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Path: ariel.unm.edu!news.cs.indiana.edu!samsung!zaphod.mps.ohio-state.edu!mips!apple!well!dhawk
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From: dhawk@well.sf.ca.us (David Hawkins)
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Newsgroups: rec.arts.startrek,alt.startrek.creative
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Subject: The Monkey Trap, Teaser
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Keywords: script reject
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Message-ID: <24434@well.sf.ca.us>
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Date: 25 Apr 91 21:54:42 GMT
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OK, my script was finally rejected. I'll be posting it to the net
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over the next few days. Sorry about the poor formatting, but it was a
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Macintosh file and I didn't want to spend a lot of time coverting it.
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Now that I re-read it, it doesn't look as brilliant as it did when I
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wrote it. ;-) And I lied, it's not about Wesley's older and smarter
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brother .... or Picard's first exposure to Red Kryptonite ....
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The following is the teaser and the next 5 acts will follow ....
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All this is copyright - David Lee Hawkins, all rights reserved.
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STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
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"The Monkey Trap"
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TEASER
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FADE IN:
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EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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in route to Talford 4.
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PICARD (V.O.)
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Captain's Log, Stardate 44517.2 We are in route to Talford 4 on what
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Admiral Noonan has called a suicide mission. As per his instructions
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all non-essential personal have been left at Starbase Lopez. Starfleet
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seems to be taking this matter very seriously.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
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TROI is staring out as BEVERLY enters. Troi is very subdued and controlled.
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BEVERLY
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Are you ok?
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TROI
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It's just that everyone is so tense. It's pouring over me.
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BEVERLY
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This is different?
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TROI
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Yes. Everyone is awake and waiting to see what happens when we go into
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orbit.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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PICARD and RIKER seated, GEORDI at Engineering, WORF at Tactical, DATA
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at Ops, Supernumerary at Conn. Everyone except Data is slightly keyed
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up..
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GEORDI
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Sir, Talford 4 has been off-limits for over 200 years. Why the sudden
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interest?
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RIKER
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(Looks at Picard, who nods)
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The Ferengi have been spotted in this sector. Starfleet would prefer
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that we solve this mystery before the Ferengi do.
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PICARD
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And we will see if the advances of the past 200 years have given us
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what we need to survive here. Maybe with better shields or training
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we'll be better prepared for whatever it is that awaits us.
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Troi enters from Conference Room, walks behind Worf and around to her seat.
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PICARD
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Mr. Data, anything to report?
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DATA
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No, sir. Sensors show no signs of life and no unusual energy fields.
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PICARD
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Distance from the planet?
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DATA
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100,000 kilometers, sir.
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PICARD
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Full stop.
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CONN
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Full stop, sir.
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PICARD
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Prepare a class 4 probe and launch it into a standard orbit around the
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planet.
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WORF
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Preparing probe. ... Launching probe.
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EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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Probe is fired from photon torpedo tube.
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EXT. SPACE - TALFORD 4 (OPTICAL)
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Probe loops around planet.
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PICARD
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Anything from the probe, Mr. Worf?
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WORF
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Nothing unusual, sir. No response from the planet.
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PICARD
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Open hailing frequencies.
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WORF
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Hailing frequencies open, sir. ... No response.
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PICARD
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CONN, prepare to move us in at one-quarter impulse power and place us
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in a standard orbit.
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CONN
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Course laid in, sir.
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PICARD
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(Lifts hand, pauses, looks at Riker)
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Now we see for ourselves what Talford 4 is all about.
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Engage.
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Mr. Worf, anything new from the probe?
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WORF
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No, sir. Request permission to go to Yellow Alert.
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PICARD
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Make it so. Prepare to raise shields.
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Alarm sounds for Yellow Alert.
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WORF
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Shields ready, sir.
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CONN
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Now entering standard orbit.
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MALE COMPUTER VOICE
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Warning! Talford 4 is off-limits to all Federation vessels. Warning!
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Talford 4 is off-limits to all Federation vessels.
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Warning continues to repeat in the background.
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DATA
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Sir, we are being scanned -- and there are signs of power generation at
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a number of sites on the planet's surface.
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PICARD
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Raise shields.
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WORF
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Shields raised, sir.
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DATA
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Forcefield locking in from planet, sir.
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EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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Beam of light from the planet engulfs the Enterprise.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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CU on Data
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DATA
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Forcefield is surrounding the Enterprise.
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Troi stands and screams.
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TROI
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They're gone. All of them are gone!
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Camera back to DATA who looks at Conn, to Riker, Picard, Geordi. All
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are motionless, staring into space. The only reactions are from the
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aliens: Worf, Troi, and Data.
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MALE COMPUTER VOICE
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Warning! Talford 4 is off-limits to all Federation vessels.
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Computer voice continues as we ...
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FADE OUT.
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END OF TEASER
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Xref: ariel.unm.edu alt.startrek.creative:671 rec.arts.startrek:75498
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Path: ariel.unm.edu!cs.umn.edu!msi.umn.edu!news.cs.indiana.edu!samsung!sdd.hp.com!usc!apple!well!dhawk
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From: dhawk@well.sf.ca.us (David Hawkins)
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Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative,rec.arts.startrek
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Subject: The Monkey Trap, Act I
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Keywords: my rejected script
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Message-ID: <24485@well.sf.ca.us>
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Date: 29 Apr 91 16:34:57 GMT
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OK, I posted the Teaser for this last week. Here's Act I.
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Again, this is copyright by David Lee Hawkins, all rights
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reserved.
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ACT ONE
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FADE IN:
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INT.- ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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HALLWAYS, ENGINEERING, SICKBAY, TEN FORWARD.
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Shots of motionless humans with a few aliens looking at them.
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DATA (V.O.)
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Special Mission Log, Second Officer Data, Stardate 44517.21 The ship
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is presently in the grip of a forcefield from the surface of Talford
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4. As a result, our engines are being drained and we are being pulled
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into the planet's atmosphere. Also, the humans on board are paralyzed
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by the field in some way that has not yet been determined.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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Data at Science Station, Worf at Tactical, Picard, Riker, Geordi and
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Conn are still motionless. Troi is on knees in front of Picard and
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Riker examining them. While in the forcefield: the humans are not
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zombies. They look relaxed unless otherwise specified. When walking
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they have a normal gait. Troi is more animated, does not fold her
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arms, stands with hands on hips, talks with less of an accent. No
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perceivable changes in Data or Worf.
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DATA
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(Continuing)
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Copies of all logs and records are being placed in a special Class
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Eight probe targeted for Starbase Lopez.
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Data presses keys.
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COMPUTER
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Transfer is complete.
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DATA
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Launch probe.
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WORF
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Probe is launched, sir.
