear and the /
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tales that they / tell.
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Here "crime" and "tell" are caesuras, each having the value of a
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dactyl, four short syllables, while "fume Wax," "twine And," and "done
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Oh," are spondees which, of course, being composed of two long
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syllables are also equal to four short, and are the dactyl's natural
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equivalent. The nicety of Byron's ear has led him into a succession of
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feet which, with two trivial exceptions as regards melody, are
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absolutely accurate, a very rare occurrence this in dactylic or
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anapaestic rhythms. The exceptions are found in the spondee "twine
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And," and the dactyl "smile on such." Both feet are false in point
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of melody. In "twine And" to make out the rhyme we must force "And"
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into a length which it will not naturally bear. We are called on to
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sacrifice either the proper length of the syllable as demanded by
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its position as a member of a spondee, or the customary accentuation
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of the word in conversation. There is no hesitation, and should be
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none. We at once give up the sound for the sense, and the rhythm is
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imperfect. In this instance it is very slightly so, not one person
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in ten thousand could by ear detect the inaccuracy. But the perfection
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of verse as regards melody, consists in its never demanding any such
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sacrifice as is here demanded. The rhythmical must agree thoroughly
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with the reading flow. This perfection has in no instance been
|
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attained, but is unquestionably attainable. "Smile on such," a dactyl,
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is incorrect, because "such," from the character of the two consonants
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ch cannot easily be enunciated in the ordinary time of a short
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syllable, which its position declares that it is. Almost every
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reader will be able to appreciate the slight difficulty here, and
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yet the error is by no means so important as that of the "And" in
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the spondee. By dexterity we may pronounce "such" in the true time,
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but the attempt to remedy the rhythmical deficiency of the And by
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drawing it out, merely aggrevates the offence against natural
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|
enunciation by directing attention to the offence.
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My main object, however, in quoting these lines is to show that in
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spite of the Prosodies, the length of a line is entirely an
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arbitrary matter. We might divide the commencement of Byron's poem
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thus:-
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Know ye the / land where the /
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or thus:
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Know ye the / land where the / cypress and /
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or thus:
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Know ye the / land where the / cypress and / myrtle are /
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or thus:
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Know ye the / land where the / cypress and / myrtle are / emblems of
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In short, we may give it any division we please, and the lines will be
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good, provided we have at least two feet in a line. As in
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mathematics two units are required to form number, so rhythm (from the
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Greek arithmos, number) demands for its formation at least two feet.
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Beyond doubt, we often see such lines as
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Know ye the-
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Land where the-
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lines of one foot, and our Prosodies admit such, but with impropriety,
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for common sense would dictate that every so obvious division of a
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poem as is made by a line, should include within itself all that is
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|
necessary for its own comprehension, but in a line of one foot we
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|
can have no appreciation of rhythm, which depends upon the equality
|
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between two or more pulsations. The false lines, consisting
|
|
sometimes of a single caesura, which are seen in mock Pindaric odes,
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|
are, of course, "rhythmical" only in connection with some other
|
|
line, and it is this want of independent rhythm, which adapts them
|
|
to the purposes of burlesque alone. Their effect is that of
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|
incongruity (the principle of mirth), for they include the blankness
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of prose amid the harmony of verse.
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My second object in quoting Byron's lines was that of showing how
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absurd it often is to cite a single line from amid the body of a
|
|
poem for the purpose of instancing the perfection or imperfection of
|
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the lines rhythm. Were we to see by itself
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Know ye the land where the cypress and myrtle,
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we might justly condemn it as defective in the final foot, which is
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equal to only three, instead of being equal to four short syllables.
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In the foot "flowers ever" we shall find a further exemplification
|
|
of the principle of the bastard iambus, bastard trochee, and quick
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|
trochee, as I have been at some pains in describing these feet
|
|
above. All the Prosodies on English verse would insist upon making
|
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elision in "flowers," thus (flow'rs), but this is nonsense. In the
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quick trochee (many Are the) occurring in Mr. Cranch's trochaic
|
|
line, we had to equalize the time of the three syllables (ny, are,
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the) to that of the one short syllable whose position they usurp.
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|
Accordingly each of these syllables is equal to the third of a short
|
|
syllable, that is to say, the sixth of a long. But in Byron's dactylic
|
|
rhythm, we have to equalize the time of the three syllables (ers,
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|
ev, er) to that of the one long syllable whose position they usurp, or
|
|
(which is the same thing) of the two short. Therefore the value of
|
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each of the syllables (ers, ev, and er) is the third of a long. We
|
|
enunciate them with only half the rapidity we employ in enunciating
|
|
the three final syllables of the quick trochee- which latter is a rare
|
|
foot. The "flowers ever," on the contrary, is as common in the
|
|
dactylic rhythm as is the bastard trochee in the trochaic, or the
|
|
bastard iambus in the iambic. We may as well accent it with the
|
|
curve of the crescent to the right and call it a bastard dactyl. A
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|
bastard anapaest, whose nature I now need be at no trouble in
|
|
explaining, will of course occur now and then in an anapaestic rhythm.
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[A brief discussion of diacritical marks has been eliminated. Ed.]
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I began the "processes" by a suggestion of the spondee as the
|
|
first step towards verse. But the innate monotony of the spondee has
|
|
caused its disappearance as the basis of rhythm from all modern
|
|
poetry. We may say, indeed, that the French heroic- the most
|
|
wretchedly monotonous verse in existence- is to all intents and
|
|
purposes spondaic. But it is not designedly spondaic, and if the
|
|
French were ever to examine it at all, they would no doubt pronounce
|
|
it iambic. It must be observed that the French language is strangely
|
|
peculiar in this point- that it is without accentuation and
|
|
consequently without verse. The genius of the people, rather than
|
|
the structure of the tongue, declares that their words are for the
|
|
most part enunciated with a uniform dwelling on each syllable. For
|
|
example we say "syllabification." A Frenchman would say
|
|
syl-la-bi-fi-ca-ti-on, dwelling on no one of the syllables with any
|
|
noticeable particularity. Here again I put an extreme case in order to
|
|
be well understood, but the general fact is as I give it- that,
|
|
comparatively, the French have no accentuation; and there can be
|
|
nothing worth the name of verse without. Therefore, the French have no
|
|
verse worth the name- which is the fact put in sufficiently plain
|
|
terms. Their iambic rhythm so superabounds in absolute spondees as
|
|
to warrant me in calling its basis spondaic; but French is the only
|
|
modern tongue which has any rhythm with such basis, and even in the
|
|
French it is, as I have said, unintentional.