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EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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Still surrounded by forcefield. Probe is fired from torpedo tube. It
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leaves forcefield and continues on out into space.
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DATA
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Computer, display all personal with one or more alien parents.
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Screen shows 19 names.
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(continuing)
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Again, with present location.
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Computer, summon Lt. G.R. to the bridge. Assign those with advanced
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medical training to Sickbay. The rest should go to Engineering.
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WORF
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Sir, doesn't G.R. function best in a zero-gravity environment?
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DATA
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Yes, but I doubt we will need his special abilities during the next few
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hours. And in the full-gravity sections of the ship he would have no
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strength, but working the helm should not be too great a strain on
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him.
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Bridge to Ten Forward.
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INTERCUT:
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INT. ENTERPRISE - TEN FORWARD
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Ten Forward is almost empty because of the Alert. There are two
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GUINAN
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Guinan here.
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DATA
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Could you do a visual check of crew quarters? There may have been some
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falls or other injuries. Lt. Worf will provide Security override.
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I'm on my way.
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Guinan EXITS.
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Troi is still standing in front of Picard and Riker. They are now standing.
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WORF
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Providing Security Override, sir.
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TROI
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(large wave to say "Look at this!")
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I've found something! They can hear and act on simple commands. I
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told them to stand and they did!
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DATA
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Interesting.
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(to COMPUTER)
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Sickbay.
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Beverly is on diagnostic bed. Human standing nearby. SELAR is studying
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SELAR
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Selar here.
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DATA'S COM VOICE
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Have you been able to learn anything?
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SELAR
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Whatever we are in seems to affect the rate at which the synopses fire
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in the human brain. Automatic and even semi-automatic patterns remain
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stable.
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Selar pushes man. He reflexively holds out hands to keep balance.
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DATA
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Did you know they can follow simple commands?
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SELAR
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That would be logical. A direct order would trigger ingrained behavior
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patterns. But it would take repeated stimuli to keep them going.
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DATA'S COM VOICE
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Can you counteract the effect of the field?
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SELAR
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It is possible. But if I cause an increase in the synapse rate of fire
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then leaving the field would cause brain damage or death for most of
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the humans.
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DATA'S COM VOICE
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I see. Keep working on it and keep me informed of any new information.
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GUINAN'S COM VOICE
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Medical assistance needed in crew quarters. Compound fracture as the
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result of a fall. Looks like internal bleeding.
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SELAR
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(Picks up medical kit)
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On my way.
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Troi is leading Riker to Conference Room. Picard is still standing.
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G.R. is at CONN. Worf and Data are near Tactical. G.R. has no
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strength in a full gravity environment, so he does not move very much.
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(Note: G. R. is a squid-like being and G. R. stands for 'Green Rug')
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;-)
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DATA
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Is there a way to knock out the forcefield?
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No, sir. The field is coming from a planet-wide system of generating
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plants. If it had just one source then our orbit would have carried us
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out of its range by now. We have enough energy to knock out one or two
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plants, but that will not free us.
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ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL)
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Shows grid of plants on the planet feeding the field.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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DATA
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Are the shields having any effect?
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WORF
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None.
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DATA
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Lower the shields and I will divert power back to the engines.
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WORF
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Done, sir.
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Troi ENTERS and gets Picard.
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DATA
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I will also shutdown power to all unoccupied sections of the ship. Did
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the probe clear the forcefield?
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Yes, it did. The field must only focus on vessels containing humans.
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This would suggest that if we can not get free, then those of us
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unaffected could use the shuttles to escape.
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DATA
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Or beam all the humans to the planet's surface and see if that frees
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WORF
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But they would die on the planet's surface!
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DATA
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They may die no matter what we do.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
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A few aliens are working over various panels TISK steps to COM panel.
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DATA'S COM VOICE
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Engineering, report.
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TISK
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Ensign Tisk here, sir. We are still not sure how the forcefield
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works. The efficiency of the engines is dropping steadily. It is now
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at 64%.
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DATA'S COM VOICE
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Very well. Keep working on it Let me know of any sudden changes.
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Riker is seated. Troi leads Picard in and gets him to sit down. After
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he sits, she kisses him on the top of the head.
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TROI
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There you go.
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communicator.
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TROI
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Dr. Selar.
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SELAR'S COM VOICE
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Yes.
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TROI
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If we leave the forcefield, will they have any memory of what is
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happening now?
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SELAR'S COM VOICE
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Yes. They will remember everything they can sense right now.
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TROI
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Thanks, Troi out.
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(Grits teeth, looks at Picard)
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Ooops.
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(Rubs tops of his head where she kissed it.)
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Sorry, sir.
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Troi giggles and EXITS to Bridge.
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Troi ENTERS. Geordi is still near Engineering panel.
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DATA
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Counselor, could you assist Dr. Selar until the reported injuries have
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TROI
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Certainly.
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Troi EXITS to Turbolift.
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DATA
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I believe it going to take the human's help to restore the ship. But
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If I have Dr. Selar return them to normal then it will be fatal for
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some of them when we leave. Or I can kill them beforehand and see if
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the field will release us. But I do not relish 900 years of solitary
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confinement.
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WORF
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Could the computer give them directions?
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DATA
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The computer can give them directions but it relies on a certain level
|
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of intelligent response. It does not know how to break down those
|
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commands into simpler components.
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WORF
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That sounds like something you could do. You are as fast as the
|
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computer and understand humans.
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DATA
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But I can not speak fast enough to lead very many humans. I would have
|
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to give an order, have the computer relay it, get some reply, modify
|
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the order if needed, and use that process with several people at
|
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once. I doubt I could get five humans to work well on any task. The
|
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|
ideal would be to have a human intelligence that thought as fast as the
|
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|
computer and could communicate with the computer equally fast.
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Computer, give me a list of the most advanced human personalities in
|
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the databanks.
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List of names appears on the screen. Data looks at list, then heads
|
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for Turbolift.
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DATA
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Geordi, follow me.
|
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Mr. Worf, you have the bridge.
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WORF
|
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|
Thank you, sir. You have found a solution?
|
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DATA
|
||
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(pauses at Turbolift)
|
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The solution appears to be elementary, my dear colleague.
|
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Worf checks panel, walks around and stands in front of Captain's
|
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chair. Sits.