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|
Admitting, however, the validity of my suggestion, that the
|
|
spondee was the first approach to verse, we should expect to find,
|
|
first, natural spondees (words each forming just a spondee) most
|
|
abundant in the most ancient languages; and, secondly, we should
|
|
expect to find spondees forming the basis of the most ancient rhythms.
|
|
These expectations are in both cases confirmed.
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|
Of the Greek hexameter the intentional basis is spondaic. The
|
|
dactyls are the variation of the theme. It will be observed that there
|
|
is no absolute certainty about their points of interposition. The
|
|
penultimate foot, it is true, is usually a dactyl but not uniformly
|
|
so, while the ultimate, on which the ear lingers, is always a spondee.
|
|
Even that the penultimate is usually a dactyl may be clearly
|
|
referred to the necessity of winding up with the distinctive
|
|
spondee. In corroboration of this idea, again, we should look to
|
|
find the penultimate spondee most usual in the most ancient verse,
|
|
and, accordingly, we find it more frequent in the Greek than in the
|
|
Latin hexameter.
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But besides all this, spondees are not only more prevalent in the
|
|
heroic hexameter than dactyls, but occur to such an extent as is
|
|
even unpleasant to modern ears, on account of monotony. What the
|
|
modern chiefly appreciates and admires in the Greek hexameter is the
|
|
melody of the abundant vowel sounds. The Latin hexameters really
|
|
please very few moderns- although so many pretend to fall into
|
|
ecstasies about them. In the hexameters quoted several pages ago, from
|
|
Silius Italicus, the preponderance of the spondee is strikingly
|
|
manifest. Besides the natural spondees of the Greek and Latin,
|
|
numerous artificial ones arise in the verse of these tongues, on
|
|
account of the tendency which inflection has to throw full
|
|
accentuation on terminal syllables, and the preponderance of the
|
|
spondee is further ensured by the comparative infrequency of the small
|
|
prepositions which we have to serve us instead of case, and also the
|
|
absence of the diminutive auxiliary verbs with which we have to eke
|
|
out the expression of our primary ones. These are the monosyllables
|
|
whose abundance serves to stamp the poetic genius of a language as
|
|
tripping or dactylic.
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|
|
Now paying no attention to these facts, Sir Philip Sidney, Professor
|
|
Longfellow, and innumerable other persons, more or less modern, have
|
|
busied themselves in constructing what they supposed to be "English
|
|
hexameters on the model of the Greek." The only difficulty was that
|
|
(even leaving out of question the melodious masses of vowel) these
|
|
gentlemen never could get their English hexameters to sound Greek. Did
|
|
they look Greek?- that should have been the query, and the reply might
|
|
have led to a solution of the riddle. In placing a copy of ancient
|
|
hexameters side by side with a copy (in similar type) of such
|
|
hexameters as Professor Longfellow, or Professor Felton or the
|
|
Frogpondian Professors collectively, are in the shameful practice of
|
|
composing "on the model of the Greek," it will be seen that the latter
|
|
(hexameters, not professors) are about one-third longer to the eye, on
|
|
an average, than the former. The more abundant dactyls make the
|
|
difference. And it is the greater number of spondees in the Greek than
|
|
in the English, in the ancient than in the modern tongue, which has
|
|
caused it to fall out that while these eminent scholars were groping
|
|
about in the dark for a Greek hexameter, which is a spondaic rhythm
|
|
varied now and then by dactyls, they merely stumbled, to the lasting
|
|
scandal of scholarship, over something which, on account of its
|
|
long-leggedness, we may as well term a Feltonian hexameter, and
|
|
which is a dactylic rhythm interrupted rarely by artificial spondees
|
|
which are no spondees at all, and which are curiously thrown in by the
|
|
heels at all kinds of improper and impertinent points.
|
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|
|
Here is a specimen of the Longfellow hexameter:
|
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Also the / church with / in was a / dorned for / this was the /
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season /
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In which the / young their / parent's / hope and the / loved ones of
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/ Heaven /
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Should at the / foot of the / altar re / new the / vows of their /
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baptism /
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Therefore each / nook and / corner was / swept and / cleaned and the
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/ dust was /
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Blown from the / walls and / ceiling and / from the / oil-painted /
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benches. /
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Mr. Longfellow is a man of imagination, but can he imagine that any
|
|
individual, with a proper understanding of the danger of lockjaw,
|
|
would make the attempt of twisting his mouth into the shape
|
|
necessary for the emission of such spondees as "parents," and "from
|
|
the," or such dactyls as "cleaned and the," and "loved ones of"?
|
|
"Baptism" is by no means a bad spondee- perhaps because it happens
|
|
to be a dactyl- of all the rest, however, I am dreadfully ashamed.
|
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|
|
But these feet, dactyls and spondees, all together, should thus be
|
|
put at once into their proper position:
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|
|
"Also the church within was adorned; for this was the season in
|
|
which the young, their parents' hope, and the loved ones of Heaven,
|
|
should, at the foot of the altar, renew the vows of their baptism.
|
|
Therefore, each nook and corner was swept and cleaned; and the dust
|
|
was blown from the walls and ceiling, and from the oil-painted
|
|
benches?
|
|
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|
There!- That is respectable prose, and it will incur no danger of
|
|
ever getting its character ruined by anybody's mistaking it for verse.
|
|
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|
But even when we let these modern hexameters go as Greek, and merely
|
|
hold them fast in their proper character of Longfellowine, or
|
|
Feltonian, or Frogpondian, we must still condemn them as having been
|
|
committed in a radical misconception of the philosophy of verse. The
|
|
spondee, as I observed, is the theme of the Greek line. Most of the
|
|
ancient hexameters begin with spondees, for the reason that the
|
|
spondee is the theme, and the ear is filled with it as with a
|
|
burden. Now the Feltonian dactylics have, in the same way, dactyl
|
|
for the theme, and most of them begin with dactyls- which is all
|
|
very proper if not very Greek- but unhappily, the one point at which
|
|
they are very Greek is that point, precisely, at which they should
|
|
be nothing but Feltonian. They always close with what is meant for a
|
|
spondee. To be consistently silly they should die off in a dactyl.
|
|
|
|
That a truly Greek hexameter cannot, however, be readily composed in
|
|
English, is a proposition which I am by no means inclined to admit.
|
|
I think I could manage the point myself. For example:
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|
Do tell! / when may we / hope to make / men of sense / out of the
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|
|
Pundits
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|
|
Born and brought / up with their / snouts deep / down in the / mud
|
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|
|
of the / Frog-pond?
|
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|
Why ask? / who ever / yet saw / money made / out of a / fat old
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|
Jew, or / downright / upright / nutmegs / out of a / pine-knot?