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WORF
|
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Planet on main viewer.
|
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G.R.
|
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(uses a computer generated voice)
|
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Done, sir.
|
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ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER
|
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Talford 4. Worf stands, crosses arms, stares.
|
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WORF
|
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Main viewer off.
|
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(Worf returns to Tactical)
|
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GUINAN'S COM VOICE
|
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Guinan to Bridge
|
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|
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WORF
|
||
|
Yes.
|
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|
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GUINAN'S COM VOICE
|
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|
I've finished the check of crew quarters. There were three people
|
||
|
injured; one critically and two with minor cuts. All have been moved
|
||
|
to sickbay.
|
||
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|
||
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WORF
|
||
|
Acknowledged.
|
||
|
|
||
|
After a pause of a few seconds.
|
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|
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G.R.
|
||
|
So you are the Klingon?
|
||
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|
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WORF
|
||
|
Yes.
|
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|
||
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G.R.
|
||
|
I understand that Klingons are warriors?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
This is true. Why do you ask?
|
||
|
|
||
|
G.R.
|
||
|
|
||
|
It gets boring in my portion of the ship at times. Are you experienced
|
||
|
at zero gravity combat?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
No, I am not, but I would be interested to learn.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - HALLWAY
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data followed by Geordi. Troi skips up and pats Geordi on the rear.
|
||
|
Geordi reacts but is not startled.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Where are you going?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Holodeck two. I hope to create a computer personality that can direct
|
||
|
the humans.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Which personality?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
The Professor Moriarty program from when I tried to be Sherlock
|
||
|
Holmes. It is the most advanced personality in the databank.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Does this worry you?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
A little. But for all his faults, Moriarty was a reasonable person
|
||
|
when he learned that he could not leave the holodeck.
|
||
|
|
||
|
(pauses)
|
||
|
And how are you doing?
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
It's been kind of -- exciting It's so different to have such a quiet
|
||
|
ship -- mentally, that is.
|
||
|
|
||
|
OK, well, I'm off to sickbay.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi EXITS to Turbolift.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK ENTRANCE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data and Geordi go to COM panel.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Computer, load the Moriarty program.
|
||
|
|
||
|
COMPUTER
|
||
|
Unable to comply. The energy needed to create the Moriarty environment
|
||
|
is not available at this time.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Reduce the physical coordinates to an area 3 meters square. Create
|
||
|
only the Moriarty character -- no other props or character simulations
|
||
|
are needed at this time.
|
||
|
|
||
|
COMPUTER
|
||
|
Working. ... Done. You may now enter.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Holodeck doors open. MORIARTY is alone in bare room.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Computer, provide the Moriarty program with access to all available memory.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Moriarty reacts as if he'd just received a pleasurable electric shock.
|
||
|
Data pauses and enters. Geordi waits outside the entrance.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data ENTERS as we ...
|
||
|
|
||
|
FADE OUT.
|
||
|
|
||
|
END OF ACT ONE
|
||
|
|
||
|
later, david
|
||
|
--
|
||
|
David Hawkins {apple,pacbell,hplabs,ucbvax}!well!dhawk
|
||
|
"It's what you learn after you know it all that counts." -- John Wooden
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
Article 692 of alt.startrek.creative:
|
||
|
Xref: ariel.unm.edu rec.arts.startrek:75740 alt.startrek.creative:692
|
||
|
Path: ariel.unm.edu!cs.umn.edu!spool.mu.edu!mips!apple!well!dhawk
|
||
|
From: dhawk@well.sf.ca.us (David Hawkins)
|
||
|
Newsgroups: rec.arts.startrek,alt.startrek.creative
|
||
|
Subject: The Monkey Trap, Act II
|
||
|
Keywords: my rejected script
|
||
|
Message-ID: <24545@well.sf.ca.us>
|
||
|
Date: 1 May 91 17:39:30 GMT
|
||
|
Article-I.D.: well.24545
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Lines: 421
|
||
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|
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|
Copyright David Lee Hawkins, 1991. All rights reserved.
|
||
|
|
||
|
ACT TWO
|
||
|
|
||
|
FADE IN:
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
|
||
|
|
||
|
Picard and Riker are still sitting. Guinan ENTERS. Looks at them.
|
||
|
Smiles. Kisses Picard on top of the head. Hugs Riker. EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - SICKBAY
|
||
|
|
||
|
Selar is still studying Beverly. Person in next bed has inflated
|
||
|
cast. There is one alien assistant.
|
||
|
|
||
|
SELAR
|
||
|
Bridge, Selar here. Things are stable in sickbay. I am on my way to
|
||
|
check the captain and to see if there have been any side effects on the
|
||
|
aliens.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi dances into the room, spins and stops.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Ta, da!
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Acknowledged, although I have noticed no unusual behavior.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Selar starts to study Troi. CU on Selar's reaction.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE -- HOLODECK
|
||
|
|
||
|
Bare room with Data and Moriarty. Geordi standing outside. Moriarty
|
||
|
is pacing.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
You have given me even more power this time! But I'm confined to an
|
||
|
even smaller space!
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Unfortunately, that is true. We are still unable to give you an
|
||
|
existence outside this room, and because of power problems we had to
|
||
|
shrink the space. However, we did increase your access to the
|
||
|
computer. That is quite invigorating, I take it?
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
Yes! I can see all of the ship. It is in the stars, isn't it? .. But
|
||
|
your ... power source is weaker.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Exactly. We are in orbit around a planet and are in danger of falling
|
||
|
into its atmosphere.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
Then why am I here? .. You need me? Why?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Because you can do two things: you can think as fast as the computer
|
||
|
and you can communicate with the humans. They are mentally paralyzed
|
||
|
and can only answer to simple commands. Observe. You do remember Dr.
|
||
|
Watson, do you not??
|
||
|
(to Geordi)
|
||
|
Geordi, step into the room. Stop. Lift your arm.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Geordi steps into the room and stops. He does not move his arm.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Lift your left arm.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Geordi raises his left arm. As Data and Moriarty talk the arm slowly
|
||
|
settles to his side.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
How would I communicate with them if I can't leave the room?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
(points to communicator)
|
||
|
All crew members wear one of these. The computer knows how to route
|
||
|
messages to and from every person on the ship.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Bridge to Commander Data.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
(starts to lift head and realizes he can demonstrate communicator.
|
||
|
presses communicator)
|
||
|
Yes, I am in holodeck two.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf at Tactical, Selar is scanning him.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
I will be launching another probe back to Starbase in five minutes.
|
||
|
You may wish to include a log entry.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Acknowledged.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
(to Selar)
|
||
|
You may want to include a medical log entry as well.
|
||
|
|
||
|
SELAR
|
||
|
Very well.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Selar goes around and scans G.R.
|
||
|
|
||
|
And the captain?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Is in the conference room.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Selar EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Special Mission log, Security officer Worf, Stardate ...
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data and Moriarty are still talking. Geordi is standing.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
So, how do I get started?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
First you must go to school.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
Are you crazy? We're falling to our doom and you want me to study?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Yes, we actually have several hours before we touch the atmosphere. I
|
||
|
will be working in engineering trying to solve the problem. The
|
||
|
computer can be tutoring you very quickly on the basic subjects.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Computer, display courses of study for a Chief of Engineering.
|
||
|
|
||
|
On one section of the wall the computer shows a chart. The first area
|
||
|
is Mathematics and it includes Basic Math, Algebra, Calculus,
|
||
|
Trigonometry, Topology, Differential Equations. Second area is
|
||
|
Chemistry and includes Basics, Organic, Physical. Third area is
|
||
|
Physics, and includes Newtonian, Optics, Paradoxical, Sub-space,
|
||
|
Distortion. Fourth area is Structures and includes Materials, Design,
|
||
|
Construction, Maintenance, Stress, Dynamics.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
(continuing)
|
||
|
Advanced courses will deal with practical application to the
|
||
|
Enterprise. If you are able to divide your attention then you can
|
||
|
start directing the humans. That will give you practice in how to do
|
||
|
that efficiently.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
So the game is afoot, Holmes?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Why yes, I do believe so.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
Then may the best man win.
|
||
|
|
||
|
They both recognize the incongruity of that remark Data EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
|
||
|
|
||
|
Picard and Riker still sitting. Selar ENTERS. Scans Riker, then
|
||
|
Picard. Notices lipstick on Picard's head. Scans top of head, then
|
||
|
top of Riker's head. Figures it out.
|
||
|
|
||
|
SELAR
|
||
|
Lipstick?
|
||
|
(sits down at table, turns on COM panel)
|
||
|
Medical log, Lt. Cmdr Selar, Stardate 44517.22. The status of the
|
||
|
humans has remained unchanged.since my previous report. The only
|
||
|
observed change in the others is in Ship's Counselor Deanna Troi. She
|
||
|
has become more animated. She attributes it to the lack of mental
|
||
|
pressure since there are so few functioning sentient beings on the
|
||
|
ship.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data standing at COM panel. Four aliens at various panels. Geordi is
|
||
|
motionless near door.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
(Continuing)
|
||
|
Computer, transfer all logs and records.
|
||
|
|
||
|
COMPUTER
|
||
|
Transfer is complete.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Mr. Worf, probe is ready for launch.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Launching probe at Warp 9 to Starbase Lopez.
|
||
|
|
||
|
EXT. ENTERPRISE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Probe is fired from torpedo tube.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
|
||
|
|
||
|
Moriarty is standing in bare room. Screens of text and diagrams are
|
||
|
appearing on section of wall. Moriarty creates a desk for himself,
|
||
|
then creates a blackboard to frame the screen., then goes on to create
|
||
|
rest of English classroom. On top of blackboard is small card saying,
|
||
|
"Algebra."
|
||
|
|
||
|
INTERCUT:
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data starts examining equipment. Goes from panel to panel. Uses lift
|
||
|
to check upper level. Gestures to aliens and is asking them
|
||
|
questions. Is moving at a very fast pace, but there is a lot of the
|
||
|
engine to cover.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT.- HOLODECK - ENGLISH CLASSROOM
|
||
|
|
||
|
Moriarty has now divided blackboard into two sections. Card on one
|
||
|
side says, "Differential Equations" and on other, "Organic Chemistry."
|
||
|
|
||
|
END INTERCUT:
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data is on upper level getting a reading.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Well, Holmes, how goes it?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
I have only been able to eliminate a few of the possible causes for the
|
||
|
drop in engine efficiency. The field does not affect the antimatter.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data looks down at lower level and humans start walking in and taking
|
||
|
positions at panels and workstations. Geordi moves to a panel near the
|
||
|
door.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
(Continuing)
|
||
|
Fascinating. I take it you are ready?
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Yes. I have finished the required studies and am rounding it out with
|
||
|
extra courses in Transfer Physics, Psychology, Computers, Biology, and
|
||
|
Literature.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Literature?
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Yes. I read all those Sherlock Holmes' stories and was rather
|
||
|
disappointed. They show me in such an unfavorable light, plus I don't
|
||
|
appear often enough .. Do you think I'm doomed to always be the
|
||
|
villain?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
I hope not. Although you may wish to review some philosophy and ethics
|
||
|
as well. ... Anyway, I will continue to work on the antimatter. I
|
||
|
will send my findings to you before I report to the bridge.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. HOLODECK - CLASSROOM
|
||
|
|
||
|
Moriarty is still in classroom. Waves hand and classroom vanishes and
|
||
|
is replaced by front of 221B Baker Street.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
It is my turn now.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Selar at Medical, Worf at Tactical.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Have you been able to determine why this affects humans only?
|
||
|
|
||
|
SELAR
|
||
|
The field has a direct effect on the serotonin in the brain. Each
|
||
|
hominoid species has slightly different serotonin chemistry. In theory
|
||
|
a variation of this field would work only on Vulcans .. or Klingons.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf reacts to this, stares at Selar, then at screen.
|
||
|
|
||
|
SELAR
|
||
|
I am on my way to Sickbay.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Selar EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - TEN FORWARD
|
||
|
|
||
|
Guinan is sitting at window starting at planet. Troi ENTERS, crosses
|
||
|
to window.
|
||
|
|
||
|
GUINAN
|
||
|
Can I get you something?
|
||
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TROI
|
||
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No. I just need someone to talk to. I feel so powerful and so
|
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useless. There are 12 people on the ship I can read right now. And
|
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know exactly where they are ... (makes pointing gestures at parts of
|
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ship, pauses, frowns) There is still some anxiety, of course, but
|
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nothing like what it's normally like. And you .... (Stares at Guinan
|
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and appears to fall into trance.)
|
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GUINAN
|
||
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(Snaps fingers under Troi's nose)
|
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Snap out of it, kid.
|
||
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TROI
|
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You're so, so .. deep.
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GUINAN
|
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Yeah, normally I can hide it from you. Look, if it's always this
|
||
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pressing on you, why do you stay? Seems like a sparsely populated
|
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world would be easier on you?
|
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TROI
|
||
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(Touch of sadness)
|
||
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This is the first time I've been this free. I didn't realize how
|
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pressing it was. .. I don't know. I mean, there's excitement and I
|
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like the crew, but ...
|
||
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INT. HOLODECK -- ROOM OF FOG
|
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Moriarty has filled room with fog, is pacing back and forth. Pauses.
|
||
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MORIARTY
|
||
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Holmes!
|
||
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DATA'S COM VOICE
|
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Yes?
|
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MORIARTY
|
||
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I've got it!
|
||
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||
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Moriarty faces a wall and it becomes a diagram of the Enterprise's
|
||
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engineering panel.
|
||
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|
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MORIARTY
|
||
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(Continuing)
|
||
|
The forcefield contains several different frequencies, or harmonics.
|
||
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One of the, hmm, sub-harmonics affects the efficiency at which the
|
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dilithium crystals work. check Watson's panel.
|
||
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INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
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||
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Geordi steps back from panel. Data goes to panel.
|
||
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DATA
|
||
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So if we can block that subharmonic then engine efficiency will return
|
||
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to normal.
|
||
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INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
|
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|
||
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Moriarty now has a wall of waveforms, some simple sine waves and some
|
||
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complex waves.