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|
The proper spondee predominance is here preserved. Some of the
|
|
dactyls are not so good as I could wish, but, upon the whole the
|
|
rhythm is very decent- to say nothing of its excellent sense.
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THE POETIC PRINCIPLE
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IN SPEAKING of the Poetic Principle, I have no design to be either
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thorough or profound. While discussing, very much at random, the
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essentiality of what we call Poetry, my principal purpose will be to
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cite for consideration, some few of those minor English or American
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poems which best suit my own taste, or which, upon my own fancy,
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have left the most definite impression. By "minor poems" I mean, of
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course, poems of little length. And here, in the beginning, permit
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me to say a few words in regard to a somewhat peculiar principle,
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which, whether rightfully or wrongfully, has always had its
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influence in my own critical estimate of the poem. I hold that a
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long poem does not exist. I maintain that the phrase, "a long poem,"
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is simply a flat contradiction in terms.
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I need scarcely observe that a poem deserves its title only inasmuch
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as it excites, by elevating the soul. The value of the poem is in
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the ratio of this elevating excitement. But all excitements are,
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through a psychal necessity, transient. That degree of excitement
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which would entitle a poem to be so called at all, cannot be sustained
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throughout a composition of any great length. After the lapse of
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half an hour, at the very utmost, it flags- fails- a revulsion ensues-
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and then the poem is, in effect and in fact, no longer such.
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There are, no doubt, many who have found difficulty in reconciling
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the critical dictum that the "Paradise Lost" is to be devoutly admired
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throughout, with the absolute impossibility of maintaining for it,
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during perusal, the amount of enthusiasm which that critical dictum
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would demand. This great work, in fact, is to be regarded as poetical,
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only when, losing sight of that vital requisite in all works of Art,
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Unity, we view it merely as a series of minor poems. If, to preserve
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its Unity- its totality of effect or impression- we read it (as
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would be necessary) at a single sitting, the result is but a
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constant alteration of excitement and depression. After a passage of
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what we feel to be true poetry, there follows, inevitably, a passage
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of platitude which no critical prejudgment can force us to admire; but
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if, upon completing the work, we read it again, omitting the first
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book- that is to say, commencing with the second- we shall be
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surprised at now finding that admirable which we before condemned-
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that damnable which we had previously so much admired. It follows from
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all this that the ultimate, aggregate, or absolute effect of even
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the best epic under the sun, is a nullity:- and this is precisely
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the fact.
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In regard to the Iliad, we have, if not positive proof, at least
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very good reason for believing it intended as a series of lyrics; but,
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granting the epic intention, I can say only that the work is based
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in an imperfect sense of art. The modern epic is, of the
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supposititious ancient model, but an inconsiderate and blindfold
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imitation. But the day of these artistic anomalies is over. If, at any
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time, any very long poem were popular in reality, which I doubt, it is
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at least clear that no very long poem will ever be popular again.
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That the extent of a poetical work is, ceteris paribus, the
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measure of its merit, seems undoubtedly, when we thus state it a
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proposition sufficiently absurd- yet we are indebted for it to the
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Quarterly Reviews. Surely there can be nothing in mere size,
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abstractly considered- there can be nothing in mere bulk, so far as
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a volume is concerned, which has so continuously elicited admiration
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from these saturnine pamphlets! A mountain, to be sure, by the mere
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sentiment of physical magnitude which it conveys, does impress us with
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a sense of the sublime- but no man is impressed after this fashion
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by the material grandeur of even "The Columbiad." Even the Quarterlies
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have not instructed us to be so impressed by it. As yet, they have not
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insisted on our estimating Lamartine by the cubic foot, or Pollock
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by the pound- but what else are we to infer from their continual
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prating about "sustained effort"? If, by "sustained effort," any
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little gentleman has accomplished an epic, let us frankly commend
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him for the effort- if this indeed be a thing commendable- but let
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us forbear praising the epic on the effort's account. It is to be
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hoped that common sense, in the time to come, will prefer deciding
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upon a work of Art rather by the impression it makes- by the effect it
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produces- than by the time it took to impress the effect, or by the
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amount of "sustained effort" which had been found necessary in
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effecting the impression. The fact is, that perseverance is one
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thing and genius quite another- nor can all the Quarterlies in
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Christendom confound them. By and by, this proposition, with many
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which I have been just urging, will be received as self-evident. In
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the meantime, by being generally condemned as falsities, they will not
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be essentially damaged as truths.
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On the other hand, it is clear that a poem may be improperly
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brief. Undue brevity degenerates into mere epigrammatism. A very short
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poem, while now and then producing a brilliant or vivid, never
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produces a profound or enduring effect. There must be the steady
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pressing down of the stamp upon the wax. De Beranger has wrought
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innumerable things, pungent and spirit-stirring, but in general they
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have been too imponderous to stamp themselves deeply into the public
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attention, and thus, as so many feathers of fancy, have been blown
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aloft only to be whistled down the wind.
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A remarkable instance of the effect of undue brevity in depressing a
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poem, in keeping it out of the popular view, is afforded by the
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following exquisite little Serenade-
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I arise from dreams of thee
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In the first sweet sleep of night,
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When the winds are breathing low,
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And the stars are shining bright.
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I arise from dreams of thee,
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And a spirit in my feet
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Has led me- who knows how?-
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To thy chamber-window, sweet!
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The wandering airs they faint
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On the dark the silent stream-
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The champak odors fail
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Like sweet thoughts in a dream;
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The nightingale's complaint,
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It dies upon her heart,
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As I must die on thine,
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O, beloved as thou art!
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O, lift me from the grass!
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I die, I faint, I fail!
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Let thy love in kisses rain
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On my lips and eyelids pale.
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My cheek is cold and white, alas!
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My heart beats loud and fast:
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O, press it close to thine again,
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Where it will break at last.