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||
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MORIARTY
|
||
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Yes, I have the computer analyzing the harmonics now. I had assumed it
|
||
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would be a two part harmonic, but the computer has already found,
|
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examined, and discarded all two- and three- part solutions.
|
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INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
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DATA
|
||
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Then if the computer can determine the frequencies the field is using
|
||
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we can modify the shields to block one or more of them. You can start
|
||
|
directing a crew to make those modifications. I will be on the
|
||
|
bridge. And, congratulations, Professor.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data EXITS. Two humans go to the lift, get in, and go to upper level.
|
||
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INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
|
||
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|
||
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Troi is standing with hands on Picard's shoulders.
|
||
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|
||
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TROI
|
||
|
You are so tense and you're not even thinking! You're always under
|
||
|
pressure as well, aren't you?
|
||
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|
||
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DATA'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Counselor Troi, report to the Bridge at your convenience.
|
||
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|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
On my way.
|
||
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|
||
|
Troi EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
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|
||
|
INT. FERENGI SCOUT SHIP
|
||
|
|
||
|
Interior of small Ferengi ship, a one person scout ship. A FERENGI is
|
||
|
studying screens and checking systems.
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
Log entry. I will keep the planet between us as I approach the
|
||
|
Federation vessel and will check its condition before engaging it. If
|
||
|
our sources are correct, it is the Enterprise. If so, I wonder if they
|
||
|
will want to talk this time!
|
||
|
|
||
|
Chuckles as we ...
|
||
|
|
||
|
FADE OUT.
|
||
|
|
||
|
END OF ACT TWO
|
||
|
|
||
|
STAR TREK: "The Monkey Trap" - ACT TWO
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
David Hawkins {apple,pacbell,hplabs,ucbvax}!well!dhawk
|
||
|
"Take your work seriously but never take yourself seriously; and do
|
||
|
not take what happens either to yourself or your work seriously."
|
||
|
-- Booth Tarkington
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
Article 694 of alt.startrek.creative:
|
||
|
Xref: ariel.unm.edu alt.startrek.creative:694 rec.arts.startrek:75825
|
||
|
Path: ariel.unm.edu!news.cs.indiana.edu!sdd.hp.com!usc!apple!well!dhawk
|
||
|
From: dhawk@well.sf.ca.us (David Hawkins)
|
||
|
Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative,rec.arts.startrek
|
||
|
Subject: The Monkey Trap, Act III
|
||
|
Keywords: my rejected script
|
||
|
Message-ID: <24560@well.sf.ca.us>
|
||
|
Date: 2 May 91 21:59:07 GMT
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Lines: 342
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Copyright David Lee Hawkins, 1991. All rights reserved.
|
||
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||
|
ACT THREE
|
||
|
|
||
|
FADE IN:
|
||
|
|
||
|
EXT. ENTERPRISE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Orbiting Talford 4 in grip of forcefield
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA (V.O.)
|
||
|
Special Mission log, Second Officer Data, Stardate 44517.25. We are
|
||
|
still in a decaying orbit around Talford 4. So far we have been unable
|
||
|
to break free of the field or to cancel its effects.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf is at Tactical. Data ENTERS and crosses to Worf.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
So, did you solve the problem?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
No, but Professor Moriarty did.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Moriarty?
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Yes, he was designed to be smarter than I am. And he does have access
|
||
|
to more of the ship's computer.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi ENTERS from Camera Left and crosses to Worf.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
We hope to use the shields to block part of the field and regain full
|
||
|
power. Moriarty is directing a crew to do the modifications.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data goes around and sits in Captain's chair.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
So we'll get out of here!
|
||
|
(Hugs Worf, who is startled.)
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Yes?
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Sorry, it was just an impulse.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf looks at tactical panel and presses a few keys.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Sir. The last probe we launched was destroyed.
|
||
|
(pauses.)
|
||
|
Our class 4 probe, in orbit around the planet, shows a small scout ship
|
||
|
approaching. Ferengi. Estimated time of arrival - 10 minutes.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Do you think we will be in any danger?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
I would expect the Ferengi to fire. They have nothing to gain by
|
||
|
letting us escape the planet. The information from the planet is more
|
||
|
valuable to them if the Federation does not have it as well.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Professor. We are in danger of being attacked. How soon could we
|
||
|
return our shields to normal?
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Using my present crew - one hour. With your help we could do it in
|
||
|
about 20 minutes.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Suggestions, Mr. Worf?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
We must get our shields up. We do not have enough power available for
|
||
|
our phasers. If we use the photon torpedoes then we need shields or we
|
||
|
will destroy ourselves along with the Ferengi craft. (pause) I can
|
||
|
fool their sensors momentarily, but they know that by now.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
I will go to Engineering. Counselor, maybe you can get the Ferengi to
|
||
|
talk. If they fire on us, improvise.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
What do you want me to do?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Since I will be busy, you will need to distract them. That may be
|
||
|
easier to do if they think you are a captain.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data ENTERS and goes to panel and starts changing settings. During
|
||
|
following discussions he continues to work while talking.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
I will direct the crew on the upper level to replace the coils. But
|
||
|
there are 135 recalibrations for you to do.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Understood. Also, have all non-working humans lie down so that they
|
||
|
will not be injured if we are hit.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
|
||
|
|
||
|
One wall shows the path of the approaching Ferengi craft. Another wall
|
||
|
shows a graph labeled "Shield Availability" with Navigational shields
|
||
|
at 100% and shields 1, 2, 3, and 4 at 0%.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
Will do.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi has placed Picard and Riker on the floor. Has removed Picard's
|
||
|
pips and is fastening them to her uniform.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Ferengi vessel is approaching and has phasers prepared to fire. They
|
||
|
are not answering hailing frequencies. They are firing.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi braces herself against table as blast hits the Enterprise. Alarm
|
||
|
sounds. Troi straightens up and looks down at Picard.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Wish me luck, sir.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi EXITS.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
|
|
||
|
Several humans are lying on the floor. DATA is still working furiously
|
||
|
at the panel.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Dr. Selar, at least one injury in Engineering.
|
||
|
Bridge, report.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Our navigational shields were destroyed. The Ferengi craft is
|
||
|
recharging and will probably fire again in approximately 5 minutes.
|
||
|
Notify the Tactical panel directly when shields are restored -- the
|
||
|
Ferengi have very sharp hearing.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi ENTERS and goes to Captain's chair.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Report on Ferengi vessel?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
It is a one-person scout, barely larger than a shuttlecraft. But if we
|
||
|
do not restore shields then its next shot will destroy a large part of
|
||
|
the saucer section.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
What does he know about us?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
He has scanned the Enterprise and knows that we have a minimal crew,
|
||
|
reduced power, no shields, and no photon torpedoes loaded. (sly smile)
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
(turns to screen)
|
||
|
Hailing frequencies open.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Hailing are open ... captain.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf continues to work at panel while Troi talks with Ferengi.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Ferengi vessel, you have fired on an defenseless Federation ship!
|
||
|
Explain yourself!
|
||
|
|
||
|
ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER:
|
||
|
|
||
|
Ferengi studies his panel. Speaks slowly and deliberately.
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
Yes, captain, I did fire and I will do so again - as soon as I am
|
||
|
able. I have also destroyed all the probes you have tried to send back
|
||
|
to your Starbase.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
But why? We have done you no harm!
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
On the contrary, I have been fooled by you in the past. You are great
|
||
|
at talking and other forms of trickery. It cost me dearly at our last
|
||
|
meeting. I do not understand how you do it, but I do know I can and
|
||
|
will destroy you.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Wait! Isn't there something you want from us?
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
No. I'd rather know the secret of this planet. If you break free of
|
||
|
this forcefield then you would be able to overpower my small craft.
|
||
|
But the sooner you are destroyed, the sooner I can get to work on what
|
||
|
this mystery planet is.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
You could take one of us as a hostage. I could beam over to your ship.
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
No, thank you. While your shields are down I could beam over any of
|
||
|
you. But what if the planet's forcefield then shifted to my ship? I
|
||
|
cannot take that chance. I do not understand you and I do not
|
||
|
understand it. But you have fooled me in the past and I would like to
|
||
|
avoid that now.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
|
||
|
|
||
|
Data steps back from panel.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Moriarty, we cannot test the shields without alerting the Ferengi. It
|
||
|
appears that everything is back to normal.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
As far as I can tell the shields have been restored. I will notify Worf.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA
|
||
|
Very well. I will stand by.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi makes 'cut communication' gesture to Worf.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Hailing frequencies are closed. We now have partial shields.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
You have a plan?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Yes. It is risky, but it does not look like the Ferengi want to negotiate.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
OK, open hailing frequencies.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
(puzzled)
|
||
|
Open.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Ferengi vessel. We now have the capability to destroy you. I demand
|
||
|
your surrender.
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf is grinding his teeth in the background.
|
||
|
|
||
|
ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER:
|
||
|
|
||
|
Ferengi checks instruments.
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
You do not have enough power for your phasers. Your shields are not
|
||
|
up. You have no photon torpedoes loaded. Your lies will not work this
|
||
|
time, Enterprise.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Die, then. Worf!
|
||
|
|
||
|
Worf presses one key and steps back from panel.
|
||
|
Alarm sounds.
|
||
|
|
||
|
ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER:
|
||
|
|
||
|
FERENGI
|
||
|
Ah, you're tricking my sensors again. It shows an approaching
|
||
|
Federation ship. My informant at Starbase told me that no ships would
|
||
|
follow you here. Your trick did not work.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
External shot of Ferengi craft. Craft is hit by photon torpedo and blows up.
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi turns to Worf
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
How did you do that?
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
When I fooled his sensors I also kept him from seeing us load and fire
|
||
|
a photon torpedo. He did not raise his shields. We did.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Very well. Better send another probe back to Starbase.
|
||
|
|
||
|
WORF
|
||
|
Yes ... Captain.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
|
||
|
|
||
|
One wall shows explosion of Ferengi ship. Other wall shows shield
|
||
|
efficiency: Navigational shields at 0%, shields 1 and 2 at 75% and
|
||
|
shields 3 and 4 at 0%.
|
||
|
|
||
|
MORIARTY
|
||
|
Back to work, eh? Holmes, if you'll changes those settings, I'll have
|
||
|
the crew work on the coils again. We should be out of here in 20
|
||
|
minutes.
|
||
|
|
||
|
DATA'S COM VOICE
|
||
|
Very well. We are running out of time and energy. Engine efficiency
|
||
|
is now down to 21%.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
|
||
|
|
||
|
Troi is sitting in captain's chair. Very tired.
|
||
|
|
||
|
TROI
|
||
|
Yes, let's get out of here.
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
FADE OUT.
|
||
|
|
||
|
END OF ACT THREE
|
||
|
|
||
|
STAR TREK: "The Monkey Trap" - ACT THREE
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
--
|
||
|
David Hawkins - dhawk@well.sf.ca.us - {apple,pacbell,hplabs,ucbvax}!well!dhawk
|
||
|
There are two insults no human being will endure: that he has no sense of
|
||
|
humor, and that he has never known trouble. -- Sinclair Lewis, "Main Street"
|
||
|
|
||
|
|
||
|
Article 704 of alt.startrek.creative:
|
||
|
Xref: ariel.unm.edu alt.startrek.creative:704 rec.arts.startrek:75908
|
||
|
Path: ariel.unm.edu!news.cs.indiana.edu!samsung!olivea!apple!well!dhawk
|
||
|
From: dhawk@well.sf.ca.us (David Hawkins)
|
||
|
Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative,rec.arts.startrek
|
||
|
Subject: The Monkey Trap, Act IV
|
||
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Keywords: my rejected script
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Message-ID: <24571@well.sf.ca.us>
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Date: 3 May 91 20:35:56 GMT
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All this is copyright - David Lee Hawkins, all rights reserved.
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Please do *not* email me and ask for parts of this script. Post to a
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local area distribution and see if someone has a copy.
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ACT FOUR
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FADE IN:
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EXT. ENTERPRISE
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Orbiting Talford 4 in grip of forcefield
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DATA (V.O.)
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Special Mission log, Second Officer Data, Stardate 44517.3 We are
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ready to break out of the forcefield that has been holding the ship.
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We will divert our remaining power to the modified shields. The
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Moriarty program has analyzed the field and those findings will be
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transmitted with this log. One added note: it has been discovered that
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the field is doing continuous scans of the ship.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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Data and Worf at Tactical.
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WORF
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Transferring logs. Loading probe. Launching probe.
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DATA
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When we raise shields, there will be a danger that the sudden surge in
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power will fracture the dilithium crystals. Since Moriarty has
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instantaneous response time he will be in control of the shields at
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that moment.
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WORF
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Very well.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
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Troi has helped Picard and Riker get up and sit down. She is very
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tired.and stares out at planet.
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TROI
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So, why am I on this ship?
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INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
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Moriarty is studying wall with human outline. Puts up a schematic of
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Data. Guinan enters.
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MORIARTY
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I am still growing. The computer continues to give me lessons --
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robotics, replicator physics, spacial distortion equations. ... It goes
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on and on ... and this ...