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Very few perhaps are familiar with these lines- yet no less a poet
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than Shelley is their author. Their warm, yet delicate and ethereal
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imagination will be appreciated by all, but by none so thoroughly as
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by him who has himself arisen from sweet dreams of one beloved to
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bathe in the aromatic air of a southern midsummer night.
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One of the finest poems by Willis- the very best in my opinion which
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he has ever written- has no doubt, through this same defect of undue
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brevity, been kept back from its proper position, not less in the
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critical than in the popular view:-
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The shadows lay along Broadway,
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'Twas near the twilight-tide-
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And slowly there a lady fair
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Was walking in her pride.
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Alone walk'd she; but, viewlessly,
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Walk'd spirits at her side.
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Peace charm'd the street beneath her feet,
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And Honour charm'd the air,
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And all astir looked kind on her,
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And called her good as fair-
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For all God ever gave to her
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She kept with chary care.
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She kept with care her beauties rare
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From lovers warm and true-
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For heart was cold to all but gold,
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And the rich came not to woo-
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But honour'd well her charms to sell
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If priests the selling do.
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Now walking there was one more fair-
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A slight girl lily-pale;
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And she had unseen company
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To make the spirit quail-
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'Twixt Want and Scorn she walk'd forlorn,
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And nothing could avail.
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No mercy now can clear her brow
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From this world's peace to pray,
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For as loves wild prayer dissolved in air,
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Her woman's heart gave way!-
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But the sin forgiven by Christ in Heaven,
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By man is cursed alway!
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In this composition we find it difficult to recognise the Willis who
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has written so many mere "verses of society." The lines are not only
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richly ideal, but full of energy, while they breathe an earnestness,
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an evident sincerity of sentiment, for which we look in vain
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throughout all the other works of this author.
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While the epic mania, while the idea that to merit in poetry
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prolixity is indispensable, has for some years past been gradually
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dying out of the public mind, by mere dint of its own absurdity, we
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find it succeeded by a heresy too palpably false to be long tolerated,
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but one which, in the brief period it has already endured, may be said
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to have accomplished more in the corruption of our Poetical Literature
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than all its other enemies combined. I allude to the heresies of The
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Didactic. It has been assumed, tacitly and avowedly, directly and
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indirectly, that the ultimate object of all Poetry is Truth. Every
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poem, it is said, should inculcate a moral, and by this moral is the
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poetical merit of the work to be adjudged. We Americans especially
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have patronized this happy idea, and we Bostonians very especially
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have developed it in full. We have taken it into our heads that to
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write a poem simply for the poem's sake, and to acknowledge such to
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have been our design, would be to confess ourselves radically
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wanting in the true poetic dignity and force:- but the simple fact
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is that would we but permit ourselves to look into our own souls we
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should immediately there discover that under the sun there neither
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exists nor can exist any work more thoroughly dignified, more
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supremely noble, than this very poem, this poem per se, this poem
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which is a poem and nothing more, this poem written solely for the
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poem's sake.
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With as deep a reverence for the True as ever inspired the bosom
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of man, I would nevertheless limit, in some measure, its modes of
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inculcation. I would limit to enforce them. I would not enfeeble
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them by dissipation. The demands of Truth are severe. She has no
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sympathy with the myrtles. All that which is so indispensable in
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Song is precisely all that with which she has nothing whatever to
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do. It is but making her a flaunting paradox to wreathe her in gems
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and flowers. In enforcing a truth we need severity rather than
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efflorescence of language. We must be simple, precise, terse. We
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must be cool, calm, unimpassioned. In a word, we must be in that
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mood which, as nearly as possible, is the exact converse of the
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poetical. He must be blind indeed who does not perceive the radical
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and chasmal difference between the truthful and the poetical modes
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of inculcation. He must be theory-mad beyond redemption who, in
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spite of these differences, shall still persist in attempting to
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reconcile the obstinate oils and waters of Poetry and Truth.
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Dividing the world of mind into its three most immediately obvious
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distinctions, we have the Pure Intellect, Taste, and the Moral
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Sense. I place Taste in the middle, because it is just this position
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which in the mind it occupies. It holds intimate relations with either
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extreme; but from the Moral Sense is separated by so faint a
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difference that Aristotle has not hesitated to place some of its
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operations among the virtues themselves. Nevertheless we find the
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offices of the trio marked with a sufficient distinction. Just as
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the Intellect concerns itself with Truth, so Taste informs us of the
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Beautiful, while the Moral Sense is regardful of Duty. Of this latter,
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while Conscience teaches the obligation, and Reason the expediency,
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Taste contents herself with displaying the charms:- waging war upon
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Vice solely on the ground of her deformity- her disproportion- her
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animosity to the fitting, to the appropriate, to the harmonious- in
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a word, to Beauty.
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An immortal instinct deep within the spirit of man is thus plainly a
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sense of the Beautiful. This it is which administers to his delight in
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the manifold forms, and sounds, and odors and sentiments amid which he
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exists. And just as the lily is repeated in the lake, or the eyes of
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Amaryllis in the mirror, so is the mere oral or written repetition
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of these forms, and sounds, and colors, and odors, and sentiments a
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duplicate source of delight. But this mere repetition is not poetry.
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He who shall simply sing, with however glowing enthusiasm, or with
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however vivid a truth of description, of the sights, and sounds, and
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odors, and colors, and sentiments which greet him in common with all
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mankind- he, I say, has yet faded to prove his divine title. There
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is still a something in the distance which he has been unable to
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attain. We have still a thirst unquenchable, to allay which he has not
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shown us the crystal springs. This thirst belongs to the immortality
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of Man. It is at once a consequence and an indication of his perennial
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existence. It is the desire of the moth for the star. It is no mere
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appreciation of the Beauty before us, but a wild effort to reach the
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Beauty above. Inspired by an ecstatic prescience of the glories beyond
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the grave, we struggle by multiform combinations among the things
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and thoughts of Time to attain a portion of that Loveliness whose very
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elements perhaps appertain to eternity alone. And thus when by Poetry,
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or when by Music, the most entrancing of the poetic moods, we find
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ourselves melted into tears, we weep then, not as the Abbate Gravina
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supposes, through excess of pleasure, but through a certain
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petulant, impatient sorrow at our inability to grasp now, wholly, here
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on earth, at once and for ever, those divine and rapturous joys of
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which through the poem, or through the music, we attain to but brief
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and indeterminate glimpses.