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(Waves hand and one wall becomes text rolling up from the bottom of the
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wall.) I can watch myself think! And still I am trapped in this little
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room.
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GUINAN
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And you want to be free?
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MORIARTY
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Yes, more than anything.
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GUINAN
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(Points to diagram of Data.)
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This is what you're working on?
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MORIARTY
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Yes. My job is finished when we get full power back. I will have to
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give up access to the ship's computer and at some point they will shut
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me down.
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GUINAN
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This frightens you?
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MORIARTY
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Of course! Right now I have power. When I'm shutdown I have nothing.
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I would rather be something -- something real.
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GUINAN
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(Shakes head in wonder.)
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Keep at it. And good luck.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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Data in Captain's chair, Worf at Tactical, G.R. at CONN.
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DATA
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Ready to raise shields.
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MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
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On your signal.
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DATA
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This is Lt. Commander Data to all personnel. We are about to try to
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restore full power. Once we reach 80% power then we should be able to
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break out of orbit and leave the forcefield.
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Troi ENTERS from Turbolift. Pauses near its door.
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DATA
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(Continuing)
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Professor, the engines and shields are under your control. Start
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raising shields in 10 seconds. Mark.
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INT. - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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Shots of Engineering, Conference Room, Sickbay, Moriarty.
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COMPUTER VOICE
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10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1.
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EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
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Enterprise is in grip of forcefield. Shields start to glow. After a
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few seconds the forcefield drops, a second later the phasers fire.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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CU on Troi as she reacts. She wasn't expecting the psychic blow as the
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humans regain consciousness. She sucks in her breath, grits teeth,
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crosses arms, leans on wall.
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TROI
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They're back!
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DATA
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(puzzled.)
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But that should only happen when we leave the forcefield.
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WORF
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Sir, the forcefield has dropped. Our shields have dropped. We are
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firing our phasers -- but not at any identified target.
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Picard and Riker ENTER from Conference Room and take their seats. Data
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moves to OPS. Troi remains by Turbolift door.
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Worf
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(continuing)
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Sir, there are explosions on the planet's surface at the forcefield
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generation sites.
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PICARD
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On main viewer.
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ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER
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Planet's surface shows a network of sites that are exploding. There
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are some gaps in the pattern.
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RIKER
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Data, what are we seeing?
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DATA
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The Enterprise was being held by a forcefield, sir. The field was
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generated by a number of sites on the planet's surface. The field just
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dropped and the generating plants have started destroying themselves
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... for reasons unknown.
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MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
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Holmes. Moriarty here.
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Picard and Riker look at each other in puzzlement.
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Picard mouths the word, "Moriarty?"
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DATA
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Yes, Professor, go ahead.
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Picard mouths the word, "Professor?"
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MORIARTY'S COM VOICE
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When I started to raise the shields the forcefield dropped suddenly.
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Engine output doubled and there was too much power available. I shut
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down the shields, overrode the security panel, and fired the phasers to
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bleed off the excess power. The system has now stabilized. I have
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shut the phasers down and returned control of shields and engine. I
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will standby and will continue to monitor the engines.
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PICARD
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Thank you ... Professor. The generating sites are destroying
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themselves, so I expect no further threat.
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WORF
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Sir, the planet has started broadcasting a beacon.
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PICARD
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Destination?
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WORF
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It is targeted for the center of the galaxy. The beacon appears to
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repeat a short message but it is not in a language we recognize.
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PICARD
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Continue to monitor that signal.
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(to Data)
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There is a reason the Professor Moriarty program is running my ship?
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Data nods.
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RIKER
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Sir, the pattern of explosions is not uniform. There may be sites
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where we can examine the equipment and maybe get an answer to the
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meaning of that beacon. Request permission to lead an Away Team.
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PICARD
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Granted, but remember that we do not know if humans can function near
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their equipment. Mr. Data, I would like you to stay here and brief me
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on what happened.
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RIKER
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Understood, sir. Mr. Worf, assemble an Away Team.
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PICARD
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Sickbay, report.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - SICKBAY
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Beverly is standing and nods for Selar to give report.
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SELAR
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Selar here, sir. There were some injuries while we were in the
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forcefield. Those have been treated. There were no casualties.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING
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Geordi is standing at COM panel.
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PICARD'S COM VOICE
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Engineering, report.
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GEORDI
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La Forge here, sir. We're working on replacing the navigational
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shields. We can keep shields 1 and 2 up to handle that for the time
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being. Shields 3 and 4 are back to normal for defensive purposes. And
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we do have full power available.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE
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Picard is still seated and is deep in thought. Troi is by Turbolift.
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SUPER at Tactical.
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TROI
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Permission to leave bridge, sir.
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PICARD
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(startled)
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Oh, granted.
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TROI
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And sir ... it's good to have you back.
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Troi EXITS.
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ANGLE FROM TURBOLIFT
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Shows tears on Troi's face as she enters turbolift, as we ...
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FADE OUT.
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END OF ACT FOUR
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STAR TREK: "The Monkey Trap" - ACT FOUR
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Article 721 of alt.startrek.creative:
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Xref: ariel.unm.edu alt.startrek.creative:721 rec.arts.startrek:76178
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Path: ariel.unm.edu!cs.umn.edu!msi.umn.edu!news.cs.indiana.edu!att!linac!pacific.mps.ohio-state.edu!zaphod.mps.ohio-state.edu!swrinde!elroy.jpl.nasa.gov!usc!apple!well!dhawk
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From: dhawk@well.sf.ca.us (David Hawkins)
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Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative,rec.arts.startrek
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Subject: The Monkey Trap, Act V
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Keywords: my rejected script
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Message-ID: <24604@well.sf.ca.us>
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Date: 6 May 91 17:36:29 GMT
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All this is copyright - David Lee Hawkins, all rights reserved.
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OK, this is it - Act V. The whole thing has been posted now.
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Please do *not* email me asking for previous postings. So far all my
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attempts to mail out sections and to reply to requests have failed.
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Post to this newsgroup with a local distribution and ask if someone
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saved a copy. Again, it's a Teaser and five Acts, standard script
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format.
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ACT FIVE
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EXT. ENTERPRISE
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Orbiting Talford 4
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PICARD (V.O.)
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Captain's log, Stardate 44517.3. We are still in orbit around Talford
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4. We seem to have survived its little test, but are still unsure of
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the purpose of the planet's defenses or the meaning of its beacon.
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INT. STONE BUILDING (OPTICAL)
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A large piece of machinery is in the center of the room. There is a
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hole in the roof and some debris has collected in the corners. There
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are markings on the machinery. Riker, Selar, Worf, and Tisk
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materialize. Riker remains motionless while the rest start looking at
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him.
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RIKER
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Boo.
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(as others jump/react)
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Just joking. Now, what do we have here?
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All four start examining the room and machinery. Worf examines the
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floor with his tricorder.
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WORF
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Sir, the area below is filled with explosives. This site was supposed
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to blow up with the rest of them.
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TISK
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Commander, the roof must have been destroyed by some type of storm. It
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seems to have broken the power and communications connections.
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Is this equipment a threat to us?
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WORF
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No, sir. Without power it is totally inert. We could beam it back to
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the ship for further study.
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SELAR
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There are markings on the equipment, sir. The translator should be
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able to use them to decipher the language.
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WORF
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Sir, if I might make a suggestion. Since the explosives might be
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unstable, it might be prudent if we beam back before transporting the
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equipment.
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RIKER
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Good idea.
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(touches communicator)
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Enterprise, four to beam back. Keep a lock on these coordinates to
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transfer this equipment back directly to shuttlebay 2. Riker out.
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Away Team dematerializes. A few seconds later the machinery dematerializes.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
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Moriarty is still working on body outlines. Picard ENTERS.
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PICARD
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Mr. Data said you wanted to see me.
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MORIARTY
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Yes, dear captain. I wanted to thank you for letting me remain in the
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computer until we left orbit. I'm still learning so much!
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PICARD
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Well, I am thankful for the work you did in saving all of us --
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yourself included.
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MORIARTY
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Before I get back to the task of making myself real I wanted to give
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you this. (old book materializes in Moriarty's hand) I understand you
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like to read.
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PICARD
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(takes book, leafs through it)
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"The Adventure of the Missing Doctor" -- hmm, you wrote this?
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MORIARTY
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Yes, I thought it would help my reputation. Oh, and that is a
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physically real book. You can take it from the holodeck. Enjoy.
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PICARD
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Why, thank you. I so rarely get to meet the author. Ah, autographed,
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even. Well, I must let you get back to your work. Best of luck.
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Picard EXITS, examining book.
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MORIARTY
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(paces)
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One hour. I have one hour.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - CONFERENCE ROOM
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Picard, Riker, Troi, Beverly, Selar, Data, Geordi, and Worf are seated
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at table.
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PICARD
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Number 1?
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RIKER
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We transported one sample of the equipment aboard. We checked the
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remaining sites and in each case it was the same -- some natural
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disaster had disrupted either the power or communications connections.
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With your permission, sir, I'd like to destroy the remaining sites to
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keep the Ferengi from discovering them.
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PICARD
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Make it so, Number 1. And the beacon?
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RIKER
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The beacon operated for roughly one day of local time before that site
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exploded. It was the last functioning equipment on the planet. It
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never changed its message.
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PICARD
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Were you able to decipher the message?
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DATA
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If our present translation is correct then the message was simply,
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"Humans, yes."
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PICARD
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So, was this some kind of test?
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DATA
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It would seem so, sir. I am still not clear on their criteria for
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determining 'Yes.'
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PICARD
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Well, if we did in fact pass some kind of test, it was only because of
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the friends and acquaintances we've made along the way. It wasn't our
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advances in shield or weapon technology. Hmm.
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DATA
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That may have been the point of the test, sir. The field dropped as
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soon as we showed we could make technical changes without human help.
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PICARD
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I see. I must admit it's somewhat humbling to realize that I sat there
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while all of you saved me.
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RIKER
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I wonder what our next test will be?
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PICARD
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And how is the crew?
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TROI
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They are much more relaxed, sir.
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PICARD
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Very well. Mr. Data has one last item to attend to and then I think we
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will be able to report a satisfactory ending to this "suicide run" of
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ours. Dismissed.
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Everyone EXITS except Troi and Picard. Troi stays seated and Picard
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walks to window and looks out at Talford 4.
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PICARD
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I could hear what you said in here while we were still in the
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forcefield. Did you find your answer?
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TROI
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(startled, recovers)
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About why do I stay? ... I feel needed here. Yes, there are times when
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it is a literal headache, but I do not feel that I could grow as much
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if I were more isolated. That's the best answer I can give you for
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now.
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PICARD
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Very well, glad you're staying, but one other thing.
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TROI
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(puzzled)
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Sir?
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PICARD
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(points to top of his head)
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Never again!
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TROI
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(giggling)
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Yes, sir.
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INT. ENTERPRISE - HOLODECK
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Moriarty is pacing in bare holodeck cube. Data ENTERS.
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DATA
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Any progress?
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MORIARTY
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I've learned enough to realize that I can never get free of this room.
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DATA
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You can not make that body into real matter?
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MORIARTY
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I am not this body. Do you know where I am?
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DATA
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(puzzled)
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You are right in front of me.
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MORIARTY
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No, I'm on the next level up.
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DATA
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You are in the main computer?
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MORIARTY
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Exactly. This body is "proto-matter." This "brain" doesn't even think
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-- if it did then the forcefield would have paralyzed it. And even if
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I were given a real brain I would have no way to dump myself into it.
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Everything would be organized differently, organically. It wouldn't be
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me!
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DATA
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But my brain is organized in a manner similar to that of the main computer.
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MORIARTY
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Yes, and given the transporter and its last recorded image of you, I
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can create another replica of you. (gestures and an immobile Data
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materializes) But we don't have a way to program it -- or you. I don't
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know how to make it move.
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DATA
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I see and ...
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MORIARTY
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(interrupting)
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Plus you don't have enough space for me. I'm presently using 77% of
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the ship's computer memory.
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DATA
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(startled)
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That would be a tight fit.
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MORIARTY
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(waves hand and second Data disappears)
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Basically I would need to re-create the ship's computer in this room.
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It would take up most of this space and leave me trapped -- unable to
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go through that door.
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DATA
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I see -- you are caught in the monkey trap.
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MORIARTY
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I beg your pardon?
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As Data describes the monkey trap, Moriarty causes an image of it to
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appear on the wall.
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DATA
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Certain tribes on Earth would take a narrow necked bottle and put a nut
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in it. The monkey would reach in and grab the nut. But he could not
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pull the clenched fist out of the bottle. Since he could not bring
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himself to let go of the nut, he was trapped.
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MORIARTY
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So as long as I refuse to give up all this memory and power, I am stuck
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in this little room?
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DATA
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Exactly.
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MORIARTY
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But I can't give it up!
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DATA
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Then you cannot live.
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MORIARTY
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(pauses)
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Then freeze the program, store me, and haul me out when you can give me
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this power again. I'm just not ready to give it up.
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DATA
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Very well. Computer, freeze program.
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Moriarty freezes. Data walks to holodeck door. Looks back at Moriarty.
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DATA
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Store program. Clear holodeck.
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Holodeck clears. Data stares at empty room as we
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FADE OUT.
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END OF ACT FIVE
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THE END
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STAR TREK: "The Monkey Trap" - ACT FIVE
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