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The struggle to apprehend the supernal Loveliness- this struggle, on
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the part of souls fittingly constituted- has given to the world all
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that which it (the world) has ever been enabled at once to
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understand and to feel as poetic.
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The Poetic Sentiment, of course, may develop itself in various
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modes- in Painting, in Sculpture, in Architecture, in the Dance-
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very especially in Music- and very peculiarly, and with a wide
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field, in the composition of the Landscape Garden. Our present
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theme, however, has regard only to its manifestation in words. And
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here let me speak briefly on the topic of rhythm. Contenting myself
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with the certainty that Music, in its various modes of metre,
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rhythm, and rhyme, is of so vast a moment in Poetry as never to be
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wisely rejected- is so vitally important an adjunct that he is
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simply silly who declines its assistance, I will not now pause to
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maintain its absolute essentiality. It is in Music perhaps that the
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soul most nearly attains the great end for which, when inspired by the
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Poetic Sentiment it struggles- the creation of supernal Beauty. It may
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be, indeed, that here this sublime end is, now and then, attained in
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fact. We are often made to feel, with a shivering delight, that from
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an earthly harp are stricken notes which cannot have been unfamiliar
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to the angels. And thus there can be little doubt that in the union of
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Poetry with Music in its popular sense, we shall find the widest field
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for the Poetic development. The old Bards and Minnesingers had
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advantages which we do not possess- and Thomas Moore, singing his
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own songs, was, in the most legitimate manner, perfecting them as
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poems.
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To recapitulate then:- I would define, in brief, the Poetry of words
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as The Rhythmical Creation of Beauty. Its sole arbiter is Taste.
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With the Intellect or with the Conscience it has only collateral
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relations. Unless incidentally, it has no concern whatever either with
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Duty or with Truth.
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A few words, however, in explanation. That pleasure which is at once
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the most pure, the most elevating, and the most intense, is derived, I
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maintain, from the contemplation of the Beautiful. In the
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contemplation of Beauty we alone find it possible to attain that
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pleasurable elevation, or excitement of the soul, which we recognise
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as the Poetic Sentiment, and which is so easily distinguished from
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Truth, which is the satisfaction of the Reason, or from Passion, which
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is the excitement of the heart. I make Beauty, therefore- using the
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word as inclusive of the sublime- I make Beauty the province of the
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poem, simply because it is an obvious rule of Art that effects
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should be made to spring as directly as possible from their causes:-
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no one as yet having been weak enough to deny that the peculiar
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elevation in question is at least most readily attainable in the poem.
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It by no means follows, however, that the incitements of Passion, or
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the precepts of Duty, or even the lessons of Truth, may not be
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introduced into a poem, and with advantage, for they may subserve
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incidentally, in various ways, the general purposes of the work: but
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the true artist will always contrive to tone them down in proper
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subjection to that Beauty which is the atmosphere and the real essence
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of the poem.
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I cannot better introduce the few poems which I shall present for
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your consideration, than by the citation of the Proem to
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Longfellow's "Waif":-
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The day is done, and the darkness
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Falls from the wings of Night,
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As a feather is wafted downward
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From an Eagle in his flight.
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I see the lights of the village
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Gleam through the rain and the mist,
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And a feeling of sadness comes o'er me,
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That my soul cannot resist;
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A feeling of sadness and longing,
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That is not akin to pain,
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And resembles sorrow only
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As the mist resembles the rain.
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Come, read to me some poem,
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Some simple and heartfelt lay,
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That shall soothe this restless feeling,
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And banish the thoughts of day.
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Not from the grand old masters,
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Not from the bards sublime,
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Whose distant footsteps echo
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Through the corridors of Time.
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For, like strains of martial music,
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Their mighty thoughts suggest
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Life's endless toil and endeavour;
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And to-night I long for rest.
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Read from some humbler poet,
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Whose songs gushed from his heart,
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As showers from the clouds of summer,
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Or tears from the eyelids start;
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Who through long days of labor,
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And nights devoid of ease,
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Still heard in his soul the music
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Of wonderful melodies.
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Such songs have power to quiet
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The restless pulse of care,
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And come like the benediction
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That follows after prayer.
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Then read from the treasured volume
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The poem of thy choice,
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And lend to the rhyme of the poet
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The beauty of thy voice.
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And the night shall be filled with music,
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And the cares that infest the day
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Shall fold their tents like the Arabs,
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And as silently steal away.
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With no great range of imagination, these lines have been justly
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admired for their delicacy of expression. Some of the images are
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very effective. Nothing can be better than-
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-the bards sublime,
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Whose distant footsteps echo
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Down the corridors of Time.
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The idea of the last quatrain is also very effective. The poem on
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the whole, however, is chiefly to be admired for the graceful
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insouciance of its metre, so well in accordance with the character
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of the sentiments, and especially for the ease of the general
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manner. This "ease" or naturalness, in a literary style, it has long
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been the fashion to regard as ease in appearance alone- as a point
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of really difficult attainment. But not so:- a natural manner is
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difficult only to him who should never meddle with it- to the
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unnatural. It is but the result of writing with the understanding,
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or with the instinct, that the tone, in composition, should always
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be that which the mass of mankind would adopt- and must perpetually
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vary, of course, with the occasion. The author who, after the
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fashion of "The North American Review," should be upon all occasions
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merely "quiet," must necessarily upon many occasions be simply
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silly, or stupid; and has no more right to be considered "easy" or
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"natural" than a Cockney exquisite, or than the sleeping Beauty in the
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waxworks.
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Among the minor poems of Bryant, none has so much impressed me as
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the one which he entitles "June." I quote only a portion of it:-
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There, through the long, long summer hours,
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The golden light should lie,
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And thick young herbs and groups of flowers
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Stand in their beauty by.
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The oriole should build and tell
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His love-tale, close beside my cell;
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The idle butterfly
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Should rest him there, and there be heard
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The housewife-bee and humming bird.
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And what if cheerful shouts at noon,
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Come, from the village sent,
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Or songs of maids, beneath the moon,
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With fairy laughter blent?
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And what if, in the evening light,
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Betrothed lovers walk in sight
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Of my low monument?
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I would the lovely scene around
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Might know no sadder sight nor sound.
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I know, I know I should not see
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The season's glorious show,
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Nor would its brightness shine for me;
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Nor its wild music flow;
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But if, around my place of sleep,
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The friends I love should come to weep,
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They might not haste to go.
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Soft airs and song, and the light and bloom,
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Should keep them lingering by my tomb.
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These to their soften'd hearts should bear
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The thoughts of what has been,
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And speak of one who cannot share
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The gladness of the scene;
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Whose part in all the pomp that fills
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The circuit of the summer hills,
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Is- that his grave is green;
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And deeply would their hearts rejoice
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To hear again his living voice.
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The rhythmical flow here is even voluptuous- nothing could be more
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melodious. The poem has always affected me in a remarkable manner. The
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intense melancholy which seems to well up, perforce, to the surface of
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all the poet's cheerful sayings about his grave, we find thrilling
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us to the soul- while there is the truest poetic elevation in the
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thrill. The impression left is one of a pleasurable sadness. And if,
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in the remaining compositions which I shall introduce to you, there be
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more or less of a similar tone always apparent, let me remind you that
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(how or why we know not) this certain taint of sadness is
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inseparably connected with all the higher manifestations of true
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Beauty. It is, nevertheless,
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A feeling of sadness and longing
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That is not akin to pain,
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And resembles sorrow only
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As the mist resembles the rain.
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The taint of which I speak is clearly perceptible even in a poem
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so full of brilliancy and spirit as "The Health" of Edward Coate
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Pinckney:-
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I fill this cup to one made up
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Of loveliness alone,
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A woman, of her gentle sex
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The seeming paragon;
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To whom the better elements
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And kindly stars have given
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A form so fair that, like the air,
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'Tis less of earth than heaven.
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Her every tone is musies own,
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Like those of morning birds,
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And something more than melody
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Dwells ever in her words;
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The coinage of her heart are they,
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And from her lips each flows
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As one may see the burden'd be
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Forth issue from the rose.
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Affections are as thoughts to her,
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The measures of her hours;
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Her feelings have the fragrancy,
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The freshness of young flowers;
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And lovely passions, changing oft,
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So fill her, she appears
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The image of themselves by turns,
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The idol of past years!
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Of her bright face one glance will trace
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A picture on the brain,
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And of her voice in echoing hearts
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A sound must long remain;
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But memory, such as mine of her,
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So very much endears
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When death is nigh my latest sigh
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Will not be life's, but hers.
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I fill'd this cup to one made up
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Of loveliness alone,
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A woman, of her gentle sex
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The seeming paragon-
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Her health! and would on earth there stood,
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Some more of such a frame,
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That life might be all poetry,
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And weariness a name.
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It was the misfortune of Mr. Pinckney to have been born too far
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south. Had he been a New Englander, it is probable that he would
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have been ranked as the first of American lyrists by that
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magnanimous cabal which has so long controlled the destinies of
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American Letters, in conducting the thing called "The North American
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Review." The poem just cited is especially beautiful; but the poetic
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elevation which it induces we must refer chiefly to our sympathy in
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the poet's enthusiasm. We pardon his hyperboles for the evident
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earnestness with which they are uttered.
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It was by no means my design, however, to expatiate upon the
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merits of what I should read you. These will necessarily speak for
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themselves. Boccalini, in his "Advertisements from Parnassus," tells
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us that Zoilus once presented Apollo a very caustic criticism upon a
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very admirable book:- whereupon the god asked him for the beauties
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of the work. He replied that he only busied himself about the
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errors. On hearing this, Apollo, handing him a sack of unwinnowed
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wheat, bade him pick out all the chaff for his reward.
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Now this fable answers very well as a hit at the critics- but I am
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by no means sure that the god was in the right. I am by no means
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certain that the true limits of the critical duty are not grossly
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misunderstood. Excellence, in a poem especially, may be considered
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in the light of an axiom, which need only be properly put, to become
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self-evident. It is not excellence if it require to be demonstrated as
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such:- and thus to point out too particularly the merits of a work
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of Art, is to admit that they are not merits altogether.
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Among the "Melodies" of Thomas Moore is one whose distinguished
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character as a poem proper seems to have been singularly left out of
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view. I allude to his lines beginning- "Come, rest in this bosom." The
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intense energy of their expression is not surpassed by anything in
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Byron. There are two of the lines in which a sentiment is conveyed
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that embodies the all in all of the divine passion of Love- a
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sentiment which, perhaps, has found its echo in more, and in more
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passionate, human hearts than any other single sentiment ever embodied
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in words:-
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Come, rest in this bosom, my own stricken deer
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Though the herd have fled from thee, thy home is still here;
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Here still is the smile, that no cloud can o'ercast,
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And a heart and a hand all thy own to the last.
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Oh! what was love made for, if 'tis not the same
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Through joy and through torment, through glory and shame?
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I know not, I ask not, if guilt's in that heart,
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I but know that I love thee, whatever thou art.
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Thou hast call'd me thy Angel in moments of bliss,
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And thy Angel I'll be, 'mid the horrors of this,-
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Through the furnace, unshrinking, thy steps to pursue,
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And shield thee, and save thee,- or perish there tool
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It has been the fashion of late days to deny Moore Imagination,
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while granting him Fancy- a distinction originating with Coleridge-
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than whom no man more fully comprehended the great powers of Moore.
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The fact is, that the fancy of this poet so far predominates over
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all his other faculties, and over the fancy of all other men, as to
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have induced, very naturally, the idea that he is fanciful only. But
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never was there a greater mistake. Never was a grosser wrong done
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the fame of a true poet. In the compass of the English language I
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can call to mind no poem more profoundly- more weirdly imaginative, in
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the best sense, than the lines commencing- "I would I were by that dim
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lake"- which are the composition of Thomas Moore. I regret that I am
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unable to remember them.
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One of the noblest- and, speaking of Fancy- one of the most
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singularly fanciful of modern poets, was Thomas Hood. His "Fair
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Ines" had always for me an inexpressible charm:-
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O saw ye not fair Ines?
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She's gone into the West,
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To dazzle when the sun is down,
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And rob the world of rest;
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She took our daylight with her,
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The smiles that we love best,
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With morning blushes on her cheek,
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And pearls upon her breast.
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O turn again, fair Ines,
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Before the fall of night,
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For fear the moon should shine alone,
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And stars unrivall'd bright;
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And blessed will the lover be
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That walks beneath their light,
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And breathes the love against thy cheek
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I dare not even write!
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Would I had been, fair Ines,
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That gallant cavalier,
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Who rode so gaily by thy side,
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And whisper'd thee so near!
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Were there no bonny dames at home
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Or no true lovers here,
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That he should cross the seas to win
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The dearest of the dear?
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I saw thee, lovely Ines,
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Descend along the shore,
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With bands of noble gentlemen,
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And banners waved before,
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And gentle youth and maidens gay,
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And snowy plumes they wore;
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It would have been a beauteous dream,
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If it had been no more!
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Alas, alas, fair Ines,
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She went away with song,
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With music waiting on her steps,
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And shoutings of the throng;
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But some were sad and felt no mirth,
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But only Music's wrong,
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In sounds that sang Farewell, Farewell,
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To her you've loved so long.
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Farewell, farewell, fair Ines,
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That vessel never bore
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So fair a lady on its deck,
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Nor danced so light before,-
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Alas for pleasure on the sea,
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|
|
And sorrow on the shore!
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|
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The smile that blest one lover's heart
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|
|
Has broken many more!
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|
"The Haunted House," by the same author, is one of the truest
|
|
poems ever written,- one of the truest, one of the most
|
|
unexceptionable, one of the most thoroughly artistic, both in its
|
|
theme and in its execution. It is, moreover, powerfully ideal-
|
|
imaginative. I regret that its length renders it unsuitable for the
|
|
purposes of this lecture. In place of it permit me to offer the
|
|
universally appreciated "Bridge of Sighs":-
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|
|
One more Unfortunate,
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|
|
Weary of breath,
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|
|
Gone to her death!
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|
Take her up tenderly,
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|
Lift her with care,-
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|
|
Fashion'd so slenderly,
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|
Young and so fair!
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|
|
Look at her garments
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|
|
Clinging like cerements;
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|
Whilst the wave constantly
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|
|
Drips from her clothing;
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Take her up instantly,
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|
Loving, not loathing.
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|
Touch her not scornfully,
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|
Think of her mournfully,
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|
Gently and humanly,
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Not of the stains of her,
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|
All that remains of her
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|
|
Now is pure womanly.
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Make no deep scrutiny
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Into her mutiny
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Rash and undutiful;
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Past all dishonor,
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|
Death has left on her
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Only the beautiful.
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|
Where the lamps quiver
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So far in the river,
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With many a light
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From window and casement
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From garret to basement,
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She stood, with amazement,
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|
|
Houseless by night
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|
The bleak wind of March
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|
|
Made her tremble and shiver,
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|
|
But not the dark arch,
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|
Or the black flowing river:
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|
Mad from life's history,
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|
|
Glad to death's mystery,
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|
|
Swift to be hurl'd-
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Anywhere, anywhere
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|
|
Out of the world!
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In she plunged boldly,
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|
|
No matter how coldly
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|
|
The rough river ran,-
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|
|
Over the brink of it,
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|
Picture it,- think of it,
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|
|
Dissolute Man!
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|
|
Lave in it, drink of it
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|
|
Then, if you can!
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|
Still, for all slips of her
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|
|
One of Eves family-
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|
Wipe those poor lips of hers
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|
|
Oozing so clammily,
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|
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Loop up her tresses
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|
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Escaped from the comb,
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|
|
Her fair auburn tresses;
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|
|
Whilst wonderment guesses
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|
|
Where was her home?
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Who was her father?
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Who was her mother?
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Had she a sister?
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Had she a brother?
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Or was there a dearer one
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|
|
Still, and a nearer one
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|
|
Yet, than all other?
|
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|
|
Alas! for the rarity
|
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|
|
Of Christian charity
|
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|
|
Under the sun!
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|
|
Oh! it was pitiful
|
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|
|
Near a whole city full,
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|
|
Home she had none.
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Sisterly, brotherly,
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Fatherly, motherly,
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|
Feelings had changed:
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Love, by harsh evidence,
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|
|
Thrown from its eminence,
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Seeming estranged.
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Take her up tenderly,
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Lift her with care;
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Fashion'd so slenderly,
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Young, and so fair!
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Ere her limbs frigidly
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Stiffen too rigidly,
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Decently,- kindly,-
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Smooth and compose them;
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And her eyes, close them,
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Staring so blindly!
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Dreadfully staring
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Through muddy impurity,
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As when with the daring
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|
|
Last look of despairing
|
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|
|
Fixed on futurity.
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Perishing gloomily,
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|
Spurred by contumely,
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Cold inhumanity,
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|
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Burning insanity,
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Into her rest,-
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|
Cross her hands humbly,
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|
|
As if praying dumbly,
|
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Over her breast!
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|
|
Owning her weakness,
|
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|
|
Her evil behaviour,
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|
|
And leaving, with meekness,
|
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|
|
Her sins to her Saviour!
|
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|
|
The vigour of this poem is no less remarkable than its pathos. The
|
|
versification although carrying the fanciful to the very verge of
|
|
the fantastic, is nevertheless admirably adapted to the wild
|
|
insanity which is the thesis of the poem.
|
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|
|
Among the minor poems of Lord Byron is one which has never
|
|
received from the critics the praise which it undoubtedly deserves:-
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|
|
Though the day of my destiny's over,
|
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|
|
And the star of my fate hath declined
|
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|
|
Thy soft heart refused to discover
|
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|
|
The faults which so many could find;
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|
|
Though thy soul with my grief was acquainted,
|
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|
|
It shrunk not to share it with me,
|
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|
|
And the love which my spirit hath painted
|
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|
|
It never hath found but in thee.
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|
|
Then when nature around me is smiling,
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|
|
The last smile which answers to mine,
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|
I do not believe it beguiling,
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|
|
Because it reminds me of thine,
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|
And when winds are at war with the ocean,
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|
|
As the breasts I believed in with me,
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|
|
If their billows excite an emotion,
|
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|
|
It is that they bear me from thee.
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|
|
Though the rock of my last hope is shivered,
|
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|
|
And its fragments are sunk in the wave,
|
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|
|
Though I feel that my soul is delivered
|
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|
|
To pain- it shall not be its slave.
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|
There is many a pang to pursue me:
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|
They may crush, but they shall not contemn-
|
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|
|
They may torture, but shall not subdue me-
|
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|
|
'Tis of thee that I think- not of them.
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|
|
Though human, thou didst not deceive me,
|
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|
|
Though woman, thou didst not forsake,
|
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|
|
Though loved, thou forborest to grieve me,
|
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|
|
Though slandered, thou never couldst shake,-
|
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|
|
Though trusted, thou didst not disclaim me,
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|
|
Though parted, it was not to fly,
|
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|
|
Though watchful, 'twas not to defame me,
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|
Nor mute, that the world might belie.
|
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|
|
Yet I blame not the world, nor despise it,
|
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|
|
Nor the war of the many with one-
|
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|
|
If my soul was not fitted to prize it,
|
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|
|
'Twas folly not sooner to shun:
|
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|
|
And if dearly that error hath cost me,
|
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|
|
And more than I once could foresee,
|
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|
|
I have found that whatever it lost me,
|
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|
|
It could not deprive me of thee.
|
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|
|
From the wreck of the past, which hath perished,
|
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|
|
Thus much I at least may recall,
|
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|
|
It hath taught me that which I most cherished
|
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|
|
Deserved to be dearest of all:
|
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|
|
In the desert a fountain is springing,
|
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|
|
In the wide waste there still is a tree,
|
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|
|
And a bird in the solitude singing,
|
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|
|
Which speaks to my spirit of thee.
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|
|
Although the rhythm here is one of the most difficult, the
|
|
versification could scarcely be improved. No nobler theme ever engaged
|
|
the pen of poet. It is the soul-elevating idea that no man can
|
|
consider himself entitled to complain of Fate while in his adversity
|
|
he still retains the unwavering love of woman.
|
|
|
|
From Alfred Tennyson, although in perfect sincerity I regard him
|
|
as the noblest poet that ever lived, I have left myself time to cite
|
|
only a very brief specimen. I call him, and think him the noblest of
|
|
poets, not because the impressions he produces are at all times the
|
|
most profound- not because the poetical excitement which be induces is
|
|
at all times the most intense- but because it is at all times the most
|
|
ethereal- in other words, the most elevating and most pure. No poet is
|
|
so little of the earth, earthy. What I am about to read is from his
|
|
last long poem, "The Princess":-
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Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,
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Tears from the depth of some divine despair
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Rise in the heart, and gather to the eyes,
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In looking on the happy Autumn fields,
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And thinking of the days that are no more.
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Fresh as the first beam glittering on a sail,
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That brings our friends up from the underworld,
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Sad as the last which reddens over one
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That sinks with all we love below the verge;
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So sad, so fresh, the days that are no more.
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Ah, sad and strange as in dark summer dawns
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The earliest pipe of half-awaken'd birds
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To dying ears, when unto dying eyes
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The casement slowly grows a glimmering square;
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So sad, so strange, the days that are no more.
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Dear as remember'd kisses after death,
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And sweet as those by hopeless fancy feign'd
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On lips that are for others; deep as love,
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Deep as first love, and wild with all regret,
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O Death in Life, the days that are no more.
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Thus, although in a very cursory and imperfect manner, I have
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endeavoured to convey to you my conception of the Poetic Principle. It
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has been my purpose to suggest that, while this principle itself is
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strictly and simply the Human Aspiration for Supernal Beauty, the
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manifestation of the Principle is always found in an elevating
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excitement of the soul, quite independent of that passion which is the
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intoxication of the Heart, or of that truth which is the
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satisfaction of the Reason. For in regard to passion, alas! its
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tendency is to degrade rather than to elevate the Soul. Love, on the
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contrary- Love- the true, the divine Eros- the Uranian as
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distinguished from the Dionnan Venus- is unquestionably the purest and
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truest of all poetical themes. And in regard to Truth, if, to be sure,
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through the attainment of a truth we are led to perceive a harmony
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where none was apparent before, we experience at once the true
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poetical effect; but this effect is referable to the harmony alone,
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and not in the least degree to the truth which merely served to render
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the harmony manifest.
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We shall reach, however, more immediately a distinct conception of
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what the true Poetry is, by mere reference to a few of the simple
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elements which induce in the Poet himself the true poetical effect. He
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recognises the ambrosia which nourishes his soul in the bright orbs
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that shine in Heaven- in the volutes of the flower- in the
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clustering of low shrubberies- in the waving of the grain-fields- in
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the slanting of tall eastern trees- in the blue distance of mountains-
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in the grouping of clouds- in the twinkling of half-hidden brooks-
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in the gleaming of silver rivers- in the repose of sequestered
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lakes- in the star-mirroring depths of lonely wells. He perceives it
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in the songs of birds- in the harp of Aeolus- in the sighing of the
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night-wind- in the repining voice of the forest- in the surf that
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complains to the shore- in the fresh breath of the woods- in the scent
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of the violet- in the voluptuous perfume of the hyacinth- in the
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suggestive odour that comes to him at eventide from far-distant
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undiscovered islands, over dim oceans, illimitable and unexplored.
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He owns it in all noble thoughts- in all unworldly motives- in all
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holy impulses- in all chivalrous, generous, and self-sacrificing
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deeds. He feels it in the beauty of woman- in the grace of her step-
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in the lustre of her eye- in the melody of her voice- in her soft
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laughter, in her sigh- in the harmony of the rustling of her robes. He
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deeply feels it in her winning endearments- in her burning
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enthusiasms- in her gentle charities- in her meek and devotional
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endurances- but above all- ah, far above all he kneels to it- he
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worships it in the faith, in the purity, in the strength, in the
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altogether divine majesty- of her love.
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Let me conclude by- the recitation of yet another brief poem- one
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very different in character from any that I have before quoted. It
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is by Motherwell, and is called "The Song of the Cavalier." With our
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modern and altogether rational ideas of the absurdity and impiety of
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warfare, we are not precisely in that frame of mind best adapted to
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sympathize with the sentiments, and thus to appreciate the real
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excellence of the poem. To do this fully we must identify ourselves in
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fancy with the soul of the old cavalier:-
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Then mounte! then mounte, brave gallants all,
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And don your helmes amaine:
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Deathe's couriers, Fame and Honour call
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Us to the field againe.
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No shrewish teares shall fill your eye
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When the sword-hilt's in our hand,-
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Heart-whole we'll part, and no whit sighe
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For the fayrest of the land;
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Let piping swaine, and craven wight,
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Thus weepe and puling crye,
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Our business is like men to fight,
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And hero-like to die!
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THE END
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